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FALCOM - Cry for me

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do and do
25 posts
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do and do
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年11月5日 星期四 at 12:01:44

Artist: FALCOM
Title: Cry for me
Source: The Legend of Heroes:Sora no Kiseki the 3rd
Tags: Other
BPM: 165
Filesize: 16092kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.98 stars, 118 notes)
  2. Hard (4.87 stars, 249 notes)
  3. Normal (3.93 stars, 139 notes)
  4. relaxing (4.59 stars, 206 notes)
Download: FALCOM - Cry for me
Download: FALCOM - Cry for me (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first map
I like this game
So I try to do
Last edited by do and do , edited 12 times in total.
Alice
2,673 posts
Joined October 2008
Alice
Overall: you'll need to ask someone to look at your timing, seems a bit off?
Easy
Too many slider tick rate I think.
Please do real combos. All that new combos are a bit boring and useless, that's sometime cool but here it's overused.
Also, whole map is a bit off-rhythm.. But maybe it will pass since it's an easy diff?
00:32:08 (1) - Snap this 1/4 later on the timeline. Then extend it 1/4. Then add a clap at the end. Sounds way better.
00:38:84 (1,2) - They are too far each other according to the beginning's spacing
00:40:86 (1,2,3) - ^
00:45:65 (1) - Extend 1/4 then add a clap at the end. Make it closer to next one if you won't change this next one too.. Redo combos here too.
00:47:08 (1) - (maybe) place this at 00:47:44. Clap at the end too.
00:54:76 (1) - Jump on an easy diff? No way, redo spacing please
00:57:69 (1) - ^
01:02:62 (1,2) ^
01:04:82 (1,2) - I don't like them. Do something on the rhythm, more cool.
01:19:09 (2) - spacing

I'll edit this to mod others diffs later. ^^
do and do
25 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
do and do
make map so hardly :(
Alice
2,673 posts
Joined October 2008
Alice
I forgot

Overall: a LOT of note seems off with rhythm.. You'll definetely need a new timing (offset is the most wrong I think)
Easy
00:01:53 (2) - Those sorts of slider are unrankable. :?

Well, then

Normal
Tooo many new combos
Use 1/4 that's better.. A normal couldn't be other than 1/4 usually
Also, that normal is too easy.. The easy is super easy (may be boring) and the normal sounds like a real easy. Increase diff.
00:01:16 (1,2) - Try to arrange them with 1/4. They aren't snapped correctly on the timeline
00:03:72 (4) - 1/4 later, then make it end at 00:04:09
00:19:82 (1,2) - spacing
00:32:08 (1,2,3) - spacing
00:33:55 (1,2,3,4) - snap them at previous 1/4 tick (blue). They sound off.
00:54:76 (1,1, etc) - same as easy
00:57:69 (1) - ^
01:04:27 (1,2,3) - as every notes redo that part with 1/4 snap divisor and then redo spacing.
01:14:88 (2) - 1/4 earlier and then redo spacing
01:19:09 (2) - Incorrect spacing

Hard
I wont bug you on spacing again
00:09:03 (2) - seems off
00:39:76 (1,2) - too close from previous combo
00:42:32 (1) - errrmm do something else?
00:45:61 (1) - remove new combo
00:48:54 (3) - extend 1/4
01:04:55 - ^ then add a clap (every sides)
As other diffs, new combo overused and some spacing problem, but here it could be jump so np maybe. And some parts sound off but it's already said on overall.

It will need some fixes to get my star. Ask other peoples to mod it? :D
do and do
25 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
do and do
This map be maked again
It's new.
Furawa
554 posts
Joined April 2009
Furawa
I think the clap sound is not fit with this song(>.< sorry my English is so bad :?
and I like this song too :) star~~
do and do
25 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
do and do
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Furawa
554 posts
Joined April 2009
Furawa

do and do wrote:

Sound problem has been modified.
^ ^嗯，刚发现是同胞可以说中文么XD，嗯看到了，加油的说XD对了，上面的那个外国同学帮你mod了那么多东西，给他几个星表示一下把，在post右方头像下面点一下就可以了，觉得对自己有用的mod都可以给星表示感谢XD，map加油
do and do
25 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
do and do
这歌都快听了N+1次了，不行了，顶不住了 :cry:
Furawa
554 posts
Joined April 2009
Furawa
噗XD有这么一个说法是，当你把一首喜欢的歌听的快吐了，map就差不多完工了 :)
加油XD
do and do
25 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
do and do
基本完工了，虽然感觉还是有些问题，不过玩起来应该没什么问题，因为我都能FC而且ACC都非常高，做图真累，我还是去玩别人做好的地图吧 ;)
Furawa
554 posts
Joined April 2009
Furawa
XD PM BAT让他们帮你modmap把
zerosyn
56 posts
Joined April 2009
zerosyn
[Hard]
00:30:19 (5) - 时间上向后移到00:30:37比较好，位置也要相应移动，建议Grid Level调高一点并使用distance snap（按住Alt开启），貌似你是纯手工定的位置？
00:36:01 (5) - ^
00:41:83 (5) - ^

