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Yellow Zebra - Darling Star

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Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, November 12, 2009 at 7:02:49 PM

Artist: Yellow Zebra
Title: Darling Star
Source: Moment of Impulse
Tags: Touhou Marisa roxkyuubiforever Metroid
BPM: 130
Filesize: 7934kb
Play Time: 02:58
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.96 stars, 549 notes)
  2. Metroid Mix (4.4 stars, 302 notes)
  3. Normal (4.23 stars, 347 notes)
  4. Puzzle Sliderz (2.73 stars, 97 notes)
  5. Taiko Oni (4.89 stars, 663 notes)
Download: Yellow Zebra - Darling Star
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This song is a vocalized remix of Vessel of Stars ~ Casket of Star. (:


Special thanksss to roxkyuubiforever for [Puzzle Sliderz], Metroid for [Metroid Mix] and Cyclone for the comboburst. <3
Last edited by Yes_old , edited 90 times in total.
Torran
724 posts
Joined November 2008
Torran

Yes wrote:

work in progress ._. i fail at finding offset
Your offset's not bad, just a bit early
BPM 130
Offset 4715

Starred!
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
Thank you!
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
Diff wip for a while.

Star for now :D
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
n____n Thanks for star!
Lame_old
2 posts
Joined May 2009
Lame_old
Nice map :D
abalee
osu! Alumni
1,994 posts
Joined June 2008
abalee
timing fine, Good Job~
IMO the countdown don't fit the song very good. remove it.

RoxK.:
no modding coz it haven't finish ;)

Normal:
small spacing problem could be ignored,but i think the spacing below are confused(although i could pass them at the first time XD)
00:59:63 (3,4) -; 02:21:09 (4,1) -; 02:07:71 (1,2,3,4) -

Taiko:
actually i don't know how to mod a taiko map ;_;

Hard:
HP drain rate seems a bit too fast,but it's fine when i play it third time. leave it or change it, as your wish.
seems i just could do spacing modding jobs :(
01:21:33 (5,6) - ; 02:43:48 (1,2,3) -

actually it is a good map that i could only do seldom on it(maybe if i do nazi jod i could post a lot XD).

stard~
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
[General]
... WHERE IS the beat's volume? It's too low... try to raise it a bit...

RoxK. Puzzle Sliders
00:21:09 (3) - finish and whistle this slider's end
00:23:17 (1) - finish this slider's start
00:41:63 (1,2,3) - start (or end, your choise) the sliders with whistles, finish the beat
00:58:02 (spinner) - set kiai time in the end of this slider
01:00:56 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62) - looks like a work in progress... try to set an intelligent beat spacing for these beats... plus, set claps on 6th, 14th, 22nd, 30th, 31st, 39th, 46th, 47th, and 55th (clap and finish on 61st and 62nd). Remember to set new combos! (maybe every after a clap beat...)

Normal
00:37:02 (2,3) - soft finish here
01:00:09 (4) - kiai time from here to the break. If you do it, set new combo ^^
01:21:56 (4) - clap the whole slider
02:28:71 (5) - kiai time from here until the end

Hard
01:00:09 (5) - like Normal mode...
02:17:63 (5) - new combo here
02:28:71 (5) - kiai time from here until the end. If you do it, set new combo (pretty symmetrical, isn't it? ^^)

Taiko
... it's perfect-don! :3 (Remiember to set kiai time as seen on the other modes... u.u)

A funny and catchy song with good rhythm and some pesky jumps... Star 4 you ;)
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
Since this is a WIP, I won't fully mod it yet, but i'll give you this at least.

Osz. File Check (Done)

SPOILER
Video: No
SB (Story Board): No
Custom Skin: No
Background: Yes
[Current] Size: 11.00 MB / 10.00 MB (Please get the .mp3 compressed.)
Source: No (Please add in the Source to all difficulties.)
Tags: No (Please add in the Tags to all difficulties.)

When the map is done, forum PM me again. I normally don't star without really modding the map first, sorry.
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
o(^v')b
Sure
4,219 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
hmm.. I have nothing to do. Because well done. :)

By the way

[Normal]
HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty is very low.
It seems to easier but this map is actually a little bit hard. It has hard spacing. :P
I suggest these values.
HP DR : 2 → 4
OD : 3 → 5
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
4,755 posts
Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
Normal:
SPOILER
Combo mod:
01:45:56 (1) - before the break, there wouldn't be a new combo here, but after the break, there are new combos in this location and ones similar to it. I advise you make the whole song consistent

Timing section mod:
01:07:12 - the hitsound volume and type for this timing section is the same as the previous one, please remove it
You might want to consider adding kiai to the chorus

Hard:
SPOILER
Combo mod:
00:30:79 (1) - remove new combo for consistency
00:31:71 (1) - ^
00:57:09 (1) - ^
01:14:17 (6) - new combo?
01:45:56 (1) - same as normal

Timing section mod:
00:52:23 - move a quarter note forward
You might want to consider adding kiai to the chorus

Nice map so far. Star.
If you want me to mod the easy difff, call me back when it is finished.
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
Here! Made my diff :D
Soryy for the long time that I took to make it and I hope that you like the storyboarded hit sounds.
ps.: I'm sending too a "Normal-hitclap.wav" that is the normal one but my diff will not work if you don't add this one.
Download: Diff and Hit Sound.rar

yey! /o/
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
yay! uploaded n___n thanks a lot roxkyuubi<333333

okie. i decided not to put kiai in (maybe i'll change my mind later) because the song is short and i wouldnt want kiai going on for half the song.

i didn't make the difficulty much higher for [normal] because i want to keep the rating at 4 stars but i did raise it a little.

thanks so much for modding<3 and thanks siriru for starrrr~!
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
puzzle sliders:
00:37:48 (1) - why not make this symmetric?
00:50:63 (2) - sounds too short to me...extend to 00:51:33?

normal:
00:21:09 (6) - awesome (had to say it)
no problems here

hard:
01:07:83 (2) - 1 tick down?
02:46:59 (2,3) - doesnt look nice to me

taiko:
cant mod this :/

nicely done map
*star*
nullPointLOL
99 posts
Joined September 2008
nullPointLOL
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
O god, I never modded a Taiko. If I say something wrong, please, don't kill me X__X

//Taiko//
  1. 00:16:022(x) - add a note here?
  2. 00:16:253(x) - and here? (w/ whistle)
  3. 00:16:484(x) - n here?
  4. 00:21:907(4) - maybe clap here and not on the (5)?
  5. 01:28:484(3-11) - hum... too manny Claps, I think, Maybe only using on the (5,6,8,9) >__<
Sounds really cool for me.
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
updated(: thank youuuu.
PicoLo
188 posts
Joined July 2009
PicoLo
~Star. ;)
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