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smallboat

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-02-27T05:14:41+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年4月17日 at 下午 09:51:26

Artist: Aimi
Title: Link (TV Size)
Source: Oda Nobuna no Yabou
Tags: op opening The Ambition of Oda Nobuna 織田信奈の野望 Irie Miyuki Kawaiwkyik ZZHBOY
BPM: 185
Filesize: 17116kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

Easy (3.24 stars, 108 notes)
Hard (4.97 stars, 264 notes)
Irie's Insane (5 stars, 328 notes)
wkyik's Extra (4.9 stars, 356 notes)
ZZH's Normal (4.43 stars, 152 notes)

Download: Aimi - Link (TV Size)
Download: Aimi - Link (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#3 Ranked Map.

Easy by me

ZZH's Normal by ZZHBOY

Hard by me

Irie's Insane by Irie Miyuki

wkyik's Extra by Kawaiwkyik

Mod thanks

Meramipop
Fycho
Ikaros_F
Guy
IamKwaN
leon1341414
moonlightleaf
TaMul
Atrue
Chloe
Umi
Megurine Luka

Thanks BAT

jonathanlfj (Ranked)
Frostmourne (Bubbled)

High quality mp3 offer and video source

Kawaiwkyik
kookookook

Last edited by smallboat 2014-04-17T20:33:49+00:00, edited 37 times in total.

MeraMiPoP_old

155 posts

Joined October 2013

MeraMiPoP_old 2014-02-27T11:15:30+00:00

织田信奈的野望是什么..? 我查了一下是轻小说, 之前好像听说过叫织田信长的 0.0

Irie's Insane:
00:48:029 (2) - 这个note我觉得放在这里比较带感~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1371395
00:49:489 (7,8) - 稍微有点看不清了, 能不能这样呢 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1371396
01:14:300 (6) - 这个在音乐里反映的是降低音调, 我觉得稍微减少一些间距会比较符合这个特质 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1371398

Hard:
00:11:868 (3,4,5) - 我觉得最好带些坡度, 这样的直线有时候很难控制 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1371408
00:35:706 (1) - 不要加new combo; 尾上加finish会带感一些
00:49:165 (4,5) - 间距似乎有些混乱, 在4加上new combo吧
00:50:948 (4,1) - 这样比较好打 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1371414 注意去掉了前面滑条尾三连
00:54:354 (1,2,3) - 好像有些唱不准, 用slider比较好
00:57:435 (2,3) - 跳的有些大了吧
01:05:057 - add note?
01:18:679 (1,2) - 跳的有些大了, 把2做个ctrl+G吧
01:26:948 (2,3,4) - 这里结束的地方读图做简单一点比较好 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1371420

wkyik's Extra:
00:50:949 (4) - 往上一点不要叠起来?
为什么用的普通clap, 我觉得custom的那种比较好啊
00:57:273 (1,2,3) - 好难。。不过extra可以吧

Normal:
00:50:786 (8) - 节奏好像要往前一格
01:01:489 (3) - 这样放节奏是不是好些呢 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1371422
01:08:948 (2) - 滑条尾好违和
01:16:570 (2) - 这样放吗 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1371423

Easy:
00:31:002 (2) - 没包好..?

有空的话来看一下我的图吧0.0 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/141990 我的难度是merami's insane~

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-02-27T14:35:55+00:00

Meramipop wrote:
织田信奈的野望是什么..? 我查了一下是轻小说, 之前好像听说过叫织田信长的 0.0

Hard:
00:11:868 (3,4,5) - 我觉得最好带些坡度, 这样的直线有时候很难控制 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1371408 也是這樣直線看起來好奇怪

00:35:706 (1) - 不要加new combo; 尾上加finish会带感一些修了

00:49:165 (4,5) - 间距似乎有些混乱, 在4加上new combo吧修了

00:50:948 (4,1) - 这样比较好打 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1371414 注意去掉了前面滑条尾三连修了

00:54:354 (1,2,3) - 好像有些唱不准, 用slider比较好修了

00:57:435 (2,3) - 跳的有些大了吧修了

01:05:057 - add note? 跟人聲不了
01:18:679 (1,2) - 跳的有些大了, 把2做个ctrl+G吧修了

01:26:948 (2,3,4) - 这里结束的地方读图做简单一点比较好 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1371420 修了

Normal:
00:50:786 (8) - 节奏好像要往前一格
01:01:489 (3) - 这样放节奏是不是好些呢 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1371422
01:08:948 (2) - 滑条尾好违和
01:16:570 (2) - 这样放吗 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1371423

ZZH電腦壞了，這邊都修了

Easy:
00:31:002 (2) - 没包好..? 修了

有空的话来看一下我的图吧0.0 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/141990 我的难度是merami's insane~ 當然有空會去看已記

柚子說還好 No change

謝謝mod!

