1. Hard (4,84 stars, 394 notes)
2. Konei & Irre's Normal (2,18 stars, 178 notes)

Irreversible wrote:

maaap.

1. 00:02:412 (1,2) - They look a bit flabby, why don't you make a stronger curve or just having them straight?
2. 01:30:335 (2) - Curve it in the direction of 01:31:027 (1) -'s tail
3. 01:32:873 (2) - What about continuining the symmetry stuff you might fix next patterns but hey, symmetry is cool
4. 02:15:335 (1,3) - weird shapes ;w;
5. 02:28:719 (2,3) - I'd replace them with a 1/2 slider with repeat, more readable and also cooler to see.
6. 02:48:565 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1) - CTRL+H or J this, please, so that will be less noticeable /runs

1. 00:29:873 (1,2,3) - It plays so weird and actually song doesn't suggest anything similar, but that's probably just me (same as 01:44:642 (3) - and others )
2. 00:47:181 - Make break starts here for coolness
3. 01:02:181 (2,3,4,5,1) - Try to make a perfect star with circles and head of sliders, would be great
4. 01:30:104 (3) - This might be spaced wrongly, looking by another similar patterns
5. 01:46:719 (3,4) - Could you space them more? Will look better (just use 'scale by' option)
6. 01:59:642 (3) - Not perfectly symmetric in the grid, i cri evritiem

Leader wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:29:873 (1,2,3) - It plays so weird and actually song doesn't suggest anything similar, but that's probably just me (same as 01:44:642 (3) - and others )
2. 00:47:181 - Make break starts here for coolness
3. 01:02:181 (2,3,4,5,1) - Try to make a perfect star with circles and head of sliders, would be great Ehh, cant come up with something orz
4. 01:30:104 (3) - This might be spaced wrongly, looking by another similar patterns Nooo, its cool, dont see a problem here.
5. 01:46:719 (3,4) - Could you space them more? Will look better (just use 'scale by' option)
6. 01:59:642 (3) - Not perfectly symmetric in the grid, i cri evritiem

that's all, merry christmas in advance \:D/

Leader wrote:

quick mod for you

[Koneirreversible]

1. 00:02:412 (1,2) - They look a bit flabby, why don't you make a stronger curve or just having them straight? tried it!
2. 01:30:335 (2) - Curve it in the direction of 01:31:027 (1) -'s tail oh, that's cool indeed
3. 01:32:873 (2) - What about continuining the symmetry stuff you might fix next patterns but hey, symmetry is cool ah well it wasn't meant to be symmetrical at all o.o
4. 02:15:335 (1,3) - weird shapes ;w; <3
5. 02:28:719 (2,3) - I'd replace them with a 1/2 slider with repeat, more readable and also cooler to see. 02:29:181 - deleted this circle instead, works pretty good to me
6. 02:48:565 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1) - CTRL+H or J this, please, so that will be less noticeable /runs ok

that's all, merry christmas in advance \:D/ thanks leader <3

1. Add wham george michael to the tags?

1. 00:42:104 (3) - remove whistle
2. 01:44:642 (4) - shorten it til 01:45:335 -
3. 01:49:488 (1) - that slider doesn't fit here D: try 1/1 please
4. 01:56:873 (1) - maybe use a reverse slider like 01:55:027 (2) - ? Sounds much better
5. 02:30:104 - I really want to click that downbeat! So, try to put here a circle and make a slider from 02:29:181 - to 02:29:642 -
6. 02:58:488 (4) - as 01:44:642 (4) - here
7. 03:03:334 (1) - as 01:49:488 (1) -
8. 03:29:181 - map til this moment please!

1. 00:41:873 (2) - remove whistle from reverse
2. 01:09:681 (3) - hmm, maybe change to circle triplet?
3. 01:15:104 (2,3) - move them further, please >_< It may seem like it's 1/2
4. 02:29:642 (1) - remove nc, it's unnecessary
5. 03:29:181 - again, map till this moment :<

-Umi- wrote:

hi hi hi fast rank in coming !

Konei & Irre's normal

1. Konei
   - 00:08:642 (4) - up to x:5,y:72 better flow sure
   - 00:21:335 (2,1) - stack them perfeclty sure
   - 00:28:258 (1,3) - why the shape are different ? o3o jut do copy/paste '-' sure
   - 01:31:027 (1) - or in this way, feel better
   
   SPOILER

   
   - 01:44:642 (4,1) - flow '-' Well that's in my part (Irreversible) XD But yeah, I prefer the current Situation, with leader's Suggestion it flows really cool!
   
