1. Hard (4.73 stars, 251 notes)
2. Normal (2.2 stars, 113 notes)

CakiP wrote:

良い曲なんだよなぁ～

1. Clear!

1. 00:03:131 (1,2,3) - 開始から(3)への流れが悪く見えました。この向きを試してみてください。スムーズな流れになると思います。
   
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2. 01:26:149 (1,2) - もう少し音量絞ってfinish入れてみてはどうでしょう？　裏にそれっぽい音が聞こえるので合うと思いました。
3. 01:30:028 (1) - 流れを考えると前のスライダーの左下辺りに配置したほうがAIMしやすいと思います。
   
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4. 01:35:976 (5,6) - Sampleset NormalかClap追加すると曲にFitすると思いました。
5. 02:00:028 (3) - 終端の音が特徴的なのでDrum clapとかどうでしょう？
   
   大きなシンバルが聞こえる場所でも鈴のfinishやSampleset Normalを使っているのがちょっともったいないと思いました。

1. 01:59:511 (3) - Hardと同じ
   
   気になるとこない o3o

Guy wrote:

Hi! From your request :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]

1. Clear!

[Hard]

1. 00:03:131 (1,2,3) - 開始から(3)への流れが悪く見えました。この向きを試してみてください。スムーズな流れになると思います。 ok
   
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2. 01:26:149 (1,2) - もう少し音量絞ってfinish入れてみてはどうでしょう？　裏にそれっぽい音が聞こえるので合うと思いました。音量変化を加え、drum-finishを追加。
3. 01:30:028 (1) - 流れを考えると前のスライダーの左下辺りに配置したほうがAIMしやすいと思います。 ok
   
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4. 01:35:976 (5,6) - Sampleset NormalかClap追加すると曲にFitすると思いました。 音量調整してclapを追加。
5. 02:00:028 (3) - 終端の音が特徴的なのでDrum clapとかどうでしょう？ ok
   
   大きなシンバルが聞こえる場所でも鈴のfinishやSampleset Normalを使っているのがちょっともったいないと思いました。 良いhitsoundが見つからないので、このような感じになりました。

[Normal]

1. 01:59:511 (3) - Hardと同じ ok
   
   気になるとこない o3o

nice map!!
Good luck~

CakiP wrote:

request in-game

[Normal]
00:15:545 (1) - スピナーの音を徐々にあげてみる! ok
00:49:166 (1) - 00:47:097 (3) - ここにスタックさせたいマン たまにはスタックさせない方向で置いときたい
01:36:235 (1) - Whistle? ついてる
01:52:011 - ここに音があると思うから、できたらとりたい。赤線はあまり好まない。

[Hard]
01:00:545 (7) - Whistleの音が結構目立ちすぎてる？そうかな？　多分気のせい


目だって変なところとかなかったし、あんまり提案できない・・・T^T

1. I think it'll be better if you switched the source from romaji to japanese and add the current one to the tags instead, so it'll look like this
   

1. 00:15:545 (1,1) - umm this slider comes too soon after the spinner, since it's normal diff i suggest you to remove the spinner and add a slider instead
2. 00:40:373 (1,2) - these blanketing is kinda bad imo, so how about fixing it like this?
   
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3. 01:06:494 (2) - idk why..but this slider kinda flow bad since you start it on red tick, it kinda bothered for while so how about moving it 1/2 1 tick back? it'll flow better imo..

1. 00:04:166 (3) - I think this slider is kinda bad, so how about moving the 2nd slider point 2 grids down so make better shape? owo
2. 00:24:338 (2) - I don't think this slider ends follows anything and it's just overmapped..so how about just adding one note on here 00:24:338 it'll fit better imo
3. 00:46:580 (6) - I kinda don't like how you placed this slider and the shape is kinda odd off all the sliders on the map, so how about making it like this?
   
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4. 00:54:856 (1) - ^
5. 01:14:252 (2) - this slider is kinda off so how about deleting it and making something like this instead, just add a repeat on the last slider like you did here: 01:11:407 (1) - and next note after it, it'll fit much with the vocal and music imo~
   
6. 01:53:821 (2) - this slider shape is kinda bad too, baka Gamu =3=/
   
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Sekai-nyan wrote:

Hi Gamu <3

General:

1. I think it'll be better if you switched the source from romaji to japanese and add the current one to the tags instead, so it'll look like this ok www
   

Normal:

1. 00:15:545 (1,1) - umm this slider comes too soon after the spinner, since it's normal diff i suggest you to remove the spinner and add a slider instead ok. good :3
2. 00:40:373 (1,2) - these blanketing is kinda bad imo, so how about fixing it like this? nice \o/
   
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3. 01:06:494 (2) - idk why..but this slider kinda flow bad since you start it on red tick, it kinda bothered for while so how about moving it 1/2 1 tick back? it'll flow better imo.. It fits a vocal. Simple rhythm is bored, so I have changed a little rhythm D:

Hard:

1. 00:04:166 (3) - I think this slider is kinda bad, so how about moving the 2nd slider point 2 grids down so make better shape? owo okay~
2. 00:24:338 (2) - I don't think this slider ends follows anything and it's just overmapped..so how about just adding one note on here 00:24:338 it'll fit better imo Indeed, you got it right x_X
3. 00:46:580 (6) - I kinda don't like how you placed this slider and the shape is kinda odd off all the sliders on the map, so how about making it like this? okay
   
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4. 00:54:856 (1) - ^ ^
5. 01:14:252 (2) - this slider is kinda off so how about deleting it and making something like this instead, just add a repeat on the last slider like you did here: 01:11:407 (1) - and next note after it, it'll fit much with the vocal and music imo~ Hmm...Exactly the same object is boring, so I have changed a little
   
6. 01:53:821 (2) - this slider shape is kinda bad too, baka Gamu =3=/ alright ww
   
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Nice map and song Gamu <3 always moe wwww

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Is it possible for you to get a better video, some are signs of banding (the photographs in the intro) and few other visual annoyances (Your version is also subtitled, so not sure how easy it is to find)? I am not in my main comp right now, so sadly I can't help you here.

I don't think this video is poor quality. Once, I have changed the video. Therefore, I would not be able to find a good video than the video. So no change.

Normal:
00:14:511 (5,1) - how the start of 5 overlaps with 1 looks terrible imo. I recommend trying to rearrange things to look better. (In the picture, I moved 1,2,3,4 to the left to be able to fit 5 on the right. In addition, I thought it would be nice if 00:12:959 (3) pointed toward 4, so I moved 4 around to follow 3's curve)

SPOILER

ok

00:47:614 (4) - since you seem to want 4 to point towards 3, move 4 a bit more to the right (and move 1 bit up and to the right to accommodate)

SPOILER

fixed~

Hard:
00:25:890 (1) - this blanketing seems to be a bit worse than some of your other ones, can you fix it?
oh. sure. I fixed it
01:26:149 (1,2) - move these a bit more outward so 01:26:925 (2,1) don't overlap
ok

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Wow, great mapset. I don't really have much to say modding-wise, so if you want this speed ranked for Christmas, I can try to make that happen. Contact me after you make the changes.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

(remod, no kds pls)

Just wondering, why did you remove English ver. from the title since it is stated in the video.

Normal:
00:40:373 (1) - blanket 2 better (it looks a bit off when playing)

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Sorry for the slow reponse. After this, I should be ready to bubble, and will try to reply asap.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Let's see if we can we can make more Christmas miracles then, bubbled.