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Tomohito Nishiura - Deserted Amusement Park

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NoHitter
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NoHitter
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, January 01, 2007 at 1:10:20 AM

Artist: Tomohito Nishiura
Title: Deserted Amusement Park
Source: Professor Layton Luke Picarats Hat DS game NDS
Tags: Professor Layton and the Curious Village
BPM: 114
Filesize: 1391kb
Play Time: 01:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Mysterious (3.91 stars, 140 notes)
  2. Questionable (1.91 stars, 86 notes)
Download: Tomohito Nishiura - Deserted Amusement Park
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Professor Layton and the Curious Village Album

Composer: Tomohito Nishiura
Source: Professor Layton and the Curious Village
Genre: Folk

This sad and melancholic song is from the deserted amusement park found inside St. Mystere.
It was left to disrepair after the founder of the village died.
Last edited by NoHitter , edited 28 times in total.
Matma Rex
586 posts
Joined March 2009
Matma Rex
Wee, another Layton map~

Just a couple of suggestions.

- I like that SB :)
- Set ferris.png as BG to generate nice thumbnail. It gets covered anyway.

[Questionable]
I suggest to raise slider tick rate to 1. It sounds much better, especcially on these sliders at beginning.
Why there are so many inherited sections? At least some aren't needed, like these 4 at very beginning.
01:09:66 (1,1) - it's not a good idea to put two spinners one after one like this.

[Mysterious]
00:20:71 (1,1,1) - bah.
00:27:55 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I don't like silent endings on each (1).
00:31:63 (1) - doesn't fit IMO.


Also star.
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Questionable
00:26:50 (2,3) - clap the 2nd, finish the other
00:31:76 (1,3,4) - clap the 3rd, finish the others
00:41:24 (2,3) - end these sliders with a clap

Mysterious
00:51:24 (1,2,3,4) - weird spacing... make the beats further from each others...
00:57:55 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:03:87 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Another Professor Layton song mapped... and VERY organized! Star'd ;3
Jinxy
2,777 posts
Joined February 2009
Jinxy
You is pro.

You gets star.

I is bad grammar.

lol.
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442
[Questionable]
00:06:50 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - move this whole combo i bit right to it lines up with the next combo, it makes it look much better
(suggestion) 01:09:13 (3,1) - this jump feels uneeded for a easy

[Mysterious]
fine to me


nice maps, star :)
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
You need to cut your mp3. Otherwise, this is a very solid map. I love those strobes.
Nachy
807 posts
Joined April 2009
Nachy
Zzzzzzzzz~

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?zlrywmmyjt2
Azure_Kite
osu! Alumni
3,217 posts
Joined February 2009
Azure_Kite
Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Questionable]
An offset of 257 works best for me in this diff. Make sure that all your notes land on the correct ticks after resnapping.
No other problems found :)

[Mysterious]
An offset of 257 works best for me in this diff. As with questionable, make sure that all your notes land on the correct ticks after resnapping, since 1/6 timing may change them undesirably. Just go through and fix up any that are incorrect afterwards.
You may also need to reset your timing points so that they make the notes you want silenced actually silenced.
Other than that, no problems found :) You've done a good job on this one, too. Starred
bagnz0r
bagnz0r
[Mysterious]
00:28:414 - Missing note here.
00:28:678 - Missing note here.
00:29:993 - Missing note here.
00:30:256 - Missing note here.
Ekaru
3,617 posts
Joined July 2008
Ekaru
Questionable:

Delete all spinners but the last one. They're excessive and don't fit.

Mysterious:

I didn't like those short repeating sliders at the beginning, they didn't really fit.

Good job otherwise, star.
NoHitter
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NoHitter

BagnoGamer wrote:

[Mysterious]
00:28:414 - Missing note here.
00:28:678 - Missing note here.
00:29:993 - Missing note here.
00:30:256 - Missing note here.
Followed some...

Ekaru wrote:

Questionable:

Delete all spinners but the last one. They're excessive and don't fit.
Lessened amount of spinners but not all.
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
NoHitter

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Questionable]

00:06:57 (1) - Too far from (6).
Changed

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Mysterious]

00:09:59 (1,2) - Too close from (5).
00:12:75 (1,2) - Too close from (4).
Looks fine to me...
statementreply
Pro Tester
307 posts
Joined June 2009
statementreply
Nice map :)

My suggestions:

[Mysterious]
00:52:42 (6) - Move forward 1/8 to the white tick.
00:58:74 (7) - ^
01:05:05 (6) - ^
00:53:80 (1) - Move back 1/12 to the blue tick.
01:00:08 (3) - ^
01:06:39 (1) - ^
01:09:55 (1) - ^
01:12:88 (1) - Lengthen by 1/12, ending on the blue tick.
NoHitter
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Topic Starter
NoHitter

statementreply wrote:

[Mysterious]
00:52:42 (6) - Move forward 1/8 to the white tick.
00:58:74 (7) - ^
01:05:05 (6) - ^
00:53:80 (1) - Move back 1/12 to the blue tick.
01:00:08 (3) - ^
01:06:39 (1) - ^
01:09:55 (1) - ^
01:12:88 (1) - Lengthen by 1/12, ending on the blue tick. Added
The map is snapped to 1/6 in that part
Armin
osu! Alumni
2,454 posts
Joined May 2009
Armin
[Questionable]

No problems found.

Mysterious

00:00:257 (1,2) Clap at the end
00:07:099 (3,4) ^
00:16:046 (1,1,1,1,1) ^
01:11:309 Remove the clap at the end

That's all for me. Starred! :D
ccbp
411 posts
Joined August 2009
ccbp
all good to me, have a star
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[Questionable/Mysterious]

I found the Kiai times a bit random, but there were no real problems here.

[Unthinkable]

Guessing that this isn't done.

Lemme know when you finish mapping Unthinkable, and I'll pass along a star. :)
Last edited by Kytoxid , edited 1 time in total.
Amodeus
123 posts
Joined February 2009
Amodeus
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Behon
Elite Mapper
1,380 posts
Here since the beginning
Behon
Questionable:
00:34:993 to 00:40:849 could use some sound effects.
Mysterious has a slider tick rate of 0.5 that suits this song much better. Make this difficulty the same.

Mysterious:
01:12:888 (Spinner): Get rid of the 1 circle after this and extend the spinner to end in its place.
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