Raujika - Lost Imagination · forum

Jekate

Topic Starter

Jekate 2013-12-13T03:18:58+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年1月23日 at 9:56:24

Artist: Raujika
Title: Lost Imagination
Tags: PALETTE SOUNDS
BPM: 91
Filesize: 2544kb
Play Time: 01:14
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4.18 stars, 86 notes)
Normal (1.87 stars, 49 notes)

Download: Raujika - Lost Imagination
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
#1
Mapset and storyboard by me
Raujika - Lost Imagination
Genre: Electronic
Album: Lost Imagination

Album Image

Last edited by Jekate 2014-01-23T02:56:46+00:00, edited 18 times in total.

DenoisoGoiso

681 posts

Joined April 2013

DenoisoGoiso 2013-12-13T11:18:44+00:00

Indonesia Mapper xD tunggu mod dari gw!

DenoisoGoiso

681 posts

Joined April 2013

DenoisoGoiso 2013-12-13T11:37:57+00:00

Hi~ Makasih udah M4M!

[General]

hmmm good seems good. but offset still wrong

[Normal]

00:17:182 (1) - Delete nc, because RhyThm not changing. considering add NC at Big white tick (it's named Stanza).
00:21:797 (2) - CTRL + G / Reverse collection. because so hard to catching it
00:39:929 (2,1) - Blanket Propely
00:42:896 (2) - CTRL + G / Reverse collection. because so hard to catching it
00:58:390 (4) - Flow is just not good from before.

[Hard]

CS4?? WTF
00:19:489 (1) - little bit touched HP bar
Image
00:44:874 (3) - why not stack? it's more good. stack with 00:43:555 (1) ?
00:54:764 (2) - Ctrl + G for consistency
01:00:368 (4,5) - DAT JUMP good

huehuehue
Good luck~

Jekate

Topic Starter

Jekate 2013-12-13T12:38:22+00:00

DenoisoGoiso wrote:
Hi~ Makasih udah M4M!

[General]
hmmm good seems good. but offset still wrong

[Normal]
00:17:182 (1) - Delete nc, because RhyThm not changing. considering add NC at Big white tick (it's named Stanza). i think no, because an easy/normal diff should have NC under 5, so i decide to divide 6 combos into two pieces of 3 combos
00:21:797 (2) - CTRL + G / Reverse collection. because so hard to catching it in this diff i use the distance snap 1.3, so it probably your play so you can't catch that beat
00:39:929 (2,1) - Blanket Propely not a blanket in the first place
00:42:896 (2) - CTRL + G / Reverse collection. because so hard to catching it i use the distance snap 1.3, so it probably your play so you can't catch that beat
00:58:390 (4) - Flow is just not good from before. the flow is fine imo
[Hard]
CS4?? WTF WHAT!?
00:19:489 (1) - little bit touched HP bar thanks for reminding, but i use default skin and it doesn't touch the HP bar
Image
00:44:874 (3) - why not stack? it's more good. stack with 00:43:555 (1)? no, no reason to do so
00:54:764 (2) - Ctrl + G for consistency ok and i change the flow a bit
01:00:368 (4,5) - DAT JUMP good YES!?
huehuehue
Good luck~

oke gan terimakasih

i want to rework the SB, but too lazy to do lol

Jekate

Topic Starter

Jekate 2013-12-14T03:52:01+00:00

updated SB, i got an advice from Xinely

change some element size and dimension as the guideline said about SB criteria

sorry for your inconvenient, please re-download as 14/12/2013 for better experience
thank you~

RandF

1,245 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2013-12-14T11:10:58+00:00

From my queue~

[General]

offset is correct? I suggest 14150~14160
Tags suggetion
PALETTE SOUNDS
You may remove "Display epliepsy warning". your SB is not too attacked eyes.

