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Tada Aoi - Brave Song (TV Size)

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-Neipezi
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Joined October 2011
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-Neipezi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014년 2월 15일 토요일 at 오후 5:13:32

Artist: Tada Aoi
Title: Brave Song (TV Size)
Source: Angel Beats!
Tags: Ending
BPM: 62.5
Filesize: 14126kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (3.76 stars, 120 notes)
  2. Normal (2.33 stars, 85 notes)
Download: Tada Aoi - Brave Song (TV Size)
Download: Tada Aoi - Brave Song (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Angel Beats! Ending

Mapset:
Easy - Done by.Sekai-nyan
Normal - Done
Hard - Done

2014-01-03 beatmap submission
2014-02-15 normal change
2014-02-20 sekai-nyan's normal to easy change or add
2014-03-22 bubble by Garven
2014-04-05 ranked by Kurai

2nd DT+HD+HR map
Last edited by -Neipezi , edited 12 times in total.
Kyouren
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Joined October 2012
Kyouren
First^^

Where diff Easy?
-Neipezi
2,246 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
-Neipezi

gokugohan12468 wrote:

First^^

Where diff Easy?
the song is too slow. easy is not necessary.
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
Kirito, pls rename my diff to "Sekai's Normal" it's better o3o
-Neipezi
2,246 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
-Neipezi

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Kirito, pls rename my diff to "Sekai's Normal" it's better o3o
hmm, ok o_o
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Sekai's Normal:

00:32:454 (2) - Missing Whistle at the head.
00:50:694 (1) - I think reducing 1/4 will go well with the lyrics.
00:50:694 - Also starting here, I think comboes are in a little mess. Hope you can add it when a new stanza starts.

Hard:

-- AR은 적어도 7로 해주십시오. 6이면 더 좋고요,, 노말과 불균형할 뿐 아니라 느린 노래에서 8은 안어울립니다. (사실 당고 대가족의 7도 높게 느껴진건 함정)

00:09:414 (2) - 끝에 휘슬?
00:20:934 (2,3) - 노래 호흡과 안어울리는 점프라는 느낌입니다. 다른 부분에도 이만큼 큰 점프는 없네요
00:35:334 (1,2) - 뉴콤은 (2) 부터 시작하는게 나을거 같아요
00:57:894 - 노트 추가 부탁합니다.
01:14:454 - ^
01:22:614 (5) - 여기는 긴 슬라 대신 노트랑 1/4 슬라이더 순서로 나누는게 더 어울릴듯 합니다.
Spring Roll
230 posts
Joined April 2013
Spring Roll
Hi kirito,mod from my modding queue

Sekai's Normal

  1. 00:25:734 (3) - not sounds so good,change the sampleset to soft
  2. 00:50:694 (1) - a 1/1 slider is better
  3. 01:14:694 (2) - 1/2 slider
  4. 00:45:414 (3,4) - change to a 1/4 slider is better i think for it's a normal diff

Hard

  1. ar7 is better for a slow song i think
  2. 00:31:494 - this finish is strange,you put a finish here but not put a finish in00:39:174 -
  3. 00:21:654 (3) - distance is strange,i think 3.23x is not suitable for a hard diff
  4. 00:29:574 - remove the whistle
  5. 00:32:454 - ^
-Neipezi
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Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
-Neipezi
Sonnyc

Sonnyc wrote:

Hard:

-- AR은 적어도 7로 해주십시오. 6이면 더 좋고요,, 노말과 불균형할 뿐 아니라 느린 노래에서 8은 안어울립니다. (사실 당고 대가족의 7도 높게 느껴진건 함정)

00:09:414 (2) - 끝에 휘슬?
00:20:934 (2,3) - 노래 호흡과 안어울리는 점프라는 느낌입니다. 다른 부분에도 이만큼 큰 점프는 없네요
00:35:334 (1,2) - 뉴콤은 (2) 부터 시작하는게 나을거 같아요
00:57:894 - 노트 추가 부탁합니다.
01:14:454 - ^
01:22:614 (5) - 여기는 긴 슬라 대신 노트랑 1/4 슬라이더 순서로 나누는게 더 어울릴듯 합니다.

