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FictionJunction KEIKO - Synchronicity

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Lissette
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Lissette
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, December 26, 2009 at 12:31:59 PM

Artist: FictionJunction KEIKO
Title: Synchronicity
Source: Tsubasa TOKYO REVELATIONS
Tags: kajiura Yuki Tsubasa Chronicle Everlasting Songs Lizbeth
BPM: 141
Filesize: 8444kb
Play Time: 02:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0.78 stars, 68 notes)
  2. Hard (4.59 stars, 466 notes)
  3. Insane (4.88 stars, 591 notes)
  4. Lizbeth's Normal (4.24 stars, 184 notes)
Download: FictionJunction KEIKO - Synchronicity
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If you already have this Beatmap, re-download it plz.... thanks

Comments plz

SB added.
This is my first SB, so.... I accept any constructive critics and suggestions to improve it.... thanks!

Other Beatmaps of Tsubasa Chronicle's OST Here: forum/viewtopic.php?f=53&t=17543
Enjoy!
Last edited by Lissette , edited 34 times in total.
BlueskY_old
10 posts
Joined April 2009
BlueskY_old
good
minyeob
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Joined May 2008
minyeob

BlueskY wrote:

good
Click Star this map please

[Overall]
Nice sound effects. I think this map has no major problem. Be positive with any modder's suggestion.
Well I think 3,2,1 GO! Countdown is unnecessary.......

[Lizbeth]
01:05:95 (6) - Too many U-turns are used IMO. Decrease the number of U-turn times by 1.
01:47:12 (5) - Use distance snap please
Ekaru
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Joined July 2008
Ekaru
Nothing I'd say is wrong with it. Insane was insane. Plays good to me. Star.
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth
;)
Lissette
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Lissette
Thanks for checking Ekaru and minyeob.
Hard diff. added.

waiting for Lizbeth to fix normal.

cya :)
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
[Easy]
00:42:97 (1) - Add a whistle?
01:47:22 (3) - Remove finish on repeat
01:50:63 (3) - ^
01:54:03 (4) - ^

[Normal]
00:19:14 (1) - End slider with a finish?
01:59:57 (3) - Remove clap at end or use a finish for the whole slider instead
02:02:97 (1) - ^

[Hard]
01:25:95 (4,5) - Align with 2?
01:26:59 (6) - Align with 3?
01:27:01 (1) - New Combo?
02:59:57 (7) - Finish here?

[Insane]
01:29:78 (7) - Start slider here instead and remove note?
Breeze
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Breeze
hi~
tsubasa, cool :)

here's my random mod:

[Easy]
01:13:293 - 01:15:208 - add somthing, it's too empty
01:15:421 - 01:16:910 - ^
01:20:527 - 01:22:017 - ^
01:22:229 - 01:23:719 - ^
01:47:761 - 01:49:251 - ^
01:57:017 (1) - make it overlapping with the end of the front (1)

[Normal]
00:07:229 - 00:34:464 - good patten, add some clap or whistle among them, they sound a little boring
01:37:017 (4) - it doesn't match the music, a slider at 01:36:910 - 01:37:229, add a note at 01:37:442
01:40:421 (5) - same to above ^
01:42:549 (6) - repeat doesn't match anything, sounds stange

[Hard]
00:14:038 (1) - it coverd by the front notes which did'nt disappeared, ugly and confuing
00:15:315 (5) - make it overlapping with the end of the front (4)
00:15:953 (2) - it coverd by the front notes which did'nt disappeared, ugly and confuing, this one is better than front one
00:17:017 (5) - make it overlapping with the end of the front (4)
00:18:719 (5) - make it overlapping with the end of the front (4)
00:27:229 (1,2,3,4,5) - good patten, but covered by front notes, try array them in other side
00:34:464 (1) - wrong spacing
01:52:336 (2) - this covering is confused

I'm lazy and bad at mod Insane :o
anyway, great map!
so mod these for you :)
and star for you
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Easy~
  1. 00:18:82 (1) - It would be more fitting if it started on the white tick at 00:19:14. Don't forget to shorten! ^.^
Normal~
  1. 01:32:33 (3) - Suggestion: Add a finish here
  2. It's Cool: 01:56:16 (6,7,8) - Ooo, I like the way you did these sliders <3
Hard~
  1. 00:19:03 (1) - Same suggestion as in Easy~
  2. 02:54:03 (4) - Redo break after this note. It'll shorten~

Insane~
  1. 00:08:50 (5,6) - Suggestion: Flip these two notes around.
  2. 00:11:91 (5,6) - ^
  3. 01:11:91 (3) - Add a whistle.
  4. 02:37:01 (2,3,4) - I know someone is going to complain about this (like me ^^) so it'd be best to make these sliders not "hidden-ish"
Lissette
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Lissette
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
GabrielRKF
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Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
//Easy//

00:21:485(x) - No Breaktime? o.O
00:36:166(1) - Better without New Combo?
00:39:570(1) - ^
01:57:017(1) - ^

Ps.:I'm gonna tell the truth. "I" don't like new combo sections like the one u did on the beggining and at 01:04:251. Remeber that "I" don't like it, so keep using it if you think it's cool, but i gotta say that i think that it's weard.


//Lizbeth's Normal//
Ps.:Hit sounds starting before the BPM? Nothing wrong, it's just... weard .__.

