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riffy

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riffy 2013-10-26T08:32:06+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 3 февраля 2014 г. at 16:48:14

Artist: Lenka
Title: The Show
Tags: indie Kripac
BPM: 123
Filesize: 4495kb
Play Time: 01:50
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1,66 stars, 106 notes)
Hard (4,81 stars, 208 notes)
Normal (3,98 stars, 152 notes)

Download: Lenka - The Show
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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1/3

Life is a maze
and love is a riddle
I don't know where to go
I can't do it alone!

It's showtime!

Last edited by riffy 2014-02-03T10:48:41+00:00, edited 10 times in total.

Niko-nyan

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Niko-nyan 2013-10-26T09:52:05+00:00

and

happy623

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happy623 2013-10-26T10:42:38+00:00

xD/ love the song and sb

Suimya

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Suimya 2013-10-26T15:04:44+00:00

epic song with epic sb ahah xD

worth a star =w=

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2013-10-27T07:53:15+00:00

Baka-chan Go ~

xChippy

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xChippy 2013-10-27T09:43:40+00:00

Yo~
As per request.

[General]

Epic SB xD
Add a soft-sliderslide o-o?
All diff looking good! but only thing lacking is hitsounds =w=

[Hitsound for all diff]
You probably used the copier soo this makes it easier xD

00:15:266 - Whistle
00:32:339 - Whistle same sound as 00:30:388 - which has a whistle
00:37:217 - You could put a whistle here on the head to emphasize with the carrillon(?) don't really know what it is but it sounds nice :3
00:44:046 - Missing finish I think since the cymbals are playing
01:03:071 - Should be finish same reason as above cymbals~
01:11:851 - ^ Cymbals
01:28:924 - Whistle and remove the whistle here 01:28:762 (5) -
01:30:225 - Should be a finish tho cymbals o-o
01:30:713 - Clap
01:30:876 - Whistle
01:40:144 - Clap~
01:42:095 - Clap
01:44:534 - Whistle
01:45:510 - Whistle
00:46:973 - Try a drum+clap

[Hard]
The first kia is lacking in whistle imo ><, you could atleast put some on the Stanza's :3

00:08:924 (1) - This one kinda played awkward for me since there is nothing really to support the end with, as for (2) it has Do~n't so I suggest to change (1) to a circle instead
00:20:632 (1) - move it to around 292|168 will make it look cleaner (Centered in the square)
01:09:250 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try this rythm :3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1063229 (don't look placing xD)

[Normal]
Same about the kia as in Insane

00:47:949 - I'd prefer a actual note here with a finish =w= cuz also this way you start the kia with a click xD oh btw if you do NC =w=

[Easy]

00:20:632 (6) - NC here for consistency o-o? also remove the NC here than 00:21:607 (1) -
00:37:705 (4) - Do something like this? so you get that beat from the stanza http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1063263
01:05:510 (3,4,5) - nazi The DS here is getting kinda odd o-o

riffy

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riffy 2013-10-27T10:05:55+00:00

Thanks a lot, everything should be applied!

[-mii-chan-]

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[-mii-chan-] 2013-10-27T14:27:17+00:00

Yo~ free mod xD Love the SB sooo much~

Easy

00:20:632 (6) - my idea is this should really be drum-clap or drum-finish. The music silences completely at this point, so I don't want echoes from hitsounds '3'
00:21:607 (1) - normal-clap at slider's end
00:24:534 (4) - drum-clap or drum-finish like above
00:29:900 (3) - normal-clap at slider's end too
00:44:046 (1) - should end at 00:46:973 - and redo it like this: http://puu.sh/50Uk5.jpg
01:18:193 (3) - no whistle at slider's end, sounds strange to me, emphasizing nothing there :s
01:19:168 (1) - should only be 2 stanza's long. Then it's a short break, it's Easy after all

Normal

00:01:933 (2) - make it like this: http://puu.sh/50UL2.jpg
00:09:900 (5) - make it like this: http://puu.sh/50UO8.jpg instead of a slider only :s
00:12:827 (4) - ^
00:20:632 (5) - same problem like Normal :s drum-clap or drum-fn here

00:24:372 (1) - just soft-hitnormal here?
00:30:225 - add a note?
00:32:176 - ^
00:52:664 (2) - distance snap is too near '3' maybe little to you but I still tell in case u want to move it
01:24:534 (3) - clap instead of whistle at repeat?
01:26:811 (5) - ^

Hard

00:02:583 (4) - a note only instead of slider there, slider's end totally NOT fit in with me :s
00:03:884 - missing a note here

00:09:412 (2) - redo like this

http://puu.sh/50ViL.jpg
00:20:632 (1) - drum-clap or finish or just plain soft-normal
00:24:372 (5) - ^
00:36:241 (1) - slider's end is finish
00:56:241 (2) - slider's start is finish
01:16:729 (4) - replace the slider with 1 note
01:19:006 (6) - merge the spinner with this note => spinner should start at this point & del the note
01:29:737 - add a note here
01:36:567 - ^

Well that's pretty much what I can offer right now \:D/ hope you find it useful~ I've gotta do my assignment now

see ya later IRC

riffy

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riffy 2013-10-27T15:06:23+00:00

hope to check it SOON

or not, anyway, i'll try

thank you!