Spring Roll

Spring Roll wrote:

Hi kirito,mod from my modding queue

Hard

  1. ar7 is better for a slow song i think
  2. 00:31:494 - this finish is strange,you put a finish here but not put a finish in00:39:174 -
  3. 00:21:654 (3) - distance is strange,i think 3.23x is not suitable for a hard diff
  4. 00:29:574 - remove the whistle
  5. 00:32:454 - ^

thank you for modding:3
Sylith
722 posts
Joined September 2012
Sylith
yay short poor mod as your request



Normal

00:30:054 (4) - remove this stack is better imo. it could confuse newbie with 00:45:414 (3,4)

00:50:694 (1) - I highly recommend you to make this slider end at 00:51:654 .
vocal is getting weaker at this point.
also, you can add whistle on the tail of it! It feels great to me

01:13:254 (5) - add drum finish on tail? instead of whistle



nice diff! I love it










Hard

00:18:054 (3,4,5,6) - 맵 전체에서 여기만 단타가 짝수개라고 생각해요.
리듬을 00:00:774 (1,2,3,4,5) - 이부분과 통일해서 단타 4개 후 슬라로 바꿔보시는게 어떠세요?

00:23:334 (5) - 머리에 휘슬 제거 해보시는건 어떠세요? 잔잔하고 좋은듯

00:31:494 (1) - 머리에 피니시 지워주시는게 좋을듯 해요.
만약 그대로 넣어주시려면 00:39:174 (1) - 여기도 넣어주시는게 맞다고 생각하는!

00:57:894 - 여기 노트 추가 해주시는걸 강력히 추천.... 플레이 할때 빈 느낌이 너무 강해요

01:14:694 (4) - 꼬리에 휘슬? 01:12:774 (2,3) - 이것들하고 통일한다는 느낌으로요

01:22:614 (5) - 머리에 휘슬 지워보시는게 어때요?

01:26:934 (4) - 피니시 추가? 개인적 취향이긴 한데 마지막은 피니시 쓰셔도 될 듯 한!



맵좋아요!






돌릴거 다 돌리고 생각난김에 끝내버렸네요

GL!! 8-)
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
Thanks for modding guys :3

Fixed mostly everything in your mods <3

Sekai's moe diff owo/
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Angel_Beats!_ED_Reversed.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Brave Song (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Brave Song (TV Size)
Artist:Aoi Tada
ArtistUnicode:ただあおい
Creator:-Kirito
Version:Sekai's Normal
Source:Angel Beats!
Tags:Ending Sekai-nyan
BeatmapID:348524
BeatmapSetID:139414

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

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-Neipezi
2,246 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
-Neipezi

sKZy wrote:

yay short poor mod as your request


Hard

00:18:054 (3,4,5,6) - 맵 전체에서 여기만 단타가 짝수개라고 생각해요.
리듬을 00:00:774 (1,2,3,4,5) - 이부분과 통일해서 단타 4개 후 슬라로 바꿔보시는게 어떠세요? :arrow: 기타소리에 맞췄습니다.

00:23:334 (5) - 머리에 휘슬 제거 해보시는건 어떠세요? 잔잔하고 좋은듯 :arrow: 수정

00:31:494 (1) - 머리에 피니시 지워주시는게 좋을듯 해요. :arrow: ^
만약 그대로 넣어주시려면 00:39:174 (1) - 여기도 넣어주시는게 맞다고 생각하는! :arrow: ^

00:57:894 - 여기 노트 추가 해주시는걸 강력히 추천.... 플레이 할때 빈 느낌이 너무 강해요

01:14:694 (4) - 꼬리에 휘슬? 01:12:774 (2,3) - 이것들하고 통일한다는 느낌으로요 :arrow: 수정

01:22:614 (5) - 머리에 휘슬 지워보시는게 어때요? :arrow: nope

01:26:934 (4) - 피니시 추가? 개인적 취향이긴 한데 마지막은 피니시 쓰셔도 될 듯 한! :arrow: good



맵좋아요!






돌릴거 다 돌리고 생각난김에 끝내버렸네요

GL!! 8-)
모딩감사합니다.
sekai, diffi to upload the changed:3
Feith
32 posts
Joined May 2013
Feith
hai....hai..
I am from Modding request queue

http://www.tusfiles.net/ut3jj8namiwk

what is changed :
- keep the object is inside the grid because it have an impact on standard monitor size
- change little bit of timing
- change little bit of hitsound

that is from me

thank you for request
-Neipezi
2,246 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
-Neipezi

