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Dormir - Sayonara Trip [OsuMania]

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Topic Starter
Bruce
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年3月8日 at 10:28:45

Artist: Dormir
Title: Sayonara Trip
Source: jubeat
Tags: TOMOSUKE crimm knit plus jukebeat REFLEC BEAT
BPM: 133
Filesize: 3453kb
Play Time: 01:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. Lv.10 - 8Key (4.17 stars, 819 notes)
  2. Lv.5 - 8Key (1.77 stars, 348 notes)
  3. Lv.7 - 8Key (2.76 stars, 543 notes)
Download: Dormir - Sayonara Trip
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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8K Sorry to make the same Song twice
Lv.10(Another)-100%
Lv.7(Hyper)-100%
Lv.5(Normal)-100%
BG From AsprikaQ's Map
4K+7K Version
Akasha-
1st \:D/
8K ... ... ... ... ... ...
First time try to make 8K! Can I join your map!
Topic Starter
Bruce

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

1st \:D/
8K ... ... ... ... ... ...
First time try to make 8K! Can I join your map!
No,thanks~not accept more GDs, sorry :(
richardfeder
/o/
Skalim
8K map o____O, now i can practice :D (i´ll edit this for mod request)

Edit. Mod by request

Lv.4

01:42:506 - add 1 note?, sound note
01:44:311 - add 1 note, different sound what the "scratch"
01:46:115 - ^

Lv.6

00:44:311 - This pattern are not present in the other patterns of before (like 00:29:875 - )(sorry, the screenshot of osu is bad now lol) erase 1 note or follow the pattern adding 1 note in the notes of before
01:34:611 - add 1 note following the stream of before and the rhythm
01:46:115 - add 1 note

Lv.9

00:11:378 - add 1 note, follow the pattern
00:29:875 - add 1 note, clap beat and strong drum
00:30:100 - add 1 note, drum
00:37:093 - add 1 note, clap beat
00:44:536 - erase this "scratch" and add 1 note, these scratch can did a confusion in the play
01:13:408 - ^
01:31:679 - add 1 "scratch"
01:38:897 - ^

Easy diffs = Short mod

i hope this can help you ^^
Nitori
Hello! M4M request.

I list columns like 1 2 3 4...

[Lv 9]
SPOILER
00:01:453 - General thoughts for the intro: instead of placing notes somewhat randomly, make them more in line with the pitch. For example: http://puu.sh/71wkw.png
00:05:514 (5514|0) - remove
00:07:318 - add note on 0
00:07:769 - add note on 0, I like how it matches that synth sound
00:11:378 - add a note
00:15:438 (15438|0,15664|0) - On most of the sets of 3 specials, the first 2 seem unimportant. The special can be used on a strong beat, but not necessarily leading up to it.
00:28:296 (28296|3) - move to 4
00:30:326 (30326|7) - remove
00:43:859 (43859|0,43972|0,44198|0,44311|0) - Remove. It's hard to play these quick notes with your weakest finger, which is what usually presses the special key.
00:58:747 (58747|0,58859|0,58972|0) - ^ fix these in general
01:01:228 (61228|5) - move to 2

[Lv 6]
SPOILER
This seems a bit hard for Lv 6. Either tone it down or change the difficulty name.

Same as before, match this beginning part to the pitch.
00:01:679 (1679|0) - Move half a beat forward
00:07:318 - add note on 0
00:07:769 - add note on 0, I like how it matches that synth sound
00:10:476 (10476|4) - I see how you're trying to match the melody more here, but since you're only doing it for one measure, it feels empty. Either do it for several more measures (at least 4) or don't switch at all.
00:22:656 (22656|0,22882|0) - Same as before with these "leading" special notes.
00:26:491 (26491|5) - remove
01:02:356 (62356|0,62581|0) - One special note at the start of the measure, and remove these two. Continue for the rest of the song.

[Lv 4]
SPOILER
00:01:679 (1679|3) - remove
00:01:905 - add note
00:02:356 - add note
00:15:438 (15438|6) - move to 2
00:22:656 (22656|0,22882|0) - Same as before with these "leading" special notes.
00:54:461 (54461|2,54687|4) - move half a beat back
01:06:190 (66190|4) - move to 5
01:13:183 (73183|0) - remove
01:31:228 (91228|3,91453|3) - Move to 6, this part is hard with one hand on an easy level
01:34:837 (94837|3,95062|3) - Move to 4 ^
01:42:281 (102281|4) - Move to 5
01:42:506 - Add a note on 6

Hope that helps. I'm not very good at explaining things, so if something seems confusing, please ask.
asd123iii
等你改完mod 8-)
Topic Starter
Bruce

Nitori wrote:

Hello! M4M request.

