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Mikakuning! - Tomadoi Recipe

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年4月13日 at 0:35:12

Artist: Mikakuning!
Title: Tomadoi Recipe
Source: 未確認で進行形
Tags: yf_bmp koreapenguin opening mikakunin de shinkoukei junky terui haruka matsui eriko yoshida yuuri 照井春佳 松井恵理子 吉田有里 full size
BPM: 170
Filesize: 8004kb
Play Time: 04:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.95 stars, 716 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 1114 notes)
  3. K.Penguin's Normal (4.27 stars, 383 notes)
  4. yf's Easy (2.94 stars, 285 notes)
Download: Mikakuning! - Tomadoi Recipe
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#17 Mikakuning! - Tomadoi Recipe (Full Size)
The opening of 未確認で進行形
Mapset:
Easy by yf_bmp
Normal by koreapenguin
Hard & Insane by me
TV Size is here :3

lyric(Japanese/Chinese)
とまどい→レシピ『TV动画「未确认进行式」OP主题曲』
作詞：Junky
作曲：Junky
演唱：みかくにんグッ!

ふぅふぅ らったった らったったった ふぅふぅ【呼呼 啦哒哒 啦哒哒哒 呼呼】
らったったらっぱ いぇーい いぇーい【啦哒哒啦啪 咿耶 咿耶】
らったった らったったった ふぅふぅ いぇい【啦哒哒 啦哒哒哒 呼呼 咿耶】

朝目が覚めたらもう昨日みたいな日常は無くて【早晨我一觉醒来发现昨日的时光已成往事】
「ホントあぁもう...えっとどうしよう」【真是的…我该如何是好】
ため息混じりに練るお菓子と妄想のレシピの中に【在唉声叹气中糕点和妄想加入了早餐的配方里】
恋心入っちゃった【融入了我满满的爱】

シフォンケーキにカスタード スコーンにクロテッドクリーム【戚风蛋糕抹点牛奶蛋糊 烤饼抹点奶油酱】
だけどやっぱこれっておかしいわ どうして私なんだろう【但是我这样做会有些不正常吧 我怎么会变成这样啊】
急にそんなこと言い出して…【突然间我管不住自己的嘴…】

あぁどうしよ【晕如何是好】
君を好きになっちゃうかなんて分からないけど【虽然我自己也不知道会不会喜欢上你】
大切な人だなんてAh照れくさいかな【我所爱的人啊是否会有些难为情】
君は真面目なトーンで好きってなんて言うでしょ【当你摆出一脸认真的表情说着我喜欢你】
ちょっとドキッとしちゃうじゃん【真的就让我稍稍怦然心动呢】
なんて非日常的なレボリューション【这样的变化今非昔比】

らったった らったったった ふぅふぅいぇい【啦哒哒 啦哒哒哒 呼呼 咿耶】

どんな味が好きとか何が食べられないとか【什么味道是我喜欢的什么食物又是我讨厌的】
知っといた方がいいかなってね【了解这些对我非常有用】
ため息混じりに練る料理のレシピの中に【在唉声叹气中加入了佳肴的配方】
戸惑いが入っちゃった【却混入了迷茫的杂质】

プリンアラモードクリーム トキメクチョコレートモンブラン【布丁抹点新鲜的奶油 令人兴奋的巧克力板栗蛋糕】
だけどやっぱこれっておかしいの どうして私赤いの【但是我这样做确实会有些不正常 我又为何涨红了脸】
あの言葉を思い出して【脑海中回放着你的声音】

もぉどうしよ【哎呀我该怎么办】
君が好きって言ったってどうしていいか分かんないよ【想对你说我喜欢你但是却不知道怎么开口才好】
秘密っていっても否定されたらちょっとショック【彼此的秘密不被认可的时候还是有点打击的】
君に思い切っちゃって「ねぇ、あの」って呼び止めちゃった【想对你说我喜欢你却只停留在「呃、那个」接下来无话可讲】
ちょっとドキッとしちゃうじゃん【只让我稍稍心头一颤的话】
急に笑顔なんてしないでよ【我会对你傲娇的哦】