[Normal]

01:01:687 (1,1,1,1) - this consecutive spinners are not good. it looks like negligence
01:09:599 (1,1) - for beginner, it's too difficult because of too short time between spinner and note

[Hard]

00:17:511 (2) - move to x:216 y:188 (stack correctly)
00:31:028 (2) - I prefer to delete

That's a good taste of you to choose Naujika's sound

~Good Luck~

Nazalion

204 posts

Joined January 2013

Nazalion 2013-12-14T11:31:28+00:00

Fasting GD

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Lost Imagination.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51138
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.9
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Lost Imagination
TitleUnicode:Lost Imagination
Artist:Raujika
ArtistUnicode:Raujika
Creator:Jekate
Version:Nazalion
Source:Lost Imagination
Tags:
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Konachan.com - 90831 sample.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
14215,659.340659340659,4,2,1,10,1,0
14216,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
19489,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
30039,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
35643,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
35973,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
36302,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
36632,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
40588,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
51138,-71.4285714285714,4,2,1,60,0,1
61687,-71.4285714285714,4,2,1,60,0,0
61852,-71.4285714285714,4,2,1,50,0,0
62017,-71.4285714285714,4,2,1,5,0,0
63006,-71.4285714285714,4,2,1,30,0,0
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64324,-71.4285714285714,4,2,1,50,0,0
64489,-71.4285714285714,4,2,1,40,0,0
66797,-71.4285714285714,4,2,1,5,0,0
66962,-71.4285714285714,4,2,1,40,0,0
67127,-71.4285714285714,4,2,1,30,0,0
69434,-71.4285714285714,4,2,1,5,0,0
69599,-71.4285714285714,4,2,1,30,0,0
69764,-71.4285714285714,4,2,1,20,0,0
72072,-71.4285714285714,4,2,1,5,0,0
72236,-71.4285714285714,4,2,1,20,0,0


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monggo di coba

Jekate

Topic Starter

Jekate 2013-12-14T16:13:16+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~

[General]
offset is correct? I suggest 14150~14160 thanks. i change the offset into 14155
Tags suggetion
PALETTE SOUNDS added. i know it was label records of raujika
You may remove "Display epliepsy warning". your SB is not too attacked eyes. i thought every SB should put on "Display epilepsy warning" lol, well if you say so, i'll remove that warning in my map
[Normal]
01:01:687 (1,1,1,1) - this consecutive spinners are not good. it looks like negligence ok. changes into a single long spinner
01:09:599 (1,1) - for beginner, it's too difficult because of too short time between spinner and note deleted
[Hard]
00:17:511 (2) - move to x:216 y:188 (stack correctly) i hope now stack correctly
00:31:028 (2) - I prefer to delete i guess no, you still can hear piano sound a bit if you hear carefully
That's a good taste of you to choose Naujika's sound thanks~
~Good Luck~

thanks RandomEffect

Setsurei

1,149 posts

Joined May 2012

Setsurei 2013-12-14T23:58:57+00:00

yo! what a simple SB and relaxing;

[SB Load]
nothing wrong here

[Images File]
rankable resolution size, nothing wrong

[.osb Code]
I'm not quite sure why the black BG suddenly stopped nearly at the back of the song, end result will be like a blink
and it's not suitable for this kind of song. better do a fading out bits by bits

the usage of SB/01.png can be removed, decreasing SB load and also the SB file
instead use Fade on the other images
by putting the original BG to a fade state, you can create a black BG out of it.

this code is a waste:

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\01.png",320,240
 F,0,1357,1687,0,1
 S,0,1357,72236,1.099097
 F,0,1687,14214,1
 F,0,14214,19489,1,0
 F,0,19489,,0
 F,0,59050,61687,0,1
 F,0,61687,,1
 F,0,61852,,0
 F,0,61852,72236,0,1

Kiai pulse effect?
add these to the .osb, put it below the original 04.jpg block code

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\04.jpg",320,240
 L,51078,8
  F,0,0,659,1,0
  S,0,0,659,1.075,1.2
  F,0,659,1318,0
  S,0,659,1318,1

by using loop, I can save 8x4 lines because it repeats again and again

this is how Loop works:
L,51078,8 >> 51078 starting point, 8 is how much you repeat the block code
after that, the parameter of each offset was decreased by 51078, for example you want to start an effect at 00:51:078 - 00:51:737 -
because it starts at 00:51:078 - the Loop value starts there, it will be 0 (51078 - 51078 = 0)
after that you need to decrease the value 51737 - 51078 = 659. result > F,0,0,659,1,0

oh right, pulsing is quite troublesome. don't forget to add epilepsy warning

this is what I did

this end result is similar to your SB
I snapped some of the starting point to the stanza to make it tidy