I list columns like 1 2 3 4...

[Lv 9]
SPOILER
00:01:453 - General thoughts for the intro: instead of placing notes somewhat randomly, make them more in line with the pitch. For example: http://puu.sh/71wkw.png OK
00:05:514 (5514|0) - remove
00:07:318 - add note on 0 Wait Further Mod
00:07:769 - add note on 0, I like how it matches that synth sound Wait Further Mod
00:11:378 - add a note OK
00:15:438 (15438|0,15664|0) - On most of the sets of 3 specials, the first 2 seem unimportant. The special can be used on a strong beat, but not necessarily leading up to it. Wait Further Mod
00:28:296 (28296|3) - move to 4 No,thanks
00:30:326 (30326|7) - remove OK
00:43:859 (43859|0,43972|0,44198|0,44311|0) - Remove. It's hard to play these quick notes with your weakest finger, which is what usually presses the special key. Wait Further Mod
00:58:747 (58747|0,58859|0,58972|0) - ^ fix these in general Wait Further Mod
01:01:228 (61228|5) - move to 2 OK

[Lv 6]
SPOILER
This seems a bit hard for Lv 6. Either tone it down or change the difficulty name.

Same as before, match this beginning part to the pitch.
00:01:679 (1679|0) - Move half a beat forward OK
00:07:318 - add note on 0 Wait Further Mod
00:07:769 - add note on 0, I like how it matches that synth sound Wait Further Mod
00:10:476 (10476|4) - I see how you're trying to match the melody more here, but since you're only doing it for one measure, it feels empty. Either do it for several more measures (at least 4) or don't switch at all. OK
00:22:656 (22656|0,22882|0) - Same as before with these "leading" special notes. Wait Further Mod
00:26:491 (26491|5) - remove OK
01:02:356 (62356|0,62581|0) - One special note at the start of the measure, and remove these two. Continue for the rest of the song.No,thanks

[Lv 4]
SPOILER
00:01:679 (1679|3) - remove Wait Further Mod
00:01:905 - add note Wait Further Mod
00:02:356 - add note Wait Further Mod
00:15:438 (15438|6) - move to 2 OK
00:22:656 (22656|0,22882|0) - Same as before with these "leading" special notes.
00:54:461 (54461|2,54687|4) - move half a beat back OK
01:06:190 (66190|4) - move to 5 OK
01:13:183 (73183|0) - remove OK
01:31:228 (91228|3,91453|3) - Move to 6, this part is hard with one hand on an easy level OK
01:34:837 (94837|3,95062|3) - Move to 4 ^ OK
01:42:281 (102281|4) - Move to 5 OK
01:42:506 - Add a note on 6 OK

Hope that helps. I'm not very good at explaining things, so if something seems confusing, please ask.
Thanks Nitori~

Skalim wrote:

8K map o____O, now i can practice :D (i´ll edit this for mod request)

Edit. Mod by request

Lv.4

01:42:506 - add 1 note?, sound note OK
01:44:311 - add 1 note, different sound what the "scratch" No,thanks
01:46:115 - ^ No,thanks

Lv.6

00:44:311 - This pattern are not present in the other patterns of before (like 00:29:875 - )(sorry, the screenshot of osu is bad now lol) erase 1 note or follow the pattern adding 1 note in the notes of before OK
01:34:611 - add 1 note following the stream of before and the rhythm OK
01:46:115 - add 1 note No,thanks

Lv.9

00:11:378 - add 1 note, follow the pattern OK
00:29:875 - add 1 note, clap beat and strong drum OK
00:30:100 - add 1 note, drum No,thanks
00:37:093 - add 1 note, clap beat OK
00:44:536 - erase this "scratch" and add 1 note, these scratch can did a confusion in the play OK
01:13:408 - ^No,thanks
01:31:679 - add 1 "scratch" OK
01:38:897 - ^ No,thanks

Easy diffs = Short mod

i hope this can help you ^^
Thanks Skalim~
Nitori
Oh no, did I say columns like 1 2 3 4?

