Deadball-P - Wash My Blood [MATURE CONTENT] · forum

Jarby

Joined August 2008

Topic Starter

Jarby 2009-08-16T14:32:08+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, 9 October 2009 at 2:05:22 PM

Artist: Deadball-P
Title: Wash My Blood
Tags: Megurine Luka
BPM: 185
Filesize: 5707kb
Play Time: 02:01
Difficulties Available:

Heavy Flow (4.57 stars, 130 notes)
Light Flow (3.03 stars, 78 notes)

Download: Deadball-P - Wash My Blood
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Skinned elements borrowed from Shinde and Ryuukun.

Last edited by Jarby 2009-10-09T06:05:30+00:00, edited 27 times in total.

adam2046

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Joined April 2008

adam2046 2009-08-19T11:33:24+00:00

1st
BPM: 175.00
Offset: 540

2nd
BPM: 185.00
Offset: 26,525

Howzat!

Shinxyn

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Shinxyn 2009-08-19T13:44:12+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

ztrot

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ztrot 2009-08-19T15:50:17+00:00

jar this is a beat lay out it really epic xD tell me if you want me to map

Download: Deadball-P - Wash My Blood (JarJarJacob) [Red falls Beat layout ztrot].osu

Shinde

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Shinde 2009-09-08T09:46:33+00:00

Uhhh.. Yeah, I dunno if you'll like this one or not. I wasn't really feeling anything for a hit overlay, but feel free to use the one attached in any way you like.

SPOILER

WyndII

777 posts

Joined October 2008

WyndII 2009-09-08T11:54:15+00:00

geez, black hitcircle obviously matches the bg >.<
Change please...

moo~

Last edited by WyndII 2009-09-08T11:59:36+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Diasios

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Joined August 2008

Diasios 2009-09-08T11:57:47+00:00

Light Flow:

01:11:930 (6) = fix this slider, i don't like it

Heavy Flow:

01:11:930 (10) = fix this slider, i don't like it

I don't like the song D:
Anyway, starred

EEeee

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Joined July 2008

EEeee 2009-09-08T15:38:15+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Azure_Kite

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Azure_Kite 2009-09-10T11:51:54+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

yeahyeahyeahhh

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yeahyeahyeahhh 2009-09-13T09:48:20+00:00

Heavy Flow:
01:46:27 - Maybe add a note here. Between 4 and 5.
01:47:33 (1,2,3) - Maybe do this in 1/3 beat snap dividing since you're going to the lyrics...
01:50:41 (6) - Remove, flows better since 01:49:27 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - is following her voice
01:50:89 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Technically there's nothing wrong with this, but it feels really weird. I think you should map this out rather than just stacking it.

I was sad to hear the end without notes

Light Flow:
01:54:46 (5,6) - These feel out of place, I don't know really what to suggest instead :\

Pretty cool map though, I like the change in timing.

Only thing I didn't like what black hitcircle black BG.. not diggin' it yo.

Ephemeral

Inland Empire

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Joined April 2009

Ephemeral 2009-09-14T08:56:55+00:00

The difficulty names are lol. The song is horrific. The map is okay.

[Light Flow]

01:11:98 (6) - Drop the end beizer point to have the end slider circle match with the origin - fix the left hand size curve and make it constant like the right and that should give you the extra length you need

01:43:11 (4) - Lazy ass. Fix this by fixing the above.

01:48:30 (3) - Tilde (~) slider would work best here.

01:55:00 (1) - Toilet brush slider? Wat. At least add a beizer point to the right side of the square so it's equal and shit.

[Heavy Flow]

00:52:52 (1) - 0.5x BPM inherited section here to half the length of this monstrous slider. Why? It looks horrible.

00:56:41 (1) - Edit to a tilde slider

01:11:98 (10) - Drop the end beizer point to have the end slider circle match with the origin - fix the left hand size curve and make it constant like the right and that should give you the extra length you need

01:32:62 (9,10,1) - Monstrous. Cut 10 out.

01:37:96 (1) - Shift this back to the last even like you had it on light. Why did you change it in the first place?

01:43:11 (7) - >_>

01:48:30 (4) - Tilde slider

01:53:49 (4) - And again..

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It deserves a star anyway.

Kerensa

167 posts

Joined January 2009

Kerensa 2009-09-14T09:02:12+00:00

hallooooooooooo

Light Flow :
1:04:196 [5] up +1 , unless it's a daimond shape

1:31:439 [3,4] i would suggest moving it up +1 in the same horizontal spot

meh =___=

Heavy Flow:
00:57.710 [3] move to the left + 1

that about all i could spot.. it's not major stuff =___=

ALL GOOD ^^

star star for you you ^^

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2009-09-15T09:51:10+00:00

Overall
Double skip?

Light Flow
-awesome

Heavy Flow
-awesome

(Although some variation with the direction of the sliders will be nice)

Starred.

Larto

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Joined June 2008

Larto 2009-09-26T21:59:03+00:00

Overall:
- Make the Dark Red combo colour brighter. It's close to invisible on this background.
- The mp3's ending is horrible. Fade out or something.

Timing:
Offset: 26.560

Skin:
get a custom hitcircle.png or force default skin.

Heavy Flow (Ugh):
01:32:61 (9) - What is this note doing here, not syncing to anything.
01:50:88 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This played very awkwardly until the third retry.
01:54:99 (1) - Not sure if rankable. More likely that NO.

Light Flow (Uuuugh):
01:54:99 (1) - Not sure if rankable. More likely that NO.

Maybe get an easier difficulty. Like [Pregnant] or so.

ztrot

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ztrot 2009-10-06T12:11:14+00:00

looks fine I don't see a reason for an easy.
Resnap time line you know why