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-02-27T14:36:56+00:00

Meramipop wrote:
织田信奈的野望是什么..? 我查了一下是轻小说, 之前好像听说过叫织田信长的 0.0

这轻小说里各战国神将全变成妹子了，然后奈是日本里娘化人名的惯用方法。所以就恶搞了一下历史。

btw,我是路过打爆美雪的，insane做的不错，KIAI太鬼畜@@，
01:04:246 (6,7,8) - 这节奏怎么这么shit=.=哪有在重音处起三连的

[Hard]
00:55:002 (3,4) - 这啥玩意，两个物件还重叠在一起了，这是unrankable的
~~zzh的背景真是zz~~

Ikaros_F

88 posts

Joined December 2012

Ikaros_F 2014-02-28T05:07:16+00:00

hi，小船，說好的今天給你的Mod

嗯...我建議把記事本里的AudioLeadIn改成2000吧，不然剛剛打開這張圖過不到一秒就要開始玩讓玩家沒有緩衝時間。

[Irie's Insane]
00:13:489 (11) - 感覺這個跳的有點鬼畜，稍微往右上方移到一點吧
00:14:948 (6,7,1,2) - 我建議這樣→ http://puu.sh/7ddlg
00:50:786 (3) - 往左邊彎會合適一些吧，因為之後的circle是在左邊
01:27:678 (1) - 感覺這個轉盤有點短，一不小心就轉到100，把它移到01:28:732這裡吧

[Hard]
00:22:732 (1) - 換成一個回轉的滑條吧，因為感覺這個的ds不合群
01:05:220 (5) - 覺得往右轉會覺得和3比較靠近，所以建議往左轉吧
01:12:516 (2,3) - 可以稍微包好一點.

[wkyik's Extra]
00:12:030 (4,5,6) - 建議把這個和00:10:895 (3) - 做成一個直線，直接把6疊到3上
00:42:030 (7) - 把它移動到這裡→http://puu.sh/7df5a 讓00:42:030 (7,8,1) - 構成一個三角形會不會好一些
01:14:300 (1,2,3,4) - 我換了一下他的位置不知道會不會好一些，因為感覺這樣會和後面的比較相似→ http://puu.sh/7deSN
01:27:679 (1) - 感覺太短了建議移動到01:28:732

嗯...就只能摸這麼多了，祝早日rank

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2014-02-28T10:33:41+00:00

Ikaros_F wrote:
[wkyik's Extra]
00:12:030 (4,5,6) - 建議把這個和00:10:895 (3) - 做成一個直線，直接把6疊到3上 OK
00:42:030 (7) - 把它移動到這裡→http://puu.sh/7df5a 讓00:42:030 (7,8,1) - 構成一個三角形會不會好一些 OK
01:14:300 (1,2,3,4) - 我換了一下他的位置不知道會不會好一些，因為感覺這樣會和後面的比較相似→ http://puu.sh/7deSN KEEP
01:27:679 (1) - 感覺太短了建議移動到01:28:732 OK

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2014-02-28T18:45:30+00:00

Hi! from m4m request :3

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]

You should be set the combo color. Can not be recommended default color.
Please uncheck Letterbox during breaks and Widescreen support.
Add tag "織田信奈の野望" instead of "おだのぶなのやぼう"

[Irie's Insane]

00:03:273 (1) - (nazi) move to 1grid left for keep the straight line.
00:50:137 (1) - Add finish to slider head.
01:04:246 (6) - ^
01:18:354 (12) - Add finish to slider end.

[wkyik's Insane]

Fine.

[Hard]

00:15:922 (4) - Slider end move to 00:16:246 - here?
00:16:733 (2,3,1) - Spacing is a bit weird.
00:59:057 (1,2,3) - hmm not beaituiful placement. so like this?
SPOILER
01:05:220 (5) - Looks not good that flow. I recommend change to this slider flow.
SPOILER

[ZZH's Normal]

00:05:868 (1) - Suddenly come the slider after spinner. bigginner will be confused this pattern. I suggest this rhythm.
SPOILER

00:00:679 (1) - spinner end change to here 00:05:868 -
00:05:868 (1) - remove this slider.
00:27:922 (2) - bule line repeat is too weird. like this rhythm?
SPOILER
00:40:246 (2) - ^ almost same above.
00:52:408 (3,1) - If you follow the vocal, like this? a good for me more than current one.

[Easy]

Star rating is a little high. I recommend that to easier a little more.

Good luck!

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-03-01T07:33:19+00:00

Guy wrote:
Hi! from m4m request :3

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]
You should be set the combo color. Can not be recommended default color. fixed
Please uncheck Letterbox during breaks and Widescreen support. fixed
Add tag "織田信奈の野望" instead of "おだのぶなのやぼう" fixed
[Hard]
00:15:922 (4) - Slider end move to 00:16:246 - here? fixed
00:16:733 (2,3,1) - Spacing is a bit weird. fixed
00:59:057 (1,2,3) - hmm not beaituiful placement. so like this? fixed
SPOILER
01:05:220 (5) - Looks not good that flow. I recommend change to this slider flow. fixed,change a bit
SPOILER

[ZZH's Normal]
00:05:868 (1) - Suddenly come the slider after spinner. bigginner will be confused this pattern. I suggest this rhythm.
SPOILER

00:00:679 (1) - spinner end change to here 00:05:868 -
00:05:868 (1) - remove this slider.
00:27:922 (2) - bule line repeat is too weird. like this rhythm?
SPOILER
00:40:246 (2) - ^ almost same above.
00:52:408 (3,1) - If you follow the vocal, like this? a good for me more than current one.
Because his computer broken,so I help him all fixed.

[Easy]
Star rating is a little high. I recommend that to easier a little more. Okay
,from 3.22 → 3.10 now,perhap I "ll try to reduce some stars
Good luck!

Thanks Guy!

