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Nemesis Theory - Rose at Twilight

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John12346
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Joined May 2009
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John12346
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, October 05, 2009 at 8:29:58 PM

Artist: Nemesis Theory
Title: Rose at Twilight
BPM: 104.5
Filesize: 3263kb
Play Time: 02:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. Daybreak (0.87 stars, 129 notes)
  2. Loogie's Insane (4.74 stars, 363 notes)
  3. Nightfall (4.43 stars, 322 notes)
  4. Twilight (2.8 stars, 222 notes)
Download: Nemesis Theory - Rose at Twilight
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I love this song and its author. NemesisTheory is just too good.

Edit: Completed 'Daylight' mode's map.
Edit: Completed 'Twilight' mode's map.
Edit: Updated 'Daylight' and 'Twilight' mode.
Edit: Uploaded and am currently halfway through with editing 'Nightfall' mode.
Edit: Finished 'Nightfall' mode. Ready for modding.
Edit: Changed the offset to 0. @.@
Edit: Made more changes modeled on other people's opinions.
Edit: Added Loogie's Insane. I didn't make this difficulty.
Last edited by John12346 , edited 8 times in total.
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
GbL
332 posts
Joined February 2009
GbL
[Daybreak]

02:46:50 (9) - Add a finish

The others looks fine~
Star!
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
I'm modding Nightfall.
SPOILER
Overall: The hitcircle size is too small, in my opinion, but then again, this is a hard difficulty. Also, the slider speed might be too fast, which makes the sliders longer than they should be.

0:00:00 - 0:18:43: There's nothing going on at this part, but it seems like a nice part for some combos.

01:33:01 - 01:46:79: The music follows a 1-2-3-4 pattern, highlighted by the flashing lights, but the combo doubles it up to 8. Then, after that, the combo ends at a 1, then at a 5.

02:09:76 - 02:13:77: You place a long, repeated slider, where instead, you could use the guitar riff to add multiple sliders.

02:37:03: You're missing a beat here.

02:46:50: You might want to consider adding an ending.
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
Daybreak
00:56:26 (1) - this is bad, separate the start point and the endpoint, it's kinda illegal, since u can't see which direction it's going, unless snaking sliders, but for the players without. . . u know what, just fix it
and that's it

Twilight
01:01:43 (3) - this isn't spaced properly

Nightfall
everything looks good, I would prefer some new combos at some points, but meh, naziish
anyways fix breaks
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442
its a nice map

although its like 1 easy and 2 normals, insted of 1easy 1normal 1hard

and the nightfall difficulty gets a little bit too predictable by the time you have finished the map

still its nice so star :)
Thunderstorm
437 posts
Joined May 2009
Thunderstorm
There's only suggestions that can be ignored as well)
Twilight
01:13:664 (2,3) - 1 think, if you move that pattern right under the end of slider, it will look better) just disable a grid snap and move it to the left a bit
01:51:191 (1,3,5,7) - looks a bit wreid, but if it's intended - let it be
02:31:866 (8,10) - ^, try to replace 8 into the start of 10
Nightfall
01:03:063 (9) is it intended? If you replace it in line with 10, i think it'll looks better
everything else looks cool. Nice map, star =)
Azure_Kite
osu! Alumni
3,217 posts
Joined February 2009
Azure_Kite
Here's my mod

Green = Suggestion Red = Check this

Overall: A Background needs to be set in the map so that a thumbnail image is made. Using the storyboarded for backgrounds is great, however, on should still be put in normally as well.

[Daybreak]
01:10:04 (1) - Maybe exten this to the next white tick
01:51:38 (1) - I think it would sound a LOT cooler if you remove one reverse from this and place a note at 01:55:40
01:55:98 (3) - Same with this, just place the note at 01:59:99
02:00:57 (5) - Same as the previous two, only place the note at 02:04:59
02:05:16 (7) - Same as above, but to finish off the combo, I'd probably a note at 02:09:18 and 02:09:47

[Twilight]
No Problems Found :)

[Nightfall]
No Problems Found :)


An epic song, the map is flawless IMO and the storyboard is pretty cool too. You get a nice shiny Star
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
I'm making my own difficulty on this song.
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anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
:3

Download: Nemesis Theory - Rose at Twilight (John12346) [Loogie's Insane].osu
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Nemesis Theory - Rose at Twilight (John12346) [Loogie's Insane].osu
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442
ok first off ive allready modded the other diffs so i'll only do the new one

[loogie's insane]
why is this beatmap sooo samey? at certain points in it i almost lost the will to live >_>

best thing to do would be to think about cutting your current patterns short and mapping some more origanal idea's into it because as it is its rather boreing, here are a few parts

00:09:18 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - thats a bit long for the samepattern to be repeated over and over and over and over >_>

01:14:64 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same pattern as the one above but with i tiny bit bigger spacing, rather boreing srry :(

01:23:82 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this loooong streaming section first made me lol......then yawn

im very sorry if this offends the maker of this map but i cant really mod this when i think the map is soo boreing, your best bet would be to remap or try to fix this somehow, im not trolling flaming and im srry for being so blunt but this map really made me bored :(
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