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Nogawa Sakura - Now If There is a Smile

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ztrot
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ztrot
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, August 20, 2009 at 10:09:56 PM

Artist: Nogawa Sakura
Title: Now If There is a Smile
Source: Gate Keepers 21
Tags: Nogawa Sakura Gate Keepers 21
BPM: 69
Filesize: 13650kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. GATE OPEN!!! (4.8 stars, 283 notes)
  2. Gate (4.46 stars, 164 notes)
  3. Larto's Gate (2.74 stars, 95 notes)
  4. whymeman's Gate (5 stars, 372 notes)
Download: Nogawa Sakura - Now If There is a Smile
Download: Nogawa Sakura - Now If There is a Smile (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Skin made by Me. Thanks to Daru and Ryuukun for the skinning elements.
offset fixed due to new mp3
Went ahead and went with my gut and redid the offset much better imo not early anymore
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whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
I can pitch in a difficulty to help you out :-3

Oh and I have 69.002 BPM with a 112 ms offset for the first one.

I have the layout of the notes done, but I have to double check the spacing since distance snap screwed me again :-/

Download: Nogawa Sakura - Now If There is a Smile (ztrot) [whymeman's Gate].osu

And this for the difficulty too.
SPOILER
ATTACH[[whymeman's Gate].jpg]


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ztrot
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ztrot
D: thanks for the 1st bpm and offset but we got a small issue my diff is really hard to fc yet it only gives about 2.9mil
your is not nearly as hard but yet it gives 4mil D:
Azure_Kite
osu! Alumni
3,217 posts
Joined February 2009
Azure_Kite
Here's my mod:

[Gate]
No Problems Found :)

[GATE OPEN!!]
No Problems found :)

[whymeman's Gate]
*I'll get to you later


In the meantime, Starred!
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman

ztrot wrote:

D: thanks for the 1st bpm and offset but we got a small issue my diff is really hard to fc yet it only gives about 2.9mil
your is not nearly as hard but yet it gives 4mil D:
Is that so? :- o

I was trying to set an intense pace like it was going to be a violent tornado..... butI guess I should make it even harder then...
Shinde
osu! Alumni
707 posts
Joined April 2009
Shinde
Hi my name is Shinde and I approve of this message. Er, star.
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James2250
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Joined July 2008
James2250
gate:
00:33:14 (3) - align perfectly under 2?

gate open
00:36:37 (5) - move this slightly more on screen?
00:42:64 (3,4,5) - move down to align with the rest of them?

whymeman's
combo's go slightly high for my liking, but I see no problems
I like where the spinner ends on this one, change the other diff's to match this one? (up to you)

*star*
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
Alright, here is my refined copy. I fixed up the glitched spacing and added a few more notes to it.

Download: Nogawa Sakura - Now If There is a Smile (ztrot) [whymeman's Gate].osu
yeahyeahyeahhh
osu! Alumni
2,850 posts
Joined December 2008
yeahyeahyeahhh
Timing:
Try these.. maybe.. I'm still new to timing but it feels a bit off to me.

Offset:
Section 1 - 123 or 128... somewhere in there
Section 2 - 10,583

Suggestions:
Gate-
00:45:11 (1) - Remove new combo to match the others before

GATE OPEN!!!-
00:11:31 (7,8,9,10) - I'd rearrange these so, for more comfort to the player :x 7 where 8 it, 8 were 9 is, 9 were 7 is, 10 the same
00:13:02 (8,9,10) - Same thing as above
00:15:30 (2) - Move ontop of 1
00:15:49 (3) - Remove
00:21:57 (1) - Mirror 00:20:05 (2) -
00:47:01 (2) - Maybe on the other side of 00:46:44 (3,4,5) - to go with how you're going side to side?

starrr
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Hikato
:T Wanted to find something but failed. Nice map.
ddrmaniac
62 posts
Joined May 2009
ddrmaniac
i like this map. star
ztrot
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Joined February 2008
Topic Starter
ztrot
Whymeman I will add your diff back as soon as i get this fixed right
DL issues
Nachy
807 posts
Joined April 2009
Nachy
The skin is great and the map is awesome.

Starred.
Pokebis
2,047 posts
Joined April 2008
Pokebis
It's been forever since I've modded anything or even played, so I'm not completely up to date with the standards now, but here's what I think.

Gate:
00:45:11 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing here is kind of inconsistent with the rest of the map, but it's okay...
00:54:60 (1,2,3) - ^Same
00:56:12 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - The placement for this difficulty is slightly questionable.
Rest is great.

GATE OPEN!!!:
00:02:72 (1,2,3,4,5) - You obviously did this on purpose, but these are all the same timing but different spacing and could confuse a lot of people. It's up to you to keep it or not. Nevermind, you're obviously going for crazy spacing throughout the whole map.

whymeman's Gate:
Actually, no complaints here.

Have a star, and listen to people of a higher position than me.
Cuddlebun
965 posts
Joined August 2008
Cuddlebun
if there is a smile this gets a star

well look at that
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
Overall:
- The way the mp3 ends is pretty damn terrible.
I mean, it's cut off so suddenly. can you get something better? Or maybe let the mp3 fade out with audacity?
The timing is a bit off, but since you're gonna need to fix the mp3 anyway, which will probably change the offset, I won't give you the exact offset and everything just yet~

- Could use an easier difficulty.

whyme:
This has so fucked up spacing at times it's not even funny >:| Could you please try to make the spacing more reasonable at places like 01:15:68 (8,9,10,11) - or 01:09:04 (1,2,3,4) - . Those are only examples.


GAYTE OPEN!!!: (Hey that looks like a Yen letter)
00:02:73 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this star pattern a bit prettier, will you >_> Move (4) up 1 Level 3 grid and two to the left, move (3) up 1 Level 3 grid and two to the right.
01:22:71 (1,2) - Not symmetrical ^_^ And flip them horizontally so (1) is not so close to the last note.

Gate:
yai
whymeman
osu! Alumni
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whymeman
whyme:
This has so fucked up spacing at times it's not even funny >:| Could you please try to make the spacing more reasonable at places like 01:15:68 (8,9,10,11) - or 01:09:04 (1,2,3,4) - . Those are


Maybe the jump(s) was overkill..... I'll look into it.
whymeman
osu! Alumni
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Joined November 2008
whymeman
Okay, got the fixes in and removed the crazy jump.

Download: Nogawa Sakura - Now If There is a Smile (ztrot) [whymeman's Gate].osu (With the fixed timing & combo color adjustment)
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Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
New timing:
First Offset: 141
First BPM: 69.000
Second Offset: 10,593
Second BPM: 158.000

That took too long.
blissfulyoshi
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Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
Since you are near ranking, no nazi modding unless I have a good reason to point the flaw out.

Gate:
SPOILER
y are there 2 timing sections on this diff if one of them is not used

normal mod:
01:08:69 (1,2,3,4) - move these all down 1 grid 3 to have the 3 be under the blue 6
01:23:50 (2) - stack under the white 4

combo mod:
00:24:07 (1) - remove new combo?

Gate Open:
SPOILER
normal mod:
00:40:97 (1,2,3,4,1) - the section starting here is very repetitive

might want to lower the drain 1 notch

whymeman's gate:
fine

Nice map. Star.
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