Natsumi Kiyoura - Tabi no Tochuu · forum

Weinmagier

Joined July 2008

Topic Starter

Weinmagier 2009-09-02T21:39:18+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Dienstag, 27. Oktober 2009 at 15:49:50

Artist: Natsumi Kiyoura
Title: Tabi no Tochuu
Source: Spice and Wolf
Tags: Spice and Wolf opening op
BPM: 172
Filesize: 6694kb
Play Time: 04:46
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4,56 stars, 477 notes)
Normal (3,12 stars, 278 notes)

Download: Natsumi Kiyoura - Tabi no Tochuu
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 4th Beatmap

Natsumi Kiyoura - Tabi no Tochuu
Spice and Wolf opening (full ver.)

Normal ( Dangaard )
Hard ( Weinmagier )

<Hard>
Edit1: Mystearica (general modding)
Edit2: Mafiamaster/Alace (spacing)
Edit3: Alace,Kiou?,Quintitem (timing)
Edit4: Starrodkirby86 (nazi changes)
Edit5: Card N'FoRcE
Edit6: JarJarJacob
Edit7: whymeman
Edit8: Derekku Chan
Edit9: MaxwellDemon

Last edited by Weinmagier 2009-10-27T14:50:45+00:00, edited 19 times in total.

Mystearica

Mystearica 2009-09-20T19:40:49+00:00

Nice anime and nice song, one of my favorites ^_^

[Hard]

I feel it's arranged too straight and squareish, try to use more patterns if you can and possibly more variance in slider shape.

Use a silenced slidertick sound sample, I think it sounds better that way.

00:23:62 - redo this break, it lengthens
01:15:95 (4) - new combo here possibly
01:20:83 (3) - lower volume on this clap
01:37:58 (5) - ^
01:39:67 (3) - ^
01:41:06 - maybe add a note here or add 2 to make that a 7 stream, I think adding 1 sounds better
01:41:76 (8) - slightly lower volume on this
01:43:85 (4) - ^
01:45:95 (3) - ^
01:48:04 (3) - ^
01:53:62 - redo this break, it shortens
02:09:32 (1,2,3,4) - maybe incremental volume here as the vocals kind of do that, it's a bit hard to hear
02:44:90 - redo this break, it shortens by a tiny bit
03:06:18 (1) - sounds a bit awkward in my opinion
03:11:76 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think incremental volume here would be a great effect
03:15:60 (1) - sounds really sudden
04:06:18 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I thought this part didn't sound great
04:08:27 (1) - sounds very sudden
04:12:81 (1,2) - kind of odd sounding to me
04:25:02 (8,9,10) - again I didn't like how this sounded, it's very loud and fast but the song is slow paced
04:31:30 (3) - this as well
04:39:32 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - definitively add volume control on this part along with the music
04:46:30 (10) - add a 30% soft finish here to ride out with the music

Dan's Normal is good, keep it going!

Fairly good work~

Gabi

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Gabi 2009-09-22T18:33:32+00:00

i really liked this :3 very nice song and relaxing beatmap set.

Dangaard

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Dangaard 2009-09-22T18:52:49+00:00

fumoffu star :3

happy30

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happy30 2009-09-22T18:54:16+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Ekaru

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Joined July 2008

Ekaru 2009-09-24T21:41:09+00:00

Only thing that bugged me...

Normal:

The hit circles under the ends of sliders that lasted more than one beat felt weird and unintuitive. With that big of a gap, there's no reason to move them out from under there, would actually make the map much easier.

Here, have a star. <3

pete2528

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Joined March 2009

pete2528 2009-09-24T22:12:26+00:00

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Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2009-09-25T20:14:40+00:00

Hard~
04:41:41 (7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Imo, it's too repetitive and should be placed in a different location.

That's practically all I've found that bothered me. NICE JOB!

Why does Normal get the cuter background instead of Hard DDD:

Alace

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Alace 2009-09-26T12:12:06+00:00

goooood
<Hard>
see the .osu
you can try to make a patten like this

Download: Natsumi Kiyoura - Tabi no Tochuu (Weinmagier) [lol].osu

eee

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eee 2009-09-26T13:24:05+00:00

nice map you got here :D

tieff

Featured Artist

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tieff 2009-09-26T22:31:49+00:00

Fabulous.
Feel free to pop.

Alace

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Alace 2009-09-27T10:52:59+00:00

Me kiouonesana and quint got +17ms to offset
we should test it

Weinmagier

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Topic Starter

Weinmagier 2009-09-27T11:33:54+00:00

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Starrodkirby86

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Here since the beginning

Starrodkirby86 2009-09-29T04:30:02+00:00

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Card N'FoRcE

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Here since the beginning

Card N'FoRcE 2009-09-30T15:19:38+00:00

- Normal:
I think someone will complain about the "jumps" in this diff (the easier one). I'm pretty neutral about them, anyway.
I'd start kiai at 3:19:109 instead of 3:18:0620 (up to you, anyway

); also, don't you think that this kiai section is pretty long? Hard has shorter kiai sections.

- Hard:
00:17:01 (6) - new combo?
00:30:62 (6) - new combo... maybe? Actually it seems quite badly placed to me, it feels weird. D:
01:48:06 (3) - please stack this under the slider (just place it again to stack better

)
04:05:15 (3) - i'd add new combo here and remove it at 04:05:67 (1)

Good map and relaxing song ^^

Weinmagier

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Topic Starter

Weinmagier 2009-09-30T18:00:52+00:00

Done!

Hanyuu

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Joined February 2009

Hanyuu 2009-10-04T10:02:08+00:00

very good beatmap