Feith wrote:

hai....hai..
I am from Modding request queue

http://www.tusfiles.net/ut3jj8namiwk

what is changed :
- keep the object is inside the grid because it have an impact on standard monitor size
- change little bit of timing
- change little bit of hitsound

that is from me

thank you for request
hey, why ".exe" file uploaded to do==? virus is suspected.
Feith
32 posts
Joined May 2013
Feith

-Kirito wrote:

Feith wrote:

hai....hai..
I am from Modding request queue

http://www.tusfiles.net/ut3jj8namiwk

what is changed :
- keep the object is inside the grid because it have an impact on standard monitor size
- change little bit of timing
- change little bit of hitsound

that is from me

thank you for request
hey, why ".exe" file uploaded to do==? virus is suspected.
oh im sorry
please download with that website
after a page is loaded please uncheck the box "use our download manager and get recommended downloads"
then click download button at download box
Myxo
osu! Alumni
3,103 posts
Joined December 2012
Myxo
M4M :3

[General]

  1. Missing Preview Point. Add one at 00:48:774? Because it would sound cool and it's not as mainstream as the beginning of the kiai ~ Anyways, atleast add one :D
  2. 00:29:574 - I understand what the second timing section is for. It's to move the big white tick at the correct position, because of musical terms. But, I'm experienced musician, and the timing section needs to be moved here instead, as the position of the big white tick changes here and not later at the song.
  3. It's my personal opinion, but for me, kiai-mode doesn't fit here well, I'd prefer to have no kiai in this mapset. But I can't really explain why.
[Sekai's Normal]

  1. Distance spacing is not always correct in this difficulty. You seem to alternate between some fixed spacings constantly, which is good for harder diffs, but not for normal or easy difficultys in my opinion. You should use a constant spacing for the whole diff (possibly a little higher one for kiai if you want) that doesn't change more than + or - 0.03x. I won't mod the spacing in the diff any further, as all has been said in this point. Please fix that :<
  2. Also, to be more precise, even small spacing changes like this 00:07:014 (3,4,1) I suggest you to avoid, because you can clearly see that (4) is nearer to (3) than to (1). Spacings before and after a circle should always be exact the same, as things like this don't look as good in my opinion.
  3. 00:02:694 (2,3) - Fix blanket.
  4. 00:11:334 (4) - Use a less curvey slider, to create a better curve between 00:10:854 (3,4,1). In my opinion, it would look and play better if the slidershape would be on a curve with the objects before and after the slider. Something like this:
    Example
  5. 00:14:214 (3) - Move the red tick to the real middle of the slider to create better look (you can find the middle by putting slider tick rate 2 to see). I think a slidershape like that would fit the song much more, too.
  1. 00:29:574 - Because of timing section changes, you have to rearrange NCs. They have to be placed on the (new) big white tick definitely. I'll list it here for you:
  2. 00:29:574 (3) - NC
  3. 00:31:974 (1) - Remove NC
  4. 00:33:894 (3) - NC
  5. 00:35:814 (1) - Remove NC
  6. 00:37:734 (3) - NC
  7. 00:39:174 (1) - Remove NC
  8. 00:41:094 (3) - NC
  9. 00:43:014 (1) - Remove NC
  10. 00:45:414 (3) - NC (only if you want, because it's last note before break)
  1. 00:30:534 (5) - Move red tick to middle of the slider again
  2. 00:32:454 (2,3) - Fix blanket.
  3. 00:41:094 (3) - Create better slider by making the second half a stronger curve?
  4. 00:44:454 (2,3) - Blanket here? :3
  5. 01:01:254 (2) - Move to x:156 y:106, to create better flow and better curve here: 01:00:294 (1,2)
  6. 01:08:934 (1) - Remove NC.
  7. 01:10:854 (3) - Move to x:113 y:106 for the same reason ^
  8. 01:14:214 (4,5) - Please fix blanket D:
  9. 01:17:574 (3) - Unsnapped Slider.
  10. 01:18:534 (4) - ^
  11. 01:19:494 (1,2) - Fix blanket.
  12. 01:21:414 (3) - Move red tick to middle of the slider again
  13. Good diff! Timeline was really great. You should fix spacing and blankets though ;w; There were more not-perfect blankets but I just listed those which don't look good in my opinion.
[Hard]
  1. 00:20:934 (2,3) - You might want to fix the second blanket aswell, though this might look better, I don't know ;w;
  1. 00:29:574 - Because of timing section changes, you have to rearrange NCs. They have to be placed on the (new) big white tick definitely. I'll list it here for you:
  2. 00:29:574 (2) - NC
  3. 00:31:494 (1) - Remove NC
  4. 00:33:414 (3) - NC
  5. 00:37:254 (1) - NC (You already placed here, just to be complete)
  6. 00:39:174 (1) - Remove NC
  7. 00:41:094 (3) - NC
  8. 00:43:014 (1) - Remove NC
  9. 00:44:934 (3) - NC (only if you want, because it is last note before break)
  1. So nice diff, timeline is wonderful, placement is perfect :3 Just fix the timing section/NC problem :)
Cool mapset! I love brave song so very much <3 Thanks for mapping!!! Good luck for rank ^^
Xiaolin
1,857 posts
Joined April 2013
Xiaolin
M4M ~ >w>''
[General]
Change the combo colours please ~
[Colours]
Combo1 : 175,219,228
Combo2 : 210,0,158
Combo3 : 0,73,147
Combo4 : 158,140,78
I found the perfect one. :3
01:04:134 -Preview Point.
[Sekai's Normal]
00:02:214 -Note.
00:09:414 -This slider is so close to the slider which is at 00:08:454 consider moving.
00:18:054 -^
00:20:934 -^
00:39:174 -^
00:49:734 -^
[Hard]
00:12:534 -Spinner doesn't fit at this timing, consider removing the spinner and random notes.
00:16:134 (I know that the timing of the end of the spinner but.. You know, just remove it~ >.<'') -Slider till 00:16:854
01:17:574 -Move the notes near to each other.
Example

