1. Easy (1,97 stars, 195 notes)
2. Hard (4,4 stars, 323 notes)

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

Offset = 16280 (resnap all notes) Done
Set preview point. Done
Add hitsounds. Done
Add breaks. kinda done

[Easy]

Use 1/4 Beat Snap Divisor.
00:33:037 (7) - New combo Done
01:47:091 (7) - New combo nah... doesn't fit so well
02:03:036 (6) - ^ Done
02:34:026 (1) - Is this necessary? D: what's wrong with it?

Technically the rest is fine...

[Hard]

Use 1/4 Beat Snap Divisor.
00:39:086 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing Done
00:47:002 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Done
01:04:026 (7) - New combo you don't like combos over 10 huh ^^
01:36:028 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Spacing Done

Technically the rest is fine here too...

Try to place all in the best way, and move correctly the circles/sliders/spinners in the timeline (remember, use 1/4 Beat Snap Divisor)

Good luck Thx

osuplayer111 wrote:

New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Video: No.
Storyboard: No.
Custom Skin: No.
Background: Yes.
Source: No. (Find some source if possible.)
Tags: No. (Add some tags.)
File Size: 3,66MB/24,00MB

[Overall]

- You have to set a preview point on all difficulties. urgh, thx

Timing: BPM: 134,00 - Offset: 16.330 (Remember to resnap all notes.)

[Difficulties]

[Easy]

Increase by 1 tick HP Drain for balance with Overall difficulty? yeah HP-drain was really low for some strange reason xD

00:15:038 (1,2) - You have some notes before the first offset here. - I used your offset and put it some whites back so that this isn't a problem anymore
00:50:030 (1) - Spinner too hard for an easy map. - right, removed
02:34:024 (1) - ^-^

[Hard]

All notes are placed on blue lines. That is absolutely wrong. Use my offset and resnap all notes and place on white and red lines. ok I have really no idea why they were like that, fixed now for sure =/

00:15:027 (1) - You have a note before the first offset here.
00:50:064 (1) - Never start spinners on blue lines if not necessary. - kay
01:41:035 (5,6) - Adjust spacing.
01:44:071 (4,5,6) - Wrong spacing.- spacing is correct for me o_ô if it's that they go forth and back, well... gotta make it harder ^^

[Easy]
Please decrease the circle size

Easy
You might want to increase the hitcircle size

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

"CD" isn't a source, "World of Warcraft" is if the song is from WoW. - "source is for me, from where I got it... that would be a CD ^^ also it's not a song 'from' WoW, more like 'for'
Todesritter is already in the title, no need for it as a tag. - kinda forgot.. =/
Consider using custom combo colours. - yah, shoud've used the default skin while making it.
Set the background colour to black? - why not..

The .osb file isn't really needed, remove it and do a full upload if you'd like. - what's it for anyway xD but are 197byte really going to be a problem ^^

[Easy]

Hitcircles could be bigger, I guess. Maybe Leorda was slightly confused. XD Put it to Large or Large-Normal. I'd also increase the OD a tick or two. - fine

I found the note placement a bit unpredictable.

[Hard]

I found this kinda confusing to play. Also, watch out for inconsistent spacing from grid snap; you should make sure your notes seperated by 1/2 barely touch throughout the map. - I got the idea and checked the whole map (includes most changes below)

00:19:024 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Turn off grid snap; this is spaced weirdly.
00:27:097 (3) - I'd move this to the right of 4 and down a bit.
00:35:035 (4,5,6) - Make a neater triangle?
00:39:083 (1,2,3,4,5) - Watch out for spacing again, turn off grid snap so that the notes are distance-snapped correctly. They should be barely touching.
01:00:065 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Hard to read and messy; if you keep it, shift 3 and 9 left a grid. - hehe, that was intentional. you see "einen wirklich fiesen mage" means "a really mean mage" so I made that part a bit confusing
01:07:037 (3,4) - Spacing.
01:10:095 (3,4) - ^ (last spacing thing I'm going to mention, they are littered throughout the map)

Overall, it looks alright except the weird spacing. Fix that please.