Rey-volution wrote:

Sangat baik :3
sayang lagunya kurang panjang Hohoho.

[Normal]
00:45:970 (6,1) - Blanketnya dibikin begini Ok

SPOILER

lalu objek2 selanjutnya dideketin jadi DSnya balik 1,20 lagi
00:47:735 (2,3) - Sama ^ Ok

SPOILER

01:11:118 (1) - kurasa bagusan kalo Finish nya dihapus No

[Hard]
DSnya Variasi, ada yg 1.85, 1.81, 2.2, 0.91, tapi aturan DSnya 2.0 Buat variasi kak
mungkin dibikin lebih konsisten biar bagus. Untuk jump it's okay, tapi aku masih bingung DS utamanya berapa? 1.00 sama 2.00
Tapi overall bagus kok

Maaf kurang banyak, soalnya dah cukup bagus Moga sukses

arviejhay wrote:

Hello Mako
to your queue m4m round
Sorry if i'm not a good modder
But i hope it helps

NORMAL
00:14:648 - slider (start) - remove finish
00:19:957 - slider (start) - Add finish
01:23:492 - slider (start) - Add finish
01:27:882 - slider (Middle) - Maybe Add finish?
01:01:399 - slider (Middle and End) - Maybe Add finish?
Ignore the epilepsy warning Thanks, but my SB not too flashy, for this time no need to add

HARD
Ignore the epilepsy warning Thanks, but my SB not too flashy, for this time no need to add
Use DS and fix the warning in the aimod (check distance snap) if you want
Nice i love the map and the song too it kinda reminds me of something lol
even i don't understand the language
maybe you could add a subtle translate in english Will consider latter~
Good luck

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

M4M, Ill try my best!

NORMAL

00:01:853 (2) - Think it'll look neater if this and the slider was aligned together so I suggest moving this to (124,304) Ok

00:05:382 (2) - Same suggestion as ^, but instead move to (392,304) Ok

00:15:971 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is a good pattern but too many 1/2 circles can make it a bit hard for Normal players, so I suggest changing some to sliders e.g. I think It's not really that hard imo, well I will consider It latter

SPOILER

00:38:030 (x) - suggest adding a note here because there is vocal at this point No

00:44:206 (2,3,4,5,6) - Again, good pattern but too many 1/2 circles. use above as reference I think It's not really that hard imo, well I will consider It latter

01:00:529 (7) - May look better if this is curved a bit Ok

HARD

00:56:559 (x) - Add a note here to continue the flow of the music and the beats No

01:14:647 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Its probably not necessary to NC all these notes. since there's 8 of them, try splitting into combos of 4 Ok

01:21:706 (1) - Would be really awesome if you made the heart close~ I've tried my best to make a lovely heart, that's the best I ever create

01:28:764 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - same as 01:14:647 Ok

Beautiful song & beautiful mapping good luck!

OscaR CUBE wrote:

Hi, mau mod nihh,, tpi maaf klo gak puas yaa...

SPOILER

NORMAL
- 00:05:824 (1) - coba ini soundnya diganti jadi normal, tapi tetap suara yg finish...??
- 01:17:735 (3) - sama ^
- 01:05:382 (2,3) - coba ini jangan di susun (stack), krn yg sbelum-sbelumnya juga gak di susun, lgian lbih bgs klo gak di susun juga.. (?)
- Udah bgs.. hitsound sma SB nya mantapp...

SPOILER

HARD
- 00:00:530 (1) - Coba diganti spt ini...?? http://puu.sh/6QUbY.jpg
- 00:04:059 (1) - sama ^
Tapi kalau tetap mau spt itu,,
- 00:00:530 (1) - sound nya dinaikin volumenya...
- 00:04:059 (1) - sama ^
- 00:05:824 (1) - coba spinner nya dikurangin sampe garis merah... trus sundnya jadi normal - finish??


- 01:14:647 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - jgn di-new combo smua... Ok
- 01:28:764 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - sama ^ Ok
- 01:14:647 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - kurang rapi nihh... coba kaya gni?? http://puu.sh/6QUJt.jpg ini letak nya dilihat dari garis lintang dan bujur Itu rapih kok kak
- 01:15:970 (1) - x : 388, y : 36
- 01:16:411 (1) - x : 448, y :100
- 01:16:852 (1) - x : 468, y : 188
- 01:17:293 (1) - x : 448, y : 248
- 01:17:735 (1) - x : 356, y : 208
- 01:28:764 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - sama ^
ATAU
- 01:17:293 (1,1) - ini dijadikan slider aja...


- 01:21:706 (1) - pindahkan di tengah...

