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Tatsh Feat. Junko & Sayaka - Double Infinity Loving Heart

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Chozx
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Chozx
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on vrijdag 16 oktober 2009 at 19:26:03

Artist: Tatsh Feat. Junko & Sayaka
Title: Double Infinity Loving Heart
Tags: Tatsh Feat. Junko & Sayaka
BPM: 138
Filesize: 18614kb
Play Time: 04:13
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,55 stars, 380 notes)
  2. Normal (4,12 stars, 294 notes)
Download: Tatsh Feat. Junko & Sayaka - Double Infinity Loving Heart
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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First beatmap

Thx to Ultimate

16-10-09(Made .osz smaller 17mb), Changend Storyboard (thx to x3ns0r)
Last edited by Chozx , edited 5 times in total.
Alice
2,673 posts
Joined October 2008
Alice
Normal
01:16:89 ( ) - kiai only few times?.. I'd see it through all this part.
03:07:55 (6) - clap 1st return (03:07:76)

Hard
00:47:33 (6) - align with previouses? :3
00:48:42 (around here) it should be more like this

00:59:07 (5) - clap!


For a first map it's seriously more than awesome!!
Star.
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
starred :lol:
Chozx
Topic Starter
Chozx

Alice Margatroid wrote:

Normal
01:16:89 ( ) - kiai only few times?.. I'd see it through all this part.
03:07:55 (6) - clap 1st return (03:07:76)

Hard
00:47:33 (6) - align with previouses? :3
00:48:42 (around here) it should be more like this
[attachment=0:1e9b1]huh.png[/attachment:1e9b1]
00:59:07 (5) - clap!


For a first map it's seriously more than awesome!!
Star.
Edited !
Jinxy
2,777 posts
Joined February 2009
Jinxy
No offense, but I recommend removing the storyboard, as it is overly zoomed in and does not look pretty at all.
Crop the butterflies, and use those as sb. Don't overdo it, though.

[Normal]
01:32:54 (5) - New Combo.
01:04:72 (5) - New Combo.

[Hard]
1/6? Are you sure?
02:08:42 (5) - New Combo.
03:08:20 (9) - New Combo.
03:45:23 - Remove the break here.
04:10:81 (9) - New Combo.
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3

JInxyjem wrote:

No offense, but I recommend removing the storyboard, as it is overly zoomed in and does not look pretty at all.
Crop the butterflies, and use those as sb. Don't overdo it, though.
No Offense to you too but those images are not zoomed in at all.they are on a very big scale..bigger then the maximum osu resolution

it's just a matter of taste i guess

i comment on this cuz i editted those images to make them smaller in filesize (officially they were 6-9 MB each)

Beatmap was over 24MB
depending on what Pulsje says i will adjust them for him cuz he asked to do them
Chozx
Topic Starter
Chozx

JInxyjem wrote:

No offense, but I recommend removing the storyboard, as it is overly zoomed in and does not look pretty at all.
Crop the butterflies, and use those as sb. Don't overdo it, though.

[Normal]
01:32:54 (5) - New Combo.
01:04:72 (5) - New Combo.

[Hard]
1/6? Are you sure?
02:08:42 (5) - New Combo.
03:08:20 (9) - New Combo.
03:45:23 - Remove the break here.
04:10:81 (9) - New Combo.
Edited
Henkie
728 posts
Joined July 2008
Henkie
Great beatmap! :U
And good job Ultimate~
Star.

(Yea, too sick to mod now, maybe later)
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
Here's some suggestions, remember you don't have to take all or them, or any of them, if you don't want to:

Normal:

SPOILER
00:22:98 (8) – New Combo?
00:28:20 (7) – New Combo?
00:36:68 (3) – Move this away from 00:35:59 (2) ? Use the same spacing.
00:38:20 – Add a note?
00:38:41 – Add a note? – These two notes are consistent with the earlier section.
00:48:41 – Add a note?
00:51:02 (4,5,6) – These hitsounds sound a bit strange for this song. Normal would work.
00:53:85 (3) - ^
00:54:28 (5) - ^
01:04:72 (1,2,3) - ^
01:11:68 (5,6,7,8) - ^
01:59:07 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:02:98 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
02:36:89 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) – If you tried mapping this part on grid 3 or repositioned the sliders you might be able to create a better circle [if that is what you wanted?].
03:01:46 (8) – New combo?
03:11:68 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – Completely random custom hitsounds if you ask me.
03:32:114 - Increase hitsound audio by 1 or 2.
03:32:54 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) – This is an example of better hitsounds :D
04:04:07 (8) – New combo?

General:

The way you have the small sliders such as at 00:21:24 (5,6,7) – and 00:39:50 (2,3,4) – and 00:46:02 (1,2,3,4) - just seems like random slider placing. On a plus note it plays fine, so I’m not sure what to make of it. An example of how I think you could place them better would be at: 00:39:50 (2,3) – align the start of 3 with the end of 2 and the end of 4 with the end of 3. – See if you like it and do the same to similar small sliders if you do, if not it still plays fine.

For the hitsounds try a normal beat on “soft”, or reduce the sound of normal beats on “normal”, a bit like 03:32:54 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) –


Hard:

SPOILER
The same thing about the hitsounds applies here, I’m not going to point out every time you use a custom hitsound.