Irie Miyuki

388 posts

Joined October 2010

Irie Miyuki 2014-03-01T11:56:31+00:00

抱歉puush不能用所以就发code了

Meramipop wrote:
Irie's Insane:
00:48:029 (2) - 这个note我觉得放在这里比较带感~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1371395 我再想想看
00:49:489 (7,8) - 稍微有点看不清了, 能不能这样呢 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1371396 没觉得挡到看不清啊lol
01:14:300 (6) - 这个在音乐里反映的是降低音调, 我觉得稍微减少一些间距会比较符合这个特质 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1371398 是没前面vocal速度快了但是我觉得这部分不该减间距的orz

Ikaros_F wrote:
hi，小船，說好的今天給你的Mod

嗯...我建議把記事本里的AudioLeadIn改成2000吧，不然剛剛打開這張圖過不到一秒就要開始玩讓玩家沒有緩衝時間。

[Irie's Insane]
00:13:489 (11) - 感覺這個跳的有點鬼畜，稍微往右上方移到一點吧好
00:14:948 (6,7,1,2) - 我建議這樣→ http://puu.sh/7ddlg 这个就不改了我挺喜欢现在这样 o.o
00:50:786 (3) - 往左邊彎會合適一些吧，因為之後的circle是在左邊改成了直的
01:27:678 (1) - 感覺這個轉盤有點短，一不小心就轉到100，把它移到01:28:732這裡吧放到白线上就不对劲了往后拉到了蓝线..虽然也没啥质的改变orz

Guy wrote:
[Irie's Insane]
00:03:273 (1) - (nazi) move to 1grid left for keep the straight line. fixed
00:50:137 (1) - Add finish to slider head. fixed
01:04:246 (6) - ^ fixed
01:18:354 (12) - Add finish to slider end. I'd like to keep this unchanged because it's too sudden to have a finish sound

IamKwaN wrote:
Insane
00:10:894 (9) - Jump would be nice for this circle coz these three: 00:10:570 (7,8,9) , the sound goes up. The distance you put between 00:10:570 (7,8) is even larger than 00:10:732 (8,9) does not make sense imo. The highest pitch at 00:10:894 (9) should be given the largest distance. 我是把这四个音当成一组了只要能感觉到这里在跳就好不根据音高改了
01:01:408 (5) - Overmapping? I can't see a solid beat or vocal here. 改了一点下节奏的时候脑子抽了
01:02:462 - I wonder if an important beat is missing here. So, I suggest this: 没miss
SPOILER
01:04:327 (7) - ^? 改了一点但不是这样
00:08:137 (9) - Is this whistle redundant? 因為我看整個combo都是電結他,沒啥變化啊故意的哦音高明显变化了一下
00:10:732 (8) - 上面如果沒改,那這個為何不加whistle?
00:43:651 (4,5,6,7,8) - 為毛這段明明是S:C1, 我聽到其他的音效 -o- 這BUG好像很嚴重,解決方法是del了他們重新放用左上角的
00:53:705 (4) - 這個尾巴的clap我覺得好刺耳可以小聲一點我听着还好啊
01:13:164 (2) - 這個我又聽到是drum的音效
01:18:678 (1,6) - ^ D: 是BUG還是只是我的問題
01:23:219 (8) - 故意不clap? 不clap好像不太符合這裡的氣氛,音樂是越來越大聲的,這裡空著就像漏了點東西补了
[/notice]

原諒我前面SB的用了中文 ;w; 用中文才是正确的选择啊少年

thanks for your mods

麻烦小船了

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Aimi- Link.Mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 57598
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 824,3256,5851,8445,11040,13634,17040,27418,37472,46067,48983,52553,55310,57742,68121,73310,83688,87661,88715
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Link  (TV size)
TitleUnicode:Link  (TV size)
Artist:Aimi
ArtistUnicode:愛美
Creator:smallboat
Version:Irie's Insane
Source:Oda Nobuna no Yabou
Tags:op opening 織田信奈の野望 Irie Miyuki Kawaiwkyik ZZHBOY
BeatmapID:377483
BeatmapSetID:153614

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG2.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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152,316,76570,2,0,P|216:316|284:256,1,148.50000453186,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,76894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,144,77056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,228,77219,1,4,0:0:0:0:
152,316,77381,2,0,L|256:324,1,99.0000030212403,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,348,77705,2,0,L|400:340,1,99.0000030212403,0|0,0:3|2:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,78029,1,4,0:3:0:0:
444,44,78191,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,68,78273,1,0,2:0:0:0:
484,96,78354,2,0,L|472:196,1,80.9999975280763,8|0,0:1|2:0,0:0:0:0:
252,276,78678,6,0,P|228:240|216:196,1,80.9999975280763,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,79002,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,79164,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,336,79327,2,0,L|24:344,1,161.999995056153,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
30,343,79813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,152,79975,1,8,0:3:0:0:
100,152,80137,2,0,L|112:236,1,80.9999975280763
188,80,80462,1,8,0:1:0:0:
30,343,80786,1,8,0:1:0:0:
260,184,81110,2,0,B|340:168|340:212|432:184,1,161.999995056153,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,187,81597,6,0,L|436:80,1,90,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
248,272,81921,2,0,L|261:182,1,90,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
84,340,82246,2,0,L|97:250,1,90,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
116,136,82570,1,8,0:1:0:0:
180,344,82732,1,8,0:1:0:0:
12,268,82894,1,8,0:1:0:0:
224,156,83056,1,8,0:1:0:0:
84,340,83219,1,8,0:1:0:0:
20,168,83381,1,8,0:1:0:0:
324,244,83705,6,0,P|412:256|500:192,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,92,84191,2,0,L|500:0,1,90,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,152,84516,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,244,84678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,152,84840,1,8,1:0:0:0:
476,348,85002,2,0,P|392:376|292:356,1,180
188,296,85489,2,0,P|136:284|76:292,1,90,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,376,85813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,376,85975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,192,86137,2,0,P|32:216|-4:252,1,90,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,296,86462,5,0,0:0:0:0:
216,160,86624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,192,86786,1,8,0:1:0:0:
316,256,86948,2,0,P|372:252|432:256,2,90,8|0|0,0:1|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,352,87435,1,8,0:1:0:0:
372,160,87597,1,8,0:1:0:0:
256,192,87678,12,0,88651,0:0:0:0:

po完发现又来摸就在上一条改了 lol

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IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-03-01T11:58:44+00:00

Hi, from QQ. Sorry for late

General

Kiai in EZ and Hard are different with the same mapper.

Extra

00:12:111 (5) - Overmap? I can't even hear a solid beat here.
00:25:165 (5,6,7) - I think what the jump should lie with is 00:25:165 (5,6) rather than 00:25:327 (6,7) , coz the emphasis is on the vocal here.
00:33:840 (5) - What is this circle following? D:
01:07:489 (3,4,5) - I don't understand why the jump is at 01:07:489 (3,4) , rather than 01:07:652 (4,5), because what I feel about here is the drums at (4) and (5) are much concrete than that on (3).

Insane

00:10:894 (9) - Jump would be nice for this circle coz these three: 00:10:570 (7,8,9) , the sound goes up. The distance you put between 00:10:570 (7,8) is even larger than 00:10:732 (8,9) does not make sense imo. The highest pitch at 00:10:894 (9) should be given the largest distance.
01:01:408 (5) - Overmapping? I can't see a solid beat or vocal here.
01:02:462 - I wonder if an important beat is missing here. So, I suggest this:
SPOILER
01:04:327 (7) - ^?
00:08:137 (9) - Is this whistle redundant? 因為我看整個combo都是電結他,沒啥變化啊
00:10:732 (8) - 上面如果沒改,那這個為何不加whistle?
00:43:651 (4,5,6,7,8) - 為毛這段明明是S:C1, 我聽到其他的音效 -o- 這BUG好像很嚴重,解決方法是del了他們重新放
00:53:705 (4) - 這個尾巴的clap我覺得好刺耳可以小聲一點
01:13:164 (2) - 這個我又聽到是drum的音效
01:18:678 (1,6) - ^ D: 是BUG還是只是我的問題
01:23:219 (8) - 故意不clap? 不clap好像不太符合這裡的氣氛,音樂是越來越大聲的,這裡空著就像漏了點東西

Hard

00:05:868 - 這個kiai意義在哪?
00:16:408 - ^
00:37:490 (1) - 這個可以放得更遠
00:44:868 (2) - 這我聽不到有能放圓圈的音
00:46:408 (2) - 音樂裡有很明顯的finish
01:04:895 (4,5) - 這spacing在我第一次打的時候打快了很多,01:04:570 (2,3) 跟 01:04:895 (4,5) 的spacing應該是不一樣才對,況且這裡你沒NC提醒
00:47:381 (3) - 換成一個在00:47:543 的圓圈就好,現在這滑條突出不到在00:47:543 特別大的finish聲;或者你可以
SPOILER
00:49:652 (3) - 這個的finish太大聲了吧,00:49:489 在音樂裡的finish是明顯很多的,所以如果要加finish的話,小聲一點才合理
00:50:948 (4) - 這個頭的whistle也是,我不明白為何要加;我認為00:50:624 (3,4) 這兩個應該是平衡的結構,無論是音樂上還是vocal上,所以我建議00:50:624 (3) 這個的頭加whistle,或者是移除00:50:948 (4) 頭上的whistle
00:55:327 (1,2) - 這裡我感覺也是平衡的結構,whistle漏了
00:56:300 (1,2,1,2) - 這裡的音樂比00:55:327 (1,2) 更強勁,你也放跳了,為何不加whistle
00:57:435 (2) - 這個也可以加clap
01:10:085 (3) - 頭不放finish? 前面這裡01:01:652 (1,3) 也放了阿,不是用來加強vocal的高音?
01:26:462 (1) - 頭的finish我感覺不需要,01:26:462 (1,2) 這兩個的關係我覺得又是平衡

Normal

00:06:840 (1) - NC Please, 然後在紅線開始很奇怪, 我開25%聽了一遍, 00:07:002 才是重音吧,或者00:06:678.
00:52:570 (1) - DS
01:02:462 - 這鼓是那串連音的開始,為何在連音的中間開始滑條01:02:623 (5).
01:07:813 (7) - ^
00:10:570 (5) - 尾巴的finish可以移除,兩個地方都finish的話突出不了00:11:057 (1) 頭的finish
00:49:327 (5) - 音樂的finish在00:49:489 , 你加在00:49:651幹嘛
01:13:002 (6) - 尾巴的finish去掉, 01:13:165 這個的歌詞明顯是向下的,你加向上的finish幹啥
01:13:975 (2) - 頭去掉finish,現在很違和,又不是歌詞,如果你是想突出那高音,應該是加在01:13:326 (1) 的尾巴
01:15:921 (1) - 按照你加finish的模式,這個的頭應該加上finish
01:17:218 (4) - 頭+finish, 因為01:15:921 (1,2,3,4) 這段跟01:13:326 (1,2,3,4,5)是平衡的結構, 音效理應差不多