Lagunya bagus,, tapi kurang panjang...
Moga mapnya ranked yaa.. (map ku juga... )

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, M4M mod o̿ ̭ o̿

[General]
*Don't forget to turn on the epilepsy warning! Ok, the SB is not yet complete, [b]My SB is just lyric, not too throbing eyes, so I guess no
[Normal]
Circle size +1? I'm not very use to seeing objects this small in a Normal diff OAO But It fit prety well for me with the curent CS
00:30:530 (5) - NC Ok
01:04:059 (1) - The default soft-finish hitsound may sound better on the head,so it matches the faint cymbal crash heard in the music The default soft finish hitsound still too loud in my ear, I have adjusted the volume down as well but It feel too loud
01:17:735 (2) - Same suggestion as above, with the tail. Same reason ^
01:25:235 (1) - ^ Same reason ^
01:31:853 (4) - ^ with the reverse arrow Same reason ^

[Hard]
00:31:412 (4) - Shrink tail to 00:31:853 so it hits the 'ku' in doaku

I follow the background music, so I guess no
Cute song Thanks
Hope this helps!

_AI wrote:

m4m from your queue owo!

[General]
Your offset is slightly delayed, try 512 The curent one is fine imo
I not 100% sure about this, but is it rankable for a slider's head or tail to be silent (5%) volume? I don't know about that, unless someone mention It again

[Hard]
00:13:747 (5,6) - Just a suggestion http://puu.sh/6RULV.jpg Nice sugestion, but the flow will bit broken this part 00:14:206 (6,1) - so I guess no
00:18:159 (1) - Slider end point move to x240 y176 **just something nazi Ok
00:28:747 (1) - Suggest you to do it like that since the previous slider's curve is sharper and it can't match this, a back flow will be nice http://puu.sh/6RUPz.jpg Ok
00:43:747 (2,3,4) - A better pattern could be apply here, flow isn't nice in low bpm No, that part is ok
~lagu cantik owo! low bpm won't hve much mistake imo tho :pp but there are many nazii blanket and some i nvr point them out, juz care it yourself :pp Haha thanks :p

[Normal]
00:32:294 (7) - NC Ok
00:44:647 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe you can change them into 2 1/2 slider? No
01:00:530 (7) - NC Ok
01:12:441 (4,5) - blanket hu It's blanked already but not too well :p
~same2 je dng hard, nazi sini nazi situ je kalo aku point it out :ppp Makasih yaaa :p

good luck!
its kinda rare to see indo song x) nice Let's get It ranked!

Lapis Aoki wrote:

M4M from my queue~ owo
[General]
-The combo colours don't fit, I'll give you another one~ :3 The curent one is prety lovely imo, so nno need to change

[Colours]
Combo1 : 192,35,31
Combo2 : 236,206,179
Combo3 : 125,91,66
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

-I feel like the SB is done, so I guess you should move it to pending. Sure~
[Normal]
00:16:412 (3,4,5) -They look hard, add a slider at 00:16:412 till 00:17:294 No, no need to do
00:34:941 (1) -Finish. I choose whistle instead
00:44:647 (3,4,5) -Remove them and add a slider at 00:44:647 till 00:45:530 No, no need to do
00:47:735 -Remove note maybe. There's a bass sound on that one
01:05:382 (2,3) -Remove stack please. I follow the bass sound and I think It would be good if I stack that part
01:08:912 (2) -^ Same as above
[Hard]
00:02:071 -Break. No, no need to do

TESTPLAY:

NORMAL:

Really fun to play, but there's some notes you have to move.

HARD:

That stack at end is so confusing, try to move it. Its really hard to get 1000 in the first spinner cause there's a slider at 00:07:588 and the spinner ends at 00:07:368 But It's fine I think no need to change that part

GL ~ ! c:

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, M4M mod o̿ ̭ o̿
[notice][General]
*Don't forget to turn on the epilepsy warning!

Why? There's nothing colourful in this map, its only lyrics, so, no need for epilepsy warning. :/

Kibbleru wrote:

m4m from ur queueeee

if you find this mod absolutely useless don't bother modding my map

[Hard]

00:00:530 (1) - improve this blanket on the end of (2)
00:04:059 (1) - ^

00:39:353 (1) - improve blanket (abit) (really nazi) (forgive me but ur map is good already) <-- if you want just ignore this
00:52:588 (5) - ^
00:53:471 (1) - ^
00:54:353 (2) - ^
00:57:882 (2) - ^
ehh there's more but this is getting too picky and you can probably find them youself

This would be a pain to fix now but just for future note, can i recommend you to double your bpm? you have a bunch of things ending on blue ticks that would end on red or white ticks if you had a higher bpm

try to make ur spacing a bit more consistent.
ie.
you have this
00:24:353 (5) -
then you have something like this
00:26:118 (2) -

00:49:941 (1) - here too, this isnt distance snapped even if you have 2x spacing

00:01:853 - 00:04:059 - Add a short break here? just so ppl don't lose too much hp

00:29:647 (2,3) - these aren't parallel (ignore if its meant to be like that)
00:31:412 (4,1) - ^

01:13:765 (4,1) - not stacked properly (disable grid snap)

01:16:411 (1,2,3,4) - why the change in spacing? can be confusing

01:17:735 (4) - placement looks a bit ugly imo but should be fine



[Easy]

00:46:412 (1) - improve blanket (i was hoping not to have to check this but ur map is already pretty good so im going to get into the fine detail stuff)
00:48:176 (3) - ^
01:12:441 (4) - ^
00:19:941 (3) -

01:12:441 (4,1) - these don't look well together