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Kodomo No Jikan OP - Rettsu! Ohime-sama Dakko

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ZTX93
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ZTX93
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lunes, 16 de noviembre de 2009 at 12:29:47 a.m.

Artist: Eri Kitamura
Title: Rettsu! Ohime-sama Dakko
Source: Anime
Tags: Kodomo No Jikan Rin Kokonoe Eri Kitamura Opening OP
BPM: 95
Filesize: 16731kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (3,77 stars, 136 notes)
  2. Hard (4,97 stars, 229 notes)
  3. Normal (4,72 stars, 165 notes)
Download: Eri Kitamura - Rettsu! Ohime-sama Dakko
Download: Eri Kitamura - Rettsu! Ohime-sama Dakko (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Kodomo No Jikan OP Theme

Edit 1:
Followed Most Of j35u5891221's Suggestions...

Edit 2:
Changed Some Hit-Circles x2 Into Sliders... (Normal Diff)

Edit 3:
Removed 2 Supah-Fast Spinners... (Hard Diff)

Edit 4:
Added A Different Background For Each Difficulty...
Added ComboBursts PNG's...
Added Spinner-Circle, Spinner-metre, Spinner-Background, Spinner-Approachcircle, Spinner-Spin PNG's...
Thinkin' About Makin' Hitcircle's Skin...
And... Just w8ting Now... (^-^)

Edit 5:
Followed miccoliasms's Suggestions...

Edit 6:
Re-Snapped Some Parts...

Edit 7:
Used Alace's BPM and Offset...
Removed Da "Unrankable Stuff"...
Reduced Video Size...

Edit 8:
Changed Artist Name...

Edit 9:
Some Lil Changes On All Diffs...

Edit 10:
Followed animask's Suggestions...
Last edited by ZTX93 , edited 22 times in total.
Jesss
814 posts
Joined November 2008
Jesss
Gracias por "promocionar" el map, daré estrella porque tiene buen potencial (está bien hecho)

Pero ahora voy al grano con los detalles y errores :x (xD)

en General:
SPOILER
1- Easy y normal están sin vídeo :!:
2- debiste multiplicar x2 el bpm principal de la canción, el mix meister BPM analyzer también me arrojó 95.01, pero es un BPM muy lento para esta canción

Easy:
SPOILER
1. pon los circles un poquitico más pequeños.
2. sliders pegados, sigue la recomendación anterior y haz respace del map, ya que es una dificultad easy, debe ser un map amigable con los jugadores nuevos de osu! es difícil hacer que lean los sliders tan pegados.
3. de resto no veo más errores "fatales"

Normal:
SPOILER
1- 00:24:01 (1) - ese slider sobra, no encaja con los vocales.
2- 00:34:75 (2) - no usó bien el spacing, sólo muévelo un poco a la derecha y quedará bien
3- 00:35:38 (3) - como consecuencia de la recomendación 2, ^
4- 00:42:88 (1) - Spinner a "destiempo", generalmente van en el beat principal (blanco) y corte 1/4 de beat
5- 00:56:22 (6,7,8) - no me gusta ese reversazo, es un map normal ;) no hard
6- 00:58:12 (13) - wow, debió hacer un slider retorcido que un slider ilusión
7- 01:01:59 (3) - ^
8- 01:02:22 (4) - Sobra ese circle, y el spinner muévelo hacia este tiempo.
9- 01:08:22 (13) - lo mismo que dije en punto 6 y 7
10- 01:11:69 (12) - lea los puntos 6 y 7.
11- 01:16:75 (11) - ^
después Seguiré redactando hard, ya que en breve tengo que salir ^^
ZTX93
32 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
ZTX93

j35u5891221 wrote:

- Easy y normal están sin vídeo :!:
errda... jaja gracias... no lo noté... debié pasar cuando recomprimí el vid...

j35u5891221 wrote:

2- debiste multiplicar x2 el bpm principal de la canción, el mix meister BPM analyzer también me arrojó 95.01, pero es un BPM muy lento para esta canción
uhm... la verdad creo que le quedan bien los 95, el cambio lo quise hacer solo en donde use el kiai...

j35u5891221 wrote:

1. pon los circles un poquitico más pequeños.
Fixed


j35u5891221 wrote:

sliders pegados, sigue la recomendación anterior y haz respace del map, ya que es una dificultad easy, debe ser un map amigable con los jugadores nuevos de osu! es difícil hacer que lean los sliders tan pegados.
Fixed... supongo...

j35u5891221 wrote:

Normal:
1- 00:24:01 (1) - ese slider sobra, no encaja con los vocales.
Fixed

j35u5891221 wrote:

2- 00:34:75 (2) - no usó bien el spacing, sólo muévelo un poco a la derecha y quedará bien
3- 00:35:38 (3) - como consecuencia de la recomendación 2, ^
Fixed...

j35u5891221 wrote:

4- 00:42:88 (1) - Spinner a "destiempo", generalmente van en el beat principal (blanco) y corte 1/4 de beat
Uhm... a destiempo el inicio o el final?... porque lo puse ahi para que encajara con el "Honne" de la vocal...


j35u5891221 wrote:

