This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, March 25, 2014 at 12:38:12 PM

Artist: Tomatsu Haruka
Title: Yume Sekai (TV Size)
Source: ソードアート・オンライン
Tags: ending sao ed SWORD ART ONLINE
BPM: 81
Filesize: 18702kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:

1. 5K HD - 5Key (3.05 stars, 548 notes)
2. 5K NM - 5Key (2.05 stars, 371 notes)
3. 7K HD - 7Key (3.52 stars, 586 notes)
4. 7K NM - 7Key (2.58 stars, 431 notes)

Download: Tomatsu Haruka - Yume Sekai (TV Size)
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Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This beatmap is made by yours truly, HinagikuKatsura and is Rated H.K. - Heavily Keysounded.

A little side note for the modders:

SUCH HITSOUNDS. MUCH AMAZE. WOW.

SHOOTERS~!

• 17VA
  lil_yumika_lil
  arcwinolivirus
  PROGUY
  Spy
  Remillion Cross

Congrats Hinagi! Great job!

nice beatmap,

first I recommend hs volume : 40 , 70 is little awkward. http://puu.sh/6VFus.png

title : ユメセカイ

artist : 戸松 遥

[hd]

00:16:678 - add 1

00:18:160 - add 1 or 5

00:19:641 - add 1

00:20:752 - how about http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1334087

00:22:604 - add 1 or 2

00:31:493 - add 1

00:59:085 - add 4

and how about this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1334096

01:04:085 - add 5

01:16:493 (76493|0) - how about here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1334099

01:23:715 - last part should be piano + circles (not a longnotes)

darkrai- wrote:

Congrats Hinagi! Great job!

( ^ _ ^)=b

17VA wrote:

nice beatmap, thank you

first I recommend hs volume : 40 , 70 is little awkward. http://puu.sh/6VFus.png done

title : ユメセカイ done

artist : 戸松 遥 done

[hd]

00:16:678 - add 1 done

00:18:160 - add 1 or 5 done, at 5

00:19:641 - add 1 done

00:20:752 - how about http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1334087 done

00:22:604 - add 1 or 2 done, at 1

00:31:493 - add 1 done

00:59:085 - add 4 done

and how about this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1334096 done

01:04:085 - add 5 done

01:16:493 (76493|0) - how about here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1334099 done, and my god, i loved it!

01:23:715 - last part should be piano + circles (not a longnotes) done

Thanks for the mod, and the star 17VA! Updated!

Edit: Added 5K HD and 7K NM. READY FOR RANK!

IRC MOD o/

NaxelCL wrote:

IRC MOD o/

IRC MOD

02:56 NaxelCL: ready
02:56 *NaxelCL is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/370876 Tomatsu Haruka - Yume Sekai (TV Size) [5K HD]]
02:56 NaxelCL: 5K HD first
02:56 NaxelCL: mmm
02:57 NaxelCL: 00:03:900 eliminated note of 1 column
02:58 HinagikuKatsura: it says invalid format xD
02:58 NaxelCL: 0XD
02:58 NaxelCL: lel
02:59 NaxelCL: lel
02:59 NaxelCL: 00:04:085(1) - eliminated
02:59 NaxelCL: lel
02:59 NaxelCL: XD
02:59 NaxelCL: 00:04:085 (1)
02:59 NaxelCL: lel
03:00 NaxelCL: this eliminatedXD
03:00 HinagikuKatsura: that's a hitsounded note. ill delete 4 and then put 1 to 4. is that ok?
03:00 NaxelCL: 00:04:826 (3) - changed this note of 1st column
03:00 NaxelCL: okey:3
03:01 HinagikuKatsura: got it
03:01 NaxelCL: 00:05:382
03:01 NaxelCL: agreged note in 5 column
03:02 HinagikuKatsura: ok
03:03 NaxelCL: 00:05:567 (1)
03:03 NaxelCL: then put 1
03:03 NaxelCL: XD
03:04 HinagikuKatsura: ok
03:04 NaxelCL: 00:07:604 (4) eliminated this LN
03:04 HinagikuKatsura: ok
03:04 NaxelCL: plz remember this is a 5K HD not MX XD
03:04 NaxelCL: lel
03:05 HinagikuKatsura: i see. xD
03:05 NaxelCL: 00:08:715 (1)
03:05 NaxelCL: and plz
03:05 NaxelCL: eliminated this
03:05 NaxelCL: XD
03:05 NaxelCL: and ... plz shuch the minor volume of hitsounds
03:05 NaxelCL: is very enough:c
03:05 HinagikuKatsura: got it
03:06 HinagikuKatsura: what do you mean?
03:06 NaxelCL: 00:11:493 (2) eliminated this
03:06 HinagikuKatsura: ok
03:07 NaxelCL: 00:49:085 (2) 00:49:085 (4)
03:07 NaxelCL: eliminated thisxd
03:08 NaxelCL: 00:52:789
03:08 NaxelCL: this patern is
03:08 NaxelCL: very
03:08 NaxelCL: 00:52:789 (2)
03:08 NaxelCL: this patern is very hard of 5K HDH
03:09 NaxelCL: and its is finished of mod XD I'm fo to bedXD
03:09 NaxelCL: in my counrtry is 3:08 am
03:09 NaxelCL: XD