Easy

00:19:002 (1) - 只有這滑條無端跟歌詞我感覺好奇怪, 我會這樣放:
SPOILER
00:29:381 (1) - ^ ...
00:37:489 (1) - NC去掉, 感覺NC的模式前後不太一致, 一會兒一個大白線, 一會兒兩個大白線, 例如00:38:462 (1,2,3) 跟 00:41:057 (1,2), 00:42:354 (1,2,3), 00:44:948 (1,2,3) , 00:48:840 (1,1) .
00:55:327 - 00:56:948 這段我想map掉會更好, 因為你在臨近kiai最刺激的地方給break了.. 如果你想降低難度, 前面多用長滑條,不用1/2就可以了. Easy最難的地方就是旋律的取捨.
01:15:111 (2) - DS -o-
音效我不摸了,跟H一樣

原諒我前面SB的用了中文 ;w;
Good luck!

smallboat

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Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-03-01T17:51:16+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
Hi, from QQ. Sorry for late

General
Kiai in EZ and Hard are different with the same mapper. ok一致

Hard
00:05:868 - 這個kiai意義在哪? 不改，這是做爆發用，我覺得還蠻適合
00:16:408 - ^ ^
00:37:490 (1) - 這個可以放得更遠故意的
00:44:868 (2) - 這我聽不到有能放圓圈的音我覺得這是抖音vocal 能放個連打，no change
00:46:408 (2) - 音樂裡有很明顯的finish 雖然聽不出來那我將就加一下
01:04:895 (4,5) - 這spacing在我第一次打的時候打快了很多,01:04:570 (2,3) 跟 01:04:895 (4,5) 的spacing應該是不一樣才對,況且這裡你沒NC提醒 NC了也換了一點位置
00:47:381 (3) - 換成一個在00:47:543 的圓圈就好,現在這滑條突出不到在00:47:543 特別大的finish聲;或者你可以好，換位置了
SPOILER
00:49:652 (3) - 這個的finish太大聲了吧,00:49:489 在音樂裡的finish是明顯很多的,所以如果要加finish的話,小聲一點才合理好 60%了
00:50:948 (4) - 這個頭的whistle也是,我不明白為何要加;我認為00:50:624 (3,4) 這兩個應該是平衡的結構,無論是音樂上還是vocal上,所以我建議00:50:624 (3) 這個的頭加whistle,或者是移除00:50:948 (4) 頭上的whistle 如果照你說的這樣加，後面鼓聲會不協調，我這是強調鼓聲，所以 no change。
00:55:327 (1,2) - 這裡我感覺也是平衡的結構,whistle漏了沒感到什麼有平衡的，不過加了感覺蠻好，fixed
00:56:300 (1,2,1,2) - 這裡的音樂比00:55:327 (1,2) 更強勁,你也放跳了,為何不加whistle 加了
00:57:435 (2) - 這個也可以加clap 加了
01:10:085 (3) - 頭不放finish? 前面這裡01:01:652 (1,3) 也放了阿,不是用來加強vocal的高音? 背景沒重音，不過加了一下蠻好，fixed
01:26:462 (1) - 頭的finish我感覺不需要,01:26:462 (1,2) 這兩個的關係我覺得又是平衡這個背景有finish重音，所以no change.

Normal

00:06:840 (1) - NC Please, 然後在紅線開始很奇怪, 我開25%聽了一遍, 00:07:002 才是重音吧,或者00:06:678.
00:52:570 (1) - DS
01:02:462 - 這鼓是那串連音的開始,為何在連音的中間開始滑條01:02:623 (5).
01:07:813 (7) - ^
00:10:570 (5) - 尾巴的finish可以移除,兩個地方都finish的話突出不了00:11:057 (1) 頭的finish
00:49:327 (5) - 音樂的finish在00:49:489 , 你加在00:49:651幹嘛
01:13:002 (6) - 尾巴的finish去掉, 01:13:165 這個的歌詞明顯是向下的,你加向上的finish幹啥
01:13:975 (2) - 頭去掉finish,現在很違和,又不是歌詞,如果你是想突出那高音,應該是加在01:13:326 (1) 的尾巴
01:15:921 (1) - 按照你加finish的模式,這個的頭應該加上finish
01:17:218 (4) - 頭+finish, 因為01:15:921 (1,2,3,4) 這段跟01:13:326 (1,2,3,4,5)是平衡的結構, 音效理應差不多

紙張波說全換了ww 謝謝君媽

Easy
00:19:002 (1) - 只有這滑條無端跟歌詞我感覺好奇怪, 我會這樣放: 改了
SPOILER
00:29:381 (1) - ^ ... 改了
00:37:489 (1) - NC去掉, 感覺NC的模式前後不太一致, 一會兒一個大白線, 一會兒兩個大白線, 例如00:38:462 (1,2,3) 跟 00:41:057 (1,2), 00:42:354 (1,2,3), 00:44:948 (1,2,3) , 00:48:840 (1,1) . 這邊不太能掌握NC，不過換了些
00:55:327 - 00:56:948 這段我想map掉會更好, 因為你在臨近kiai最刺激的地方給break了.. 如果你想降低難度, 前面多用長滑條,不用1/2就可以了. Easy最難的地方就是旋律的取捨. 恩，增加了一點
01:15:111 (2) - DS -o- 好
音效我不摸了,跟H一樣好

原諒我前面SB的用了中文 ;w; 沒關係
Good luck!