5- 00:56:22 (6,7,8) - no me gusta ese reversazo, es un map normal ;) no hard
jeje eso no es algo tan hard... supongo q solo necesita un poco de atención de quien lo juega...

j35u5891221 wrote:

6- 00:58:12 (13) - wow, debió hacer un slider retorcido que un slider ilusión
7- 01:01:59 (3) - ^
9- 01:08:22 (13) - lo mismo que dije en punto 6 y 7
10- 01:11:69 (12) - lea los puntos 6 y 7.
11- 01:16:75 (11) - ^
jaja tampoco es tan hard... ademas la extension de los sliders que hice no da para sacar un miss llevando el mouse al fin del slider, no se sale del rango del mouse... y personalmente... los retorcidos los uso como ultimo recurso... no me gusta su aspecto... almenos no de la mayoria...unos me quedan bien... otros dejan mucho que desear...


j35u5891221 wrote:

8- 01:02:22 (4) - Sobra ese circle, y el spinner muévelo hacia este tiempo.
Fixed... ahi si me fallo el oido pero de que forma... tnx... x)

j35u5891221 wrote:

después Seguiré redactando hard, ya que en breve tengo que salir ^^
jeje no hay afan... antes gracias por el tiempo dedicado...
miccoliasms
491 posts
Joined April 2009
miccoliasms
I like kodomo no jikan!XD

It's all Suggestions!

[Easy]
00:09:51 (8) - new combo
00:10:77 (1) - remove new combo
00:13:61 (5) - new combo
00:16:77 (10) - ^
00:30:82 (6) - ^
00:36:82 (5) - ^
00:44:08 (6) - ^
00:46:77 (10) - ^

[Normal]
00:08:86 (8) - this slider extend up to 00:09:25
00:14:54 (10) - new combo
00:15:17 (1) - remove new combo
00:16:75 (4) - new combo
00:26:70 (6) - ^
00:36:80 (7) - ^
01:13:90 (1) - remove new combo

nice map! star~ :lol:
ZTX93
32 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
ZTX93

miccoliasms wrote:

I like kodomo no jikan!XD
Lol...i luv it :D ... actually im watching it again :) and i decided to map some songs... this is just da first one... ;)

miccoliasms wrote:

[Easy]
00:09:51 (8) - new combo
00:10:77 (1) - remove new combo
00:13:61 (5) - new combo
Fixed.

miccoliasms wrote:

00:16:77 (10) - ^
lol... srry... but.. i cant see da 10 xD i think you meant 7... so i changed it...

miccoliasms wrote:

00:30:82 (6) - ^
00:36:82 (5) - ^
00:44:08 (6) - ^
Fixed.


miccoliasms wrote:

00:46:77 (10) - ^
Same... there was no 10... u meant 5... didnt u? :D ... whatever... added new combo at (5) ;)

miccoliasms wrote:

[Normal]
00:08:86 (8) - this slider extend up to 00:09:25
00:14:54 (10) - new combo
00:15:17 (1) - remove new combo
00:16:75 (4) - new combo
00:26:70 (6) - ^
00:36:80 (7) - ^
01:13:90 (1) - remove new combo
Fixed.

miccoliasms wrote:

nice map! star~ :lol:
Thank you! ;) ;)
Alace
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2008
Alace
BPM:95.00 (190.00)
Offset:700
resnap all notes by 1/4 divisor snap
but you still need to recheck everything because the timing has a big off

<Hard>
01:02:22 (10,11) - epic If you don`t care about if this map will be ranked you can keep it (unrankable stuff)
00:18:96 (1) - too short
01:26:30 (1) - too short
Last edited by Alace , edited 1 time in total.
-SiN-
osu! Alumni
1,722 posts
Joined May 2008
-SiN-
ow..
Artist name: Eri Kitamura
Reduce the video or .mp3 file size. max beatmap size is 20mb
ZTX93
32 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
ZTX93

Alace wrote:

BPM:95.00 (190.00)
Offset:700
resnap all notes by 1/4 divisor snap
but you still need to recheck everything because the timing has a big off
0k... Fixed... And Re-Snapped...

Alace wrote:

<Hard>
01:02:22 (10,11) - epic If you don`t care about if this map will be ranked you can keep it (unrankable stuff)
lol... i don't even know why i kept those...

Alace wrote:

00:18:96 (1) - too short
01:26:30 (1) - too short
tought they were rankable cos i've seen some of them... :cry: :cry: :D

-SiN- wrote:

ow..
Artist name: Eri Kitamura
Reduce the video or .mp3 file size. max beatmap size is 20mb
Video size reduced... but... i got a problem here changing the artist name...

i changed da name at "song setup" tab for every difficulty and then i tried to re-upload and it said that i had "exceeded my submission cap" (2 unranked maps)... so idk what to do cos i rly want to keep the other map too... :cry: ...
am i doin' it wrong?
-SiN-
osu! Alumni
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Joined May 2008
-SiN-
full submit?
ZTX93
32 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
ZTX93

-SiN- wrote:

full submit?
lol nevermind...i thought i had clicked full submission... a lil mistake...:oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops:
srry about that...
PicoLo
188 posts
Joined July 2009
PicoLo
~Star. ;)
ZTX93
32 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
ZTX93