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"Konachan.com - 90831 sample.jpg",320,240
 S,0,0,,0.625
 F,0,0,968,1
 F,0,968,1627,1,0
 F,0,61627,61792,0,1
 F,0,61792,77451,1,0
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\04.jpg",320,240
 S,0,14154,,1.075
 F,0,14154,19429,0,1
 F,0,19429,58990,1
 F,0,58990,61792,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\04.jpg",320,240
 L,51078,8
  F,0,0,659,1,0
  S,0,0,659,1.075,1.2
  F,0,659,1318,0
  S,0,659,1318,1
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\03.png",436,322
 F,0,3605,6242,0,1
 F,0,6242,8880,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\02.png",478,372
 F,0,6242,8880,0,1
 F,0,8880,11517,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

that's all, good luck for ranked!
if you don't understand, don't hesitate to PM me in-game (:

Jekate

Topic Starter

Jekate 2013-12-15T03:12:41+00:00

Setsurei wrote:

yo! what a simple SB and relaxing;

[SB Load]
nothing wrong here

[Images File]
rankable resolution size, nothing wrong

[.osb Code]
I'm not quite sure why the black BG suddenly stopped nearly at the back of the song, end result will be like a blink
and it's not suitable for this kind of song. better do a fading out bits by bits

the usage of SB/01.png can be removed, decreasing SB load and also the SB file
instead use Fade on the other images
by putting the original BG to a fade state, you can create a black BG out of it.

this code is a waste:
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\01.png",320,240
 F,0,1357,1687,0,1
 S,0,1357,72236,1.099097
 F,0,1687,14214,1
 F,0,14214,19489,1,0
 F,0,19489,,0
 F,0,59050,61687,0,1
 F,0,61687,,1
 F,0,61852,,0
 F,0,61852,72236,0,1
Kiai pulse effect?
add these to the .osb, put it below the original 04.jpg block code
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\04.jpg",320,240
 L,51078,8
  F,0,0,659,1,0
  S,0,0,659,1.075,1.2
  F,0,659,1318,0
  S,0,659,1318,1
by using loop, I can save 8x4 lines because it repeats again and again

this is how Loop works:
L,51078,8 >> 51078 starting point, 8 is how much you repeat the block code
after that, the parameter of each offset was decreased by 51078, for example you want to start an effect at 00:51:078 - 00:51:737 -
because it starts at 00:51:078 - the Loop value starts there, it will be 0 (51078 - 51078 = 0)
after that you need to decrease the value 51737 - 51078 = 659. result > F,0,0,659,1,0

oh right, pulsing is quite troublesome. don't forget to add epilepsy warning
this is what I did
this end result is similar to your SB
I snapped some of the starting point to the stanza to make it tidy
[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"Konachan.com - 90831 sample.jpg",320,240
 S,0,0,,0.625
 F,0,0,968,1
 F,0,968,1627,1,0
 F,0,61627,61792,0,1
 F,0,61792,77451,1,0
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\04.jpg",320,240
 S,0,14154,,1.075
 F,0,14154,19429,0,1
 F,0,19429,58990,1
 F,0,58990,61792,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\04.jpg",320,240
 L,51078,8
  F,0,0,659,1,0
  S,0,0,659,1.075,1.2
  F,0,659,1318,0
  S,0,659,1318,1
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\03.png",436,322
 F,0,3605,6242,0,1
 F,0,6242,8880,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\02.png",478,372
 F,0,6242,8880,0,1
 F,0,8880,11517,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples
that's all, good luck for ranked!
if you don't understand, don't hesitate to PM me in-game (:

thanks Setsurei for such a wonderful SB advice

it looks better and smoothly~

deleted 01.png from SB folder
added some pulse effect as Setsurei mention above and i added some pulse effect on 00:29:979 - and 00:40:528
turn back on "epilepsy warning"

SB updated.

RatedNC17

397 posts

Joined May 2010

RatedNC17 2013-12-15T05:32:20+00:00

Hello (M4M)

[Normal]
Looks really good to me but the slider's tilt at 00:34:594 (2) seems unnecessary since you can't really tell if it's tilted or not

[Hard]
nothing to fix here to me

[General]
This is a really good beatmap and it's relaxing and love the SB

have a star (╯°□°）╯︵

!

