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[General]
You should work on the spread Settings a bit, they seem weird for me. 2/3/2 4/6/4 6/8/6, like, the AR increase is quite high between easy / normal, isn't it?
I would make normal ar 5, it seems really high how it is now.
[Easy]
00:17:242 (3) - Hm. The big White tick here is a quite strong one, my Suggestion is to remove this slider and add 2 circles instead. The finish off of this part would be way better.
00:24:061 (4) - Move this one a bit down to get a better made Overall-pattern.
http://puu.sh/7COG7/0177c75f46.jpg Looks cleaner, and the DS is better used too.
01:04:982 (3,4) - Same as above, you could improve this blanket a bit, so the Overall pattern Looks neater. Just move them around a bit.
01:26:800 (1,2,3,4) - This is a very weird pattern to be honest. It doesn't have a good movement Feeling at all, and imo the end should be a bit .. more spectacular.
http://puu.sh/7COUs/6e39cfa781.jpg What about this? Looks cute and Plays really good.
[Normal]
The flow gets better over time, at the begin it's Kind of sloppy sometimes. Maybe we can clean it up a bit.
00:08:728 (1) - It already starts here - the flow is Kind of not existant (even if there is a big gap, but oh well). What about moving it to the right side of the map?
00:14:061 (1,2,3,4) -
http://puu.sh/7CPeH/14cdd94e72.jpg Flow is very important in 1/3 rhythm, that's why I'd like to suggest one or two Patterns, maybe you like them more as well. Maybe it brings you even new ideas, which are even better
But yeah, this one is definitely for flow reasons.
00:17:697 (1,2,3) - If you want to Keep this pattern, shift those 3 a bit to the left, then make sure that the Transition works better, like this:
http://puu.sh/7CPlU/5b5db72e03.jpg00:35:424 (4) - Why not having a blanket here?
00:45:727 (6) - Move this one a bit to the right again, due to Transition Problems. Make sure your new stuff is there, where the slider end goes to.
00:46:333 (7,1) - Quite hard rhythm for a normal. What about making those a slider? The flow would be awesome too! For some Variation, you could add a straight slider.
http://puu.sh/7CPuM/53cf9e1a59.jpg00:52:242 (1) - blanket
00:57:545 (1,2,3,4,5) - yeah.. XDD the stack at the begin is really too hard, please get rid of it. The rest of the rhythm might be fine tho.
01:17:103 (4) - Do you think a normal Player can catch this beat without Problems? It's quite out of the current beat, because the vocal is later as expected. You might wanna find another solution for this one.
brb back
[Hard]
00:26:333 (2,3) - First of all, try to blanket them a tiny bit better (not much!) 00:27:242 (4) - then move this a bit to the left so it Looks better.
http://puu.sh/7CQAA/ee39e08d9f.jpg something like this (not a really good made example xD)
01:07:558 (3,4) - Not sure if you like, but imo the flow is more interesting like this.
http://puu.sh/7CQLS/0e166109e2.jpg01:10:437 (3) - Just a small adjustment; 80 40?
01:19:982 (3) - ^
01:23:618 (4) - bad Transition again. You should rotate it a bit, so it works better. Let me explain (in case you don't understand) 1-2-3 goes a curve, 4 goes a curve. The whole thing should be one - it's not at the Moment, you understand?
01:29:982 (8) - Why did you silence this one, would Sound pretty cool without the silence.
Overall, this map is way better than the normal. Some parts look a bit .. nooot soo goooood. Let me Point them up.
00:48:606 (2,3) -
01:00:437 (4,5) -
01:06:346 (4,5,6,1) - (pretty obvious you've run out of space - still, try to fix it, it's worth it)
Good luck!