[Normal]
00:06:21 (1) - 去掉new combo，你肯定是从Hard拷过来就没调过，减少Note的同时这个也要调整啊，建议按歌词一句话一个，我懒得一一指出了。。。
00:29:64 (2) - 建议你把这个和(1)完全对齐（按住Shift取消grid snap），然后把Stack Leniency向Rarely方向调一点，这样就看的比较清楚了。或者干脆向右移动一下让(2)的结尾和(1)的结尾重叠也可以。后面所有类似的就不说了。
00:38:92 (1) - 和前面Note的间距太小，离远一点。再一次建议用distance snap，作为Normal虽然有点跳跃是没问题，但大体上还是要保持距离和时间的关系的。
00:50:01 (1) - ^
另外，这是个3星的难度，最好把HP Drain Rate和Circle Size稍微调简单一点。

[Easy]
看起来你只是减少了Note，完全没考虑间距问题，强烈建议重新map，或者你可以把这个难度删了算了，因为Normal如果把Circle Size弄大的话已经够简单了。

星星还是等你改得更好了再给吧~~~
do and do
25 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
do and do
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
zerosyn
56 posts
Joined April 2009
zerosyn
[Hard]
00:10:41 (8) - Slider的路径是要看最终效果的，不是说你关键点画的好看就行。。。现在这个第一小圈没人看得见，所以要重新画一下。我还是建议你把Grid Level调高（View->Grid Level->2或者3），这样点的位置就很自由，也就能出来自己想要的形状。
00:12:05 - 这个Break右键删掉重加，因为你原来00:16:41肯定有Note，后来删除了，所以Break也需要延长。
00:23:32 (1) - 比起前面那个Slider，这个还可以接受，但最好也重画一下。
00:30:06 (4) - 我觉得移到00:30:23好一点吧，个人意见。
00:33:50 (1) - 结束在00:34:23的歌词上比较好。
00:35:88 (3) - 建议移到00:36:05，个人意见。
00:39:68 (1,2) - 和前一小节的间距有误，用distance snap调一下。

[Normal]
00:00:77 (1) - 和(2)对齐。
00:10:41 (7) - 和Hard问题一样。
00:12:05 - Break问题也和Hard一样。
00:18:41 (2) - 和(1)间距有误，用distance snap。
00:23:32 (1) - 和Hard一样，可以考虑重画一下。
00:33:50 (1) - 和Hard一样，结束在00:34:23比较好。
00:39:68 (1,2) - 和Hard一样，间距有误。
01:07:86 (1,2) - 这个最好不要和Slider放在一起，被挡住很不爽的。
01:19:50 (1,2) - 同上。
01:23:86 (1) - 结束在下一个Spinner的开头，然后把下一个后移并缩短，保持原来的结束位置。
01:29:86 (1) - 在01:30:23开始比较好。

[Easy]
00:10:41 (7) - 和Hard一样。
00:23:32 (1) - ^
00:39:68 (1) - ^
最后三个Spinner和Normal一样。

另外Offset改成30试试。


这回做的相当不错，Star！加油！
do and do
25 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
do and do
应该没什么问题了，还有的话请指出 ;)
zerosyn
56 posts
Joined April 2009
zerosyn
发现你每次都大改一番，并且都有很大进步啊。看得出来确实很用心，赞一个！

现在note排布是没啥大问题了，但是hitsounds貌似只加了finish，这个是肯定不行的。
虽然我一开始也觉得whistle和clap太影响歌曲本身，但加的合适你就会发现其实叠加在一起也是很美的。
不过我比较懒，而且也不是很擅长，你就自己研究一下别的图是怎么加的吧，相信你的学习能力。
要注意的是最好要用到whistle，只用clap的话会有人嫌单调。。。
另外如果你觉得某些note音量不合适的话就在timing里单独分一段新的，只是调节音量。
再就是slider分为滑动时的声音和端点的声音，端点是可以单独选择的，也能在时间条中选（有回转的slider只能这么选）。

剩下还有几个小问题：
1、Normal在15s处也加一个短break比较好。
2、Hard的new combo我还是觉得有些多，你自己仔细斟酌一下吧。另外Normal 00:58:57 (1)的new combo最好去掉。
3、Easy 00:18:03和00:18:57我觉得加上note比较好，个人意见。
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LuvCeciOsu
21 posts
Joined August 2009
LuvCeciOsu
I like this song~ I like falcom~
BTW, this song's name is 'cry for me, cry for you'.
(I guess you don't like full-sub it again if you change the name, cz this will create two maps in this form...)

Im not a pro mapper, but I really like this song... so just have a try here...

HARD:
00:46:030 (7) - I don't like it, sounds strange here.
01:02:575 (5,7) - Finsh sound doesnt fit here. (It gets noisy with so much finishes here.)
01:04:211 (5) - ^
01:14:211 (5,7) - ^
01:15:848 (5) - ^

For all levels:
00:28:030 (2) - I think you can double the length of that slider (Only suggestion)

还有。。。个人觉得歌曲最后那部分你也可以继续编一下，后面音乐明明没结束嘛，而且本身曲子就不很长。
Design的颜色。。。我不喜欢那个屎黄色。。。= =|||（换白的吧~）
建议去找个OP的video。。。你有游戏的话本来就有。用PPLIVE加速下的FLV格式OSU也认的，很方便。
LuvCeciOsu
21 posts
Joined August 2009
LuvCeciOsu
额。。。还有TIMING要重新弄下。。。
do and do
25 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
do and do
还那么多问题，10月1号回去再改，歌听的快不行了...
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