I meant like 0 1 2 3, sorry... This means all the columns in my mod should be shifted to the right one.
asd123iii
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|
[General]
總覺得搓盤有點太多...小指頗累

[Lv.4]
搓盤留剩finish, 其它移到一般按鍵這樣?

[Lv.6]
同上

[Lv.9]
同上
00:43:972 (43972|0) - remove
01:12:844 (72844|0) - ^
01:41:829 (101829|0) - ^

其它沒什麼問題
Topic Starter
Bruce

asd123iii wrote:

|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|
[General]
總覺得搓盤有點太多...小指頗累 唔..
[Lv.4]
搓盤留剩finish, 其它移到一般按鍵這樣? 考虑一下

[Lv.6]
同上

[Lv.9]
同上
00:43:972 (43972|0) - remove 考虑一下
01:12:844 (72844|0) - ^ 考虑一下
01:41:829 (101829|0) - ^ 考虑一下

其它沒什麼問題
Thanks asd~

Nitori wrote:

Oh no, did I say columns like 1 2 3 4?

I meant like 0 1 2 3, sorry... This means all the columns in my mod should be shifted to the right one.
OK i will recheck your mod~ Thanks~ Please give me kudosu in your Trigger Happy :)
Luyuja
column SP 1234567

[LV.9]
应该改成LV.10 因为盘子太难

总体有点单调 但是除了单调外没啥问题了。。

00:55:589 - 00:56:491 这一段的楼梯看起来有点别扭,用手台的话打起来也不舒服。。换一下吧,比如两段向左的楼梯
01:12:844 (72844|0) - 这个SP也是写的鼓吗?

[LV.6]
排列没问题,抓音没问题,怎么mod嘛。。
盘子还是难了一丁点
Topic Starter
Bruce

Luyuja wrote:

column SP 1234567

[LV.9]
应该改成LV.10 因为盘子太难 好的

总体有点单调 但是除了单调外没啥问题了。。

00:55:589 - 00:56:491 这一段的楼梯看起来有点别扭,用手台的话打起来也不舒服。。换一下吧,比如两段向左的楼梯 好的
01:12:844 (72844|0) - 这个SP也是写的鼓吗?是的

[LV.6]
排列没问题,抓音没问题,怎么mod嘛。。
盘子还是难了一丁点
多谢鲈鱼哥 :)
richardfeder
Sayonara Trip扩充包计划? 还是Sayonara Trip资料片计划?xDDDD

Lv.10
如果你盘子抓的是我想的音的话...应该漏了两个
00:04:611 (4611|0) -
00:06:416 (6416|0) -

00:14:085 (14085|0) - 加一个做1/4

00:15:438 (15438|0,15664|0) - 这两个音色其实和你前边1/1的打拍子是一样的所以我觉得这里没理由放SP. 我建议放到一般轨道去. 第三个盘子留着做crash

00:22:656 (22656|0,22882|0,23108|0) - 同理

00:28:521 (28521|0) - add同上

00:29:875 (29875|0,30100|0) - 同上

00:37:093 (37093|0,37318|0,37544|0) - 同上

00:42:957 (42957|0) - add 同上

00:43:859 (43859|0,43972|0,44198|0,44311|0,44536|0) - 同上

01:38:446 (98446|0,98671|0,98897|0) - ^
...唔后面的盘子都觉得...

01:42:506 (102506|2,102506|4,104311|7) - delete

00:58:521 (58521|5) - 挪去SP

Lv.6
00:07:318 (7318|0,7769|0) - delete

00:04:837 (4837|2) - delete

01:42:506 (102506|7) - delete

01:46:115 (106115|5) - add

Lv.4
00:14:085 (14085|7) - 挪到SP

后面还是建议不写1/4的地方写一个盘子代替

01:42:506 (102506|7) - delete
干 这mod出东西来吗? (/me run
加油! :)
Topic Starter
Bruce

richardfeder wrote:

Sayonara Trip扩充包计划? 还是Sayonara Trip资料片计划?xDDDD ←_←

Lv.10
如果你盘子抓的是我想的音的话...应该漏了两个
00:04:611 (4611|0) - OK
00:06:416 (6416|0) - OK

00:14:085 (14085|0) - 加一个做1/4 X

00:15:438 (15438|0,15664|0) - 这两个音色其实和你前边1/1的打拍子是一样的所以我觉得这里没理由放SP. 我建议放到一般轨道去. 第三个盘子留着做crash OK