riffy

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riffy 2013-10-28T01:46:52+00:00

o0ohitomio0o wrote:
Yo~ free mod xD Love the SB sooo much~

Easy
00:20:632 (6) - my idea is this should really be drum-clap or drum-finish. The music silences completely at this point, so I don't want echoes from hitsounds '3' drum whistle fits better, imo. sorry ;_;
00:21:607 (1) - normal-clap at slider's end no way, it'll be totally off D:
00:24:534 (4) - drum-clap or drum-finish like above aaand no, it sounds kinda off, sorry :<
00:29:900 (3) - normal-clap at slider's end too naaaaah, there's no need to. music has no such sound there D:
00:44:046 (1) - should end at 00:46:973 - and redo it like this: http://puu.sh/50Uk5.jpg i'll need more opinions on this thing, because I'm not sure. sorry ;_:
01:18:193 (3) - no whistle at slider's end, sounds strange to me, emphasizing nothing there :s :D ok
01:19:168 (1) - should only be 2 stanza's long. Then it's a short break, it's Easy after all will need more opinions >3< ^

Normal
00:01:933 (2) - make it like this: http://puu.sh/50UL2.jpg it'll be too hard, sorry o3o
00:09:900 (5) - make it like this: http://puu.sh/50UO8.jpg instead of a slider only :s whyy? I want to keep it like this :<
00:12:827 (4) - ^ same, sorry
00:20:632 (5) - same problem like Normal :s drum-clap or drum-fn here whistle-drum
00:24:372 (1) - just soft-hitnormal here? let's keep hitsounds consistent o3o
00:30:225 - add a note? too hard D:
00:32:176 - ^ ^
00:52:664 (2) - distance snap is too near '3' maybe little to you but I still tell in case u want to move it should be fixed
01:24:534 (3) - clap instead of whistle at repeat? sure
01:26:811 (5) - ^ o3o sure

Hard
00:02:583 (4) - a note only instead of slider there, slider's end totally NOT fit in with me :s c'mon, it fits here, the sound fades here ;_:/ (reduced the volume, tho)
00:03:884 - missing a note here sure
00:09:412 (2) - redo like this http://puu.sh/50ViL.jpg naaah, it's ok as it is. there's no need to. sorry
00:20:632 (1) - drum-clap or finish or just plain soft-normal I'd go with drum whistle
00:24:372 (5) - ^ ~^
00:36:241 (1) - slider's end is finish c'mon, the finish sound is too loud
00:56:241 (2) - slider's start is finish same as above o3o
01:16:729 (4) - replace the slider with 1 note sure thing
01:19:006 (6) - merge the spinner with this note => spinner should start at this point & del the note no way! i don't want to ignore the sound at 01:19:168 -
01:29:737 - add a note here yeeah
01:36:567 - ^ kay o3o

Well that's pretty much what I can offer right now \:D/ hope you find it useful~ I've gotta do my assignment now see ya later IRC

thanks a lot!

Umi

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Umi 2013-10-28T14:24:23+00:00

i'm here :3

So many 1/3's song recently x)

let'su go !

Easy

- 00:05:510 (2) - align the end with the start ? i mean symmetry
- 00:06:973 (3) - in this way for a better flow

SPOILER

- 00:16:241 (1) - whistle on tail
- 00:17:217 (2) - whistle on reverse
- 00:18:680 (3) - what about this ? i think it's less boring to have the second shape in another way

SPOILER

- 00:19:656 (4) - NC ?
- 00:25:510 (1,3,1) - since you aligned 00:26:973 (2,4) -, align them too ?
- 00:29:900 (3,4) - same as 00:18:680 (3) -
- 00:42:095 (3) - increase the flow here ?

SPOILER

- 01:31:851 (3) - i personally prefer in this direction x)

SPOILER

Normal

- CS 4 it remind me something ahah <3
- Something that i didn't understand : why during the first KIAI you decreases the DS ? o.o
- well i'll point first some 1/3 slider that you should remove imo and add a single note instead because it doesn't follow wery well the song '-', after it's up to u xD
00:04:859 (1) -
00:08:762 (3) -
00:13:640 (5) -
- 00:17:705 (1) - whistle
- 00:18:680 (3) - Better flow

SPOILER

- 00:24:372 (1) - why this lonely NC ?

remove ? '-'
- 00:46:485 (2) - move it to 145,221
- 01:04:534 (2) - you should put the shape in this, way the current flow is kinda bad imo

SPOILER

Hard

- 00:09:412 - it need a note

- 00:04:046 (2) - NC here for the anti-jump
- 00:16:729 (2) - whistle on tail
- 00:22:583 (3) - NC '-'
- 00:37:217 (2) - ^
- 00:48:924 (3,4) - use the same shape here ? and then make it like this (more or less)

SPOILER

- 00:59:168 (1) - end point 108,43
- 01:04:046 (3) - move it to 49,182
- 01:39:656 (2) - i think you know what i mean now x)

Well i guess that's all, this mapset is so good *-* I really like your pattern in the hard diff ! and the SB <3 good luck on ranking o3ob ~ have a star

riffy

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riffy 2013-11-01T10:51:46+00:00

Thank you, I'll check it asap! <3

Kyouren

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Kyouren 2013-11-02T12:43:14+00:00

Can i make a diff?