1. Hard (4.6 stars, 167 notes)
2. Normal (2.67 stars, 119 notes)

smallboat wrote:

Hello,blissfulyoshi. In-game req.
I am Chinese. Poor English sorry. No worries, your English is mostly fine.

Red words : Should be fix it.

Blue words : I recommended suggestion.

Black words : In my personal suggestion.

[General]

I don't like slidertick sound,try add "slidertick",and no voice? I need a lot of custom hitsounds, will get them soon. Still, since I can only silence slider slider or slider tick, I rather silence sliderslide.
Should add kiai time? At 01:15:374 (1) -start here? ~ 01:35:541 (2) - end. The song is way too soft of kiai time. It doesn't fit very well imo.

[Normal]

00:00:708 (1,2) - Blanket mutual? Done....I think. Not sure what you mean.
00:09:374 (2) - Slider end"s finish a little loud,try turn down volume 30 or 40? Just going to turn entire song hitsound volume down.
00:11:374 (1) - Slider end should be placed red line? Music is red end. And can symmetry. Done and almost symmetrical......... (don't know what happened here, but I made it mostly symmetrical)
00:17:708 (5) - Slider head +whistle? Done.
00:20:708 (2) - The same with 00:09:374. Read 00:09:374
00:32:041 (1) - Set green line ,volume 30 or 40. Because volume 50's clap is a bit noise,imo. Read 00:09:374
00:46:541 (2) - Slider head remove clap. Here is a singing human voice,no need add hitsound,imo. Trying to keep the pattern going so will probably keep it.

[Hard] Feel add a bit hitsound? Does it really need more? Well I want to get custom hitsounds first before going too far forward. Also, the lyrical snap really made it hard to hitsound...

00:13:374 (5) - Add note +whistle The piano is really weak here, and since it makes my pattern messier, I rather not do this.
00:14:541 (2) - Slider end +whistle Done.
00:15:208 (4) - Slider head remove whistle. End + whistle. Done.
00:17:374 (4) - Slider head add whistle. Done.
00:18:208 (6) - End + whistle. Done.
00:22:041 (1) - Wow..so long slider..lol . It may be allowed to do? Nothing wrong with long sliders if they fit.
00:25:374 (1) - Stack crooked off. Fixed, stacking set to 5 now, nice catch.
00:27:374 (1) - Ctrl +g ,better flow? I don't like the short spacing and changing the pattern didn't work out well for me.
00:32:041 (1) - Set green line ,volume 30 or 40. Because volume 50's clap is a bit noise,imo. Like Normal set everythign to 30%.
00:37:041 (4) - Remove whistle. Done.
00:42:041 (5) - Feel finish is a bit loud,imo. Read 00:32:041
00:54:708 (3) - White line +whistle? Done
00:56:041 (2) - +whistle Done.
00:57:374 (5) - Slider head +whistle. Done.
01:01:374 (2) - +whistle Done.
01:05:041 (2,3) - White line +whistle? Done.
01:44:874 (1) - Spinner end sound should add a green line 10% volume? (Feel shouldn"t have sound.) Woops, my mistake, fixed on both diffs.

[Other]

1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you Ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
4.Your pattern shape is so good! I wish I could learn it.

1. 00:04:708 (2) - this slider is no problem, but still i think it can be improved, so how about doing it like this to make a bit more fun to it o3o
   
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2. 00:07:374 (3) - move the last slider's point 1 grid down so it'll blanket better with the other slider
3. 00:09:374 (2) - I think adding finish here is a bit too loud for the song imo, so how about replacing it with whistle instead?
4. 00:11:374 (1,1) - not perfect blanketing, so how about fixing it like this?
   
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5. 00:36:708 (3) - move the last slider's point 1 grid down, so it'll blanket better with the other slider
6. 00:42:874 (4) - another too loud finish...i don't suggest to add it for this kind of songs >< it's too loud, so replace it with whistle instead?
7. 01:02:708 (3) - move the last slider's point 1 grid to the left to fix the blanketing

1. 00:35:041 (1) - the slider's end ins't perfectly stucked, so you might want to fix it o.o
2. 00:40:374 (1) - making so many liner slider's is kinda a bit boring, so how about doing stuff like this instead? it'll make a bit more fun to them
   
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3. 01:02:708 (5) - move the 3rd slider's point to x:328 y:192 , so it'll fix the overlapping ></ and so as the blanketing

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Hey Bliss =w=/ wow...nice song from Love Live <3


Normal:

1. 00:04:708 (2) - this slider is no problem, but still i think it can be improved, so how about doing it like this to make a bit more fun to it o3o Done.
   
