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Himemiya Milan & Chocolate Rockers - Tomadoi Bitter Tune

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jmaeshawn
170 posts
Joined May 2008
Topic Starter
jmaeshawn
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, January 28, 2010 at 8:52:27 PM

Artist: Himemiya Milan & Chocolate Rockers
Title: Tomadoi Bitter Tune
Source: Nogizaka Haruka no Himitsu
Tags: Anime, Secret, haisha_
BPM: 148
Filesize: 11516kb
Play Time: 01:15
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.02 stars, 55 notes)
  2. Haisha's Tune (4.8 stars, 197 notes)
  3. Hard (4.64 stars, 186 notes)
  4. Normal (3.98 stars, 99 notes)
Download: Himemiya Milan & Chocolate Rockers - Tomadoi Bitter Tune
Download: Himemiya Milan & Chocolate Rockers - Tomadoi Bitter Tune (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 15th beatmap! This is the opening to the first season of Nogizaka Haruka no Himitsu.

I want it to be fun for everyone to play, so please mod/comment away on it and give me tips to improve it :)

EDIT: Made Kytoxid's changes and changed the ending slider to a spinner.
EDIT: Made blissfulyoshi's changes.
EDIT: Made hitsound/volume changes.
EDIT: Added beats and raised difficulty level on Hard.
EDIT: Added some skin elements (transparent spinner background, etc.)
EDIT: Finished Normal, moved to pending. Rank soon-ish, perhaps?
EDIT: Added Haisha's guest difficulty.
EDIT: Changed offset to 2390 as per Osuplayer's suggestion.
EDIT: Made a lot of changes to Normal and Hard difficulties.
EDIT: Added Easy difficulty.
EDIT: Added Haisha_ to tags.
EDIT: Made Larto's changes.
EDIT: Made Mystearica's changes.
EDIT: Made Lybydose's changes.
EDIT: Made Mafiamaster's changes.
EDIT: Made Agent Spin Here's changes.
EDIT: Made jericho2442's changes.
EDIT: Made 0_o's and Lissette's changes.
EDIT: Made James2250's changes.
EDIT: Made Easy's circles bigger per RemmyX25's request.
Last edited by Gens , edited 39 times in total.
Shinde
osu! Alumni
707 posts
Joined April 2009
Shinde
Attached .rar with the comboburst, then one with a white glow, one brown glow, and one a pinkish purple glow.

I resized the pictures, if you dislike the width/height or want a different glow/etc., I still have the original 1100x1500~ .psd file and can do any fixes/etc so just tell me via irc or PM.
SPOILER
Download: Combobursts.rar
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
Preview point.

00:34:58 (1,2) - Separate these a tiny bit more so that they have the same overlap as the other 1/2s.
01:19:38 (2) - Center this note?
01:22:42 (4,5,6,7) - Very hard to read what's going on here. Adjust it a bit?

Pretty nice overall though. :)
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
4,755 posts
Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
Offset: 772

I personally do not think the normal custom whistle fits the song.

Normal:
SPOILER
The small circle size did not make the song feel like a normal diff.

Normal mod:
01:12:08 (7) - spacing

Combo mod:
00:21:65 (8) - new combo for new line of lyrics
00:39:48 (6) - ^
00:42:32 (2) - new combo?

Timing section mod:
You should probably have kiai start where the lyrics start.
Ex: 00:45:93 - should be moved to be on 00:46:13 (1)

Nice map so far. Star.
Feel free to pm me when the other diffs are finished for me to mod them.
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
This seems to be shaping up quite well, since this is a WIP my I haven't looked at symmetry, here are some suggestions:

Hard

00:05:63 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too many finishes at the start imo, also I'd consider alternating between "soft" and "normal" hitsounds such as: 00:05:63 (1) - Normal finish, then go to soft hitsounds then at 00:12:12 (1) - Normal finish, in general I think normal hitsounds are a bit too heavy for this song.

00:12:12 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 7 finishes in a row is a lot, ^
00:22:86 - Add a beat?
00:31:380 - If you use soft hitsounds I don't think this reduction in volume would be necessary.
00:42:32 (2) - Off grid
00:43:74 - Add a beat? And then bring in the spinner after it?

Try raising the difficulty by 1 or 2 ticks since this is a hard, Hp drain rate up 1 tick as well.

Overall, its a nice map and is looking good, I'll star when its pending, if you want me to re-mod later feel free to PM or catch me in mod :D

Keep up the good work!
Jinxy
2,777 posts
Joined February 2009
Jinxy
00:14:55 (5) - Move 1 grid up
00:16:78 (10) - New Combo?


