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Marie - Clover Day's

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Laurier
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年4月13日 at 1:55:05

Artist: Marie
Title: Clover Day's
Source: Clover Day's
Tags: ALcot [Minakami Yuki] Fycho Tsukuyomi baldrace
BPM: 190
Filesize: 15471kb
Play Time: 02:09
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (3.02 stars, 141 notes)
  2. Fycho's Normal (4 stars, 171 notes)
  3. Insane (4.9 stars, 489 notes)
  4. Yomi's Insane (5 stars, 470 notes)
  5. Yuki's Hard (4.93 stars, 363 notes)
Download: Marie - Clover Day's
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Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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New beat map !!
Hard by [Minakami Yuki]
Normal by Fycho
2nd Insane by Tsukuyomi
Last edited by Laurier , edited 33 times in total.
Koiyuki
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Koiyuki
can I make a hard GD?
Laurier
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[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

can I make a hard GD?

gogo!!!
mochi
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Joined June 2010
mochi
can I make a hard GD?
Quilt
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Quilt
can I make a hard GD?
Tari
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Tari
Lol Laurier so popular
Lecana
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Lecana
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Quilt
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Quilt
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i know this map will be banned by alcot
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litoluna
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litoluna

Quilt wrote:

i know this map will be banned by alcot
Laurier
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Laurier

litoluna wrote:

Quilt wrote:

i know this map will be banned by alcot
uwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
kintyan
150 posts
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kintyan
hi~
[General]
Artist:真理絵　
Tags:ALcot （エルは大文字）
ついでに ALcot 10th Anniversary
追加しとこう！Artist名はClover Days の公式にも書いてあります

[Easy]
01:07:587 - 不要な緑線？
01:42:324 (4,1,2) - 個人的にここあんまり綺麗じゃないかなー　かと言ってイイ修正案も無いからスルーしてください

[Fycho's Normal]
00:27:955 (2) - Vocal star to 00:27:797 plz add circle
00:34:429 (1) - ^ 00:34:271
00:39:481 (1,2) - 1 to x:412 y:84, 2 to x:455 y:300
code
412,84,39481,6,0,P|312:111|302:215,1,220,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,299,40745,2,0,L|412:84,1,220,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
good diff XD

[Yuki's Hard]
00:18:166 (2,3,4) - Not match sound
00:58:902 (3) - remake plz
01:04:745 (1) - ^
01:05:376 (3) - ^
01:26:850 (3,4) - overlap. suggestion
SPOILER
01:26:850 - 1/2 slider
01:27:166 and 01:27:324 circle
01:28:587 (1) - remake plz

[Insane]
00:11:376 (6) - NC? 音変わるしあってもいいかも
00:12:639 (4) - remove NC
00:18:166 - 音が小さくて良くわからないけど多分BPM変動してると思う
あとタンタタタタタタタタみたいに聞こえるから　今で言う 00:18:245 ここはいらないかな？
01:09:639 (3,4,1) - ここは離して置いてるのに 01:11:534 (2,3,4) - ここは重なって置いてあって個人的に気になった
01:17:692 (2,3) - 音取りの提案
SPOILER
01:17:692 ここに1/1slider置いて
01:18:166 circle
01:18:324 1/2 slider とかどうかな
こんな感じ
slider end で声拾ってあってちょっと気になった
01:38:850 (1,2,3) - 2 3を1/4?sliderの方が個人的には好きだった
01:51:639 (1,2,3,4,5) - ここも最初の方と同じでBPM変動してる可能性が

知り合いが良い譜面って言ってたよ＾ｗ＾
SPOILER
BGかわいすぎンゴゴゴゴゴｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗ
Laurier
1,785 posts
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Topic Starter
Laurier
ariagtooooou
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
http://puu.sh/6Isbk.osu
Freya
337 posts
Joined March 2013
Freya
okay Here is your M4M
lovely song Laurier

  • [Insane]
    00:00:639 (1,2,3,1,2) - in the opening it's more better to set with same distance spacing so player can adapt with the song
    if you dont want to set 00:00:639 (1,2) bit more far and 00:00:955 (2,3,1) a bit closer together so it's match with vocal