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2. 00:07:374 (3) - move the last slider's point 1 grid down so it'll blanket better with the other slider Looking at it, the middle point is slightly off, fixed.
3. 00:09:374 (2) - I think adding finish here is a bit too loud for the song imo, so how about replacing it with whistle instead? Done.
4. 00:11:374 (1,1) - not perfect blanketing, so how about fixing it like this? I don't want jumps in normal xD, so I think I fixed the blanketing.
   
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5. 00:36:708 (3) - move the last slider's point 1 grid down, so it'll blanket better with the other slider Done.
6. 00:42:874 (4) - another too loud finish...i don't suggest to add it for this kind of songs >< it's too loud, so replace it with whistle instead? Done.
7. 01:02:708 (3) - move the last slider's point 1 grid to the left to fix the blanketing Done.

Hard:

1. 00:35:041 (1) - the slider's end ins't perfectly stucked, so you might want to fix it o.o Done.
2. 00:40:374 (1) - making so many liner slider's is kinda a bit boring, so how about doing stuff like this instead? it'll make a bit more fun to them Hmmm, tbh, I find the adding of curve sliders makes an awkward transition, which is why I stuck with so many linear sliders. If other people complain I'll change it.
   
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3. 01:02:708 (5) - move the 3rd slider's point to x:328 y:192 , so it'll fix the overlapping ></ and so as the blanketing Wait what overlapping? 01:02:708 (5,1) is overlapping on purpose. Also, are you usre you have teh coordinates right, it looks terrible it you move the 3rd point there.

Wow...so many Heart slider's lol Heart sliders are amazing xD.


Nice map, and song choice as always Bliss =w=/ Good luck i hope this is helps you~

BestLeeSinged wrote:

Hi, here to give some feedback!

Normal
you could just move this 00:16:041 (3) - further left to avoid it being too close to 00:17:374 (4) - . It takes a lot of restraint for me to not click it early
or you could try a slider on 16:708-17:041 to fill in the gap. No idea what happened there xD. Added a circle at 00:16:708 and changed distance snapping a bit

I feel like something could be added on 1:02:374. The lyrics fall on the blue tick 01:02:541 with the piano coming on the white tick afterward, so I don't think a note belongs here.

After looking at hard: Where are the custom colours? D: Woops, nice catch.


Hard
01:04:041 (1,2,3) - this section seems off...possibly because the sliders go from red>white. I personally tried this: . Like with 00:41:208 (3,4), I don't want things to fall on blue ticks. Since it follow the piano for the most part, I think it is okay, but if others complain, I'll change it.
00:27:374 (1,2,3) - if you listen closely, you can hear the piano playing two notes (white and red tick). So I would suggest using hitcricles instead of sliders. Not a biggie though. The previous 3 sliders also span 3 piano keys. For the sake of easiness and slider use, I rather use sliders.
00:41:208 (3,4) - these look nicer as diagonal sliders and help complete the pattern started by 00:40:708 (2) - . I am not exactly sure what you are suggesting here. Currently 3 is setup to slightly pass over 1 and 4 is meant to be parallel to 1. I think it is fine....
Maybe a circle at 00:57:208? I am trying to avoid blue ticks in a slow section esp on a hard diff. Since the notes follow the piano, it should be fine.
01:44:041 (4) - maybe put it in the centre? (runs and hides) Trying to get ppl to finish the heart shape made by that combo.

Alright, that's all I've got. Good luck!