   SPOILER

   
   - 02:58:488 (4,1) - same lol I had to shorten this slider by 1/2, so that's why it also flows good now!
   
2. Irre
   - 00:33:796 (2,3) - like this flow better Ah well, I prefer my Version without a real reason though! Hope you can understand
   
   SPOILER

   
   - 00:35:642 (1,3) - same as 00:28:258 (1,3) ?? What do you mean here
   - 02:37:258 (1) - irre signature plz <3
   - 02:46:719 (2) - in this way increase the flow done slightly different
   
   SPOILER

   

How to nazy mod by umi, but i hope this will help good luck and have a star when you give the KD, i'm kinda poor atm ahah

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Heya!

General

1. Add wham george michael to the tags?

Normal

1. 00:42:104 (3) - remove whistle done
2. 01:44:642 (4) - shorten it til 01:45:335 - done
3. 01:49:488 (1) - that slider doesn't fit here D: try 1/1 please done
4. 01:56:873 (1) - maybe use a reverse slider like 01:55:027 (2) - ? Sounds much better I guess he wants to Keep the Variation here, so no fix here
5. 02:30:104 - I really want to click that downbeat! So, try to put here a circle and make a slider from 02:29:181 - to 02:29:642 - o-ok ;w; <3
6. 02:58:488 (4) - as 01:44:642 (4) - here
7. 03:03:334 (1) - as 01:49:488 (1) - both done
8. 03:29:181 - map til this moment please! that's up to Konei!

Good luck on ranking before Christmas! *^*

1. Clean
   
2. About the SB: you can use this code for to not overload it
   
   
   SB

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   //Background and Video events
   0,0,"Background.jpg",0,0
   //Break Periods
   2,46919,59683
   2,120765,133529
   //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
   //Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
   //Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
   //Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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    S,0,31950,,0.5870969
    F,0,31950,32873,0,1
    F,0,32873,46719,1,0.9934995
    F,0,46719,46950,0.9934995,0
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    F,0,198104,199950,1
    F,0,199950,201796,1,0
    M,0,164873,,464,387
    S,0,164873,,0.5870969
    F,0,164873,165796,0,1
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    F,0,178719,179642,0.992416,0
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    S,0,91027,,0.5870969
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    F,0,91950,104873,1
    F,0,104873,105796,1,0
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    S,0,135335,,0.5870969
    F,0,135335,136258,0,1
    F,0,136258,163950,1
    F,0,163950,164873,1,0
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Background.jpg",320,240
    F,0,164873,165104,0,0.4170323
    S,0,164873,165796,0.6531615,1.495484
    F,0,165104,165796,0.4170323,0
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Collab\konei collab.png",320,240
    M,0,2412,,464,387
    S,0,2412,,0.5870969
    F,0,2412,3335,0,0.9956616
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    S,0,179642,,0.5870969
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    F,0,180565,193488,1
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    M,0,198104,,310,344
    F,0,198104,199950,1
    F,0,199950,201796,1,0
   //Storyboard Sound Samples
   //Background Colour Transformations
   3,100,163,162,255

   
   
   Koneisible
   
3. 00:07:950 (3,4) - Bad flow I would prefer if you can do this more comfortable for when moving the cursor, something like this:
   
   
   or maybe you can CTRL+J 00:06:104 (1,3) and move it so that it flows better.
4. 00:10:719 (2) - spacing and Nazi I think you can do better the slider because if you press CTRL + H You'll notice that it is not symmetrical.
5. 00:13:488 (1) - clap? is imo is better whistle for there is no sound relatively strong there.
6. 00:21:335 (2,1) - Nazi* is better if you stack these notes well maybe move this 00:24:565 (1) - to X:142 Y:132.
7. 00:28:258 (1,2,3) - Nazi* this is a bad blanket, i'm sure you can do it better, something like this:
   
   
   Here the code if you want:
   
   

   [HitObjects]
   38,130,28258,6,0,B|90:146|139:124|139:124|148:84|174:49|209:37,1,220,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   256,147,29642,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   302,37,30104,2,0,B|338:49|364:84|373:124|373:124|422:146|474:130,1,220,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