Thanks for the IRC mod Naxel! ^^ Updated

Mod by requestuooo

[7K HD]

00:20:752 (20752|3) - Move to 00:21:123 - Your drum rhythm is wrong here, the normal-hitnormal 2-note chord is too early
00:24:456 (24456|3) - Change to finish, the music uses a soft cymbal, normal-hitfinish acts as a soft cymbal which fits in perfectly here
00:32:974 - Add a normal-hitnormal here, to fix your inconsistent drum rhythm
00:27:048 - ^
... and more, I strongly suggest to review your hitsounds, they are inconsistent..

I also suggest to add more hitsounds like adding a normal-hitfinish here 00:48:530
01:00:382 - ^
01:12:234 - ^
etc.

01:18:160 (78160|0) - Change to finish, using 2 normal-hitnormal here sounds very awkward and a finish here will be appropriate

01:21:123 - There is a lack of normal-hitnormal here, the drum rhythm seems to be lacking here

01:22:604 - Add a finish here, the major rhythm ends here

I feel that the normal-hitnormal can be separated into drum-hitfinish and a normal drum snare, change this if you want

[5K HD]

The hitsound here is a bit.. lacking in drums, it feels as if you are trying to lower the difficulty by removing some the core hitsounds, which are the drums in this case, this gives me the feeling of incomplete hitsounding here, I suggest to use a slower drum rhythm instead of 1/2s and 1/1s, so that the drum rhythm won't overlap with other notes and this will also make the difficulty easier without having to remove part of the drum rhythm

I also noticed you used 1/4 hammers, this may cause some unwanted adrenaline rushes, even though this is a calming song, I suggest to not have hammers unless it is absolutely necessary to have the adrenaline rush there

I see that you are using a lot of LN + note patterns, they are mostly very awkward to read and play, I suggest to change them to smoother and easier patterns for easier gameplay, after all, you are mapping to a calming song, you don't want players panicking on difficult patterns

Same as 7K HD, I suggest to put some finishes in here to make it sound less monotonous

[7K NM]

Same comment as 1st comment of 5K HD

Some patterns are overkill and too hard for NM, it causes too much adrenaline rush for NM players, such as 01:16:308 -

Same as 7K HD, I suggest to put some finishes in here to make it sound less monotonous

[5K NM]

No Problems here, seems perfect to me, I suggest to not use any 1/4 brackets in NM, it is quite hard for them to execute those patterns

lZenxl wrote:

Mod by requestuooo

[7K HD]

00:20:752 (20752|3) - Move to 00:21:123 - Your drum rhythm is wrong here, the normal-hitnormal 2-note chord is too early done
00:24:456 (24456|3) - Change to finish, the music uses a soft cymbal, normal-hitfinish acts as a soft cymbal which fits in perfectly here
00:32:974 - Add a normal-hitnormal here, to fix your inconsistent drum rhythm done
00:27:048 - ^ done
... and more, I strongly suggest to review your hitsounds, they are inconsistent.. sumimasen! >.<

I also suggest to add more hitsounds like adding a normal-hitfinish here 00:48:530 done
01:00:382 - ^ done
01:12:234 - ^ done
etc.