Nothing wrong here =]


//Hard//
Cool mirroring and sub-rythms ^^

00:14:038(1) - weard position :/
01:17:092(6) - 1 grid right
01:51:485(1,2) - i really like this type of sub-rythm but at this part, i don't think that sounds cool =/ I think it's because u didn't used it at 01:47:655.
02:28:506(1) - no new combo
02:34:464(4,5) - does not sounds cool at all :/
03:02:123(1,1) - like i sayid, i don't like New Combo Sections =/


//Insane//
Cool jumps =]

00:47:229(1) - hum... without new combo isn't better? XD
01:51:485(1) - no new combo
01:58:293(break) - really? break here? I think it's better use a Spinner then a short breaktime
02:28:506(1) - better without New Combo? (Thinking of Tag)
02:45:952(3) - Unecessary note?
02:49:357(3) - ^
03:01:910(1) - hum... without new combo i think it's better .__.
03:09:783(1) - ^
03:26:166(1 - END) - I won't fight here XD There are so manny new combos but this section got cool =]

ps.: Loving the song! *---*

Star \o/
Lesjuh
Elite Mapper
2,442 posts
Joined October 2008
Lesjuh
Easy:
Perfect~

Lizbeth's Normal:
01:47:12 (5) - Space further (Blue tick is hard x3)

Hard:
03:26:16 (1) - Forgot to put whistle in ending
03:28:18 (2) - ^
03:26:16 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,1) - Combo these beats like this: 03:26:16 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5)

Insane:
01:16:16 (4) - New combo also because the overall diff is pretty high.
01:22:97 (3) - Same as above.
03:27:44 (5) - Move 1 down, looks weird

Awesome map, keep it up~ :)
Shinxyn
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Shinxyn
@_@ another hard to follow song
Offset minus 9
Lower hitsound volume 1 or 2 ticks (1 works fine)

Easy-
Something this easy should follow larger grid size~
Nazi-
00:44:67 (3) - might as well align this, (left a tick)
01:57:01 (1) - I say space this away or stack it properly

Lizbeth's-
I say lower the soft hitsound volume too, the finish hitsound is kinda overpowering the music
No grid snap on most parts... so some things could be stacked better, no biggie though
Coulda used less whistles on the vocal sections, but its fine..

Hard-
Please remove all soft sliderslide whistles...
Nazi-
00:15:31 (5,6) - stack better please (turn off grid snap and distance snap)
00:17:01 (5,6) - ^
00:18:71 (5,6) - ^
01:40:63 - add a note? (since the comboes before had them)
There's a lot of alignment and stacks I would prefer look better, but it seems like its your design)
Redo Breaks
And like Normal, the vocal could use less whistles...

Insane-
Hmm same as Hard, remove the soft-sliderslide whistle hitsounds please
Nazi-
00:44:67 (3) - left a tick please~
01:11:48 (2) - up two tick (to "center" from 1,3 better)
01:16:16 (4) - new combo
01:37:44 (8) - ^
01:40:63 - same as Hard
01:49:35 (6) - new combo
01:56:16 (6) - ^
02:40:42 (3) - make this a horizontal flip from 1?
03:17:44 (4,7) - new combo both
The other placements I don't mind much about
Less whistles on the softer vocal sections as well~

@_@ Like I said, the song is hard to follow
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
tieff
Featured Artist
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Joined March 2009
tieff
[Easy]
00:51:47 (1) - Remoce whistle from start.
00:55:73 (2) - Whistle.
00:59:13 (2) - ^
01:32:540 ~ 01:45:944 - Why break? o.o

[Lizbeth's Normal]
00:08:49 (4) - Whistle.
00:10:19 (4) - ^
00:11:90 (4) - ^
00:13:60 (4) - ^

[Hard]
00:25:94 (3,4) - Spacing.
02:11:79 (5,6) - Spacing.

Star, nice map.
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
fartownik
[Easy]
SPOILER
Fine. What might be wrong in one starred beatmap? :P

[Lizbeth's Normal]
SPOILER
Perfect.

[Hard]
SPOILER
01:32:327 - 01:57:859 - Too much finish hitsounds.
02:56:582 - 03:24:667 - ^
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00:15:306 (5,6) - Stack with vanishing slider's end.
00:17:008 (5,6) - ^
00:18:710 (5,6) - ^
01:41:68 (2,3,4,5,6) - Move these notes 1/2 forward, then add note here and delete (6).

[Insane]
SPOILER
If I were you, I will raise HP Drain a bit.
The same problem with finish hitsounds. But the rest is fantastic.

Move to Pending please.
~Starry
Lissette
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eee
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eee
[Easy]
eh.

[Hard]
I got nothin'

[Insane]
00:34:02 - you wanna put a (1,2) here similar to, well, every other combo before it [00:32:32 (1,2) for example, sounds the like the same beat]. just opinion
01:40:62 (x) - note here?

I do have a couple of thoughts of some notes landing on 1/2 that should be 1/4, but I'll let it slide since they land on some sort of beat I DO NOT KNOW OF!!!, I mean, nobody else complains, why not eee as well.

star cause I got nothin'
Lissette
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Lissette
Thanks a lot for your help eee!!
kds 4 ya! :)
mrtn
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