PicoLo wrote:

~Star. ;)
Thank you~ :)
lyh_old
25 posts
Joined July 2009
lyh_old
Nice map! :)

But I have to say: If you turn off the video when you play Easy, you'll see the background disappear in a weird way at 0:52:93..... (It won't disappear in editing mode)
I don't know why. Maybe it's an unknown bug of osu...
My solution: Either change the background or change the filename... (or wait until the bug is fixed by peppy)

P.S. It seems that you have "Reduced Video Size" with Windows Movie Maker... If I were you I'll just remove the soundtrack of the video to reduce the size ... :P
ZTX93
32 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
ZTX93

lyh wrote:

Nice map! :)
Thank you~~ ;)

lyh wrote:

But I have to say: If you turn off the video when you play Easy, you'll see the background disappear in a weird way at 0:52:93..... (It won't disappear in editing mode)
I don't know why. Maybe it's an unknown bug of osu...
My solution: Either change the background or change the filename... (or wait until the bug is fixed by peppy)
uhm... i'll check that... tnx for the advice... :D

Edit 2: Ok.. I Checked And Fixed It... Thank u~~ ;)

lyh wrote:

P.S. It seems that you have "Reduced Video Size" with Windows Movie Maker... If I were you I'll just remove the soundtrack of the video to reduce the size ... :P
lol... i don't use movie maker... but anyways... i think i'll do what u said about the audio... tnx too... ;)

Edit 2: I Did It... Lol... Just 2MB Less Than B4... But... Thats Better Than Nothing... :D
Last edited by ZTX93 , edited 1 time in total.
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
fuuuu-

I was gonna map this later.
This is like my favorite song.
This song and me have history and stuff :?
I love this song so much I would fandub this just to make my own beatmap with this song.

( Might as well mod while I'm here )

[Easy]
01:12:38 (8) - Too far...place it closer to 7

[Normal]
00:08:27 (6,7) - Reduce claps by 1/2 ( too much claps )
00:13:33 (8,9) - ^
00:19:17 (7) - Remove whistle at the end and replace at the beginning. End the slider with a finish
Re-add break
00:52:17 (7) - New Combo
00:57:22 (11) - ^
00:58:17 (3) - ....the slider does feel a bit weird to me...
01:14:91 (5) - Add a finish or replace with a whistle.
01:16:17 (8) - Keep whistle or add a finish
01:17:43 (12) - Whistle on beginning of slider.

[Hard]
00:11:59 (8) - New Combo
00:25:01 (5) - That looks...different :? Its a bit misleading though
00:36:62 (1,1) - These spinners are too short...sorry. Remove or make it all one spinner or something.
00:52:25 (1,1,1) - ^
00:57:22 (10) - New Combo
01:02:27 (11) - ^


I like your beatmapping style~
ZTX93
32 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
ZTX93

animask wrote:

[Easy]
01:12:38 (8) - Too far...place it closer to 7
Fixed.

animask wrote:

[Normal]
00:08:27 (6,7) - Reduce claps by 1/2 ( too much claps )
00:13:33 (8,9) - ^
Removed some of em'... check if u like how it sounds now...

animask wrote:

00:19:17 (7) - Remove whistle at the end and replace at the beginning. End the slider with a finish
Re-add break
00:52:17 (7) - New Combo
00:57:22 (11) - ^
Fixed.

animask wrote:

00:58:17 (3) - ....the slider does feel a bit weird to me...
Lol... well u aren't the first person that says it... so i put a normal slider there...

animask wrote:

01:14:91 (5) - Add a finish or replace with a whistle.
01:16:17 (8) - Keep whistle or add a finish
01:17:43 (12) - Whistle on beginning of slider.

animask wrote:

[Hard]
00:11:59 (8) - New Combo
00:25:01 (5) - That looks...different :? Its a bit misleading though
00:36:62 (1,1) - These spinners are too short...sorry. Remove or make it all one spinner or something.
00:52:25 (1,1,1) - ^
00:57:22 (10) - New Combo
01:02:27 (11) - ^
Fixed... and... about the "00:25:01 (5)" slider... replaced with a normal slider... about the spinners... :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: ...

animask wrote:

I like your beatmapping style~
:) :) ;)
ElxBeta
423 posts
Joined February 2009
ElxBeta
No podría darte consejos sobre como arreglarla, por que no se mucho sobre eso, pero personalmente me gusto bastante el map, te ganaste una estrella ;D

Saludos.-
ZTX93
32 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
ZTX93

ElxBeta wrote:

No podría darte consejos sobre como arreglarla, por que no se mucho sobre eso, pero personalmente me gusto bastante el map, te ganaste una estrella ;D

Saludos.-
Gracias!! ;) ;) ;)
DJPop
osu! Alumni
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Here since the beginning
DJPop
BPM is 190.00, not 95.000
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder

DJPop wrote:

BPM is 190.00, not 95.000
...that's just 95 doubled o_o
Also taking I'm this osu file and changing into my own =o
Whoever did the skinning and stuff can I borrow it or what?
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