AnreFM wrote:

Umm Hi blissfulyoshi><

umm I saw your map in #modhelp and I thought I can help><
and also sorry if my english is bad><

• [Normal]

1. 00:11:374 (1,1) - I'm really against following the vocal in this two, the rhythm can get really hard to grasp for when the first times I played it imo. Since the rhythms before this mainly follows the background piano, having this suddenly follows the vocal really threw me off lol. Your main slider rhythm is mostly; slider start in vocal, and ends with piano, like you did on 00:09:374 (2) - , so it will be nice if you keep using this rhythm. And so, for the rhythm at 00:11:374 (1) - , if you keep using the same rhythm, you should end the slider at 00:12:708 - where the piano also stops. It's really nice to have a variation in the rhythm, but I think suddenly change the rhythm on this one is kinda sudden and therefore will become slightly harder to read and play imo. Hmm, I get what you are saying, but on the other hand, this keeps the 1 white tick interval between notes, making it seem a bit more consistent to players. Also, I found the vocals during 00:11:374 (1) end fade out with the piano (the piano ends the hold for me), so following vocals again felt okay for me. So no change, but if someone else suggest it, I'll change it.
2. 00:13:708 (1) - Continuation of the above. I find this slider a bit hard to read too because of the slider before this ends on a red tick and this one is the same. Whilst that wasn't a really big problem (maybe just my stupid readability orz) but, having this slider start here will make the stanza on the next beatt passed. It's okay, but I think this beat is a bit too heavy to be left imo. Making people click on this part will make the play much better. And also because of this rhythm, the whistle pattern must be placed on the red tick here rather than the stanza where it should have be
3. To sum it up, this is the rhythm I recommend for the rhythm in 00:11:374 (1,1) -. So that the rhythm will be easier to grasp http://puu.sh/5g5Cq.jpg and the play will be better too imo, sorry for the long explainment btw>< Yeah, I really want to stick with my lyrical snap since I believe the lyrics overpower most things in the intro, and while it might seem a bit weird at first, as you play with it more, it makes more sense imo.
4. 00:19:041 (1) - While this one isn't as bad as the one above, I still think this slider could be play much better if it's started at 00:19:374 - where the stanza is. And also, this can still be used to follow the vocal because the long 'daaa' starts here, therefore the rhythm can make more sense to imo I fully disagree here because the ma part is so strong and the piano is so weak that the current start fits a lot better.
5. 00:20:708 - The finishes are fit, but I think it still plays too loud imo(even at 30%). I suggest to reduce it by at least 10-12% more, that way, the cymbal won't be too loud(since the finish here is to emphasize the heavy piano beat and there really isn't a cymbal there :'v) Hmmm... I actually like the impact of the cymbals there. Since the piano is really strong there, the cymbals match the piano, whle at 20%, I feel that they are too much in the background. I'll see what others say.
6. 00:30:041 - Ah the finish here fit more because it's the end of the rhythm, thus really emphasizing it. you can keep the nice volume here imo
   00:42:874 (4) - ah wow anyone can stumbled at this part if they weren't really looking at the distance lol. Yeah, the circle is good, it follows the piano correctly. But I think since this is normal (and the easiest on your mapset), you may want to use simpler rhythms, rather than a bit confusing one. So my suggestion is, you can actually make the slider at 00:42:041 (3) - extend to the blue tick at 00:42:874 - , therefore no one will get stumbled right? :b ah yeah, additionally, to increase the feel of the silent stop at 00:42:541 - you can make the volume lower(about 5-10%) and then increase it back again at 00:42:874 - . Feels really nice :3 Here's my suggestion also with the possible pattern you can use http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1096588 I do have to agree that this will make beginners stumble, except I don't feel your fix changes the situation since you still have a 3 blue tick gap between the end of the slider and 1, so I made a 4 a blue tick long slider instead. Also, your hitsound suggestion was nice, so did that.
7. 00:54:041 (1,2) - How about stacking these two? since the actual vocal start at 00:54:374 (2) - and (1) is just emphasizing a start of a new rhythm, having to move from (1) to (2) feels a bit weird; stacking them plays better really. And also, If you're worried with the patterns will messed because of DS, you can try this pattern with code below, While I do see how a stack could work, I don't really like adding stacks unless it is specifically a double note. Since the piano plays a different key on 2, so I assume the composer wanted the song to keep going and not stand still. As a result I probably won't stack them (thanks for giving me the code though.
   