Jekate

Topic Starter

Jekate 2013-12-15T06:53:19+00:00

RatedNC17 wrote:
Hello (M4M)

[Normal]
Looks really good to me but the slider's tilt at 00:34:594 (2) seems unnecessary since you can't really tell if it's tilted or not no changes, i do it intentionaly

[Hard]
nothing to fix here to me

[General]
This is a really good beatmap and it's relaxing and love the SB thanks~
have a star (╯°□°）╯︵ !

thanks RatedNC17 for mod and the star

MeraMiPoP_old

155 posts

Joined October 2013

MeraMiPoP_old 2013-12-15T07:14:00+00:00

Hi~~

General:
I think your timing is too early, suggesting +50
but 00:28:051 (3,4,5) - these three notes are earlier than the other notes, so I think the timing points should be
BPM 91 Offset 14205
BPM 91 Offset 28011
BPM 91 Offset 30029
and select all green sections, then +50

Normal:
00:28:670 (1,2) - better to use slider, so it's more friendly to beginners (since its timing is different)
00:33:325 (1,3) - align these sliders to put (2) in the middle?
00:37:281 (4) - and put this here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1172886
01:01:677 (1) - remove the 5% sections in the spinner, leaving a gradual fadeout :3

Hard:
00:19:479 (1) - 91bpm + 0.5x speed is really slow, I suggest using 0.75x here, and since it's Hard diff, shouldn't make it too easy
00:21:787 (3,4,5) - in the music, we can hear (4) goes down in tune, and (5) goes up, so this position is a better flow: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1172854
00:23:435 - I think the slider should end at 00:22:776 , and make a circle here
01:01:018 (5) - this spacing is too large..? placing here should be sufficient http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1172858
01:05:963 (1,2) - You can stop the spinner earlier and add a slider fitting the music http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1172873 (1.0x sv).
01:08:930 (1) - similar as above, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1172875