謝謝IamKwaN mod!

Last edited by smallboat 2014-03-10T18:23:57+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Xinchii

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Joined January 2011

Xinchii 2014-03-03T18:25:57+00:00

好 , 窩來惹
我還是很不會摸圖... 總之看看當個參考就好

[General]

Irie's Insane 沒有Video

[ZZH's Normal]

00:25:975(1,2) - 這2個加上Whistle如何?
~~01:10:084(4) - Guess you forget to add clap at slider end ?~~
~~01:10:732(1) - ^~~
~~01:11:543(2) - ^~~
等等 , 01:10:084 - 之後就沒Clap了喔o.o?

[Hard]

00:02:949(2) - 迴轉這個Slider,然後把Spin從00:03:435 - 開始如何?
00:20:138(1) - 純粹覺得這個是包開頭有點意外,感覺包尾巴移動比較順暢,不過其實都ok啦
00:25:327(1) - 這邊間距不知道爲什麼突然變遠了一些lol
像前面1/2間距一樣用1.2x調一下吧
01:01:651(1,2,3) - 以(2)為中心對齊中線如何,感覺這種對稱梗以中線對齊會比較好看

[Irie's Insane]

00:25:327(5) - 我覺得這個Slider跟前一個(4)之間的的間距,和(3)到(4)的間距一樣會比較好看一些啦
微調一下00:24:084(3,5,8) - 的位置如何
00:31:002(7) - 讓這個Slider的尾巴和00:29:705(2) - 的開頭重疊如何
喔,如果接受的話00:30:354(5) - 也要記得一起移動
00:52:570(1) - 看起來沒有包好,往上移一點看看
01:02:300(8,9) - 00:02:462 - 01:02:624 - 這邊有一段3連打的鼓聲,沒有完全跟到感覺有些浪費

[wkyik's Extra]

Great!!

Good luck !!

YoshinoSakura

472 posts

Joined January 2011

YoshinoSakura 2014-03-06T14:42:38+00:00

太难了摸不了。。

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

moonlightleaf 2014-03-07T13:18:31+00:00

[easy]

00:14:138 (2,3) -这里有点难而且easy 圈不挨着好些，这样？

比如

00:17:705 (2) - 中心旋转-1度

00:25:327 (1) - 在00:25:165白线开始00:25:651红线结束

00:34:408 (1) - 突然好想少了一排的感觉

比如

00:46:732 (3) - 白线收

00:55:813 (2,3) - 改滑条+note+滑条都是在红线上，还有种是 note+note+note，

00:55:813和00:56:300和00:56:786

01:00:840 (2,3) - 太近，01:01:327收

01:13:327 (1) - 少折返 01:14:300到01:15:111滑条

01:18:029 (2) - 滑条到01:18:678

01:19:327 (2) - 滑条到

01:20:462 (4) - 单note 折返+转圈难度大

01:24:192 (1) - 删 easy转盘后应该空一些时间

01:25:165 (1,2,1) - 都往前移动一条白线

好些可以删降低难度:

00:21:273 (2) -

00:23:867 (2) -

01:03:921 (2) -

01:09:597 (1) -

01:10:894 (1) - 等等

感觉不够easy 太难合理多空些拍子出来

[Normal]

00:08:624 (1,2) - 叠到前面23

00:09:922 (4,5) - 直接直滑条好了

00:11:057 (1) - 1/2长白线起

00:12:354 (3) - ^

00:13:651 (5) - ^

00:14:462 (6) - 同00:11:868 (2)

老老实实白线白线白线白线还是白线吧别红线起了

[hard]

00:08:138 (4) - 删换00:08:300单点放1上

00:21:111 (4) - 删

00:33:273 (2) - DS

----↓试试这里↓------

00:33:111 (1) - 删

00:33:273 (2) - 单点

00:33:760 (4) - 删

00:34:084 (5) - 删

00:34:246 单点放1

----↑试试这里↑------

00:36:841 (2,3,4) - 直线3连

00:37:490 (1) - 放3

00:37:814 (2) - ctrl+H于3对称

00:55:327 (1) - DS

01:04:733 (3,1) - 这是hard 没那么远你这做I的节奏

01:16:894 (4) - 换01:17:057单点

按照DS会好点 1.2x 跳的话 1.6-1.7差不多吧？超过觉得不妥

[Irie' Insane]

00:03:435 (2,3) - 纳尼这太丧失了我反正全断你自己打打看

00:05:543 (2,1) - 叠好

00:06:678 (3,6,9) - ^

00:35:381 (4,6) - ^

00:15:759 (1) - 1放2 ？

00:41:705 (6,7) - 放300,70 都比在那个0,0角落好

00:53:705 (4) - 感觉红线收好

01:06:840 (5,6) - DS

[wkyik's Extra]

00:03:435 (1,2) - 包好

00:34:408 (1,2) - ^

00:09:111 (3,2) - 叠好

00:36:354 (3,4) - ^

00:44:949 (1,2) - 红线收 2放3上

俩I都是大把PP系列 233

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-03-08T07:56:42+00:00

moonlightleaf

moonlightleaf wrote:
[easy]