01:18:160 (78160|0) - Change to finish, using 2 normal-hitnormal here sounds very awkward and a finish here will be appropriate done

01:21:123 - There is a lack of normal-hitnormal here, the drum rhythm seems to be lacking here done

01:22:604 - Add a finish here, the major rhythm ends here done

I feel that the normal-hitnormal can be separated into drum-hitfinish and a normal drum snare, change this if you want will take a note of that

[5K HD]

The hitsound here is a bit.. lacking in drums, it feels as if you are trying to lower the difficulty by removing some the core hitsounds, which are the drums in this case, this gives me the feeling of incomplete hitsounding here, I suggest to use a slower drum rhythm instead of 1/2s and 1/1s, so that the drum rhythm won't overlap with other notes and this will also make the difficulty easier without having to remove part of the drum rhythm

I also noticed you used 1/4 hammers, this may cause some unwanted adrenaline rushes, even though this is a calming song, I suggest to not have hammers unless it is absolutely necessary to have the adrenaline rush there

I see that you are using a lot of LN + note patterns, they are mostly very awkward to read and play, I suggest to change them to smoother and easier patterns for easier gameplay, after all, you are mapping to a calming song, you don't want players panicking on difficult patterns

oh god. Ill start remaking this diff esp. the drums

Same as 7K HD, I suggest to put some finishes in here to make it sound less monotonous got it

[7K NM]

Same comment as 1st comment of 5K HD

Some patterns are overkill and too hard for NM, it causes too much adrenaline rush for NM players, such as 01:16:308 -

Same as 7K HD, I suggest to put some finishes in here to make it sound less monotonous

will also remodel this to become more an appropriate NM

[5K NM]

No Problems here, seems perfect to me, I suggest to not use any 1/4 brackets in NM, it is quite hard for them to execute those patterns HAI!

Thanks for the detailed suggestions sir Zenx. Ill start to recheck my drum hitsounding.

[Generals]
add SAO ,ED to tags

[HD]
keysound too loud , the bgm is kinda hard to be heard makes the keysound sounds very awkward