nice storyboard :3

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-12-15T09:32:27+00:00

Did an Irc mod with Jekate

Use Indonesian language

15:18 Xinely: bisa irc skrg?
15:18 Jekate: bisa
15:19 Xinely: oke bntar
15:20 Xinely: ambil donat sama minum lol
15:20 Xinely: oh iya mnt link map lgi dong
15:20 Jekate: santai aja~
15:20 Xinely: krn udh d cek setsu, mw lht :3
15:20 *Jekate is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/336868 Raujika - Lost Imagination]
15:21 Jekate: yg masih buat bingung itu offset nya ;w;
15:22 Xinely: kalo yg pro timing itu vipto sama charles yang BAT
15:23 Xinely: oh iya mnt beatofike aja
15:23 Jekate: should i ask them?
15:23 Jekate: wkwk ga ada yg kenal ;w;
15:23 Xinely: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/163861&start=15
15:23 Xinely: queue kok
15:23 Xinely: xD
15:25 Xinely: siap? :3
15:26 Jekate: ada tlpn
15:27 Jekate: bntr
15:31 Xinely: kalo udh, blg ya
15:32 Jekate: yuk
15:34 Xinely: btw suara yg mirip2 kyk 00:29:979 - kan lbh louder dari yang biasanya km hitsound whistle (yg km pulse aja deh intinya)
15:34 Xinely: http://puu.sh/5Nd80.wav pke soft-finish ini biar moar sense gtu + gk boring
15:34 Jekate: custom sound?
15:35 Xinely: iyap
15:35 Jekate: finish biasa 2loud
15:35 Xinely: ini custom kok
15:35 Xinely: biasanya aku pke kalo pas lagu relax
15:35 Jekate: oke oke
15:36 Xinely: general sisanya oke
15:36 Xinely: mari masuk ke Normal diff
15:39 Xinely: 00:14:154 (1,2,3,1,2) - gk mw mengecewakan sih tp aku harus blg. km kan whistle tiap 2nd whitetick sama yang ke 
15:39 Xinely: *4
15:39 Xinely: to be honest, malah suaranya yang ke 2 dan ke  4 itu yang fade/ilang.. lbh keras yang ke 1 sama ke 3.. imo sih mending d atur tiap 1 sama 3 aja
15:40 Jekate: bntar aku periksa
15:41 Xinely: 00:19:429 (1) - ini imo pas sih pke soft finish yg tadi q kasih.. yaa imo sih xD
15:41 Jekate:  imooooo xD
15:41 Jekate: bntar2 masih bingung belum konek
15:44 Xinely: oke~
15:45 Jekate: 00:14:154 (1,2,3,1,2) - untuk yg itu udah di atur uang whistle nya
15:45 Jekate: di ubah 1 sama 3
15:45 Jekate: *ulang
15:47 Xinely: oke
15:48 Xinely: orz mouse lagi gaje, tiba2 mati
15:48 Jekate: btw yg ini 00:19:429 (1) - di kasih s.finish nya di head atau tail?
15:48 Xinely: head :3
15:48 Xinely: kalo tail whistle aja cukup
15:48 Jekate: wkwk
15:48 Xinely: http://puu.sh/5NdDi.jpg wat the fak gue ngechat pke mandarin LOL
15:50 Jekate: and i don't understand a single words ;w;
15:50 Jekate: itu waktu irc mod jg?
15:50 Xinely: Jekate pro cuma gk tau 1 :O
15:50 Xinely: enggak, barusan lol
15:51 Jekate: pro apaan ?
15:51 Xinely: btw 00:29:979 - finish on head jg. pokoknya suara crsytal yang menggema itu perlu finish xD
15:51 Jekate: ohh wkwk
15:52 Jekate: oke oke
15:53 Jekate: oh iya itu cuma finish aja kan? bukan finish+whistle?
15:53 Xinely: nope
15:53 Xinely: kalo tambah whistle malah berisik :3
15:54 Jekate: rightt
15:54 Xinely: 00:37:231 (4) - khusus ini finish d kepala
15:54 Xinely: suara crystalnya jadi keras soalnya
15:56 Xinely: 00:40:528 - as usual krn menggema, finish ~
15:57 Xinely: 00:47:122 (3) - imo biar flownya lbh gk kyk d force. move to 444,236 terus tailnya 476,120
15:57 Xinely: ^ kalo d ikuti, circle berikutnya itu spacingnya d fix yaa
15:58 Xinely: 00:51:078 - gema, finish /w/
16:00 Xinely: 00:58:330 (4) - buat ini, coba d utak atik dikit biar flownya lbh enak. mgkn kyk http://puu.sh/5Ne3i.jpg. aku sendiri gk ada ide =_= .
16:01 Xinely: 01:00:968 (2) - buat ini, enakan flownya kalo d taruh d 400,116.. somehow lbh enak aja. kalo main. entar tau sndiri kok kenapa :3
16:01 Jekate: wdw bnyk yg aneh flow nya ;w;
16:02 Xinely: gk jg sih, lbh mending daripada first map ku.. malapetaka itu LOL
16:02 Jekate: lool
16:03 Xinely: 01:01:627 (1) - kalo personal taste ku.. spinnya kepanjangan suer.. bayangin aja kalo newbie baru maen. terus ngespin segini lamanya. pasti kesemutan dluan lol
16:03 Xinely: kalo mw d hapus terus pke circle slider. do it as you did in previous.. kan suara mirip2 ;3
16:04 Xinely: Normalnya segitu aja ~
16:04 Xinely: kalo udah slesai blg ya, kita pindah ke Hard
16:05 Jekate: bntar2 agak lama edit nya 
16:06 Xinely: gpp, aku msh tduran sambil nunggu :P
16:09 Jekate: 00:58:330 (4) - untuk yg itu ga diubah deh, lbh prefer slider lurus
16:10 Xinely: oke, krn gmn pun jg mod itu suggestion xD
16:11 Jekate: wkwk bagian spin nya bgmn tuh, apa aku bagi dua aja spin nya?
16:11 Xinely: bagi 2 jg boleh ><
16:12 Xinely: yg first 01:06:902 - stop d sini
16:12 Xinely: 01:07:561 - lanjut spin ke 2 disni sampe abis sesuai yang km lakuin itu xD
16:14 Jekate: spinner nya perlu dikasih sound?
16:14 Jekate: whistle mungkin
16:15 Xinely: sip boleh
16:17 Jekate: btw star rating nya turun dr 1.6 jd 1.3
16:18 Xinely: lol
16:18 Xinely: it's normally
16:19 Xinely: bpm rendah
16:20 Jekate: sip deh~
16:20 Xinely: skrg Hard?
16:20 Jekate: boleh
16:21 Xinely: oh iya suggestion hitsound tadi Jekate msh inget?
16:22 Xinely: harusnya d reply d Hard jg biar konsisten, cuma saya males ngenulis satu2 lagi www
16:22 Jekate: inget dikit
16:22 Xinely: entar kan bisa bc chat ini terus ngereply sendiri
16:22 Xinely: oke aku lbh fokus lht rhythm skrg
16:23 Jekate: yg 2 dan 4 di ubah jd 1 dan 3, add finish di setiap nada yg ada efek pulse nya
16:23 Xinely: yap
16:23 Xinely: and yg khusus 1 yang d tempat ke 4 itu.. entar q ksh tau deh sambil cek
16:24 Xinely: 00:28:001 (3) - harus d NC. spacingnya kan kecil itu namanya anti jump. biasanya kejebak kalo gk d NC
16:24 Jekate: oke2
16:25 Xinely: imo sih Hard mu ini kegampangan krn objectnya dikit
16:25 Xinely: 00:40:198 - add note aja? ofc harus re mapping placement buat jumpnya ;3;
16:26 Xinely: 00:39:209 (4) - jgn lupa d NC krn anti jump
16:26 Jekate: ;w;
16:26 *Jekate cries
16:27 Xinely: 00:49:759 (4) - lagi2 harus NC krn anti jump
16:27 Xinely: okelah add note lbh byk itu buat map selanjutnya aja
16:28 Xinely: 00:37:231 (3) - yg buat ini finish d kepala
16:29 Jekate: oke2
16:29 Xinely: 01:00:968 (5) - jump nya jauh bgt, ngalah2 in insane
16:29 Xinely: reduce dong ><
16:29 Jekate: wkwk
16:29 Xinely: sisanya acceptable sih xD
16:30 Xinely: krn first map, saya gk bisa ngemod sesuka hati buat ngatur flow kyk biasanya d mod ku ><
16:30 Jekate: yesh xD
16:30 Xinely: jadi cuma nekenin yang perlu d fix, jadi skrg udh fine sih o.o