(Go Love win!!Everybody let me GO!!【(恋爱第一！！让我们行动起来！！】
it's a Show Time Now!!Everybody let's GO!!【展现自我的时间到了！！让我们一起上吧！！】
Go Fight Win!! let me show me make me down.【努力加油！！让我们展现自己.】
Go Love my heart【恋爱第一！！@把我的心】
Go Love Win!!Everybody let me GO!!【变成彩色的爱！！让我们行动起来！！】
it's a Show Time Now!!Everybody let's GO!!【展现自我的时间到了！！让我们一起上吧！！】
Go Fight win!!let me show me make me down.【努力加油！！让我们展现自己.】
Go Love Win!!【恋爱第一！！】
GO GO GO GO GO)【努力 努力 加油 加油 加油)】

君のその無表情な中に時々見た【有时候看见你面无表情的样子】
笑顔とかガッカリとかあれ?探してるの…?【你的笑容你的沮丧呢？到哪里去了…？】
君に思い切っちゃって「ねぇ、あの」って呼び止めちゃった【想对你说我喜欢你却只停留在「呃、那个」接下来无话可讲】
ちょっとドキッとしちゃうじゃん【只让我稍稍心头一颤的话】
急に笑顔なんてしないでよ【我会对你傲娇的哦】

君を好きになっちゃうかなんて分からないけど【虽然我自己也不知道会不会喜欢上你】
大切な人だなんてAh照れくさいかな【我所爱的人啊是否会有些难为情】
君は真面目なトーンで好きってなんて言うでしょ【当你摆出一脸认真的表情说着我喜欢你】
ちょっとドキッとしちゃうじゃん【真的就让我稍稍怦然心动呢】
なんて非日常的なレボリューション【这样的变化今非昔比】
恋のレシピ【这就是爱的配方】

らったった らったったった ふぅふぅ らったったらっぱ いぇーいいぇーい【啦哒哒 啦哒哒哒 呼呼 啦哒哒啦啪 咿耶 咿耶】
らったった らったったった ふぅふぅ らったったった【啦哒哒 啦哒哒哒 呼呼 啦哒哒哒】
いぇーいいぇーいいぇーい【咿耶 咿耶 咿耶】
changelog
2014.3.4 changed background.
2014.3.5 added hitsounds
2014.3.6 changed background and add new hitsounds again
2014.3.16 added hitsounds and Easy/Normal diff
Last edited by Fycho , edited 56 times in total.
Laurier
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best opening song of this season
Kamio Misuzu
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Kamio Misuzu
好图这个看上去认真多了star！
Fycho
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thank you for support！Laurier and Kamio Misuzu
happy623
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happy623
<3
Mei_coN
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Mei_coN
小红嫁我！！！ :)
Momochikun
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Momochikun

Laurier wrote:

best opening song of this season

I'm totally agree o3o
koreapenguin
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Moe!!
Sellenite
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Sellenite
excellent！！
GitahMuttan
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GitahMuttan
Yes!!!! :)
Fycho
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yep，1000 post gives to myself:>
thanks all supporters :)
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yea >w< Done!

late sorry :D

added this http://puu.sh/7wYDp.zip
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
嗨飛球

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

Fine.

[yf's Easy]

SPOILER
00:51:310 (1) - 或許這邊能加個finish
02:28:016 (4) - 為什麼這開頭有個多餘的finish，前面這個同樣節奏01:21:663 (4) 就沒加，保持一致吧
02:28:722 (1) - 個人認為尾端這個finish可以不用加，都加大白線就好，將會很符合音樂。(另外01:22:369 (1) 開頭我覺得你忘了加finish上去了和後面那條大白線)
02:53:957 (4) - 感覺這個1/2 slider在EZ裡出現有點莫名，滑的時候時候後面還有vocal還有點遺留，不如尾拉到02:54:486 (4)，然後除去finish，就這樣滑條移到vocal消失那一段作結束吧。
(03:17:781 (2) - 然後這個1/2我就同意，因為剛好節奏停在這裡，我就不講這了。)