00:22:656 (22656|0,22882|0,23108|0) - 同理 OK

00:28:521 (28521|0) - add同上 OK

00:29:875 (29875|0,30100|0) - 同上 OK

00:37:093 (37093|0,37318|0,37544|0) - 同上 X

00:42:957 (42957|0) - add 同上 X

00:43:859 (43859|0,43972|0,44198|0,44311|0,44536|0) - 同上OK

01:38:446 (98446|0,98671|0,98897|0) - ^ OK
...唔后面的盘子都觉得...

01:42:506 (102506|2,102506|4,104311|7) - delete OK

00:58:521 (58521|5) - 挪去SP OK

Lv.6
00:07:318 (7318|0,7769|0) - delete OK

00:04:837 (4837|2) - delete OK

01:42:506 (102506|7) - delete OK

01:46:115 (106115|5) - add OK

Lv.4
00:14:085 (14085|7) - 挪到SP OK

后面还是建议不写1/4的地方写一个盘子代替

01:42:506 (102506|7) - delete OK
干 这mod出东西来吗? (/me run
加油! :)
多谢PC~
Spy
Hi,mod by request !

Column : SP 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

[General]
Tags : TOMOSUKE crimm knit plus jukebeat REFLEC BEAT
Where is your hitsounds ?
Song Setup內的Advanced,Use special style(N+1 style) for mania打勾

[LV.4]
00:01:453 (1453|5,1679|3,3258|4,3709|2,4160|1) - 始終不能理解這是什麼,抓音斷斷續續
感覺這難度不只LV.4,5差不多吧,比Akasha的Easy簡單一些
簡化些

[LV.6]
00:12:957 (12957|7) - Remove ?
00:30:100 (30100|4) - Move to 2
00:56:265 (56265|4) - Remove
既然你這個是6,而上一個是4,那其實2個應該差不遠,不過我覺得這2個差遠了,也許7

[LV.10]
00:03:258 到 00:05:062這段和00:05:062 到 00:06:867 差不多的旋律,怎麼前面SP滿滿後面沒了
00:16:566 - Add a note at SP ?
00:17:468 - Add a note at SP ?
00:18:371 - Add a note at SP ?
00:21:303 - Add a note at SP ?
00:21:529 - Add a note at SP ?
00:21:754 - Add a note at SP ?
00:23:784 - Add a note at SP ?
00:24:687 - Add a note at SP ?
00:26:717 - Add a note at SP
00:28:521 - Add a note at SP
00:28:747 - Add a note at SP
00:28:972 - Add a note at SP
Well。。後面想法都一樣,你自己斟酌,不多點了
00:35:514 (35514|7) - Remove
階梯區的話我覺得也不要一直抓同幾個音,可以前面抓幾個音,後面再重複一次的時候抓成階梯

我已經懶得吐槽同一首歌了2度map了
Good luck to 7+1 mapset o/
Topic Starter
Bruce

Spy wrote:

Hi,mod by request !

Column : SP 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

[General]
Tags : TOMOSUKE crimm knit plus jukebeat REFLEC BEAT
Where is your hitsounds ?
Song Setup內的Advanced,Use special style(N+1 style) for mania打勾 All Fixed

[LV.4]
00:01:453 (1453|5,1679|3,3258|4,3709|2,4160|1) - 始終不能理解這是什麼,抓音斷斷續續 X
感覺這難度不只LV.4,5差不多吧,比Akasha的Easy簡單一些
簡化些

[LV.6]
00:12:957 (12957|7) - Remove ? X
00:30:100 (30100|4) - Move to 2 Fixed
00:56:265 (56265|4) - Remove X
既然你這個是6,而上一個是4,那其實2個應該差不遠,不過我覺得這2個差遠了,也許7