Good Luck

Jekate

Topic Starter

Jekate 2013-12-16T02:17:19+00:00

updated~
and thanks

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2013-12-18T01:10:34+00:00

Timing Request!

BPM: 91.000 (correct)
Offset: 14,165 (+10)

Good luck with your map!

Jekate

Topic Starter

Jekate 2013-12-18T04:54:09+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
Timing Request!

BPM: 91.000 (correct)
Offset: 14,165 (+10)

Good luck with your map!

thanks for correcting BeatofIke

fixed timing, i hope no more complaint about BPM and offset lol

El SolarBeam

1,022 posts

Joined September 2011

El SolarBeam 2013-12-18T09:16:12+00:00

my mod as requested
(sorry I can't mod the hitsounding since I'm too noob on it)

[General]

Keeping thing fast and simple, it really seems like you orz. Well, but the positive point is at least the map has fewer mistakes, so let's see how it goes.

Remove "Lost Imagination" from the source, since it's the name of its album, not the source. The source field is used if the song comes from a media like video game, anime, etc.
Maybe you deserve a better combo colors which fit the background, try copy this one to every .osu file
```
Combo1 : 255,128,0
Combo2 : 128,0,255
Combo3 : 0,128,255
Combo4 : 251,45,45
```

[Storyboard]

Um.. actually I cannot accept the fact that this storyboard has no concept at all. I understand some storyboarders are just putting up images they find fitting the theme (such SB from a video game, eroge, etc. which is an obvious source), but well, for the time being, I'll go with your SB's pace.
Let's see.. the first simple thing I want to point out is:
- Remove "SB/01.jpg" since you didn't use it at all
- Remove the image "Konachan.com - 174128 aqua_hair boots braids hatsune_miku inoki landscape long_hair night scarf scenic sky snow stars tears vocaloid.jpg" since you had the one with proper size as "SB/04.jpg"
- This one isn't really necessary, but it's better to change the name "Konachan.com - 90831 sample" (the one that you use as the bg) into "background.jpg" ,then change the code in the .osb file:

For the concept, I'll tell you in-game later since that's quite a long step to do. But simply put, this is the storyboarding concept that I thought of:
- Scene 1 : we see a girl sleeping calmly in the sleeping room, start from 00:14:164 until 00:29:329
- Transition 1 : we fly from the sleeping room into the sky, start from 00:29:329 until 00:29:989
- Scene 2 : we see a sky with some pulse effect, start from 00:29:989
- Transition 2 : we fall back to the sleeping room, start from 01:01:637 01:02:296
- Scene 3 : same as scene 1, start from 01:02:296 until 01:14:824
Simple thing, but it's necessary to make others understand the concept of the SB (especially a dynamic SB with some different images)

Ah, one thing left. I think it's better to reduce some pulse on the kiai (unless you want to imitate StrangeProgram, I won't recommend this). Some of the pulse you should remove:
00:52:406
00:55:044
00:57:681
01:00:318
Why I mention those point? Because it's located on a smaller white tick (in design tab) and some of them located on the lower sound of the music. And last, the music gives a calm feeling, so it's not good to have too many pulse

[Normal]

00:14:164 until 00:19:110 Lower the volume of this section
00:14:164 (1,2,3,4,5) I'm sure it's better like this
SPOILER
00:17:132 (1) Any reason why put NC here?
00:33:285 (1,2,3,4) Make it more symmetrical
00:39:879 It's better to blanket it properly
SPOILER
00:43:835 (1,2) It's better for these sliders to have less bending
00:47:132 (3) Make it curve, it's nicer to see
SPOILER
00:57:022 (3,4) How about this one? Gives a better flow imo
SPOILER
01:01:637 (1,2,1,2,1,2) Seems boring, why not variate it a little? (except you're too lazy to do so)

[Hard]

00:14:164 until 00:19:110 Lower the volume of this section
00:16:143 (4,2) Stack properly
00:19:439 You sure want to use 0.50x SV here? Personally, I think it really break the flow. Maybe 0.60x is enough
00:28:011 (1,2,3) This makes a bad flow, spread them out
00:56:033 (5,6) ctrl+g, try to make better flow
00:58:340 (1) No, I don't think this slider fits the music, change it into a circle instead
01:00:318 (4,5) Watch your jump, don't go too far in hard diff
01:03:945 (3) ctrl+g and make (1) a bit further, you'll see why on the picture
SPOILER
01:06:582 (3) ctrl+g, makes better flow
SPOILER

good luck, pm me in-game if you have any question~

Jekate

Topic Starter

Jekate 2013-12-19T02:54:47+00:00

El SolarBeam wrote:
my mod as requested
(sorry I can't mod the hitsounding since I'm too noob on it) don't worry my hitsound prety good

[General]

Keeping thing fast and simple, it really seems like you orz. Well, but the positive point is at least the map has fewer mistakes, so let's see how it goes.
Remove "Lost Imagination" from the source, since it's the name of its album, not the source. The source field is used if the song comes from a media like video game, anime, etc. ok, since the guideline said so
Maybe you deserve a better combo colors which fit the background, try copy this one to every .osu file
Combo1 : 255,128,0
Combo2 : 128,0,255
Combo3 : 0,128,255
Combo4 : 251,45,45
nice colours, but sorry too bright and unnatural
[Storyboard]

Um.. actually I cannot accept the fact that this storyboard has no concept at all. I understand some storyboarders are just putting up images they find fitting the theme (such SB from a video game, eroge, etc. which is an obvious source), but well, for the time being, I'll go with your SB's pace.
Let's see.. the first simple thing I want to point out is:
- Remove "SB/01.jpg" since you didn't use it at all deleted already, maybe you have that from previous version
- Remove the image "Konachan.com - 174128 aqua_hair boots braids hatsune_miku inoki landscape long_hair night scarf scenic sky snow stars tears vocaloid.jpg" since you had the one with proper size as "SB/04.jpg" deleted already, maybe you have that from previous version and already resize too
- This one isn't really necessary, but it's better to change the name "Konachan.com - 90831 sample" (the one that you use as the bg) into "background.jpg" ,then change the code in the .osb file: indeed not necessary