GL ~ !
-Neipezi
2,246 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
-Neipezi
Desperate-kun

Desperate-kun wrote:

M4M :3

[General]

  1. Missing Preview Point. Add one at 00:48:774? Because it would sound cool and it's not as mainstream as the beginning of the kiai ~ Anyways, atleast add one :D :arrow: so good, fixed
  2. 00:29:574 - I understand what the second timing section is for. It's to move the big white tick at the correct position, because of musical terms. But, I'm experienced musician, and the timing section needs to be moved here instead, as the position of the big white tick changes here and not later at the song. :arrow: add
  3. It's my personal opinion, but for me, kiai-mode doesn't fit here well, I'd prefer to have no kiai in this mapset. But I can't really explain why. :arrow: why?? do not delete kiai time.
[Hard]
  1. 00:20:934 (2,3) - You might want to fix the second blanket aswell, though this might look better, I don't know ;w; :arrow: my mistake, the gap is too far.
  1. 00:29:574 - Because of timing section changes, you have to rearrange NCs. They have to be placed on the (new) big white tick definitely. I'll list it here for you:
  2. 00:29:574 (2) - NC :arrow: fixed
  3. 00:31:494 (1) - Remove NC :arrow: ^
  4. 00:33:414 (3) - NC :arrow: ^
  5. 00:37:254 (1) - NC (You already placed here, just to be complete) :arrow: ^
  6. 00:39:174 (1) - Remove NC :arrow: ^
  7. 00:41:094 (3) - NC :arrow: ^
  8. 00:43:014 (1) - Remove NC :arrow: ^
  9. 00:44:934 (3) - NC (only if you want, because it is last note before break) :arrow: ^
  1. So nice diff, timeline is wonderful, placement is perfect :3 Just fix the timing section/NC problem :)
Cool mapset! I love brave song so very much <3 Thanks for mapping!!! Good luck for rank ^^ :arrow: thanks lol


Lapis Aok

Lapis Aoki wrote:

M4M ~ >w>''
[General]
Change the combo colours please ~ :arrow: good, fixed
[Colours]
Combo1 : 175,219,228
Combo2 : 210,0,158
Combo3 : 0,73,147
Combo4 : 158,140,78
I found the perfect one. :3
01:04:134 - Preview Point. :arrow: sorry

[Hard]
00:12:534 -Spinner doesn't fit at this timing, consider removing the spinner and random notes. :arrow: nope, do not change. i can hear here long.
00:16:134 (I know that the timing of the end of the spinner but.. You know, just remove it~ >.<'') -Slider till 00:16:854 :arrow: nope
01:17:574 -Move the notes near to each other. :arrow: nope

GL ~ !


thank you for modding:)
Winek
887 posts
Joined September 2013
Winek
So yeah, My mod as you requested.
Your map is ready for ranking - All of these are simply suggestion, feel free to reject them.