    00:07:745 (1,2,3) - i dont think blanket is good for the rhytym since it's 1/4 and flow is broke, i think it's more better if you put 2 and 3 a bit up
    00:11:060 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - mind unstack the stream? i think its more better
    01:22:113 (4,5,6,7) - ^
    00:11:376 (6,7,1) - please set with same distance spacing since because stream and sv change, the current one is confusing imo,
    or set the 3 slider closer it's okay

    00:17:692 (1) - set the slider like this http://puu.sh/6OZXU.jpg so the flow is match with slider before and stream thereafter
    00:31:824 (4,1) - unstack please, i can't tell that is 1/4, and there's no meaning if you put NC but you stacked with note there
    00:48:324 (1) - its more better like this http://puu.sh/6P2fm.jpg for sake of flow exactly.
    01:15:481 (3) - i think flow with slider before is bad there, but i can't find out what pattern that more suitable. i hope you can tweak it a bit
    01:24:481 (3,4) - Ctrl + G it's more better if you put shorter spacing there
    01:32:218 (1,2) - reduce the spacing? its more better because you put stacked stream before, but the current is okay if you unstack the stream i think
    01:34:113 (2) - Ctrl + G for better flow
    01:39:955 (2,3,1) - intentional? stack more better please
    01:41:060 (3,4) - move a bit to right http://puu.sh/6P36A.jpg. the current one is confusing because spacing with 2 is too huge

    [Yuki's Hard]
    00:12:639 (4) - please put spacing same with before because the sound same like 00:12:166 (2), it's more better and not really confusing. reduce it a little is okay maybe

    00:17:692 (4) - ^
    00:13:429 (4,5,6) - give some stack, because if you don't you must move the cursor slightly which is really bad for the flow
    00:18:166 (2,3,4) - i think it doesn't match with drum, or at least really confusing. trust me.
    it's more better if you put slider reverse like 00:18:639 (5) or you can modifying it a bit

    00:20:692 (2,3) - i know your intention but the spacing change is too sudden and it's big too. Ctrl + G is alternative
    but if you can tweak it it's ok

    00:24:166 (3) - the NC is better if you put here, so you can tell if that's 1/2 after long space
    00:27:797 (3) - ^
    00:29:218 (4) - ^
    00:26:850 (1,2) - yaa i think its confusing too for some advanced player because, you put some stack too at 00:25:587 (1,2)
    and it has different rhytym

    00:43:902 (3) - Ctrl + G, i doubt you'll like it but i think it's more better than the current
    00:47:534 - add note here, it's confusing because there's loud sound of drum
    00:55:902 (1,2,3,4) - move all to the right for the sake of flow http://puu.sh/6P4LS.jpg, but yeah the jump a bit harsh.
    so it's better if you can remap on that part

    01:01:587 (2) - move down a little for perfect flow try 488 116
    01:04:745 (1,3) - i doubt this two sliders rankable, please remake for safe
    01:28:587 (1) - ^
    01:16:429 (1,2,3,4,5) - move it further a bit, so it doesn't overlap each other
    01:17:692 (2) - not good flow here Ctrl + G please
    01:22:113 (4) - ^
    01:25:271 (2,3) - reduce some spacing it's more better, because of cymbal it gives me impression that the rhytym is 1/4 lol
    01:35:060 (1,2,3,4) - i'm not fan of this pattern, it's confusing lol yeah this one is my personal taste actually

    [Fycho's Normal]
    00:30:324 (2,3) - different spacing?
    00:12:008 (1,2) - stacked like this is not good for opening i think, since is lower diff
    you can make like 00:25:429 (4,5) it's more better

    00:33:797 (3) - whistle?
    01:33:166 (2) - give clap like 01:33:481 (3) is more better i think
    01:52:902 (1) - is the spinner a bit long? reduce it please

    [Easy]
    00:07:271 (2,1) - i think overlap like this is not good for easiest diff
    00:40:745 (2,3) - ^
    00:19:271 (1) - finish at tail
    00:55:587 - drum sound a bit hard, it's more better if you give note, it's easiest diff after all,
    newcommer tend confused with something like this

    01:52:745 (1) - 6 secs spinner? reduce it please
solid mapset Laurier,
i hope this mapset ranked,
>///<
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Laurier
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Laurier