Starred, even though I will never look at it again P: (No Offense.)
jmaeshawn
170 posts
Joined May 2008
Topic Starter
jmaeshawn

JInxyjem wrote:

Starred, even though I will never look at it again P: (No Offense.)
It's that bad? :(
Jinxy
2,777 posts
Joined February 2009
Jinxy

jmaeshawn wrote:

JInxyjem wrote:

Starred, even though I will never look at it again P: (No Offense.)
It's that bad? :(
Nah, its just the anime. The map itself is great.
nazenaze
62 posts
Joined December 2008
nazenaze
00:40:090 (1) - your default snapping is 0.8, and that beat is in 0.5 bpm section - snap it with 1.6, cause now it feels wierd :)
the rest is fine

*star* :)
alvisto
881 posts
Joined April 2009
alvisto
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Fuuko
486 posts
Joined June 2009
Fuuko
Here's my mod. x3'

Red : Check this
Blue : Hints ( don't necessary need to change, but it's the way the song feels to me )

0:20:028 (5) - Clap this.
0:20:839 (6,7) - Clap the (6), Clap+Finish the (7)
0:22:258 (5) - Clap this.
0:25:096 (1,4,5) - Clap.
0:29:249 (7) - Clap.
0:29:961 (9) - Clap + Finish + Whistle.
0:31:582 (1,7) - Clap. ( Almost for sure, make sure to check this. )
0:35:636 (5,6) - Clap.
0:37:055 (8) - Clap + Finish.
0:38:069 (3,4,5,8,9) - Clap.
0:45:569 (1,2) - Clap. ( Sounds way better at least. )
0:49:015 (4,5) - Clap. ( Really sounds nice, not sure though, check it and test. )
0:49:826 (8,9,11,12) - Clap.
0:54:285 (6,7) - Clap.
0:57:934 (8,1) - Clap.
1:03:001 (7,8) - Clap.
1:12:123 (7) - Clap.

Overall :
1:06:637 (7) - Break this into a new combo.
1:01:977 (4) - I think you should check this inverse, sounds weird/wrong.



The sound is really weird without this.

Anyways, really nice song ( I like it myself, but rather the ED ), and a really nice map.
Star~. :3
K-S-O
298 posts
Here since the beginning
K-S-O
I feel Normal might be a bit too difficult for a "Normal" difficulty. Try toning it down a bit.

I can't help but notice that some of the arrangements in the second half of both difficulties are the same. I would try to re-arrange things to differentiate between the 2 modes.
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
very nice map

[Hard]
add a kiai end at 01:27:021

starred
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
aesopl19193
Hi =]

There are my suggestion only -v-

[Hard]
00:08:880(7) - new combo
00:15:366(7) - new combo
00:22:866(5,6) - are they too far? also move (6) 1 place down
01:11:819 (x) - add note

[Normal]
00:46:177 ~ End - This seems the same as Hard?? I prefer change it , or change in Hard.

All in all , I think your map followed the lyrics and main rhythm too much ,
it is so boring for play ,
For Normal , it is just ok,
but for Hard ... you know.
You should try to be more creative at note =]
0_o
2,155 posts
Joined December 2008
0_o
Hard
00:14:055 (5,6,7,8) - It doesn't effect gameplay, but the spacing is noticably a bit messy here
00:22:086 (5,6) - Unintuitive spacing
01:20:002 (x) - Add a beat here? It plays better imo

And you are making an Easy right? Normal is pretty tough for the easiest diff right now, so if you aren't, you should :P

I liked the EBA snaps, it works :)
arien666
6,273 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
[Normal]
Overall Difficulty actually needs to go up by a couple ticks (to 4?).

I think the difficulty as it is right now is OK. Just make an Easy.

01:12:012 (4) - Break distance snap, and move further away from (3).
Kerensa
167 posts
Joined January 2009
Kerensa
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Kerensa
167 posts
Joined January 2009
Kerensa
WHAHAHAHA i just finished making it =3
enjoy ~

Download: Himemiya Milan & Chocolate Rockers - Tomadoi Bitter Tune (jmaeshawn) [Haisha's Tune].osu
Kerensa
167 posts
Joined January 2009
Kerensa
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Himemiya Milan & Chocolate Rockers - Tomadoi Bitter Tune (jmaeshawn) [Haisha's Tune].osu
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