00:00:197 (197|2,289|4,382|1,567|5) - make like this? sc 1
00:01:863 (1863|2) - make this as hold too?
00:01:123 (1123|0) - ends here 00:02:604
00:03:345 (3345|2,3715|3) - ctrl + j (check hs) , as the sound goes down moving to left
00:05:567 (5567|6) - 3 note is enough.
00:07:048 (7048|4) - ^
00:06:678 (6678|6) - end this on the double line
00:07:048 (7048|3) - move to 5 or 6
00:07:604 (7604|1,7604|4) - doesnt need to be hold looks awkward
00:07:789 - needs more note
00:11:123 (11123|6) - delete
00:11:123 (11123|3) - move this to 7
00:12:234 (12234|4,12604|2) - need more notes
00:13:715 (13715|4) - move to 1 , the sound doesnt repeat, don't have to be in same collumn trice
00:15:937 (15937|0) - lowers the volume , too loud
00:15:567 (15567|5) - make this as hold to and move to 4 while 00:15:752 (15752|3) - move to 5 , better looking this way
00:16:308 (16308|1) - move to 5
00:17:234 (17234|4) - move to 2
00:17:419 (17419|0) - move to 4
00:17:604 - add a note at 5
00:20:197 (20197|5) - change to normal note and make this 00:20:382 (20382|6) - as hold instead . the keysound become awkward on lns
00:20:752 (20752|3) - move here 00:20:567
00:27:048 (27048|1,27234|2,27604|6) - its kinda awkward with ln on irregular measure pattern . orz.change 00:27:419 (27419|3) - to hold instead of 00:27:604 (27604|6) - ?
00:32:048 (32048|5,32974|1) - doesnt need to be hold
00:33:715 (33715|4) - ends here 00:34:456
00:34:456 (34456|5) - ends here 00:35:197
00:35:011 - add a note
00:37:234 (37234|5) - move to 3?
00:37:974 (37974|1) - move to 5
00:38:530 (38530|3) - move to 2
00:40:197 (40197|1,40752|3) - change to normal notes .doesnt suit with hd diff
00:39:641 (39641|6,39641|5) - both of these ends here 00:40:382
00:40:937 (40937|4) - normal note
don't abuse the purpose of long notes orz.if the sound doesnt last for long , dont make the hold so long , it looks awful
00:42:234 - add a note at 6
00:45:937 (45937|5) - ends here 00:46:308
00:47:048 (47048|1,47419|5) - ends here 00:47:789
00:48:530 - add a note
00:52:789 (52789|2) - normal note
00:53:530 - add a note at 2
00:54:271 (54271|5) - delete, no sound , and doesnt fit with the beat
00:55:937 (55937|6) - delete and move 00:55:937 (55937|3) - to 7
00:56:308 (56308|5) - normal note
00:58:900 (58900|2,58900|5,58900|0,58900|6,59085|1,59085|3,59271|2,59271|4,59456|3,59456|5,59641|4,59641|6,59826|0,59826|2,60011|6,60011|4) - ctrl + h , as the tom goes lower pitch
01:01:123 (61123|1) - normal note
01:01:863 (61863|2) - move to 2
01:03:160 (63160|5) - normal noteeeee
01:04:826 (64826|6) - make this hold instead of this 01:04:641 (64641|5) - it looks awful in measure and also confusing , this is a calm song it shouldnt be map like this
01:07:789 (67789|6,68160|5) - delete , 4 notes is too dense for that kind of sound
01:07:604 (67604|4) - move this to 4
01:07:789 (67789|3,68160|4) - move to right by 1 collumn
01:10:567 (70567|6,70937|2,72048|1) - doesnt need to be holddd
01:11:123 (71123|3) - this too , the hold just making the keysound worse
01:12:604 (72604|4) - ends here 01:12:974
01:13:345 - add a note at 6
01:16:493 (76493|0,76493|2,76493|4,76678|1,76678|6,76863|3,76863|0,76863|5,77048|2,77048|1,77419|6,77419|0,77604|3,77789|4,77789|0,77974|2,78160|0,78160|3,78160|5) - orz this pattern for hd ,
01:16:493 (76493|2,76493|4) - normal note
01:21:123 (81123|4) - this should be hold instead of 01:20:937 (80937|6) -
01:22:419 (82419|1,82604|3) - ctrl + j
01:26:863 (86863|3) - am i heard it wrong? this should be hold , instead of some hold that the sound doesnt last long and you make it as long hold.

dont abuse intention of the long note . this song should be map with heart. its a calm song
and high hp and od for such long note pattern .this diff needs a whole turn out. i cant accept this kind of style . at least for me sorry. try pour your soul in this map . think about people who plays your map.and get some suggestion from players too instead of finding mods all time , like i always do.
i cant promise you for the nm diff T.T im start to get busy this week, but i'll try to make it if i have time.

Hello everyone, I came here to review this map by request. (Column:1,2,3,4,5)

[General]
I recommend you change "HP:7, OD:8" to "HP:6, OD:7" in 5K NM
There is no problems else.

[Patterns of 5K NM]
This is almost perfect, awesome map.
00:31:122 (31122|0) - move to 5
01:26:308 (86308|2) - move to 3
01:26:678 (86678|2) - move to 1
01:26:863 (86863|2) - move to 4

[EX. Hitsounding of 5K NM]
Nice hitsoundings, I can ensure your confidence.
but I suggest you a bit turn down the volume of overall.