Freya wrote:

okay Here is your your M4M
lovely song Laurier

  • [Insane]

    01:41:060 (3,4) - move a bit to right http://puu.sh/6P36A.jpg. the current one is confusing because spacing with 2 is too huge



    [Easy]

    00:19:271 (1) - finish at tail
solid mapset Laurier,
i hope this mapset ranked,
>///<
changed that two things. thanks!!
Holoaz
358 posts
Joined November 2009
Holoaz
[Easy]
EasyっていうよりかなりNormalだと思います
00:17:692 (2) - Clap消してFinish→00:18:008 (1) - 始点のFinish削除でいいと思います
00:50:850 (2) - 1/2短くして00:52:113にadd note?
せっかくTick Rate2なんですしCustom soundでTickに音付けてみては？ 特にサビ

[Normal]
初めが他の難易度より遅いので他の難易度に合わせたほうがいいかと
00:09:481 (1,1) - spin後の間が少なすぎると思います。（Normal的には）
00:20:376 (1,1) - ^
00:27:797 (2) - add note
00:58:429 (4) - 折り返し地点のClap削除
01:35:060 (1) - 折り返し地点のFinish削除

[Hard]
結構難しいと思うのでCircle一つ大きくしてもいいかも？
00:22:113 (1) - ここからのWhistleの音がただ不規則なだけに聞こえるので曲に合わせるか規則性をもたせたほうがいいと思います

[Insane]
00:18:166 (2) - この連打1/3です
00:22:113 (1) - ここからサビ前まで完全にOver mappingだと思います。
スライダーの速度を落とすなりもう少し曲に合わせて音取るなりした方がいいかと
01:47:060 (4,5) - この連打1/3です
01:51:639 (1) - ここからの連打1/3です

サビのHit soundの音量80%ぐらいでもいいと思います。今のままだと少し聞こえにくいところがあるので
Koiyuki
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Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
thanks for modding >.<
Reisen Udongein
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Joined January 2010
Reisen Udongein
Hello! from your M4M queue!

[General]



two different tags are mixed because of that weird blank

[Easy]

00:05:376 (1) - bit monotone, how about arranging like this? http://puu.sh/6Qzjb.jpg
also, i think RNC here with 00:07:271 (2) - (NC) , 00:07:745 (1) - (RNC) will be better
00:28:113 (1) - RNC
00:33:166 (2) - move the last tick to right 1 point (for the symmetric reason with 00:31:902 (1) - )
00:45:797 (3,4) - i think these two bell-ringing sounds are bit louder than normal sounds, so i suggest you to lower these to 45%
01:15:481 (3) - what about just default normal-hitnormal sound on the end? (Just suggestion)
01:25:429 (2) - add finish on both start and end
01:44:534 (3) - add finish on the end will be much fit to next finish sound nice to hear i think
01:52:113 (3) - same issue as 00:45:797 (3,4) -

[Fycho's Normal]

I highly suggest to map the start part of the song, no reason to leave that part blank i think..(also there is no reason to set preview time on your diff if this part is blank)

00:15:797 (2) - making this slider bit curvy like this will have the better flow http://puu.sh/6QAhx.jpg
00:27:797 - as the vocal starts 00:27:797 - , i highly suggest you to add a note here. (stack on 00:27:955 (2) - 's start)
00:38:060 (3) - it's too simple! how about arranging like this http://puu.sh/6QAqG.jpg
00:39:324 - same issue as 00:27:797 -
00:54:639 (1,2) - make these two sliders symmetric will be seemingly better http://puu.sh/6QAwh.jpg
01:16:429 (3) - NC?
01:18:008 (2) - make this slightly curvy will be better http://puu.sh/6QADz.jpg
01:38:850 (2) - (nazi) put this on x:140 y:56 to make these two (1,2) sliders look like a circle? http://puu.sh/6QAIV.jpg (if you do this, surely there should be little replacement to the following notes)
01:44:850 (3) - add finish like what i'm saying on easy diff mod
01:52:902 (1) - add default soft-whistle on this spinner

[Yuki's Hard]

I have downloaded this diff several times , but your diff has all 2 timing sections on same place! remove one like this