8. Nazi* 00:31:950 (1) - move this to X:472 Y:131 for a better stack.
9. 00:45:565 (4) - Nazi* irreversible this is not perfectly symmetrical ikr you can do it better ctrl + H to be sure.
10. 01:05:642 (2,3,4) - Nazi* Bad blanket, move this to X:145 Y:337 looks better imo.
11. 01:18:104 (3) - ^
12. 02:30:565 (2,3) - bad flow, try this:
    
    
    
    Nice copypaste~
    
    Hard
    
    Just nazi suggestions because this diff is nice
    
13. 00:24:104 (3,2) - Stacking this better.
14. 00:29:873 (1,3) - ^
15. 00:34:719 (3,1) - ^
16. 00:36:565 (4,1) - ^
17. 01:24:335 (3,4,1) - bad flow, move this 01:25:027 (4) - to X:215 Y:226
    
    This is all GL~

1. I was kind of disappointed to see that you guys decided to end the mapping 03:18:104 - here, instead of mapping till the end. Felt kinda odd to spin there and then suddenly just quit playing but oh well. Another thing was that I wanted to see a super nice chirstmasy SB but =(
2. Your Collab difficulty has some audio lead-in, maybe add the 1800 audio lead-in for the Hard diff too for consistency?
3. Your hard difficulty has widescreen support checked so make sure to take that off!
4. Are sliderticks even used on these diffs? If not, remove them? (sorry, I might be an idiot and / or blind)

1. 00:02:412 (1,2) - I think these sliders could offer some more shapewise (vise?), like this!
   
   Example

   
2. 00:10:719 (2) - I think you could curve this slider to the other direction, it would fit better overall and (2) would catch (3)'s start better, or that's what I think.
3. 00:11:642 (3,5) - This blanket is incorrect, I recommend you to fix it.
4. 00:29:642 (2,3) - If you can, you could improve this blanket also
5. 00:30:104 (3,1) - Not really necessary but they aren't stacked perfectly.
6. 00:59:642 - I think dragging the break here isn't really that necessary and IMO it doesn't fit so consider moving it to it's old place.
7. 01:05:642 (2,3,4) - There's some room to improve these blankets
8. 01:08:873 (1,2) - I personally don't like these shapes but it's fine I guess xD
9. 01:23:642 (1,2,1) - What do you think of adding whistles on these slider's reverse sections? I think it would fit pretty well
10. 01:29:181 (1) - I think this NC here isn't really necessary, and I think following the 2 snatza (snaza?) is better, like you did 01:23:642 (1,2) - here for example.
11. 01:56:873 (1,2) - If you want to, you can take off the grid snap and make this blanket perfect but it's really not necessary.
12. 02:13:488 - Same with the break thing
13. 02:15:335 (1,3) - I feel like if you'd move the ''bump'' thingy more to the middle of the slider, it would fit much better, atleast I get that feeling (I really sucked at moving the points on the slider but you get my point) And second, the bump looks kind of awkward for me so you could atleast make it more cleaner
    
    Example

    
14. 02:31:950 (3) - How about moving this slider so somewhere here? I think it would fit much better than the current one and make it look more ''symmetric'' I guess.
    
    Example

    
15. 02:37:027 (4,1) - This stack is kind of tricky here, because it is your lowest difficulty in the mapset, I recommend you to unstack these, easier to read that way =)
16. 03:10:719 (1,2) - You can take off the gridsnap here too if you want to improve the blanket, might be unnecessary though.
17. Cool diff!

1. 00:15:796 (2) - I think CTRL + G would do optionally well here
2. 00:17:181 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like this pattern would play better if their ends would be stacked perfectly, now it looks kind of weird for me >:
3. 00:17:181 (1) - Finish on the head?
4. 00:29:873 (1,3) - Things like this feel kinda stuffed but oh well, if you think it's fine don't change these.
5. 00:45:565 (3,4) - I personally would work on this blanket
6. 00:47:181 - Why drag the break here? I think it's better to let it end on the normal time P:
7. 00:59:642 - ^ as in Normal
8. 01:15:104 (2) - Curve it other way around, this way it would fit better with 01:14:412 (1) - (imo)
9. 01:46:719 (3,4) - Consider doing it like this to prevent a huge misleads etc
   
   Example

   
10. 02:19:027 (1) - I personally would curve it other way around, this way it becomes more fitting with 02:17:873 (4) -
11. 02:20:873 (1) - Blanket >:
12. Sorry, I got nothing else!