[Patterns of 5K HD]
lZenxl wrote the reasonable opinion clearly.
I almost agree his mod, however, If you were to make new diff as a"5K HD",
you would not to change "old 5K HD" on a large scale, only you just change diff name to"5K MX"

[EX. Hitsounding of 5K HD]
^

[Comment]
In any case, I'm sure this mapset will be approve.
Please call me anytime if you wanna my help.
here is , Good Luck

Mark,I'll mod it next week

Hello Katsura,here is Mod
[5K NM]
00:26:678 (26678|3,26863|4) - Exchange
01:01:863 (61863|2,61863|4) - Move to 1 and 2
01:07:048 (67048|4,67048|2) - Move to 1 and 2
01:07:419 (67419|3,67419|1) - Move to 3 and 4

[7K NM]
00:12:604 - Add a Note at 6
00:41:123 (41123|1) - Move to 6
00:42:604 (42604|0) - Move to 2
01:21:123 (81123|3) - Move to 3
01:25:197 (85197|3) - Move to 3

[5K HD]
00:21:123 (21123|0) - Move to 3
00:36:678 (36678|0) - Move to 4
01:05:197 (65197|3) - Move to 1
01:05:752 - Add a Note at 5
01:15:197 - Remove 2 Notes

[7K HD]
00:07:048 (7048|2) - Move to 4
00:51:863 (51863|2,52234|0) - Ctrl+J
01:22:604 (82604|1) - Remove

Good Luck

Applied all of Rumia and yumika's mod. Thanks a lot guys!

Simple_Star wrote:

Hello Katsura,here is Mod
[5K NM]
00:26:678 (26678|3,26863|4) - Exchange done
01:01:863 (61863|2,61863|4) - Move to 1 and 2 done
01:07:048 (67048|4,67048|2) - Move to 1 and 2 done
01:07:419 (67419|3,67419|1) - Move to 3 and 4 done

[7K NM]
00:12:604 - Add a Note at 6 done
00:41:123 (41123|1) - Move to 6 done
00:42:604 (42604|0) - Move to 2 done
01:21:123 (81123|3) - Move to 3 done
01:25:197 (85197|3) - Move to 3 done

[5K HD]
00:21:123 (21123|0) - Move to 3 done
00:36:678 (36678|0) - Move to 4 done
01:05:197 (65197|3) - Move to 1 done
01:05:752 - Add a Note at 5 done
01:15:197 - Remove 2 Notes done

[7K HD]
00:07:048 (7048|2) - Move to 4 done
00:51:863 (51863|2,52234|0) - Ctrl+J done
01:22:604 (82604|1) - Remove done

Good Luck

Thanks for the mod S.Star

Updated!

Hello there, my friend Hinagiku~
As requested, here's my mod ^o^)/


5K - 1/2/3/4/5
7K - 1/2/3/4/5/6/7


[5K NM]
I can say this is a really good diff! its kinda hard for NM though :3

[5K HD]
Its nice. although because of LNs it feels like 17VA mapping style. I prefer to make it more neatly without abusing LNs though. just an opinion :3



[7k NM]
This one is also smooth~ I like it



[7k HD]
Same description as 5K HD :3


I hope it helps~ o/ thanks for requesting!

Huge thanks arcwin for a great mod! Followed every bit of it, and also updated!

HinagikuKatsura wrote:

Huge thanks arcwin for a great mod! Followed every bit of it, and also updated!

Glad it helps ^o^)/
Throwing a star~! >w<)/

Hi HinagikuKatsura. Here's my mod as requested.
(I wonder what happened to your other map though...)

[General]
- Add (TV Size) to the Title (or Title Unicode in the .osu file).
- I noticed there's a ".picasaoriginals" folder that contains the same image of the BG without text. You should to remove the folder.

[5K NM]
HP Drain +1

[5K HD]
00:38:900 This part is missing a normal-hitnormal hitsound as compared to the other ones in the 1/1 grid (white lines in editor). Maybe you can put this in the non-play area? (Press Tab to switch to that area. Sounds will be played there but will not appear in-game.)
00:44:826 ^
00:49:271 ^
00:50:752 ^
00:58:900 ^
01:03:345 ^
01:07:789 ^
01:15:197 ^
01:21:123 ^

[7K NM]
HP Drain +1
- Similar problem as the one in 5K HD regarding the inconsistent normal-hitnormal hitsound. Listen carefully and add those empty spots with the note in the non-play area.