[General]
Don't know how to improve this.
But You forgot the Preview Point,

[Normal]
Clear ><

[Hard]
Should use Slider tick 2, Since long slider like 01:16:134 (1) - Are like silence, that's weird
00:50:214 (2) - I would rather more see it at 00:50:214. It fits better.
01:10:134 (5) - You should remove the finish at the reverse arrow

Sorry, I can't really be helpful, but get a BAT to look at it ;) Trust me, it's really good *star*
-Neipezi
2,246 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
-Neipezi

Winek wrote:

So yeah, My mod as you requested.
Your map is ready for ranking - All of these are simply suggestion, feel free to reject them.

[General]
Don't know how to improve this.
But You forgot the Preview Point,

[Normal]
Clear ><

[Hard]
Should use Slider tick 2, Since long slider like 01:16:134 (1) - Are like silence, that's weird :arrow: okay
00:50:214 (2) - I would rather more see it at 00:50:214. It fits better. :arrow: nope
01:10:134 (5) - You should remove the finish at the reverse arrow :arrow: nope

Sorry, I can't really be helpful, but get a BAT to look at it ;) Trust me, it's really good *star*
thank you for modding :oops:
Reisen Udongein
Former osu! Champion: #3
1,073 posts
Joined January 2010
Reisen Udongein
안녕하세요!

[General]

프리뷰타임 설정이 안되어있네요 적당한 곳 찾아서 설정해주세요


Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). For artists which have a preferred romanisation, use this one. If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BAT for help.
다른 맵들을 보니까 전부 Tada Aoi라고 되어있는데, 만약 성이 Tada이고 이름이 Aoi이면 성 + 이름의 형태여야 하므로 Tada Aoi가 맞습니다.

일본어 이름도 일본어 위키에 나와있는 대로 한자로 쓰시는게 나을듯 싶네요. 多田 葵

[Sekai's Normal]

AR+1

00:02:694 (2) - (nazi) move 1 grid left to get better formation with 00:04:134 (3) -
00:25:734 (3) - i don't know it's mistake or not, i think it's too loud and weird as the song is really quiet there. removing this would be better. also, how about arranging like this? http://puu.sh/6SX7T.jpg
00:29:574 (3) - same issue as 00:25:734 (3) -
00:36:294 (2) - ^
00:48:774 (1) - default soft-finish would be better to hear than drum-finish
01:03:174 (4,1) - add drum-finish on 01:03:654 - and add only soft-finish on 01:04:134 - for better hitsounding
01:04:134 (1,3) - better add normal-hitnormal on this as you did on following things rather than drum sound
01:08:934 (1) - add drum-finish on the end
01:14:214 (4) - remove whistle
01:17:574 (3) - Unsnapped
01:18:534 (4) - Unsnapped
01:26:214 (5) - add normal-hitnormal sound on the end? (just suggestion)
01:25:734 (4,5,1) - how about arranging like this? http://puu.sh/6SXJq.jpg
code
60,236,85734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
4,168,86214,2,0,P|40:148|88:152,1,88.000002685547,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
60,236,87174,5,2,0:0:0:0:

[Hard]

00:25:014 (2) - 제 생각에는 이런 식으로 약간 기울이는 게 외관이랑 흐름상 더 괜찮을 것 같아요. http://puu.sh/6SXQB.jpg
00:35:334 (5) - 앞의 00:27:654 (1) - 이랑 비슷한 패턴인데 한쪽은 뉴콤보가 되어있고 한쪽은 안되어있네요. 둘 중하나를 다른 쪽에 맞춰서 바꿔주세요.
00:43:014 (1,2,3) - 이런 패턴은 어떠세요? http://puu.sh/6SY25.jpg
code
176,156,43014,6,0,P|152:172|132:196,3,52.5,0|2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,272,43974,2,0,P|37:284|68:290,3,52.5,0|2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,356,44934,2,0,P|186:327|175:297,3,52.5,0|2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
그리고 첫 슬라이더는 50%, 두번째꺼는 35% , 세번째꺼는 20% 이런식으로 볼륨을 서서히 줄이고, 마지막 슬라이더에는 00:45:414 - 에도 휘슬을 추가해주시는게 좋을것 같아요.
01:03:654 (5) - Normal이랑 같은 의견
01:10:614 (6) - 드럼피니시 추가
01:13:734 (3) - 지금까지 해오셨던 대로 드럼피니시가 나을듯 하네요.
01:18:534 (6) - 끝부분에 휘슬 추가

조용하고 좋네요! 빨리 랭크 되었으면 ㅎㅎ
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