thepianist wrote:

Haha the "normal" stage should be renamed as hard. (:

My 2 cents:
Insane:
There are some spacing consistency issues in a few places other than the jumps. Should be okay though.
0.02.623 (4) Too close to 3.
0.09.092 (5) Move down one grid to match symmetry.
0.09.467 (7) New combo?
1.30.467 (7) New combo?
1.50.342 (2,4) Check spacing.
2.15.467 (6) New combo?
2.19.217 (10) Maybe make it part of the slider in 9.
2.21.467 (7-12)Maybe remap the sliders such that it is easier to read at such a fast pace.
2.49.029 (6) Align with 5?
3.14.904 (6) Move so it is an equilateral triangle.
3.18.467 (7) New combo?
3.30.467 (9) New combo?
3.27.467 (7) New combo?
3.31.592 (16) A bit awkward. Reconsider placement?

Xierbalati's Dam (<-- forgot an n? )
Check for consistent spacing, as it is supposed to be a normal.
(ie 1.40.575 (1))
Italics are for small (oops Nazi!) things.

Great job on first map!

abalee wrote:

overal:
bpm 160 offset at 1950ms. resanp all note and reinsert breaktime.
因为offset你设定错了所以你用到1/8来下note。1950我认为还好。记得在设定offset之后重新将所有note放回合适的时间上，重新插入breaktime.

xierbaliti's Dam
将slider tick rate设置为2，3的话节奏不适合。同时我认为设置变速bpm没有必要。还有就是将grid level 设置为3(在view-grid level里面设置)的话放note会好点。
以下note都有间距问题。如果懒得自己放，开着右下角的distance snap放：
00:16:20 (4,1) - ; 00:29:70 (3,4) - ; 00:32:13 (1,2,3,4,5) - ; 00:57:82 (9,10) - ; 00:58:20 (10,1) - ; 01:00:07 (4,5) -
01:04:20 (10,1) - ; 01:07:76 (11,1) - 01:12:07 (1,1) -
啊啊啊啊啊啊啊太多间距问题了，开着distance snap改了之后我才看罢，我没耐性了 D:
00:54:45 (7,8,9,10,11) - ; 01:06:45 (7,8,9,10,11) - 不要遮着回复slider的尾，这样不太合适。
01:12:63 (1,2,3,4,1) - 放得太紧凑了反而看不清。
删掉后面那两个没用的breaktimg!!!

Terbins' Insane

嘛......好吧我只能认为你做这map just for fun, not for rank.如果真的just for fun,你可以无视我的modding。
offset你设得蛮好的，不过这个offset不是设定在音乐开始的地方我觉得有点奇怪...
依然存在间距问题，而且不少。小的我不想理了，指出比较明显的吧。
00:22:77 (2,3) - 00:26:34 (3,4,5) - 00:51:09 (4,5) - 00:54:09 (4,5) - 00:56:90 (4,5) - 00:59:34 (2,3) - 01:00:09 (4,5) -
03:03:09 (4,5) - 03:15:84 (10,11) -

00:28:21 (11,12) -; 02:21:46 (7,8,9,10) - 不开snaking slider分不出哪个开始......不建议这样放。
00:48:27 (1,2,3,4,5) ; 02:12:27 (1,2,3,4,5) - - orz
01:26:34 (3,5) - 最好不要有重叠的slider
03:01:87 (8,1) - 直接叠放在1的上面会好点。
03:30:84 (11,12,13,14,15,16) - 实际上不开edit我不知道这里怎样玩..
03:42:46 (7,8,9,10) - 同上。

某程度上如果你照着现在的mapping制度的话(当然可以稍微出一点)我认为你还是能作出rankable的map。现在这map如果(请原谅我语气重)不砍掉重练的话不能rank.抱歉。