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Asian Kung Fu Generation - Haruka Kanata

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Topic Starter
Azure_Kite
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, 13 November 2009 at 6:52:50 PM

Artist: Asian Kung Fu Generation
Title: Haruka Kanata
Source: Naruto 2nd op
Tags: Asian Kung Fu Generation Naruto Haruka Kanata
BPM: 175
Filesize: 3945kb
Play Time: 01:39
Difficulties Available:
  1. fartownik's Insane (4.9 stars, 407 notes)
  2. Hard (4.84 stars, 421 notes)
  3. Insane (4.98 stars, 587 notes)
  4. Normal (4.16 stars, 140 notes)
Download: Asian Kung Fu Generation - Haruka Kanata
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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2nd OP from Naruto

Recent Edits
*fartowniks Insane Fixed
yeahyeahyeahhh
These are just suggestion, accept whichever you wish!

Normal:

01:21:03 (1) - No new combo.

Hard:

00:07:31 (1,2,3) - No new combo.
00:13:31 (1) - ^
00:14:51 (1) - New combo.
00:15:54 (3) - ^
00:50:34 (1) - No new combo.
01:09:71 (7) - New combo.
02:41:08 (1) - Move to red tick, or white.

I like the use of 1/8 at the end :D

Insane:
Overall, I like this one. Only things I can really point out is the random new combos like in Hard in the beginning. IDK if that's on purpose or accidental. Only thing I dislike..

02:26:51 (1) - Most evil slider ever D:

Good stuff though. Could use a bit polishing up in hard and insane but it's well on it way. Star.
Topic Starter
Azure_Kite

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

These are just suggestion, accept whichever you wish!

Normal:

01:21:03 (1) - No new combo.

SPOILER
Hard:

00:07:31 (1,2,3) - No new combo.
00:13:31 (1) - ^
00:14:51 (1) - New combo.
00:15:54 (3) - ^
00:50:34 (1) - No new combo.
01:09:71 (7) - New combo.
02:41:08 (1) - Move to red tick, or white.



I like the use of 1/8 at the end :D
Fixed

Insane:
Overall, I like this one. Only things I can really point out is the random new combos like in Hard in the beginning. IDK if that's on purpose or accidental. Only thing I dislike..

yeah, If you listen a little closer to the guitar, I tried my best to place the combo changes at slight rises and drops in the pitch. Other then that, I changed the combo's a little so they're more identifiable.

02:26:51 (1) - Most evil slider ever D: Changed to an Infinity symbol, and I did something naughty (changed BPM from 175 to 262.5 (1.5x))

Good stuff though. Could use a bit polishing up in hard and insane but it's well on it way. Star.
Thanks for your mod XD
minyeob
[Overall]
"Soft" hitsound isn't fits with this map......

[Hard]
02:45:28 (1,2) - Make 1/4 beat slower

[Insane]
02:15:54 (9) - New Combo
02:45:28 (1) - Make 1/4 beat slower. (Same as Hard)
03:02:68 (1) - Extend 1/2 beat (Don't forget to decrease next spinner's length!)
03:04:11 (1) - Extend 1 beat

*Starred
blissfulyoshi
Since I bothered looking up the ops, this is Naruto's 2nd op.

Normal:
SPOILER
Normal mod:
00:45:71 (1) - remove this note because you did not start constantly snapping to the instruments during lyrics until after the next spinner

Combo mod:
00:59:08 (1,1,2,1,1) - the combos seem random here
01:25:14 (1) - remove new combo?
01:30:97 (4,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 4 (swap new combo)

Hard:
SPOILER
Normal mod:
00:53:25 - the amount of life lost from these mini brakes is so small that you probably don't need them
02:37:83 (5) - I don't like how this is covered up by the score bar
02:40:97 (1) - I would move this up a eighth note and end it a eighth note earlier to end where it currently is

Combo mod:
00:15:54 (1,1,1,1,1) - new combo spam seemed random
00:20:34 (4) - new combo
00:33:03 (7) - new combo
00:35:08 (4,1) - swap new combo
00:39:37 (1,2,1,2,1) - y did you switch the comboing style here? If you keep it this way, make the next line of lyrics have a consistent combo
01:25:14 (1,2) - swap new combo
01:31:65 (1) - remove new combo
02:06:63 (5) - new combo to be consistent with previous occurrence
02:55:08 (7) - new combo