03:19:545 (1) - 間距
03:35:428 (3,1) - 3的尾端finish我覺得沒必要加，連續兩個finish有點太吵了。
04:00:486 (3) - 聽了很多次感覺這個finish還是有點吵。
04:01:898 (1,2,3) - 開頭可以加finish
04:08:957 (1) - 折返的finish去掉，比較符合音樂。
04:15:310 (3) - ^
04:18:134 (2) - 前端也是不適合加finish因為沒重音在這。
04:21:663 (1) - 開頭忘了加finish? 加一下突顯音效效果吧。

[K.Penguin's Normal] Hi,penguin ~ :D

00:13:898 (5) - I feel this end finish a bit loud,try to turn down 50% (As the same yf's Easy)
01:18:663 (4) - Perhaps can add finish here,seems have a finish hitsound.
01:24:839 (4) - I think this finish no need add here,there is no downbeat here.
02:04:016 (3) - Have a big loud vocal here,I think you can a note add at this here. It can fit the music.
02:25:016 (4) - As the same 01:18:663 (4).
02:28:369 (6) - As the same 01:24:839 (4).
02:28:722 (1) - Forget add finish?
02:30:134 (3) - Obviously,this stack crooked off..lol
02:39:310 (4) - ^
03:26:428 (3,4) - Medium point place medium line?
SPOILER
03:35:075 (3) - Perhaps can add finish here,seems have a finish hitsound.
03:38:957 (5) - As the same 01:24:839 (4).
03:39:663 (2) - Can end finish,there is no downbeat here. (Continuous finish a bit noisy)
03:53:075 (1) - Cancel NC ,and 03:53:428 (2) - The vocal is start here,so I think you should set NC here.(Feel this continuous finish a bit noisy,too ,turn down a bit volume? )
04:05:781 (2) - As the same 02:30:134 (3)
04:23:075 (5) - The vocal is start here,so I think you should set NC here.
[Hard]

SPOILER
00:27:663 (2) - 兩邊空隙一邊大一邊小，然後我覺得這個滑條往下擺開一點，現在這3個看起來好擠。
00:44:957 (5) - 從1這樣開始看的話，覺得4到5應該可以擺個弧度(5往右邊點)，只是提一下。
00:47:428 (2) - 中間紅線忘記加whistle? 加了很適合vocal說。
01:18:663 (2) - 重Vocal不加finish?
01:59:428 (2) - 建議可移下面點做個三角。
03:58:192 (3) - 重Vocal不加finish?
04:02:604 (3) - 要像02:29:428 (3) 加個finish嗎?
04:22:192 (2) - 重Vocal不加finish?
04:23:957 (4) - 雖然不知道這個是不是沒限制了，這邊減速不來個NC嗎?

[Insane]

SPOILER
00:15:663 (3) - 開頭試試疊 00:14:251 (6)。
00:47:604 (3) - 同Hard 00:47:428 (2)
00:48:486 (1,2,3) - 或許這能擺開一點，只是我的意見。(比如像00:49:898 (1,2) 這樣大開)
00:56:604 (3) - 跟Hard比較這少一個clap呢
01:18:663 (2) - 同Hard
03:08:516 (2) - 藍線沒音呢，我覺得這個只要白線note帶finish就ok了
03:22:369 (1) - 這段為何是1/3? 不明白
03:46:545 (2,3) - 節奏我覺得這邊放錯了，因為vocal是在白線，所以ctrl+g換一下?
03:58:192 (3) - 同Hard
04:02:604 (1) - ^
04:22:192 (4) - ^
[Other]

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Fycho
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Topic Starter
Fycho

smallboat wrote:

[Hard]