00:02:692 (1,2,1) - default soft-whistle will be better
00:11:692 - make this green line's volume 60% as the others do (50% is bit low)
00:16:113 (3) - add finish on the end
00:45:797 (1) - i think this kind of sudden custom whistle is bit awkward..
01:03:324 (1,2) - i think that snap is too small, how about arranging like this? http://puu.sh/6QBuF.jpg
01:25:429 (3) - NC for the aesthetic reason? (Just suggestion)
01:37:587 (1) - add a default soft-whistle on start and same thing on 01:38:850 (1) -(with removing hitsound on 2nd and adding default soft whistle on the end) ?
01:44:850 (6) - add finish on the start
01:52:113 (4) - ctrl+g?
01:52:824 (1) - add default soft-whistle

[Insane]

00:25:271 (4) - ctrl+g for more fun
00:56:929 (4) - i think removing this and add a note on 00:57:008 - will be better. http://puu.sh/6QBYQ.jpg (make triangle)
01:25:429 (3) - NC for the aesthetic reason? (Just suggestion)
01:44:850 (7) - add finish on the start

was really fun to play

every diff has nice quality, and i was really fun modding this.

Good luck!

btw yay 900th post
Fycho
Global Moderator
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Joined August 2012
Fycho

Sheryl wrote:

hi~
[Fycho's Normal]
00:27:955 (2) - Vocal star to 00:27:797 plz add circle ok
00:34:429 (1) - ^ 00:34:271 ok
00:39:481 (1,2) - 1 to x:412 y:84, 2 to x:455 y:300 ok
code
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454,299,40745,2,0,L|412:84,1,220,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
good diff XD

Freya wrote:

[Fycho's Normal]
00:30:324 (2,3) - different spacing? fixed
00:12:008 (1,2) - stacked like this is not good for opening i think, since is lower diff changed pattern
you can make like 00:25:429 (4,5) it's more better
00:33:797 (3) - whistle? no good for me
01:33:166 (2) - give clap like 01:33:481 (3) is more better i think it will break my hitsound pattern
01:52:902 (1) - is the spinner a bit long? reduce it please no, this spinner is fine as all diffs are the same

Holoaz wrote:

[Normal]
初めが他の難易度より遅いので他の難易度に合わせたほうがいいかと yes, mapped the beginning
00:09:481 (1,1) - spin後の間が少なすぎると思います。（Normal的には） I think the spinner is fine, it's not soon between spinner and the slider
00:20:376 (1,1) - ^ ^
00:27:797 (2) - add note ok
00:58:429 (4) - 折り返し地点のClap削除 ok ,removed
01:35:060 (1) - 折り返し地点のFinish削除 removed finish and added whistle

Reisen Udongein wrote:

[Fycho's Normal]

I highly suggest to map the start part of the song, no reason to leave that part blank i think..(also there is no reason to set preview time on your diff if this part is blank) yes, mapped

00:15:797 (2) - making this slider bit curvy like this will have the better flow http://puu.sh/6QAhx.jpg nope.
00:27:797 - as the vocal starts 00:27:797 - , i highly suggest you to add a note here. (stack on 00:27:955 (2) - 's start) added
00:38:060 (3) - it's too simple! how about arranging like this http://puu.sh/6QAqG.jpg right!
00:39:324 - same issue as 00:27:797 - fixed
00:54:639 (1,2) - make these two sliders symmetric will be seemingly better http://puu.sh/6QAwh.jpgI prefer my shape
01:16:429 (3) - NC?no, break my nc pattern
01:18:008 (2) - make this slightly curvy will be better http://puu.sh/6QADz.jpgstraight slider is also fine for me
01:38:850 (2) - (nazi) put this on x:140 y:56 to make these two (1,2) sliders look like a circle? http://puu.sh/6QAIV.jpg (if you do this, surely there should be little replacement to the following notes)ok
01:44:850 (3) - add finish like what i'm saying on easy diff mod ok
01:52:902 (1) - add default soft-whistle on this spinnernoisy for me so not added
thanks for modding
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osu file format v12

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338,157,99797,1,2,0:0:0:0:
415,201,100113,6,0,L|401:317,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,235,101060,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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141,342,104850,1,12,0:0:0:0:
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