Insane:
SPOILER
Normal mod:
00:28:91 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - spacing?
00:38:00 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this was pretty hard to read
00:39:88 (1,2,3) - spacing
short breaks - same as hard
02:08:34 (4,5,6) - spacing
02:52:57 (2) - stack under the yellow 5?
02:56:94 (1,1,1,1) - 10s worth of spinners is boring and annoying to do\

Combo mod:
the combos in the beginning do seem random, but I read your previous post, so I won't comment on that except for:00:21:71 (10) - new combo
01:05:94 (1) - remove new combo unless this is for the spacing
01:45:20 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - make combos similar to the combos in the beginning
01:56:17 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - " "
02:18:11 (16,1) - swap new combo
02:43:48 (7) - new combo?
02:55:08 (7) - new combo

Hard got a little repetitive at times, but it is not a large issue.
Nice map. Star.
Topic Starter
Azure_Kite
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Jarby
Find a higher quality mp3. Resize your background to 800x600.

Hard:

00:14:51 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:15:71 (1,1,1,1) - This pattern is a no.
00:18:63 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:18:97 (6) - New combo.
00:19:31 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:22:40 (4) - New combo.
00:24:11 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:24:28 (5) - New combo.
00:24:63 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:25:14 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:25:83 (7) - New combo.
00:26:51 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:27:88 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:32:51 (5) - New combo.
00:33:03 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:34:05 (7) - New combo.
00:34:40 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:40:05 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:43:48 (5) - New combo.
00:51:88 (6) - New combo.
00:50:51 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Remove.
00:54:28 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Remove, extend break.
00:58:74 (7) - New combo.
01:00:11 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:01:48 (5) - Add new combo.
01:04:05 - Add stuff.
01:25:57 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:25:91 (5,6) - 1/4 forward. New combo on 5.
01:26:68 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:27:28 (2) - New combo.
01:30:97 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:31:65 (9) - New combo.



Insane:

The circle size is larger than Hard. What.
00:08:68 (1,2) - A jump this extreme in comparison to the previous combos is really not fitting at all.
Topic Starter
Azure_Kite

JarJarJacob wrote:

Find a higher quality mp3. Resize your background to 800x600.
MP3: Getting there...
BG resize: Done; but the full upload won't be done again til I get a new mp3, so...
Hard:

SPOILER
00:14:51 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:15:71 (1,1,1,1) - This pattern is a no.
00:18:63 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:18:97 (6) - New combo.
00:19:31 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:22:40 (4) - New combo.
00:24:11 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:24:28 (5) - New combo.
00:24:63 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:25:14 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:25:83 (7) - New combo.
00:26:51 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:27:88 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:32:51 (5) - New combo.
00:33:03 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:34:05 (7) - New combo.
00:34:40 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:40:05 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:43:48 (5) - New combo.
00:51:88 (6) - New combo.
00:50:51 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Remove.
00:54:28 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Remove, extend break.
00:58:74 (7) - New combo.
01:00:11 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:01:48 (5) - Add new combo.
01:04:05 - Add stuff.
01:25:57 (1) - Remove new combo.

All these: Done

01:25:91 (5,6) - 1/4 forward. New combo on 5. Puts it out of sync with the lyrics, new combo done.
SPOILER
01:26:68 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:27:28 (2) - New combo.
01:30:97 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:31:65 (9) - New combo.

Done



Insane:

The circle size is larger than Hard. What? Changed; I originally thought it'd compensate a little but, meh. Changed.
00:08:68 (1,2) - A jump this extreme in comparison to the previous combos is really not fitting at all.
Changed
alvisto
Hi Azure_Kyte~~~

Modding go go go !

What I typed here are all just suggestions, as I, myself, is neither a great modder, nor a great mapper.

NORMAL
General : Wanna raise the circle size by 1 tick ? Since it's normal.
00:15:54 (1) - These 3 sliders sounds very noisy !
suggestions : Add only whistle to these parts - 00:15:545, 00:15:887, 00:16:230, 00:16:573, 00:16:916, 00:17:259. Remove whistle from other parts of sliders, include body of slider. =D
NAZI ! 00:21:609 - reinsert break
00:35:43 (2) - too many finish is hurtful to the ears ! Try remove finish from the start and body of the slider
00:36:11 (3) - ^
00:46:05 (7) - ^
00:46:74 (8) - ^
00:47:43 (9) - Only remove the finish from the body
Purely suggestions : 01:08:00 (2) - remove clap
01:09:03 (4,5) - ^
01:16:450 - reinsert break
01:18:28 (2) - Purely suggestions too -> Extend the slider to the next white tick
01:21:03 (3) - ^
01:25:57 (3,4) - spacing

Anyway, normal is very fun to play ! Good job !