00:27:663 (2) - 兩邊空隙一邊大一邊小，然後我覺得這個滑條往下擺開一點，現在這3個看起來好擠。fixed
00:44:957 (5) - 從1這樣開始看的話，覺得4到5應該可以擺個弧度(5往右邊點)，只是提一下。fixed
00:47:428 (2) - 中間紅線忘記加whistle? 加了很適合vocal說。fixed,这段加了更多的whsitle
01:18:663 (2) - 重Vocal不加finish?fixed
01:59:428 (2) - 建議可移下面點做個三角。fixed
03:58:192 (3) - 重Vocal不加finish?fxied，相同问题两个diff统一改了
04:02:604 (3) - 要像02:29:428 (3) 加個finish嗎?不要，这音乐里没cymbal音，加了吵
04:22:192 (2) - 重Vocal不加finish?fixed
04:23:957 (4) - 雖然不知道這個是不是沒限制了，這邊減速不來個NC嗎? 从来没这个限制

[Insane]

00:15:663 (3) - 開頭試試疊 00:14:251 (6)。 故意不叠的
00:47:604 (3) - 同Hard 00:47:428 (2)
00:48:486 (1,2,3) - 或許這能擺開一點，只是我的意見。(比如像00:49:898 (1,2) 這樣大開)不好
00:56:604 (3) - 跟Hard比較這少一個clap呢 hard去掉了
01:18:663 (2) - 同Hard
03:08:516 (2) - 藍線沒音呢，我覺得這個只要白線note帶finish就ok了半自创
03:22:369 (1) - 這段為何是1/3? 不明白鼓点是1/3
03:46:545 (2,3) - 節奏我覺得這邊放錯了，因為vocal是在白線，所以ctrl+g換一下?现在挺好
03:58:192 (3) - 同Hard
04:02:604 (1) - ^hard是三个一组，所以加finish可以，但是insane这里我设置的四个一组，而finish的作用多为引导，加了影响打图
04:22:192 (4) - ^^
[Other]

