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Nightwish - Moondance

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Kurai
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on dimanche 18 octobre 2009 at 14:04:19

Artist: Nightwish
Title: Moondance
BPM: 110,7
Filesize: 5341kb
Play Time: 03:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Crownless (4,62 stars, 460 notes)
  2. FantasMic (4,83 stars, 543 notes)
  3. Swanheart (1,44 stars, 90 notes)
Download: Nightwish - Moondance
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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[18 oct 2009] New Hitsound
[11 oct 2009] New Skin
[17 sept 2009] Add Inozuma's Difficulty (FantasMic)
[28 Aug 2009] Add Swanheart Diffculty
[27 Aug 2009] Add Crownless Difficulty



Swanheart=> Easy
Crownless=>Hard
FantasMic (By Inozuma) => Insane



GOOD GAME !
blissfulyoshi
Here is my shot a timing:
BPM: 112 Offset: 484 (I'm not very good at offset though)
BPM: 147.5 Offset: 18883
BPM: 147.5 Offset: 50642 (this section stays almost purely on half notes)
BPM: 147.5 Offset: 110,411

Remember to use sixth notes for all sections except the third.
Inozuma
Yo! :D

[Crownless]

00:10:24 (2) - Plus loin de la note précédente.
00:14:58 (3) - ^
00:16:41 (5,6,7) - Resnap ces notes en 1/3
00:17:29 (8) - Resnap ce slider sur le tique blanc, et la fin sur le tique blanc.
00:20:12 (3,4) - Plus loin de la note précédente.
00:21:13 (x) - Ajoute une note.
00:21:54 (x) - ^
00:23:47 (x) - ^
00:23:57 (x) - ^
00:23:67 (x) - ^
00:31:10 (x) - ^
00:34:35 (6) - Rapproche le du prochain slider.
00:37:40 (x) - Ajoute une note.
00:37:81 (x) - ^
00:38:72 (1,2) - Resnap sur le tique blanc.
00:42:08 (5) - Nouveau combo.
00:40:65 (x) - Ajoute une note.
00:41:06 (x) - ^
00:43:50 (x) - ^
00:43:91 (x) - ^
00:44:32 (x) - ^
01:43:90 (2) - Remplace ce slider par un break.
01:50:42 (1) - à partir de ce moment et jusque 02:31:09, je te conseille fortement d'ajouter des notes en 1/2 pour remplir tous les vides. Je peux te garantir que ça rend bien mieux :)

Bref, j'ai pas vérifié Swanheart, je préfère mod celui où tu as le plus travaillé.
Je modderais le spacing et autres issues quand tu auras combler tous ces vides.
Mafiamaster
Swanlakeheart~
00:25:81 (6) - New combo.
00:27:44 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:29:06 (3) - New combo.
00:44:52 (5) - Place a little bit farther from 4.
01:09:74 (3) - Look at below sentence before doing this slider. Extend this slider to the white tick. Endpoint should be on 01:10:96
01:11:16 (4) - I would place this 1/4 of a beat forward so it's on 01:11:36. Don't forget to shorten to where it was before~
01:20:51 (2,3) - Move these both 1/4 of a beat backwards. So 2 is on 01:20:31.
01:23:56 (4) - New combo.
01:24:38 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:30:89 (1) - Shorten this 1/4 of a beat. So the endpoint ends at 01:32:51
01:34:14 (3) - Shorten to the nearest white tick.
01:35:97 (1,2,3) - Move these 1/4 of a beat backwards.
It could also use some hit sounds as well.

Crownfulless~
00:04:14 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Something sounds early here?
00:44:52 (13) - From here to half of the song, it's not recommended that notes be silent, especially when it's going for like 30+ seconds.
Some beats just sound off sync close to the ending

So umm yeah ;_;
Topic Starter
Kurai
Thanks a lot ^^
WyndII
hi hi! XD
Just suggestions and opinions~

Swanheart
00:18:90 (1) - finish
00:44:52 (5) - ^
not much problems here

Crownless
00:04:14 (1,2) - nudge forward (press K)
00:05:23 (3) - ^
00:05:77 (4) - ^
00:06:65 (5) - move 1/8 later
00:06:92 (6) - ^
00:08:07 (9) - finish?
00:26:62 (1) - remove new combo
00:28:45 (4) - clap?
00:44:52 (13) - new combo
01:59:57 (2) - spacing here is inconsistent with the others
02:10:35 (2) - inconsistent spacing
02:23:97 (4,5) - ^
02:37:80 (1) - remove new combo
02:51:63 (2,3) - clap?
02:58:14 (2,3) - ^
03:01:39 (7) - ^
02:31:50 (2,4,6,1,5) - finish? xD
03:02:00 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - nudge FORWARD >.>
03:04:64 (1) - clap
03:02:71 (1) - remove new combo
03:11:15 (1) - this slider needs two claps
03:13:08 (2,3,4,5) - move this 1/4 later
03:07:90 (1) - finish
03:14:61 (1) - ^
03:20:81 (1,2) - ^
There are some parts that are not well spaced D:
demo...
This song is awesome~
starz.. good luck!
GabrielRKF
Distance Snap is not gonna hurt you. Please, check EVERY not with this one. It's hard to do this? Yeah it is. But it's the only way. For now, only modding the Swabhearth diff.

