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Hatsune Miku - Innocence

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al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
al2e10
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, 5 November, 2009 at 20:13:20

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: Innocence
BPM: 125
Filesize: 4596kb
Play Time: 01:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.19 stars, 119 notes)
  2. Hard (4.69 stars, 372 notes)
  3. Normal (3.78 stars, 207 notes)
Download: Hatsune Miku - Innocence
Download: Hatsune Miku - Innocence (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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The 3rd real map
For all MIKU FANS ^^


-----Change-----
8/19 Change by blissfulyoshi.
8/20 Change by Matma Rex.
8/22 Change by minyeob
9/4 Change by haisha_
9/6 Change by yeahyeahyeahhh
9/7 Change by ykcarrot
9/12 Add [Easy]
9/14 Change the color ~
9/26 Change by Starrodkirby86
9/30 Change by Derekku Chan
10/4 Change mp3 !! Many Changes !!
Last edited by al2e10 , edited 29 times in total.
SenichiSeung
39 posts
Joined May 2009
SenichiSeung
Lol I love this map ^.^ Great song too
star~
Matma Rex
586 posts
Joined March 2009
Matma Rex

al2e10 wrote:

Filesize: 27288kb
Oh my god oh my god oh my god 27 MB. What the hell is it? It's completely unrankable, downloading this map takes ages. Even maps with video *must* be below 20 MB (exceptions are really rare), and this one seems like it has none.

Do something with it and PM me, I'll mod it then, because I really like the music (listened to preview only).
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
4,755 posts
Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
26.6 mb... I don't think this is rankable. Also, the video still has audio, so if you get rid of that, you can save yourself 3 mb.
Also, neither map is currently using the video. Please add the video.

Normal:
SPOILER
normal mod:
00:54:95 (6) - the ending is sort of random right now. I would end it where the "me" sounding syllable starts or ends, not in the middle
01:10:31 (6) - ^

combo mod:
00:38:87 (1,1) - if these are not jumps I sould advise you remove these new combos for consistency

Hard:
SPOILER
normal mod:
02:52:31 (1,1,1) - the timing difference make this jump feel weird

combo mod:
01:00:59 (8) - new combo because it is snapped to instruments?
01:21:59 (1,2) - swap new combo (add a new combo to 2 and remove 1's new combo)
03:19:19 (3) - new combo for change in timing interval?
Personally I liked the way you comboed normal more than this diff. Sometimes the combos in this diff were confusing.

Nice map. Star.
Matma Rex
586 posts
Joined March 2009
Matma Rex
[Overall]
Cute background and song.
What is that thing in storyboard? Map should end when it ends, not 1 minute later. Remove it. Do you know how many people (in multi) do not know what 'Skip' button does?
Disable countdown.
Hitsounds are too quiet. Also, I suggests using whistles instead of louder timing sections.

[Normal]
00:52:315, 00:55:915 - remove these breaks.
01:06:23 (3) - longer slider with less repeats would be nicer.
01:33:11 (1,2) - I dont like it :/
02:03:11 (2,3) - align.

[Hard]
00:27:11 (3,1) - they touch top of the screen, they should not.
00:54:71 (5,6) - doesnt fit. Make 5 a hitcircle and 6 start at 00:54:955.
02:03:83 (5,6) - spacing.
03:17:51 (1,1,1) - too many new combos.


Starred :)
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
al2e10

Matma Rex wrote:

[Normal]
00:52:315, 00:55:915 - remove these breaks. ok
01:06:23 (3) - longer slider with less repeats would be nicer. ok
01:33:11 (1,2) - I dont like it :/ I don't think so ^^ :?
02:03:11 (2,3) - align. OK

[Hard]
00:27:11 (3,1) - they touch top of the screen, they should not. OK
00:54:71 (5,6) - doesnt fit. Make 5 a hitcircle and 6 start at 00:54:955. OK
02:03:83 (5,6) - spacing. OK
03:17:51 (1,1,1) - too many new combos. Mabay I will take it of some

Starred :)
minyeob
osu! Alumni
2,540 posts
Joined May 2008
minyeob
Hey~ I got your map from #mod

[Normal]
00:55:915(Break) - I think this break time is unnecessary

[Hard]
01:00:59 (1) - Make this 1/4 beat later(To red tick), Suggestion.
01:02:63 (6) - This slider is hiding 01:03:59 (7)'s number, not good.

Star for you! ;)
Kerensa
167 posts
Joined January 2009
Kerensa
hello ^^

haisha here ^^

Normal:
i didn't really pick up any hhuge and terrible mistkes ^^ but i did notice some small details that kind of made it abit werid for me.

1:01:435 - [1,2,3,4,5,6]- shouldn't the spacing be the same as all the others? i think it was 5 spaces apart like the others.
1:23:995 - [3.4]- i think you should get rid of that double beat and put tha [4] at 1:24:235. since it's a normal map.. having a fast double beat doesn't seem right :(
1:59:035 - [1,2,3,4,5,6] - again; spacing it too close compared to the other parts of the song wiht the same beat timing >< 5 spaces away like th others would be good ^^
2:22:075 - [3,4] maybe up 2 and then move it to the middle cross-section line thing, then move it off the line from the middle by 3 spaces? spacing looks abit weird ^^

*main thing to look at is the spacing.. i think you should make is abit more even, the spacing in one area seems different to each other. ^^* - besides that.. ALL GOOD ^^

Hard:
0:16:795 - [3]if the timing of the song is so close, you might want to put the note abit more closer to [2]
1:07:765 - [1,2,3,4] - should make timing even with the other parts of the song...
1:09:115 - [1,2,3,4,5] - same thing ^
1:45:835 - [3] - alline with the end of the [6] slider so it is symetrical O.O
3:12:235 - [1,2,3,4] - i think that [2] and [4] should be furthur apart from from [1] and [2]


*ALL GOOD!!!!* ^^ great difficuty not much problem in here ^^


STAR STAR FOR YOU YOU

haisha_
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
al2e10

haisha_ wrote:

hello ^^

haisha here ^^

Normal:
i didn't really pick up any hhuge and terrible mistkes ^^ but i did notice some small details that kind of made it abit werid for me.

