1. Easy (1.91 stars, 111 notes)
2. Hard (4.91 stars, 286 notes)
3. Normal (4.54 stars, 214 notes)

happy30 wrote:

wow! really good for a first map! thx :3

offset: 1.161 Change

[Easy]

00:12:14 (1) - This slider looks bit weird. remove the second waypoint... (A slider looks better with less) fixed
01:08:76 (1) - remove clap done

[Normal]

00:15:50 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hey, I have a suggestion for the hitsounds.
you have claps on (1), (5), (7). I think you should change the pattern of claps and place claps on
(3) (6) [startpoint] (8) [startpoint] and continue following this rhythm
basically all claps 1 whole note, white tick, further. (this is for almost the whole map) I performed it according to your suggestion

01:39:16 (5) - a bit closer to (4) ? sorry, slipped off from (3),fixed
01:40:33 (1) - start this spinner 1/4 earlier or later　fixed

[Hard]

01:06:84 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I personally dont like this. changed it a little
01:30:71 (4) - remove clap done
01:30:92 (6) - remove clap on endpoint done
01:31:98 (8) - add clap on startpoint done
01:32:83 (10) - add clap on startpoint done
01:40:33 (1) - start this spinner 1/4 earlier or later fixed

well done.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Offset: 1161 (did not see happy 30's post before I found this) 1161 changed.


Easy:

SPOILER

larger circle size? sorry ;_; I want to set,Because This diff is [Easy]

Combo mod:
00:12:12 (1) - unless this new combo is for the slowdown, remove it remove(fixed)
00:40:01 (1) - remove new combo done
00:44:23 (1,2) - add a new combo to 2 and remove 1's new combo (swap new combo) done
00:56:91 (2,1) - swap new combo done
01:23:95 (1,2) - swap new combo done

Timing section mod:
You should remove the unneeded timing sections in this difficulty such as:00:41:78, 00:42:00, 00:42:21
Because I was poor, it was not possible to understand ;_;

Normal:

SPOILER

Normal mod:
00:42:33 (2) - move a quarter note back done

Combo mod:
00:12:76 (1) - same as easy
Since you usually added a new combo when a line of lyrics finished in the beginning of the song, I am going to changea few things to be consistent with that. Change
00:43:81 (1) - remove new combo done
00:44:66 (1,3) - swap new combo done
00:52:69 (1) - remove new combo (if you want the combo to be shorter put a new combo on 00:51:00 (4)) done
01:04:52 (1) - remove new combo done
01:25:22 (8,1) - swap new combo done
01:38:32 (1) - remove new combo done

Hard:

SPOILER

lower the hp drain one notch? Change

Combo mod:
00:12:12 (1) - remove new combo done
01:20:57 (1) - remove new combo done
01:25:01 (11) - restack on the end of 10 (the trick is to turn off grid snap and turn distance snap to x0.0 done However, they shift and are displayed.;_;

01:26:91 (1) - remove new combo　done
01:38:32 (1) - remove new combo　done

Nice map. Star.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Great beatmap!
Star!

EEeee wrote:

Easy
Hahahaha, i'd expected to see some problems, but nice map
just a suggestion, maybe u can take away some inherit timing sections, the one's that are not in use, there are some check if u can stop em ^^　　　changed variously　^^

Normal
00:24:40 (5,6) - make sure this is spaced properly, 5 seems to be a bit too far atm, so space 5, then make sure 6 is still spaced ^^
resnap ^^ sorry,I was using other magnifications... I am Baka XD
that's it, whaaaaaaaa why are u making me mod a map without problems

Hard
damn, nothing, this diff kicks ass ^^ :3

definitely gonna star this map(also i'll star it so it's above 8 priority for ya, gets some BATs to look at this, it's really good)

Ichigo-Sora wrote:

[Easy]
01:22:71 - Add a note?　add~

[Hard]
00:36:86 (5) - New combo? (Since you did this earlier) done
01:17:85 (8) - Maybe shorten it so the first reverse is at 01:18:06 and reverse it twice more / reverse it once more and add a note at 01:18:69 done

A really nice map ^^

THX~

Lizbeth wrote:

this is your first map? awesome !! yeah XD

just a few suggestions

Hard
00:53:76 - maybe add note here? done
00:57:46 (8) - i think you miss the rhythm here, try this: remove this note, and add one at 00:57:25 done

normal
01:39:18 (11) - remove and add note 01:39:40 done

Easy
00:07:49 (2) - another repeat done
01:07:49 (4) - 1/2 beat earlier, and another repeat done
01:18:06 (4,5,6,7) - too hard for an easy imo... maybe turn this into a 1/2 beat slid then repeat it the times needed (there is a few more like this, do the same) just suggesting n_n fixed

if you re gonna do this changes, remember to fix the specing when its needed done~

good luck!
Star

THX~