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   132,212,54041,5,4,0:0:0:0:
   132,212,54374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   72,152,54708,2,0,P|35:97|71:8,1,170
   120,80,55708,2,0,P|208:112|280:56,1,170
   340,32,56708,2,0,P|444:24|476:128,1,212.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8. 01:14:374 (1,2,1) - Ah yeah I know this notes fits really well with the piano, but I really suggest to not use 1/4 triplets on normal. Since this one also the start after a brief break and the music stops altogether, which may make the players lost the current beat. So, people will missclick these three too early, because the beat is kinda forgotten on that break. So I suggest to remove these two cirlces, but if you want, you can keep the one on the red tick at 01:14:374 (1) - because I think 1/2 beats will be okay imo. But having these triplets just bugged me sorry>< So conflicted..... If I were to change this, I would probably remove 01:14:708 (1) because the piano is way too strong to ignore. However, I did think about your case of clicking 3 too early, but if you think about it, 3 is a slider, which means it has a much higher error tolerance. In short, it is fairly difficult to do 3 too fast assuming you see it. As a result I don't think I will change it for now, but that can quickly change.
9. 01:23:374 (5) - ah maybe just my stupid readability but because the curve on the red line is a bit too down, so I can't really see how curvy the shape is because it's a bit hidden. So I suggest maybe raise the red node at the top by 2 or 3 more grid? Changed it a bit, hope it helps.
10. 01:33:708 (4,5) - ah this one is the one I pointed at 00:19:041 (1) - this really plays better because of the click on stanzas
11. 01:36:708 (3) - ah I don't really like if the heart is just so straight like this lol, try rotating it a bit so it will get like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1096646 it looked kinda nicer because it fit better with the background since it doesn't overlap with the girl on the background. Small change I know, but I like this one :3 Lol, nice suggestion, horizontally flipped the slider and then added a 15 degree angle.
12. Yeah Overall, the map is really good, the rhythm and the pattern are fit really well with the song. I especially like the heart slider, it shaped so nicely and doesn't look forced, I wish I can do that too :'3 So, aside from the small rhythm problem I mentioned above, the rest is really good

• [Hard]

1. Ah the first thing I noticed when I play this is; the SV. Yeah, you may also notice too, but I think the gap between the SV in normal and this diff is really high (almost two times of it lol). Um yeah I don't suggest you to reduce the SV here, since it will be quite troublesome and break your patterns, I also find the high SV is somewhat fit with the music and the flow of notes . So what I'm suggesting is that maybe you can add another difficulty here which have 2.5 SV or around that?. It will make the gap between the difficulties better since I was really thrown off when I played this difficulty for the first time orz While it is a lot faster, the object count didn't really increase, so it didn't really feel like that much of a difficulty jump for me. Also since people shouldn't have too many problems moving at this speed (slight overstatement), I feel the difficulty jump is reasonable. If someone else asks, I probably will be resistant to make another diff, but we'll see.
2. 00:13:708 (1) - Lower the tail a few grid so that it will blanket 00:14:541 (2) - better. Nazi sorry u.u Woops, that was terrible of me, fixed.
3. 00:49:708 (4) - I don't think a straight slider is fit for this note imo. Since you're following vocal, how about making this a bit more curvy like this http://puu.sh/5h9Nd.jpg The curves will emphasize the vocal more, and also I think this one is visually better too S Wanted to avoid overlap with 1, so only made it curve to the left.
4. 01:02:041 (4,5) - Despite that (5) blankets (4) nicely, I find the shape of it a bit weird, looking at how the other sliders are really nice and beautiful. And also, I think the rhythm on (5) isn't really fit with a full 1/1 slider imo. If you listen a bit slower, this note can actually follow the piano on the background, rather than the vocal. So my suggestion is to change this slider to a 1/2 repeat, it will follows the piano nicely. And for the pattern, how about a simple pattern that mirror 01:02:041 (4) - like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1098905 If you want, it can still also overlap nicely with the next slider at 01:04:041 (1) -
5. 01:12:708 (9) - I find the position of this note a bit awkward and somewhat hanging lol, since this note doesn't have a circle pair on it's left unlike the notes before it (01:10:041 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ), so I think since this note is like, alone, you can move it to the middle of these patterns. I suggest moving it back up in the upper middle to keep the jump, maybe somewhere around x232/y48 or lower so that the spacing wouldn't be awkward; keep the jump going Hmmm I feel the most natural place for this jump is the current location is because it continues the current pattern. While it is alone, it is the most natural position imo. Changing it to go upward sort of changes the flow which would be weird imo.
6. So, yeah, aside from the big gap in the difficulties, this diff is really beautiful, the shapes, the flows are just really connected with each other, I really like it. And also that slidershapes are just so beautiful, I like this one especially 00:15:208 (4) - . Great job here!

