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ztrot

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ztrot 2009-08-22T00:03:10+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, October 01, 2010 at 7:30:19 AM

Artist: Miwa Yoshida Ft. Akon
Title: Sweet Dreams (Akon Mix)
Source: Sonic The Hedgehog
Tags: YGOkid8 DiamondCrash
BPM: 150
Filesize: 3209kb
Play Time: 02:08
Difficulties Available:

DC's Easy (1.54 stars, 88 notes)
Sweet Dreams (4.6 stars, 205 notes)
YGOkid8's Normal (3.47 stars, 150 notes)

Download: Miwa Yoshida Ft. Akon - Sweet Dreams (Akon Mix)
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Not my style but I love this song.

coming back to this a year later normal sucks ass and I need to make a new one I've been picking at Sweet Dreams while it was graved so it's alot better
ygo thanks for the normal

thanks for the forced on me easy DC :p

Last edited by ztrot 2010-10-01T12:31:03+00:00, edited 12 times in total.

Jarby

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Jarby 2009-09-14T12:47:44+00:00

'sweet' 'Sweet Dreams' 'sweet' 'Sweet Dreams' Hmm... Offset's early.

sweet:

00:38:97 - lolbreak
01:21:97 - Needs more spinner.
01:52:57 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:04:37 (1) - No.
03:43:77 - Silly bookmark, what are you doing there?

ztrot

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ztrot 2009-10-04T04:32:34+00:00

Will most likely not finish this map

ztrot

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ztrot 2010-09-20T11:43:14+00:00

then I do

Krisom

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Krisom 2010-09-21T01:59:46+00:00

General-
Make the custom finish louder, I can barely hear it

Sweet Dreams-
Most sliders that are meant to be symmetrical are not completely symmetrycal, so I'll just point out those who stand out more
00:46:364 (3) - Clap instead of finish+whistle?
00:47:964 (4) - Why the whistle? (10) of this same combo has a finish isntead. Make them the same?
00:50:764 (3) - Remove the sliderwhistle?
00:51:964 (4) - imo, this should be a new combo
00:55:564 (4) - Not symmetrical, Move the endpoint one grid right and the middle point some pixels up
01:03:564 (1) - Remove the new combo and then... 01:04:364 (4) - Add a new combo?
01:05:964 (1) - Same as 00:55:564
01:08:764 (6) - ^
01:27:164 (1) - Not completely symmetrycal. (though suggesting the fix change will take some lines, so do something like this)
01:41:164 (4) - Second control point, down 2 grids. Third control point, right 2 grids. Fourth control point, right 1 grid. Last control point, up one grid. Now, move the middle control points up 1 grid and Presto!
02:02:364 (2) - Move the last control point one grid down and left, then the middle one one grid down
02:03:564 (3) - (This is a copy/paste/flip of the one avobe ^)
02:05:564 (1) - Clap the end :v
02:05:564 (1,2) - I'm pretty sure these ones can be fixed just like 02:02:364

ilu <3

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2010-09-23T07:48:42+00:00

:O

You can see what I've done. It's fairly linear then boom, non-linear.
Haven't done hitsounds yet. I could do it later, or you can do it yourself, your call.
Don't forget add my nick to tags ~

Download: Miwa Yoshida Ft. Akon - Sweet Dreams Akon Mix (ztrot) [YGOkid8].osu

dkun

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dkun 2010-09-26T16:55:53+00:00

holy shit

Mashley

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Mashley 2010-09-26T16:57:45+00:00

'tis good

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2010-09-26T23:23:53+00:00

aaand done hitsounds. Feel free to add some whistles near the end, if you want.
Download: Miwa Yoshida Ft. Akon - Sweet Dreams Akon Mix (ztrot) [YGOkid8's Normal].osu

ztrot

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ztrot 2010-09-27T07:52:17+00:00

lolololol I added hitsounds the day before

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2010-09-27T07:52:39+00:00

oh okay fdsaf
could've said so >.<

could you possibly change to this one? :D

Garven

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Garven 2010-09-28T08:11:52+00:00

[YGOkid8's Normal]
It'd be nice if you could fit in a break somewhere as this is the easiest difficulty (unless there are plans for an easier one? [which I'd recommend] Move to WIP if so)
01:32:364 (5,1,2) - Hrm, because of the stacking, these look kinda weird. Reduce the leniency by one fixed it sorta... I dunno, up to you if you care, hehe.
Love the transition into the chorus.

[Sweet Dreams]
01:01:364 (2,3) - I've heard a lot of tissies back and forth over these sorts of note placements due to non-snaking sliders making these really hard to discern where it starts. The high AR seems to be okay with it, but I dunno. I'll just mention it.
01:07:164 (2) - Sticking into the HP bar a bit

osb

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YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2010-09-28T08:12:56+00:00

All changes up to ztrot, just mentioning.
(though i would REALLY like it if he would use my hitsounds thx)

aRiskOfRain

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aRiskOfRain 2010-09-30T15:24:06+00:00

because

Download: Miwa Yoshida Ft. Akon - Sweet Dreams Akon Mix (ztrot) [DC's Easy].osu

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2010-10-01T05:46:38+00:00

Wheeeee~

[Sweet Dreams]
1:43:764 (3) left 1 grid?
1:47:764 (6,7) up 1 grid?
1:49:964 (1,2,3) uneven spacing?
1:51:164 (5) left 1 grid?

nice map and star~

Larto

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Larto 2010-10-01T13:00:56+00:00

ztrot said he's not using the mod above

Ephemeral

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Ephemeral 2010-10-04T02:27:12+00:00

Ranked.

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