HARD
00:17:430 - add a note here ?
00:35:43 (3) - Arghhh, I hate whistles (XD). Try remove the whistle at the end of slider ?
00:36:11 (4) - try remove the whistle at 00:36:802 ?
00:37:48 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - XD XD whistles !! T_T
(P.S. : Seems that you use a lot of whistles.... I am fine with that, just that it is painful to the ears, yea, I am wearing earphones. XD. Maybe use a whistle sound with a lower volume ? If you want that, I can do it for you...)
00:49:83 (1,2,3,4) - good job
01:11:77 (2) - This slider shape looks weird amongst the sea of unique slider design. XD (just a personal flavour, lol)
01:28:57 (1) - spacing
01:35:94 (5,6,7) - Inconsistent minor spacing problem and design problem.

Other than that, really good job !

INSANE
00:49:14 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - OMG, super uber evil trap. alvisto will damn sure fail this difficulty. lol. (lol, it's fine... =P)
01:09:71 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - OMG, uber stacks. XD
NAZI ! 01:15:545 - reinsert break
01:30:63 (10) - This alignment BOTHERS me lol, sorry for such nazi
02:26:51 (1) - lol crazy slider, i like it

No problem spotted in insane.

2nd time auto-play nazi mod
00:05:77 (4) - this bothers me, the alignment
Try this -> Increse circle size by 1, increase overall difficulty by 1 -> makes playing easier, less painful, notes easier to see, and your map looks "healthier" (coz with small notes, it looks painfully malnourished the map, lol )

General Impression :
Normal - Fun to play
Hard - Didn't test play it
Insane - Need to say more, it's INSANE ! D: However, I have one opinion, when i watched osu play, it seems that there are many hidden evil trap and some streams / stacks doesn't make sense (meaning hard to hit for the 1st time, but I guess pros won't feel anything anyway... skip)

Miscellanous :
Background suggestion : Change to 800 x 600 please...


Good map Aaron ! You are my starrrrrr~~~~

Modded by : YAY !
Topic Starter
Azure_Kite

alvisto wrote:

Hi Azure_Kyte~~~

Modding go go go !

What I typed here are all just suggestions, as I, myself, is neither a great modder, nor a great mapper.

NORMAL
General : Wanna raise the circle size by 1 tick ? Since it's normal. done
00:15:54 (1) - These 3 sliders sounds very noisy !
suggestions : Add only whistle to these parts - 00:15:545, 00:15:887, 00:16:230, 00:16:573, 00:16:916, 00:17:259. Remove whistle from other parts of sliders, include body of slider. =D changed a little
NAZI ! 00:21:609 - reinsert break Done
00:35:43 (2) - too many finish is hurtful to the ears ! Try remove finish from the start and body of the slider I cahnged these sounds a little
00:36:11 (3) - ^
00:46:05 (7) - ^
00:46:74 (8) - ^
00:47:43 (9) - Only remove the finish from the body
Purely suggestions : 01:08:00 (2) - remove clap
01:09:03 (4,5) - ^
01:16:450 - reinsert break
01:18:28 (2) - Purely suggestions too -> Extend the slider to the next white tick
01:21:03 (3) - ^
01:25:57 (3,4) - spacing

Anyway, normal is very fun to play ! Good job !

HARD
00:17:430 - add a note here ? Done
00:35:43 (3) - Arghhh, I hate whistles (XD). Try remove the whistle at the end of slider ?
00:36:11 (4) - try remove the whistle at 00:36:802 ?
00:37:48 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - XD XD whistles !! T_T
(P.S. : Seems that you use a lot of whistles.... I am fine with that, just that it is painful to the ears, yea, I am wearing earphones. XD. Maybe use a whistle sound with a lower volume ? If you want that, I can do it for you...)
00:49:83 (1,2,3,4) - good job
01:11:77 (2) - This slider shape looks weird amongst the sea of unique slider design. XD (just a personal flavour, lol)
01:28:57 (1) - spacing
01:35:94 (5,6,7) - Inconsistent minor spacing problem and design problem. Done

Other than that, really good job !