Umm yeah I guess that's all I can find, great map as always blissful-san
Sorry if the mod is bad and didn't help><
and also sorry if my explanation is bad, if there's anything you don't understand, please state so

anyway, great map, and I hope my mod can help a bit at least><
Good Luck

MindStar wrote:

hey,
Please take my mod only as suggestion.

Normal

SPOILER

00:46:041 (1,2,3) - it doesnt fits with the voice i think. You should try this: Done.

01:36:708 (3) - This is a really nice Heart, but does a Beginer knows how to follow up this Slider I think it is slow enough that beginners can grasp it fairly easily even if they are confused when they first touch it.[/spoilerbox]

Hard
[spoilerbox]00:47:374 (5) - This should start here: 00:47:208 (5) - I would have liked to follow the lyrics, but for hitsounding purposes, this probably made more sense.

This Slider is just awesome! http://puu.sh/5lz2f.jpg Very good work :O Thanks.

Sorry for this little mod! I really gave my best. Im new in the modding scene Everyone has to start somewhere, and your mod was definitely not bad.

Either, good luck with ranking! I really like it

Kytoxid wrote:

Lalala~ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eAfkO2LgTjw&feature=player_detailpage#t=244

[General]

Things you could add to tags: I forgot that we can use Japanese tags.

- 西木野真姫 Added.
- Notes of School idol days Since I doubt people will type in the album name and since I dislike excessive tags, not going to add it.
- ラブライブ！ Added.
- slider art No, I think you know why

I also think you should use Nishikino Maki in the tags instead of the other order. Discussed, and since tag order doesn't matter, not changing.

- I would probably use tickrate 2 instead of 4. 4 sounds a bit too busy for the slow map. Blame Garven. He said tick rate 4, and I didn't care too much either way.

[Normal]

00:11:374 (1) - I feel like this plays better if it ended 1/2 later. Done.
00:13:708 (1,2,3) - This felt a bit awkward, the slider is sort of following vocals, but later it drops off to follow piano, and in the middle, the ticks are sounding weird. Tbh, I actually liked how this followed the piano and vocals with the exception of the ticks.
00:20:708 (2) - The transition from vocal to BG back to vocals is a bit rough, I'd remove this slider. Changed to 2 circles.
00:25:374 (2) - The sliderticks here don't sound very good. I still blame Garven...
00:42:874 (4) - Same as before. If you want to keep it, I'd recommend having it in a combo by itself. Added a new combo.

[Hard]

Now that I've actually gotten used to my tablet, wow. It feels like I'm walking through an art gallery. Yay! My goal is complete.

00:19:041 (1) - I'd shorten this by 1/4 and change it to note-slider, but I don't want to touch your art. XD Done. Took some work, but shorter now.
00:20:708 (2,3) - Combo by themselves? Done.
00:34:041 (3) - Quite a harsh jump. Ctrl-G it? Done, not sure why I had it that hard
00:42:041 (5) - I think it looks better oriented like this: http://puu.sh/5qHef.jpg Sure, done.
01:26:041 (1,2,3) - Put the heart halves closer together? http://puu.sh/5qHh2.jpg Done.
01:31:374 (2,3) - Adjust these a bit so that the tick lands right on the bend? The purpose of these sliders is that they were supposed to be asymmetric, so not changing

Overall, the jump between the two difficulties is a bit harsh; Normal can pass off as an Easy while Hard's spacing + SV is approaching an Insane. A proper Normal to span the gap would be nice. As I responded in the previous mod post, I don't think another diff fits too well with the note density the way it is. While I do agree Hard is a lot faster than normal, it doesn't feel that much harder for me because the note density about the same and a difference in speed is something most players can get used to quickly. However, with that said, there are some parts in hard that are exceptionally hard, so if you want some more things toned down, I can try to do that.