[LV.10]
00:03:258 到 00:05:062這段和00:05:062 到 00:06:867 差不多的旋律,怎麼前面SP滿滿後面沒了 改了
00:16:566 - Add a note at SP ?
00:17:468 - Add a note at SP ?
00:18:371 - Add a note at SP ?
00:21:303 - Add a note at SP ?
00:21:529 - Add a note at SP ?
00:21:754 - Add a note at SP ?
00:23:784 - Add a note at SP ?
00:24:687 - Add a note at SP ?
00:26:717 - Add a note at SP
00:28:521 - Add a note at SP
00:28:747 - Add a note at SP
00:28:972 - Add a note at SP
Well。。後面想法都一樣,你自己斟酌,不多點了 求放过啊 那样子得至少11啊
00:35:514 (35514|7) - Remove Fixed
階梯區的話我覺得也不要一直抓同幾個音,可以前面抓幾個音,後面再重複一次的時候抓成階梯 Fixed

我已經懶得吐槽同一首歌了2度map了
Good luck to 7+1 mapset o/
Thanks Spy~
Remillion Cross
hi Simple_Star, i afraid if my mods will destruct any style, so..i just mod and give some suggestions ( and that's not mean i'm lazy )

[Lv.5]
*00:23:108 (23108|4) - i think it's great, but will be better if put the circle to 3rd column, since 00:23:333 (23333|5,23559|7) - pattern is a little strange to match with 00:23:108 (23108|4) -
*00:26:717 (26717|7,26942|5,27168|4) - you can follow the pattern in 00:28:521 (28521|6,28747|4,28972|2) - for a suggestion, but if you not agree, so 00:27:168 (27168|4) - move it to 3rd column

[Lv.7]
*00:11:378 - add one circle in 2nd column ( lol i didn't notice if this will like a 00:10:025 (10025|4,10250|6,10476|4) - pattern )
*00:22:656 (22656|1,22882|1) - i don't think if this is a best place, but i dunno maybe it's your style ( Maybe move that 2 circle to 3rd column )

[Lv.10]
*00:19:047 (19047|6) - putting a triple notes in here is a little strange, maybe put this to 2nd column for balance
*00:28:070 (28070|2) - same as ^ , move this to 6th column ( once again, if it's your style, that's fine )
*00:46:341 -, 00:48:145 -, 00:49:950 -, and so on until 00:53:559 - Actually, in that timing, i heard the sound, maybe it's like a piano or electronic sound. But the strange is, you only put the circle in this timing 00:55:363 (55363|2) -
Try to put the circle in there, as you like ( Or, you can look the pattern from 01:13:634 - to 01:24:461 - )
*00:55:025 - add one circle in 5th column


Nice mapset, i hope it's ranked, because it's rare to find 8k maps after akasha
Anyway, you need hitsounds.
Topic Starter
Bruce

Remillion Cross wrote:

hi Simple_Star, i afraid if my mods will destruct any style, so..i just mod and give some suggestions ( and that's not mean i'm lazy )

[Lv.5]
*00:23:108 (23108|4) - i think it's great, but will be better if put the circle to 3rd column, since 00:23:333 (23333|5,23559|7) - pattern is a little strange to match with 00:23:108 (23108|4) -
*00:26:717 (26717|7,26942|5,27168|4) - you can follow the pattern in 00:28:521 (28521|6,28747|4,28972|2) - for a suggestion, but if you not agree, so 00:27:168 (27168|4) - move it to 3rd column
All Fixed
[Lv.7]
*00:11:378 - add one circle in 2nd column ( lol i didn't notice if this will like a 00:10:025 (10025|4,10250|6,10476|4) - pattern )
*00:22:656 (22656|1,22882|1) - i don't think if this is a best place, but i dunno maybe it's your style ( Maybe move that 2 circle to 3rd column ) Um..

[Lv.10]
*00:19:047 (19047|6) - putting a triple notes in here is a little strange, maybe put this to 2nd column for balance OK
*00:28:070 (28070|2) - same as ^ , move this to 6th column ( once again, if it's your style, that's fine ) OK
*00:46:341 -, 00:48:145 -, 00:49:950 -, and so on until 00:53:559 - Actually, in that timing, i heard the sound, maybe it's like a piano or electronic sound. But the strange is, you only put the circle in this timing 00:55:363 (55363|2) - Um...
Try to put the circle in there, as you like ( Or, you can look the pattern from 01:13:634 - to 01:24:461 - )
*00:55:025 - add one circle in 5th column OK


Nice mapset, i hope it's ranked, because it's rare to find 8k maps after akasha
Anyway, you need hitsounds.
Thanks Remillion Cross~ :)
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