//Swanhearth//
00:44:523(5) - reeeeeally boring slider. Make a slider here that ends at 00:47:777. Then u make a Break time between the slider and the (1)
00:58:323(2) - There are another wrong spacing but this one can break a few newbies. Change the shape of the slider and distance snap here.
01:14:621(1) - Just like the one up here. Too far from the (4). Distance snap here.
01:37:397(3) - another ultra boring slider. It's way too long. Or use a bis slider (but not so long) or u end the slider at 01:39:838, make a loop and use Break time after.
02:01:810(1) - ending too soon. End at 02:02:217.

The skin is pretty cool and the song too.
U got my star =]
*star*
Inozuma
My unfinished diff T.T
Download: Nightwish - Moondance (Kurai_) [FantasMic].osu

EDIT: IRC Mod as well.
Jinxy
Look at how Inozuma adds hitsounds. Your hitsounds have no rhythm in them.

[Swanheart]
00:28:25 (4) - Move the beat 2 grids down.
00:52:04 (1) - Make it start at 00:51:84 and end at 00:54:68.
00:55:09 (1) - Extend by 1/4 beat.
01:09:74 (3) - ^ (Means same as above)
01:55:30 (2) - ^
01:56:92 (1) - ^
02:04:25 (1) - Use ctrl-C with this and then change (3) and (4) into this slider. For (4), flip horizontally then vertically.
02:07:09 (5) - Change into a spinner that ends on 02:08:31.

[Crownless]
Horrible hitsounds. The 1st parts are overloaded with Finishes and the next few parts have barely any hitsounds.
00:15:66 (4) - Extend by 1/4 beat.
Change the 3 beats after ^ into: 00:16:47 (5) and 00:16:74 (6).
00:25:81 (1) - Use ctrl-C with this and then change (3) into this slider. Flip horizontally then vertically.
00:38:82 (1,2,3,4) - BAD. Move the slider so the ends are further away from the (1) and (3).

[FantasMic]
01:50:41 - The kiai time is too long, dood.
02:00:57 (1,2,3) - Spacing problem, the (2) is nearer to (3) than (1).
02:28:64 (3,4,5) - Alignment problem.
02:36:77 (6,7,8) - Spacing problem.

[Romanticide]
00:06:72 (10) - New Combo.


Sorry, but I can't star this yet.
PicoLo
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
EEeee
Swanheart
offset = 18,882
01:50:410 - inherit this timing section here, then move the off
the following new combos are intended to help spacing :D
00:44:50 (5) - New combo
01:03:62 (3) - ^
01:04:84 (1) - remove new combo
01:09:72 (6) - new combo
01:56:10 (3) - new combo

Crownless
Fix the break time in this diff
00:00:466 - change offset to 460 then make sure ur notes are all snapped on the timeline
00:18:917 - change offset to 18,882
01:50:395 - inherit this timing section(the one around this 01:50:395) and then make sure the offset to this inherit timing section is 110,395
well that's all i can help u with in this diff, something about the ending seems really bad though

FantasMic - is it suppose to be FantasMix?
do the same timing points like in the others i modded
00:44:503 - delete the timing section at this point
01:50:004 - inherit this timeline

Romanticide
same as other diffs, u know the timing stuff
and make sure u fix breaks after u add the new timing

well that's all I can mod on this map, patterns look good, just timing has me kinda stumped, , , anyways make sure u add the timing stuff i pointed out, they'll help out ^^
Mianki
Nice map ^^
Have a star~
Topic Starter
Kurai
Thx All :Þ
Jinxy
Maybe my last mod wasn't accurate enough, sorry :P

(When I say move to the right, I mean on the timeline, don't confuse with grid)

[Swanheart]
00:44:52 (5) - Extend by 1/4
00:55:09 (1) - ^
01:16:24 (3) - Too near to (2)..?
02:01:81 (1) - Extend by 1/4

[Crownless]
Reinsert Break.
01:42:68 (1,1,1) - Hitsounds? They sound plain.
01:50:42 to 02:09:53 - Cut down on the Claps, use them every 2/1.
02:15:63 (1) - Extend by 1/4
02:44:10 (1) - One more repeat.
02:44:61 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Move to the right by 1/4
03:01:90 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
03:21:47 (1,2,3) - ^
03:25:54 (2) - Change into slider that repeats on 1/4 and ends at 03:25:92
03:26:74 - Add beat.
03:26:86 (4) - Move to the right by 1/4.