00:14:138 (2,3) -这里有点难而且easy 圈不挨着好些，这样？改了

00:17:705 (2) - 中心旋转-1度改了

00:25:327 (1) - 在00:25:165白线开始00:25:651红线结束改了

00:34:408 (1) - 突然好想少了一排的感觉改了

00:46:732 (3) - 白线收改了

00:55:813 (2,3) - 改滑条+note+滑条都是在红线上，还有种是 note+note+note，改了

00:55:813和00:56:300和00:56:786

01:00:840 (2,3) - 太近，01:01:327收改了

01:13:327 (1) - 少折返 01:14:300到01:15:111滑条現在這樣比較好

01:18:029 (2) - 滑条到01:18:678 改了

01:19:327 (2) - 滑条到現在這樣比較好

01:20:462 (4) - 单note 折返+转圈难度大改了

01:24:192 (1) - 删 easy转盘后应该空一些时间現在這樣比較好如果以01:25:165 (1) 起頭會難拿捏

01:25:165 (1,2,1) - 都往前移动一条白线為何? 現在這樣聽得比較好

好些可以删降低难度:

00:21:273 (2) -

00:23:867 (2) -

01:03:921 (2) -

01:09:597 (1) -

01:10:894 (1) - 等等考慮

感觉不够easy 太难合理多空些拍子出来會慢慢簡化

[hard]

00:08:138 (4) - 删换00:08:300单点放1上不了

00:21:111 (4) - 删考慮

00:33:273 (2) - DS 改了

----↓试试这里↓------

00:33:111 (1) - 删考慮

00:33:273 (2) - 单点考慮

00:33:760 (4) - 删考慮

00:34:084 (5) - 删考慮

00:34:246 单点放1 考慮

----↑试试这里↑------

00:36:841 (2,3,4) - 直线3连想有良心點不改

00:37:490 (1) - 放3 哪個3呀應該不是00:38:300 (3) 吧不改

00:37:814 (2) - ctrl+H于3对称還是看不懂哪邊有對稱的3?

00:55:327 (1) - DS 我認為從1到2沒什麼問題不改

01:04:733 (3,1) - 这是hard 没那么远你这做I的节奏拉近了點

01:16:894 (4) - 换01:17:057单点考慮

按照DS会好点 1.2x 跳的话 1.6-1.7差不多吧？超过觉得不妥有些拉近了點

謝謝二妹mod!

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

GugUCorn 2014-03-09T04:07:54+00:00

m4m

[General]

Remove "(TV Size)" on title.

http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria Metadata 4th sentence

[Easy]

00:10:570 (1) - finish on end of slider
00:14:138 (2,3) - forgot adding clap?
00:15:759 (1) - finish on end of slider
00:25:975 (2) - ^
00:29:381 (1) - clap on arrow of slider
00:30:354 (2) - clap
00:36:029 (1) - finish on end of slider
00:44:624 (2) - whistle
00:47:543 (1) - finish
00:48:840 (1) - finish and whistle
00:50:786 (2) - whislte on not end of slider but head of slider
00:56:462 (3) - recommend increase to 00:56:948
00:57:273 (4) - and decrease to 00:57:759. and add whistle on end of slider
01:15:111 (2) - add whistle with clap

[ZZH's Normal]

00:00:679 (1) - finish
00:13:651 (5) - NC
00:14:949 (1) - finish on head of slider
00:21:597 (4,1) - swap NC
00:24:030 (4) - NC
00:25:327 (6,1) - swap NC
00:36:354 (4) - finish on head of slider
00:52:084 (2) - finish
00:55:002 (6) - clap with finish
00:57:273 (5) - whistle on head of slider
01:06:840 (6) - NC?
01:08:117 - unsnapped. it's unrankable.delete
01:14:624 (3,4) - whistle on end of slider
01:15:758 (5) - whistle
01:21:110 (4) - NC
01:23:704 (1) - definitely i can heard sound til 01:28:894. but it's so low sound. so decrease this to 01:28:651

[wkyik's extra]

00:10:246 (2) - perfectly stack on 00:09:111 (3)
00:10:895 (3) - clap with finish
00:44:138 (6) - NC
00:46:408 (2) - clap
00:52:408 (3) - ^
01:27:679 (1) - decrease to 01:28:570. and unsnapped
01:28:571 - unsnapped timing point

[Hard]

00:35:705 (6,1) - swap NC
01:00:354 (5) - NC
01:15:597 (6) - whistle on end of slider
01:20:787 (4) - ^
01:27:678 (1) - same 01:28:651

[Irie's Insane]

00:35:705 (6) - NC
00:46:408 (5) - ^
00:47:219 (7) - clap on end of slider
01:24:840 (5) - chage sampleset to auto

Atrue

osu! Alumni

1,017 posts

Joined July 2012

Atrue 2014-03-09T15:13:02+00:00

Hello~
From your req~

[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.
[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
audio lead in 和letterbox conflict，检查一下
低难度先不看了。。。水向mod不要介意。。
为了补偿送一颗星~

good luck!