[7K HD]
HP Drain +1

I've no problems regarding patterns, so here's a star.
Good luck!

M4M Request

[General]

nothing problem here since PROGUY already tell you

[5K NM]

some keysound followed vocal, not beat ;w;

- 00:23:530 - add note

- 00:25:937 (25937|3) - move to 1st then move 00:26:308 (26308|0) - to 5th

- 00:37:048 (37048|3,37048|1,37234|4,37234|2) - this double note have less sound than 00:37:419 (37419|0) - which this have drum-kick, so delete 00:37:048 (37048|3,37234|2) - and add note 00:37:419 - , if you did this you need to fix all related issue

- 01:02:048 - add note for drum-kick

- 01:07:604 - ^

- 01:16:308 (76308|4,76308|3,76493|1,76493|2,76863|3,76863|2) - how about re-arrange this like previous pattern ?

[7K NM]

- 00:14:456 (14456|1) - move to 1st

- 00:18:345 (18345|5,18530|4) - move them to 3rd & 2nd column

- 00:23:530 - add note

- 00:25:937 - Try this http://puu.sh/74bfw.png

[5K HD]

- 00:00:197 (197|0,289|4,382|1,567|3) - because this have note before 1st unherited point, suggest move unherited to the first note (apply to all diff)

- 00:07:604 (7604|1,7604|0,7604|3) - delete one of them then 00:07:604 (7604|0,7604|1,7604|3,7789|2) - CTRL + J because 00:07:789 - have louder drum than 00:07:604 -

- 01:22:604 - set inherited point to x0.85 , this fit to the feeling of the song Apply to 7K HD

[7K HD]

looks good for ranked

Thanks for the mods sir PROGUY (and also for the star!) and Reikosaka! Updated~!

about the drum hitsounding issues: i called indyinyou for a mod specifically for the drums.

i ll check it on sunday if you want me mod your map plz send only one message// spam pm to me not help anything

i have work 6 days per week / only free on sundays plz understand me plz *(i ll mod when have free time )

here drumsounds for your map

http://puu.sh/762ef

[7K HD]

00:00:197 : snare like this http://puu.sh/761yY.jpg
00:00:567 : tom
00:01:123 : fin and kick
00:01:123 : cymbol
00:01:863 : snare
00:02:604 : kick
00:02:974 : ^
00:03:345 : snare
00:04:085 : kick
00:04:826 : snare
00:05:567 : kick
00:05:937 : kick
00:06:308 : snare
00:06:493 : tom
00:06:678 : ^
00:06:869 : tom01
00:07:048 : cymbol
00:07:789 : snare
00:08:160 : cymbol and kick
00:09:271 : snare
00:09:456 : snare
00:09:641 : tom
00:10:011 : cymbol and kick
00:10:752 : snare
00:11:123 : cymbol and kick
00:11:863 : snare
00:12:234 : ^
00:12:604 : ^
00:12:974 : cymbol
00:13:715 : snare
00:14:456 : kick
00:14:826 : kick
00:15:197 : snare
00:15:937 : kick
00:16:678 : snare
00:17:419 : kick
00:17:789 : kick
00:18:160 : snare
00:18:900 : kick
00:19:641 : snare
00:20:382 : kick
00:20:752 : kick
00:21:123 : snare
00:21:863 : kick
00:22:604 : snare
00:23:345 : kick
00:23:530 : snare
00:23:715 : kick
00:24:085 : snare
00:24:826 : kick
00:25:567 : snare
00:26:308 : kick
00:26:678 : kick
00:27:048 : snare
00:27:789 : kick
00:28:530 : snare
00:29:271 : kick
00:29:641 : kick
00:30:011 : snare
00:30:752 : kick
00:31:493 : snare
00:32:234 : kick
00:32:604 : kick
00:32:974 : snare
00:33:715 : kick
00:34:456 : snare
00:35:197 : kick
00:35:937 : snare
00:36:123 : tom
00:36:308 : tom01
00:36:678 : cymbol and kick

------------------------------------------ it up to you use it or not /(don t call re check i ll check when i have time )