1:01:435 - [1,2,3,4,5,6]- shouldn't the spacing be the same as all the others? i think it was 5 spaces apart like the others.
1:23:995 - [3.4]- i think you should get rid of that double beat and put tha [4] at 1:24:235. since it's a normal map.. having a fast double beat doesn't seem right :(
1:59:035 - [1,2,3,4,5,6] - again; spacing it too close compared to the other parts of the song wiht the same beat timing >< 5 spaces away like th others would be good ^^
2:22:075 - [3,4] maybe up 2 and then move it to the middle cross-section line thing, then move it off the line from the middle by 3 spaces? spacing looks abit weird ^^

*main thing to look at is the spacing.. i think you should make is abit more even, the spacing in one area seems different to each other. ^^* - besides that.. ALL GOOD ^^

Hard:
0:16:795 - [3]if the timing of the song is so close, you might want to put the note abit more closer to [2]
1:07:765 - [1,2,3,4] - should make timing even with the other parts of the song...
1:09:115 - [1,2,3,4,5] - same thing ^
1:45:835 - [3] - alline with the end of the [6] slider so it is symetrical O.O
3:12:235 - [1,2,3,4] - i think that [2] and [4] should be furthur apart from from [1] and [2]

haisha_
I fixed some your opinion ~
Thank you ~
yeahyeahyeahhh
osu! Alumni
2,850 posts
Joined December 2008
yeahyeahyeahhh
Hard:
Some new combos don't really make much sense to me.. idk.. here are some suggestions on that
SPOILER
00:22:07 (1) - remove new combo
00:22:55 (1) - ^
00:24:71 (1) - ^
00:26:63 (1) - ^
01:00:71 (1) - ^
02:40:55 (1) - ^
03:09:11 (1) - ^
03:19:31 (4) - ^
03:24:23 (1) - ^
I can understand why you want to do some of them, but there's really no point imo. Your call. Other than that, fine ^^

Normal:
Fine!

NJ :)
Sure
4,219 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
[Hard]
01:04:55 (1) and 01:05:99 (1,2) - I see what you want. Fit to lyrics 'bashode' isn't it?
below this way is more fit.


01:39:59 (3) - 1/4 forward


star~! :D
PicoLo
188 posts
Joined July 2009
PicoLo
~Star. ;)
Vibty99
66 posts
Joined April 2009
Vibty99
star :D
mtmcl
mtmcl
I don't see a problem with this map, but I'm wondering if you can make an [Easy]? The [Normal] may be a bit too tricky for less skilled players. Tell me what you think and we'll see about getting this bubbled.

For now, have my BAT star.
Ekaru
3,617 posts
Joined July 2008
Ekaru
Get mtmcl's ass over here already.

It's fine. Just delete whatever it is that is giving me a "Skip" button at the end of Easy and Normal, since nothing shows up, so no Skip button should be there.
Matma Rex
586 posts
Joined March 2009
Matma Rex

Ekaru wrote:

Just delete whatever it is that is giving me a "Skip" button at the end of Easy and Normal, since nothing shows up, so no Skip button should be there.
Duh, I already said it. It's something in storyboard, simplest way would be to delete .osb file and fullsubmit.
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Yes_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Starrodkirby86
osu! Alumni
3,723 posts
Here since the beginning
Starrodkirby86
oxo

[Easy]:
01:25:19 (5) - Nazi: Move 1 to the right on Grid Level 3? Even if it's nazi, it seems nice looking design-wise.

Nice map overall though~

[Normal]:
02:24:95 (10) - Kinda felt it's better to end this 1/2 earlier? What do you think, my good friend?

Your map seems to have some filler storyboard with an non-existent image "forall bat". Can you seem to do something with it? The easiest solution is to delete the .osb and do a Full Resubmission.

Not much problems at all besides those though. Good job! :D
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
al2e10
Thank you ^^
I had fix it !!
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
[General]
You have your offset such that the metronome/osu! cookie tick/bounce on upbeats. 5035 would work to put it on the downbeat and to tick louder on the right measures. Could you do that for each diff and resnap? :P

[Easy]
Fine~

[Normal]
01:52:31 (7,1) - Insert a break between these?

[Hard]
00:21:83 (5) - Expected a clap here. Perhaps make it a little louder and/or the next note softer?
01:22:79 (1) - Maybe add kiai time here? :< (You'll have to toggle it for every inherited section until after the spinner, though)
03:10:79 (1) - Kiai? :>

If you go with kiai, then add it in the first spot for Normal/Easy too :)

The song is really cute and you did a nice job of adding a map =]

[Edit]
Forgot to check things inside the folder. I believe the max background size is 800x600, but yours is 1024x768. Could you resize it and resubmit? =]
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