[Hard]
General
比较ok，不用改多少应该能rank
Placement
00:19:652 (4,1) - blanket
00:29:381 (2,4,1) - 摆的不太好看，中间的棍子摆歪了，而且这一小部分总是在这一小片地方转，还要注意blanket，要是想这么摆的话我觉的两个滑条的头和尾分别对齐会好些
00:34:084 (6,1) - 还是挑blanket
01:02:948 (1) - ^加弧度
好多blanket摆歪了的地方，不是很想nazi出来，过得去的就不说了

[Irie's Insane]
General
打不动啊，kiai本身就sv够大了，还要这么大的间距，我是打不了，个人感觉打的郁闷，比较容易断，你用了很多滑条过去然后跳回滑条头上然后又跳出去的梗，这个我真是有点拿他没办法，kiai你用间距征服了我，当然这些都是不好改的
Placement
00:49:002 (5,6,7) - 不喜欢这flow，何况还带了遮挡，打两次断两次，而且7,8是重音，这距离感比较微妙
00:57:597 (3) - 挑个遮挡
Hitsound
00:31:813 - 可以考虑加个finish
01:00:840 - clap？ 01:00:840 (2,3) - 我觉得这里需要适当的clap，具体的加法你自己决定
01:00:840 (2,3) - drum clap我觉得更适合
01:17:056 (5,6) - 这里音效过于轻了，酌情添加
NCs

[wkyik's Extra]
General
估计诗人喜欢打这个，真是extra
难度体现在很多地方flow是怎么反怎么来，个人不赞成，不过从整齐、摆放层面是很不错的，下面是我猜你想顺一下flow没顺好的地方
Placement
00:20:138 (1) - 虽然是ex难度我觉得这么一种flow还是让人憋
00:21:922 (8) - 位置下移一点有利于flow连贯
01:18:516 (4,1) - 人性？

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.

.

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2014-03-10T03:56:13+00:00

TaMul wrote:
[ZZH's Normal]

00:00:679 (1) - finish
00:13:651 (5) - NC
00:14:949 (1) - finish on head of slider
00:21:597 (4,1) - swap NC
00:24:030 (4) - NC
00:25:327 (6,1) - swap NC
00:36:354 (4) - finish on head of slider
00:52:084 (2) - finish
00:55:002 (6) - clap with finish
00:57:273 (5) - whistle on head of slider
01:06:840 (6) - NC?
01:08:117 - unsnapped. it's unrankable.delete
01:14:624 (3,4) - whistle on end of slider
01:15:758 (5) - whistle
01:21:110 (4) - NC
01:23:704 (1) - definitely i can heard sound til 01:28:894. but it's so low sound. so decrease this to 01:28:651

accept all. your mod is pretty good

Atrue wrote:
[General]
低难度先不看了。。。水向mod不要介意。。怀疑被嫌弃
为了补偿送一颗星~ 则呢不送我啊 sad

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Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:Link  (TV Size)
Artist:Aimi
ArtistUnicode:愛美
Creator:smallboat
Version:ZZH's Normal
Source:Oda Nobuna no Yabou
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smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-03-10T04:02:14+00:00

TaMul

TaMul wrote:
m4m

[General]

Remove "(TV Size)" on title.

http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria Metadata 4th sentence I think it is good , no change
[Easy] Sorry,I forget add many hitsounds,thanks ur check

00:10:570 (1) - finish on end of slider fixed
00:14:138 (2,3) - forgot adding clap? ^
00:15:759 (1) - finish on end of slider ^
00:25:975 (2) - ^ ^
00:29:381 (1) - clap on arrow of slider ^
00:30:354 (2) - clap ^
00:36:029 (1) - finish on end of slider ^
00:44:624 (2) - whistle ^
00:47:543 (1) - finish ^
00:48:840 (1) - finish and whistle no
00:50:786 (2) - whislte on not end of slider but head of slider fixed
00:56:462 (3) - recommend increase to 00:56:948 fixed
00:57:273 (4) - and decrease to 00:57:759. and add whistle on end of slider fixed
01:15:111 (2) - add whistle with clap Already added before.
[Hard]

00:35:705 (6,1) - swap NC fixed
01:00:354 (5) - NC ^
01:15:597 (6) - whistle on end of slider ^
01:20:787 (4) - ^ ^
01:27:678 (1) - same 01:28:651 ^

Thanks TaMul mod!

Atrue

Atrue wrote:
Hello~ HI~!
From your req~

[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.
[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
audio lead in 和letterbox conflict，检查一下好
低难度先不看了。。。水向mod不要介意。。~~其實Easy漏了很多音效。。~~
为了补偿送一颗星~ 謝!
good luck!
[Hard]
General
比较ok，不用改多少应该能rank 好，我相信自己這張再一周應該就能泡或RANK
Placement
00:19:652 (4,1) - blanket 好
00:29:381 (2,4,1) - 摆的不太好看，中间的棍子摆歪了，而且这一小部分总是在这一小片地方转，还要注意blanket，要是想这么摆的话我觉的两个滑条的头和尾分别对齐会好些好，棍子有轉了一點角度對齊
00:34:084 (6,1) - 还是挑blanket 我是覺得包的蠻好，不過還是調一下了
01:02:948 (1) - ^加弧度好
好多blanket摆歪了的地方，不是很想nazi出来，过得去的就不说了好，那我有空再看一下

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me. .好

謝謝Ature mod!

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2014-03-10T14:44:58+00:00

HI

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Aimi- Link.Mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 57598
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Link (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Link (TV Size)
Artist:Aimi
ArtistUnicode:愛美
Creator:smallboat
Version:wkyik's Extra
Source:Oda Nobuna no Yabou
Tags:op opening 織田信奈の野望 Irie Miyuki Kawaiwkyik ZZHBOY
BeatmapID:377484
BeatmapSetID:153614

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:2

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Video,0,"video.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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