Irreversible wrote:

no banner or anything cool because annoying Laptop is really annoying

For what it is worth, I tried to make your post look somewhat normal and reply that way.

Normal:
20:28 Irreversible: 00:13:708 (1) - Changed to fit the rhythm better.
20:31 Irreversible: or well, 00:17:708 (3) - is this lyrical too? if yes, can you explain me why? It sounds wrong o.o Changed to fit the rhythm better.
20:34 Irreversible: 00:20:708 (2,3) - any hitsounds on those? Added Whistles.
20:51 Irreversible: 00:35:708 (2,3) - this one here Fixed the blanketing
20:53 Irreversible: 00:38:374 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/5wYbo.jpg sometijing like this? might be better because now it might be too hidden Changed the pattern to soemthing similar to yours
20:43 Irreversible: 00:42:874 (1) - No change since I think it fits.
20:54 Irreversible: 00:46:541 (2) - that DS rise can be avoided pretty easily, 00:46:541 (2,3) - ah, as well here, Solution: http://puu.sh/5wYko.jpg 4 starts here:00:45:708 - Changed to use your rhythm.
20:56 Irreversible: 00:58:374 (1,2,3) - very bad flow here. the slider goes left, then 2 follows the flow naturally, but overall it doesn't compliment each other because its so straight after all Flow felt fine to me, not changing.
20:57 Irreversible: 01:01:041 (1,2,3) - same as above. rhythm way too broken http://puu.sh/5wYHw.jpg 01:00:708 - starts here 4* done after talking about moving to red ticks
20:59 Irreversible: 01:20:374 (1,2,3) - good idea but not really proper made imo Here is where I hear the stresses 01:20:708 (repeat of 1), 01:21:041 (end of 1) 01:21:374 (2), 01:21:708 (start of 3), 01:22:041 (sadly just slider), 01:22:374 (leaving the hump part of 3). Because of that and the slow speed of Normal, I feel the pattern is easily readable and fitting, so no change.
20:58 Irreversible: 01:36:708 (3) - nc Done.

Hard:
21:10 Irreversible: 00:00:708 (1) - http://puu.sh/5wZbM.jpg rhythm is slightly broken, follows the musicb etter tho 00:01:291 - the 2nd vocals falls here (eighth note), so I think my current version fits better.
21:10 Irreversible: 00:03:874 (3,4) - the fact that they start on blue makes the mweird, you should avoid that (like, they also sound weird) Follows vocals just fine imo.
21:11 Irreversible: 00:06:708 (5) - let this end 00:07:041 - here and make 6 fitting again Changed to fit rhythm better.
21:12 Irreversible: 00:12:208 (4) - that one is kinda wrong, since the emphasized vocal is on the blue tick, not on the white tick Changed to fit rhythm better.
21:12 Irreversible: 00:13:708 (1) - i would map it like that: ha (slider) jimata (slider) The stress is on the ma, so having the repeat there works fine.
21:13 Irreversible: 00:16:708 (3,4,5,6) - the problem here is that they end on nothing, what lets the rhythm feel weird again.. I think they feel fine ending on nothing since the ending of sliders don't have to be accented.
21:13 Irreversible: 00:19:041 (1) - the slider should start on the blue tick.. Made into a circle + slider.
21:15 Irreversible: 00:35:708 (2) - that's the case here You like destorying my art, don't you xD, changed into 3 smaller slider.
21:17 Irreversible: 01:07:708 (2) - here: http://puu.sh/5wZD3.jpg Changed to your pattern.
21:17 Irreversible: 01:12:708 (9) - Fine, fine, added nc
21:18 Irreversible: 01:20:374 (1) - here, you empahsized the wrong vocals imo I feel the stress is on 01:20:708, and since I don't want to use toomany circles and since I don't want a slider to land on an accent, I rather keep it the way it is.

We fixed a lot of rhythm suggestions. But due to my annoying Laptop, I couldn't mod further. I'll give you another mod after you've applied some other ones! Call me back then <3