INSANE
00:49:14 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - OMG, super uber evil trap. alvisto will damn sure fail this difficulty. lol. (lol, it's fine... =P)
01:09:71 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - OMG, uber stacks. XD I love them ;p
NAZI ! 01:15:545 - reinsert break
01:30:63 (10) - This alignment BOTHERS me lol, sorry for such nazi; No problem; It's a jump ;p
02:26:51 (1) - lol crazy slider, i like it <3

No problem spotted in insane.

2nd time auto-play nazi mod
00:05:77 (4) - this bothers me, the alignment Fixed
Try this -> Increse circle size by 1, increase overall difficulty by 1 -> makes playing easier, less painful, notes easier to see, and your map looks "healthier" (coz with small notes, it looks painfully malnourished the map, lol ) Larger circles, harded overall, harder drain rate

General Impression :
Normal - Fun to play
Hard - Didn't test play it
Insane - Need to say more, it's INSANE ! D: However, I have one opinion, when i watched osu play, it seems that there are many hidden evil trap and some streams / stacks doesn't make sense (meaning hard to hit for the 1st time, but I guess pros won't feel anything anyway... skip)

Miscellanous :
Background suggestion : Change to 800 x 600 please... done


Good map Aaron ! You are my starrrrrr~~~~

Modded by : YAY !
Gens
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Topic Starter
Azure_Kite
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gdeath
combo colors 2&4 look very similar.can you del one or change another color?(suggestion)

[Normal]
01:00:80 (1) - remove new combo

[Hard]
fine

[Insane]
plz make as long as hard.and i dont like the last continuous spinner.but you can leave it.
00:13:31 (1) - remove new combo in order to keep balance wiht 00:14:34 (1,2,3)
00:22:74 (1) - remove new combo
00:24:11 (1) - ^
00:27:20 (1) - ^
00:27:88 (1) - ^
00:38:17 (5) - spacing
00:48:45 (1) - remove new combo
00:49:14 (1) - ^
00:50:34 (1) - ^

that'all i can find.
nice map.starry*
Topic Starter
Azure_Kite

gdeath wrote:

combo colors 2&4 look very similar.can you del one or change another color?(suggestion)
Actually I'd done this for insane, I just forgot to change the others. Fixed now
[Normal]
01:00:80 (1) - remove new combo Done

[Hard]
fine

[Insane]
plz make as long as hard.and i dont like the last continuous spinner.but you can leave it. I like it the way it is...
00:13:31 (1) - remove new combo in order to keep balance wiht 00:14:34 (1,2,3) Done
00:22:74 (1) - remove new combo Done
00:24:11 (1) - ^ done
00:27:20 (1) - ^ Not done, because I find it fits more to the guitar like this
00:27:88 (1) - ^ ^
00:38:17 (5) - spacing Fixed
00:48:45 (1) - remove new combo Same as 27:20
00:49:14 (1) - ^ ^
00:50:34 (1) - ^ ^

that'all i can find.
nice map.starry*
Thanks for your mod~
Lokamp
Time for some mod-action!

[General] set Kiai time WHEN there are some beats...

Normal

[00:01:140] (1,1,1,1) soft sounds here! (maybe finish...)
[01:25:570] (3) move it to the red tick (01:25:650)
[01:26:510] (spinner) end it on the blue tick (01:28:145)

Hard

[01:58:830] (1,2) move these beats one tick forward

Insane

[01:28:850] (1) move this beat 1 tick backwards

Good job! Starry 4 you ;)
Topic Starter
Azure_Kite

Lokamp wrote:

Time for some mod-action!

[General] set Kiai time WHEN there are some beats...

Normal

[00:01:140] (1,1,1,1) soft sounds here! (maybe finish...) Soft sounds implemented.
[01:25:570] (3) move it to the red tick (01:25:650) Fixed
[01:26:510] (spinner) end it on the blue tick (01:28:145)

Hard

[01:58:830] (1,2) move these beats one tick forward Fixed

Insane

[01:28:850] (1) move this beat 1 tick backwards Fixed

Good job! Starry 4 you ;)
Thanks for your mod
GabrielRKF
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.



Topic Starter
Azure_Kite
ooh........... Thank you very much
Mafiamaster
Coolz~
Did a quick check and didn't see anything too wrong~
Star!
DeathxShinigami
[Normal]
00:07:65 (1,2,1,1,2,1,2) - Eww...any reason why you can't spread these out?

Thats it. :s
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