Mod may continue.
Sushi
[Skin]
Pense à recopier le circle overlay et le cursortrail du thème original, avec des skins qui difèrent, ça peut faire des trucs horribles.

[Swanheart]
00:23:37 (2,3) - alignement?
00:43:71 (3,4,5) - Spacing
00:44:52 (5,1) - Jump tres inaproprié
le spacing entre chaque slider change aussi un peu aléatoirement. a corriger.
01:14:62 (1,2,3,4,1) - spacing bizzare
02:04:25 (1,3,4) - essiae de les rendre plus parrallèles
02:07:09 (1) - la fin du slider sonne mal. je le ferais finir 1/2 temps plus tard


[Crownless]
PRIMO : FAIS MOI UN RESNAP!!!! certaines notes (de la partie "bien timée") ne sont pas bien snappées! (exemple : 00:40:45 (1,2,3,4,5) )

00:02:65 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Vu comme les notes sont timées, il doit y avoir un probleme. mais ça sonne bien. donc je sais pas.
00:15:66 (4,5,6,7,8) - Le timing étant bizzare, je sais pas si c'est jusdicieux de le mapper comme tel
00:25:81 (2,1) - fais moi un échange de New combo
00:33:94 (5) - new combo
00:34:96 (8) - Clap ici et new combo

toute la partie lente est a resnapper.
00:52:04 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - faudra que tu m'explique sur quoi c'est timé
02:20:51 (3) - la fin devrait etre 1/4 de temps plus tard pour respecter les trucs précédents
02:47:87 (1,2,3,1,2) - mauvais timing
A partir d'ici, revois le timing (probablement a cause du resnap que tu as du faire.
03:20:81 (1,2) - je désaprouve.
03:25:54 (2) - probleme

[fantasmic]
02:12:27 (1) - ici, le timing me semble bizzare
02:16:44 (7) - timing de la fin bizzare
02:36:77 (6,7,8) - spacing pas terrible
02:37:48 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - mauvais timing
02:51:62 (5,6) - lol?
02:53:45 (x) - je dirais qu'il manque une note ici
03:00:36 (1,2,3,4,5) - arf, c'est pas tres beau tout ça
03:14:804 - probleme de timing général ici aussi, conséquence du resnap :<
03:25:380 - idem

[Romanticide]
00:02:52 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - timing bizzare.
00:35:06 (1) - 1/4 de temps plus tard
00:36:18 (4) - 1 répétition supplémentaire
00:41:57 (6) - 1/4 de temps plus tard
00:42:69 (3) - déja vu? répétition supplémentaire
00:51:69 - je trouve que c'est mal timé a partir de ce point, c'est a dire que le début des notes n'est pas tres dans le rythme, plutot a contre temps. arrange moi ça stp.
01:53:47 (4,5,6,7) - j'aime pas.
01:55:30 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:56:92 (4) - mauvais timing de fin
02:03:43 (1) - 1 répétition supplémentaire
02:20:51 (3) - fais en sorte que ça se termine 1/4 de temps plus tard si tu veux que ça colle avec les précédents.
02:38:41 (1) - 1 répétition, puis probleme de timing général
02:41:66 (8) - +1 répétition
02:44:10 (1) - 1 répétition, puis probleme de timing général
03:01:90 - timing général
03:12:57 (1) - +1 répétition
03:20:81 (1,2) - je désaprouve.
03:26:86 (4) - 1/4 de temps plus tot
03:27:67 (8) - efface cette note

Pour les difficultés Romanticide et crownless, la deniere timing section est mal timée. l'offset devrait etre a 201 476.

Voila, c'est tout. Beaucoup de choses a modifier en raison du changement de timing. Bon courage~
Luneko
Hi~ ^^

[Swanheart]
Good

[Crownless]
00:34:337 - Add note?
00:34:540 - ^

[FantasMic]
Perfect ^^


Star~
Jinxy
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Alice
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Symbolic
[Swanheart]

00:19:30 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:20:12 (1) - ^
00:20:93 (1) - ^
00:29:06 (1) - This is really confusing, respace please.
00:33:13 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:33:94 (1) - ^
00:39:64 (1) - ^
00:40:45 (1) - ^
00:55:09 (1) - ^
01:11:36 (4) - New combo.
02:06:28 (4) - Clap on startpoint.


[Crownless]

00:17:29 (8) - Extend 1/4.
00:34:94 (4) - Clap on startpoint also.
00:44:52 (1) - Extend 4/4.
01:52:86 (1,2) - Respace these, very confusing.
01:54:48 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:55:09 (5) - ^
01:55:50 (1) - ^
02:26:00 (4) - ^


[FantasMic]

01:29:27 (1,2,3,4) - Look at this spacing and at 01:30:90 (1,2,3) - .. keep spacing consistent.
01:43:91 (1) - Spinner is a bit too long, almost 6 seconds..


Nice map,
Starred *
YtRaM_old
very nice =D

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