1星走人
thanks for modding
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
koreapenguin
Normal
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12,204,187369,2,0,B|12:272|72:296|72:296|120:292,1,157.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,228,188251,6,0,B|235:231|235:231|259:241|259:241|298:245,1,105,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,340,188957,2,0,B|300:336|300:336|276:326|276:326|237:322,1,105,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,356,189663,1,2,0:0:0:0:
44,304,190016,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,200,190369,2,0,L|44:136,2,52.5,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,268,191075,5,6,0:0:0:0:
240,240,191428,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,316,191781,2,0,P|341:273|342:222,1,105,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,120,192486,2,0,L|344:48,1,52.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,44,193016,2,0,B|416:120|416:120|452:140|468:204,1,157.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,284,193898,6,0,P|397:303|335:288,1,105,6|8,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
288,204,194604,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,108,194957,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,52,195310,2,0,L|180:68,1,52.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,44,195839,2,0,P|104:96|92:164,1,105,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,196,196369,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,296,196722,5,2,0:0:0:0:
216,312,197075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,224,197428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,208,197781,2,0,L|436:200,1,52.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,201,199192,5,4,3:0:0:0:
460,100,199545,5,4,0:0:0:0:
312,44,200075,2,0,L|304:112,1,52.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,200604,1,8,0:0:0:0:
291,276,200957,2,0,P|240:272|196:236,1,105,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,204,201486,2,0,P|108:192|60:212,1,105,0|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
120,300,202192,5,0,0:0:0:0:
120,300,202369,2,0,B|120:224|120:224|100:168|100:168|100:84,1,210,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,28,203428,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,72,203781,2,0,P|296:121|283:171,1,105,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,212,204310,2,0,P|244:264|265:316,2,105,6|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,172,205192,6,0,L|400:188,1,105,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,280,205898,2,0,L|412:328,1,52.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,352,206428,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,352,206604,2,0,B|240:328|240:328|152:348,1,157.5
64,300,207486,6,0,L|0:316,2,52.5,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,264,208016,2,0,P|119:214|105:164,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,92,208722,2,0,P|74:61|125:59,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,124,209428,1,12,0:0:0:0:
208,124,209781,2,0,L|272:116,1,52.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,292,210839,6,0,P|463:240|451:189,1,105,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,140,211545,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,140,211898,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,180,212251,2,0,P|216:192|159:172,2,105,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,84,213310,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,84,213663,6,0,B|194:133|213:183|213:183|239:238|217:287,1,210,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,352,214722,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,300,215075,2,0,B|53:244|53:244|44:202|44:202|56:139,1,157.5,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,72,215957,2,0,L|120:20,2,52.5,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,116,216486,6,0,P|208:124|268:100,1,105,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,44,217192,2,0,L|408:48,2,52.5,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,108,217898,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,212,218251,2,0,P|264:261|324:300,1,105,8|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,300,218957,1,4,0:0:0:0:
464,212,219310,5,12,0:0:0:0:
464,212,219663,2,0,L|469:89,2,105,12|12|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,300,220722,2,0,B|369:306|369:306|335:300|335:300|304:306,1,105,6|8,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
212,356,221428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,308,221781,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,204,222134,6,0,B|104:148|156:112|156:112|204:144|268:120,1,210,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,44,223192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,136,223545,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,112,223898,2,0,B|477:154|455:190|455:190|433:223|441:267,2,157.5,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,36,225310,5,8,0:0:0:0:
300,84,225663,2,0,L|296:156,2,52.5,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,32,226369,2,0,P|160:52|88:56,1,105,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,32,226898,2,0,B|76:72|76:112|76:112|56:192,1,157.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,292,227781,6,0,P|104:324|155:328,1,105,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,296,228486,2,0,L|300:348,2,52.5,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,204,229192,2,0,B|226:129|226:129|295:69,1,157.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,132,230075,2,0,P|432:140|480:112,1,105
504,76,230604,5,2,0:0:0:0:
408,32,230957,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,132,231310,2,0,L|396:236,1,105,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,308,232016,2,0,B|400:292|400:292|352:352|264:320,1,210,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,248,233075,5,8,0:0:0:0:
264,156,233428,2,0,L|260:40,2,105,6|8|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,248,234486,1,12,0:0:0:0:
104,248,234839,1,12,0:0:0:0:
44,160,235192,2,0,P|60:72|120:28,2,157.5,12|2|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,248,236604,5,12,0:0:0:0:
196,196,236957,2,0,L|316:212,1,105,12|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,304,237663,2,0,L|224:288,1,105,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,304,238192,2,0,P|120:336|36:300,1,157.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,212,239075,6,0,L|20:108,1,105,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,44,239781,2,0,L|160:40,1,52.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,92,240310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,92,240486,2,0,P|264:144|252:196,1,105,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,272,241192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,360,241545,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,360,241898,6,0,P|400:341|437:291,1,105,6|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
439,201,242604,2,0,P|401:165|351:152,1,105,12|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,201,243310,2,0,P|244:251|258:301,2,105,12|12|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,128,244369,6,0,P|316:44|184:140,1,315,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,196,245781,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,256,246134,6,0,P|255:304|167:255,2,210,6|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,152,247898,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,108,248251,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,152,248604,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,108,248957,6,0,B|276:160|256:208|256:208|232:260|256:312,1,210,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,145,250369,38,0,B|233:100|168:102|144:145|136:174|136:174|132:198|124:228|144:281|188:288|216:276|220:305|242:313|256:327|256:327|270:313|292:305|296:276|324:288|368:281|388:228|380:197|376:173|376:173|367:145|344:101|278:100|256:149,1,735,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,188,253192,6,0,P|28:240|72:296,1,105,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,296,253898,2,0,P|213:280|268:292,1,105,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,344,254604,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,292,254957,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,188,255310,2,0,B|447:151|447:151|431:131|431:131|416:90,1,105,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,32,256016,6,0,P|280:36|240:76,1,105,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,176,256722,2,0,P|191:211|139:215,1,105,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,108,257428,2,0,B|189:149|184:206|184:206|179:263|217:299,1,210,6|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,328,258486,1,12,0:0:0:0:
384,244,258839,6,0,P|428:232|504:256,2,105,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,328,259898,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,328,260251,2,0,P|136:264|144:156,1,210,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,88,261310,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,96,261663,5,12,0:0:0:0:
316,96,262016,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,184,262369,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,184,262722,1,12,0:0:0:0:
348,288,263075,6,0,P|256:332|164:288,2,210,2|12|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,264575,12,0,266604,0:0:0:0:

thanks mod baka
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
好
[Insane]
好多漏音感觉好不爽啊
00:06:663 (2,3,4) - 这种放五连也不是不行啊
00:56:075 (2) - 像这种就能拆开 就不说这个了啊
01:34:016 (2,3,4) - 这种三连就不爽
02:08:781 - 这里为什么空的啊
02:30:663 (3) - 滑条尾部可以搞个blanket感觉力哈i啊
然后就是最后一个kiai那里 歌曲里是在非长白线的重vocal音前鼓点有二连所以减少一些用二连突出长白线上的那种overmap之类的感觉好一些啊(?
[Hard]
01:01:192 (1,1,2) - 这个感觉没啥意思啊 不怕被1分啊
01:20:957 (1) - 角度这么大好丑啊
其他没了
[Normal]
00:00:487 (1,2) - haven't blanket well
02:29:075 (2,3) - haven't blanket well
02:08:957 (3) - hasn't stack well?
02:16:016 (3,1) - overlap here seems not good.it may be hard to read for basic player...
04:10:369 (1) - should make the end and the start of the slider farther to make it easy to jugde the direction of the slider
[Easy]
01:59:075 (3,1) - 尾向下一点blanket好
04:10:545 (1) - 在04:12:839 这个重一点的音这里结束感觉舒服一些o.o
美丽
>:( >:( >:(
litoluna
1,073 posts
Joined April 2011
litoluna
hi~!
from queue
[yf's Easy]
  1. 00:52:722 (3) - reverse point 1grid down. blanket 00:54:134 (1) -
  2. 00:53:251 - add clap?
  3. 00:56:075 - add S:C2 whistle?
  4. 00:56:604 - add finish
  5. 01:51:663 (4,1) - Spacing 1.40x
[K.Penguin's Normal]
  1. 03:28:722 (3) - nazi (x:28 y:96) blanket 03:28:016 (2) -
  2. 03:58:192 (4) - add finish I think Finish and clap is better.
  3. 04:08:251 (3,4,1) - I think this pattern is difficult. and 04:10:369 (1) - hiding
    idea:04:08:957 (1) - delete
    04:08:957 - add circle
    04:09:663 - add circle
    try this code~
    SPOILER

    368,154,247898,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    309,67,248251,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    203,67,248604,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    144,154,248957,1,4,0:0:0:0:
    256,328,249663,1,4,0:0:0:0:
[Hard]

  • awesome :D
  1. 03:24:134 (2) - I think Additions Drum clap is fit.
[Insane]
  1. 01:13:722 (6) - add clap
  2. 01:13:810 (7) - add clap
  3. 03:24:134 (2) - I think Additions Drum clap is fit.
  4. I feel 03:40:986 - 03:41:163 - 03:41:339 - is nothing back drums sound.
Good Luck!
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
yf's Easy:

00:11:075 (3) - This is curved too much. Flatten a bit please.
00:44:251 (2,1) - Quite concerned that this can be considered as a jump. Anyways, reducing spacing between these two objects would be more friendly to beginners.
00:54:134 (1,2) - Make these flat too. Too much curve in short sliders are ugly, you know :3
00:58:369 (3,4) - End (3) at 00:58:898 to match the song? and delete (4)?
03:17:781 (2,1) - Again concerned about a jump-suspicious spacing.

K.Penguin's Normal:

00:22:016 (4) - 시작은 휘슬 대신 클랩이 맞는듯 합니다.
00:31:545 (1) - 어색한 리듬 같은데 수정법을 모르겠으니 패스.
01:06:839 (3) - (2) 더 잘 덮어주세요.
02:05:428 (4) - 템포가 살아나는 부분이니 뉴콤보 넣어주세요.
02:17:428 (1) - 읽기 적합할지 약간 의심스럽습니다. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1430148 (경로를 가린 300)
03:28:722 (3) - (2) 끝에 더 잘 덮어주세요.
04:10:369 (1) - ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ Unrankable.