Timing - I think you could have mapped this in 1/4 or 1/8, you mapped normal in 1/4 for some reason this is in 1/6. Also 2118 offset for hard and 2115 for normal, you might want to get someone more experience at timing to look at this, but the offset for both difficulties should be the same [I think].

I like the layout on this much better, but none of this is mapped on white ticks = usually a timing problem [not my area].

This plays well though, I had no problems hitting 300s, its well laid out and easy to play.


This is a nice map so here is a star!
Chozx
Topic Starter
Chozx
I think the map is good enough???
Maybe not ....
Kurai
osu! Alumni
7,734 posts
Joined March 2009
Kurai
Hi~
Scuse me for my bad English :?

[Normal]
02:22:33 (1) - Reduce this slider to 1/2
02:23:41 (2) - Remove this slider
02:22:98 (2) - Creates a slider which ended 02:24:071
03:01:46 (8) - New Combo ?
03:03:20 (13) - I think that note rings false

[Hard]
^^

☼Star☼
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
I think the map is good enough???
Maybe not ....
No the map is really good [I did star :D ], I didn't mean to give that impression with my mod sorry. They are just suggestions, they are not always right.

Just use what you like and leave out what you don't. Map it the way you want and keep up the good work ;)
happy30
Featured Artist
2,064 posts
Joined August 2008
happy30
[SB]

- I think the images in the first half are moving too fast.
- It doesn't look good when you can see the edges of fading images. (like on 00:16:02 (x))
- Please use only images smaller than 800x600.

[Normal]

nothing wrong but those hitsounds are really random ...

[Hard]

Fix the timing here.. the notes are snapped on 1/6 ??
Use slider tick rate 1? sliders like 02:13:31 (3) - doesnt look good with a tick.
Not much else, please fix the timing here.
HolyBoy
104 posts
Joined July 2009
HolyBoy
Normal

00:39:489 (2) - Move this slider 1/4 back thenmake it 1/4 longer
00:40:362 (4) - Make this slider 1/4 Shorter
00:41:470 (1) - Make this spinner 1/4 longer
00:45:977 (1) - Make this slider 1/4 shorter
00:46:460 (2) - Move this slider 1/4 back then make it 1/4 longer
00:47:314 (4) - Make this slider 1/4 longer
01:06:473 (5) - Move this slider 1/2 back and then make it 1/2 longer
01:08:201 (1) - Make this slider 1/4 longer
01:08:641 (2) - ...^
01:20:382 (1) - Either... (Make this Slider 1/4 Longer) OR (Delete Slider and add a note at 01:20:464 (Blue Tick) )
01:39:286 (3) - Make this slider 1/2 shorter
01:39:951 (4) - Move this Note 1/4 back
02:12:955 (1) - Make this slider 1/4 shorter
02:14:514 (4) - Move this sldier 1/4 forward and then make it 1/4 shorter
02:59:502 (5) - Move this Slider 1/2 forward and then make it 1/2 shorter
03:06:228 (3) - Make this Slider 1/2 Shorter
03:06:903 (4) - Move this note 1/4 back
04:02:104 (5) - Move thsi sldier 1/2 forward, and then make it 1/2 shorter
04:08:835 (3) - Make this slider 1/2 shorter
04:09:442 (4) - Move this note 1/4 back



Hard

I see nothign wrong in this Difficulty ^_^



Remember This is only Suggestions and does nto have to be taken in if you don;t want to... and only change what u think is goign to help your map ^_^

Star!... good map ^_^
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
zozozofun
zozozofun
I see nothing is wrong is this map, not really my music style but its a good map.
~star
Shinde
osu! Alumni
707 posts
Joined April 2009
Shinde
I didn't take an in-depth look at it since I was just going to look at timing, but overall it looks solid. It looks good, and if xensor's co-mapping this I think it's safe to say it's deserving of another star.

But uh. Don't use the BG like that for SB'ing. You can see the edge of the BG, and it looks bad. If you fade the edges of the BG in Photoshop/etc, this won't be noticeable if you do it right. I'm sure granted your skill and experience, this should be no problem for you xensor? (You haven't fixed this yet, right? I downloaded this 15 minutes ago and it was still like this. Pulsje mentioned something about a SB change soon though so.)

Well if I said anything redundant, I apologize. Good luck.
Chozx
Topic Starter
Chozx
I already said..

i will soon upload new Storyboard and fixes.....
Be patient
Last edited by Chozx , edited 1 time in total.
Ultimate
382 posts
Joined December 2008
Ultimate
Eeh Pulsje ^^

Just passing by to drop of a star for this beautifull but simple map ;)

Tags: Add more tags pls.
StoryBoard: the file size is too big, (not according to regulations) try to make it under 10mb.

hope I was a big help! ^^
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EDIT:

DUDE WTF did you do to this map man, it's too big (18.2 MB). Completely facked up, Offset is wrong, Storyboard = ?.? and,, raaaaaaaaaa.
I'm out.. I cant bare this!
Chozx
Topic Starter
Chozx
Graveyard plzzz....
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