For the concept, I'll tell you in-game later since that's quite a long step to do. But simply put, this is the storyboarding concept that I thought of:
- Scene 1 : we see a girl sleeping calmly in the sleeping room, start from 00:14:164 until 00:29:329
- Transition 1 : we fly from the sleeping room into the sky, start from 00:29:329 until 00:29:989
- Scene 2 : we see a sky with some pulse effect, start from 00:29:989
- Transition 2 : we fall back to the sleeping room, start from 01:01:637 01:02:296
- Scene 3 : same as scene 1, start from 01:02:296 until 01:14:824
Simple thing, but it's necessary to make others understand the concept of the SB (especially a dynamic SB with some different images) how can you read my mind about the concept lol

Ah, one thing left. I think it's better to reduce some pulse on the kiai (unless you want to imitate StrangeProgram, I won't recommend this). Some of the pulse you should remove:
00:52:406
00:55:044
00:57:681
01:00:318
Why I mention those point? Because it's located on a smaller white tick (in design tab) and some of them located on the lower sound of the music. And last, the music gives a calm feeling, so it's not good to have too many pulse well i don't try to imitate anything, i need more effect on kiai time because it was the climax of the song but maybe i will try something diffrent then if you said so, thanks for noticing

[Normal]

00:14:164 until 00:19:110 Lower the volume of this section ok, lower 10%
00:14:164 (1,2,3,4,5) I'm sure it's better like this ok, a bit improve
SPOILER
00:17:132 (1) Any reason why put NC here? for consistency, in which there's no combo above 5 in this diff, so i cut 6 combos into two pieces of three combos
00:33:285 (1,2,3,4) Make it more symmetrical ok, a bit improve
00:39:879 It's better to blanket it properly i hope it's blanked well
SPOILER
00:43:835 (1,2) It's better for these sliders to have less bending no
00:47:132 (3) Make it curve, it's nicer to see no
SPOILER
00:57:022 (3,4) How about this one? Gives a better flow imo no, it will changes the next flow
SPOILER
01:01:637 (1,2,1,2,1,2) Seems boring, why not variate it a little? (except you're too lazy to do so)you know me so well and no change

[Hard]

00:14:164 until 00:19:110 Lower the volume of this section ok, lower 10%
00:16:143 (4,2) Stack properly ok
00:19:439 You sure want to use 0.50x SV here? Personally, I think it really break the flow. Maybe 0.60x is enough yes, it's not really a problem here, since sv 0.5 and 0.6 are not that much diffrent
00:28:011 (1,2,3) This makes a bad flow, spread them out no, i put some anti jumps for variation and it's located in same rhythm with the song
00:56:033 (5,6) ctrl+g, try to make better flow no
00:58:340 (1) No, I don't think this slider fits the music, change it into a circle instead no
01:00:318 (4,5) Watch your jump, don't go too far in hard diff ok, reduce
01:03:945 (3) ctrl+g and make (1) a bit further, you'll see why on the picture ok
SPOILER
01:06:582 (3) ctrl+g, makes better flow no
SPOILER
good luck, pm me in-game if you have any question~

thanks El SolarBeam

Shiranai

2,186 posts

Joined August 2012

Shiranai 2013-12-20T07:14:11+00:00

Hii najis

PM request~

[General]
If you looking for a custom colors, maybe you can try mine, here:

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,227,145
Combo2 : 255,255,255
Combo3 : 206,157,255
Combo4 : 255,149,202

But the brown color (combo4) doesn't seems fit with the blue stars background, so I sugest you to use combo1, combo2, and combo3 on blue stars background then add combo4 while the background change again into brown sleeping girl, It's looks good and fit the background.

01:12:186 until 01:14:824 I think you need gradually lower the sound 5% at this point 01:13:505 - (15%) then 01:14:164 - (10%) and then 01:14:824 - (5%) because the song seems fade away

[Normal]
Move up this slider 00:34:604 (2) - a bit, 2 grids maybe almost out of screen imo

[Hard]
01:10:208 (1) - Why not same rhythm as 01:07:571 (1,2,3) - I think It should have same rhythm

I don't know about SBing or something like that, but you did a great work nice background and concept.
Good map, good SB, and good luck~

And stars

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