Hard:

00:24:839 (4) - Try making a better flow with (3).
01:21:486 (2,3) - Add whistle at the end?
02:05:251 (4) - (424,232) is the ideal distance between the sliders.
02:44:781 (2) - 1 grid up for distance.
03:00:310 (2) - (56,16) for distance.
03:33:663 (1) - Missing Whistle at the end.

Insane:

00:11:428 (2) - Uhh.. personally disliked the rhythm selection. Besides, consider adding a whistle?
00:31:369 (1) - The slider doesn't seems quite appropriate in that the rhythm to 00:31:545 is kinda disconnected in the song. Consider switching to notes.
00:32:957 - Personally this empty rhythm felt awkward since a vocal is keep coming. But I know you won't add any since you want to end with the background music :3
01:01:192 (1) - Imo this NC was quite ineffective since it's along with a stream.
01:29:339 (7) - (356,88) is better in distance.
02:01:722 (8) - Add Finish.
02:30:663 (3,4) - Switching the rhythm fits the music better.
02:52:545 (1) - Imo this jump was way too far.
02:53:781 (2,1) - This rhythm didn't felt nice... I think this 3/4 slider would fit better when starting from 02:53:957.
03:05:339 (11) - Watch distance.
03:44:957 (1,2) - This rhythm sounds a little weird. Are you sure to use this??

So this was how the full version sound like xD
Honestly since I can't play Insane, I can't judge it, but I think it was a cool map. Good luck~
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Fycho

ZZHBOY wrote:

好
[Insane]
好多漏音感觉好不爽啊
00:06:663 (2,3,4) - 这种放五连也不是不行啊 开头不打算做没难
00:56:075 (2) - 像这种就能拆开 就不说这个了啊 这个改了
01:34:016 (2,3,4) - 这种三连就不爽 这是跟那个8bit音，而且单纯的白线三连打起来没什么不好，又没接滑条
02:08:781 - 这里为什么空的啊原来加过，加了太坑就去掉了，而且我喜欢这种空一下停顿的感觉
02:30:663 (3) - 滑条尾部可以搞个blanket感觉力哈i啊不喜欢blanket
然后就是最后一个kiai那里 歌曲里是在非长白线的重vocal音前鼓点有二连所以减少一些用二连突出长白线上的那种overmap之类的感觉好一些啊(?哪一个啊，找不到，是你说的不清楚还是我懒找了？
[Hard]
01:01:192 (1,1,2) - 这个感觉没啥意思啊 不怕被1分啊 黑一分跟这没关，这又不是为了有意思做的
01:20:957 (1) - 角度这么大好丑啊 形状换了
其他没了
>:( >:( >:(

litoluna wrote:

hi~!

[Hard]

  • awesome :D
  1. 03:24:134 (2) - I think Additions Drum clap is fit. it will break my hitsound pattern
[Insane]
  1. 01:13:722 (6) - add clap ok
  2. 01:13:810 (7) - add clapok
  3. 03:24:134 (2) - I think Additions Drum clap is fit.
  4. I feel 03:40:986 - 03:41:163 - 03:41:339 - is nothing back drums sound.I don't want to change the stream
Good Luck!

Sonnyc wrote:

Hard:

00:24:839 (4) - Try making a better flow with (3). ok
01:21:486 (2,3) - Add whistle at the end?ok
02:05:251 (4) - (424,232) is the ideal distance between the sliders.ok
02:44:781 (2) - 1 grid up for distance.ok
03:00:310 (2) - (56,16) for distance.ok
03:33:663 (1) - Missing Whistle at the end.not miss, no need to add whistle here
Insane:

00:11:428 (2) - Uhh.. personally disliked the rhythm selection. Besides, consider adding a whistle?changed rhythm and added whistle
00:31:369 (1) - The slider doesn't seems quite appropriate in that the rhythm to 00:31:545 is kinda disconnected in the song. Consider switching to notes.I like this placement pattern
00:32:957 - Personally this empty rhythm felt awkward since a vocal is keep coming. But I know you won't add any since you want to end with the background music :3
01:01:192 (1) - Imo this NC was quite ineffective since it's along with a stream. removed
01:29:339 (7) - (356,88) is better in distance.ok
02:01:722 (8) - Add Finish.There is not cymbal in music
02:30:663 (3,4) - Switching the rhythm fits the music better.I followed the drum and instrument, not vocal
02:52:545 (1) - Imo this jump was way too far.Fine imo
02:53:781 (2,1) - This rhythm didn't felt nice... I think this 3/4 slider would fit better when starting from 02:53:957.sorry I like 3/4 here since I follow instrument
03:05:339 (11) - Watch distance.This is on purpose
03:44:957 (1,2) - This rhythm sounds a little weird. Are you sure to use this??yea, follow drums here to make rhythm more various.
So this was how the full version sound like xD
Honestly since I can't play Insane, I can't judge it, but I think it was a cool map. Good luck~
thanks for modding, updated normal diff.
Sellenite
1,092 posts
Joined September 2013
Sellenite
送摸啦送摸啦~~射个星先
尽量摸透些...
在节奏上多数都是个人建议
just personal suggestion in rhythm，not very serious

[yf's Easy]
01:36:839 (4) - 就只有这个超大界了
01:01:192 (3) - 加finish？这个你和koreapenguin都是用whistle..我觉得不是太合适
02:07:545 (3) - ^?
02:53:957 (4) - 改为一个note加finish
04:13:192 (1) - 最好不要放在转盘的中间
00:56:957 - 01:01:192 这段可以考虑一下用绿线递增音效至90%，这里觉得打击感不够

[K.Penguin's Normal]
00:31:545 (1) - add clap in the start of the slider，remove whistle
00:32:781 (2) - remove this and add a circle in 00:32:957，whistle
00:37:545 (2) - the back of the slider use finish is too loudly，maybe use whistle？
00:59:781 (1) - maybe finish is better？
01:05:428 (1) - use finish，remove whistle
01:15:663 (4) - add finish at the slider end
01:18:134 (3,4,1) - continue overlap in normal is not good
01:25:898 (3) - the back clap also feel loudly，maybe whistle is good？
02:52:369 (1,2,3,4,5) - so difficult，put them away
03:28:722 (3) - blanket beautifully？
03:43:898 (4) - add finish the slider end，remove whistle
03:55:192 (5) - not very good，don't coincident the other rhythm，following the drum is better
04:10:369 (1) - MUST CHANGE THIS ，unrankable，cuz we don't know where to go

[Hard]
00:04:016 (3) - 这个在hard难度通常都要NC吧..？不然会读错图早按了，美丽
00:09:663 (2) - ^
00:20:604 (2,3) - 尽量使他们stack？
00:41:075 (5) - 需不需要NC？不太懂
00:55:545 (1) - remove NC
00:55:898 (2) - NC
01:53:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 是不是太难了..而且觉得不怎么好看
03:19:545 (1,2) - 觉得stack比较好
03:57:310 (6) - remove finish
04:08:957 (1,2,3,4,1) - 觉得不要叠在那么一个角落，与整个谱面不付，而且最后超容易读错图

[Insane]
00:57:310 (2) - 移开一点会好很多
01:37:016 (3,4,5) - 和前面的滑条头stack？
02:07:192 (7,8,1) - 觉得严谨些摆成同一条直线会很爽
02:20:957 (3,4) - 不好看..移开些？像这样：
SPOILER
02:22:192 (4,5) - 和前面的2一样..实在不合你的风格
03:45:045 (2) - 这个滑条头的clap好大声，感觉取消也足够了
03:55:192 (2) - 滑条尾的clap不自然，建议取消
03:55:457 (3) - clap^
04:01:898 (1,3,1,3,1,2,3,4) - 和前面一样finish+clap一起用效果好赞，因为这里与前面两个kiai不同音效所以只是建议
04:03:310 (1) - 如果上一个不采纳的话这个滑条头就加finish

insane不会摸不要打我啊

hope it rank soon！
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