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Rumia-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, 10 April, 2014 at 4:49:22 AM

Artist: Ray
Title: ebb and flow (TV Size)
Source: Nagi no Asukara
Tags: opening 凪のあすから
BPM: 106.1
Filesize: 4193kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. EZ - 7Key (1.58 stars, 272 notes)
  2. HD - 7Key (3.19 stars, 522 notes)
  3. NM - 7Key (2 stars, 344 notes)
Download: Ray - ebb and flow (TV Size)
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split #1
8th ranked map w
ruminine
Hello brother xD from facebook message req

EZ
- 00:07:965 (7965|4) - make this is as a long note ending at 00:08:813

- 00:15:316 (15316|3) - move this to 3

- 00:15:599 - there is a beat here. A note at 5

- 00:17:578 - ^ A note at 3

- 00:18:709 (18709|4) - move to 7

- 00:18:992 (18992|2) - move to 5

- 00:19:275 (19275|4) - move to 4

- 00:19:699 - there is a beat here. A note at 6

- 00:22:102 - ^ A note at 5

- 00:22:668 (22668|2) - move to 2 because it stacks with 00:23:233 (23233|2,23516|2) these. I think EZ should include none or very few stacks
- 00:31:150 - there is a beat here, but since the vocal is keep going as "Mitsumeta~" so maybe 00:30:585 (30585|4) makes this one as a long note ending there (00:31:150)

- 00:32:847 - there is a beat here. Also it seems awkward that it doesn't have a note here

- 00:36:240 (36240|3) - weird that you only put a hitsound that sounds different than others. If you want to keep this hitsound, maybe you should put this hitsounds on the other notes that gives the same base of this note, or just delete the hitsound

- 00:37:088 - add a note at 4

- 00:46:136 (46136|1) - move to 3 because it feels more nature due to how melody sonds

- 00:47:267 (47267|1) - move to 3

- 00:50:095 to 00:52:357 - don't let it empty. At least put notes on each sound, or long notes that starts and ends with each white lines during your break

- 01:00:557 (60557|2) - move to 2 (or if you want to place every notes during this time in a white keys, that's fine)

- 01:05:646 - add a note at 5

- 01:12:432 - there is a little sound here. Add note at 5

- 01:12:998 - add a note at 4

- 01:13:846 (73846|1) - move to 01:14:129

- 01:14:694 (74694|1) - move to 3

I was going to point out having 2 notes for strong beats during kiai, but I decided not because this is EZ.

Also I think the difficulty gap between NM and HD are somewhat big, so either change NM a bitharder or HD a bit easier.

Nice song and map :D

And sorry for my low quality mod. Don't you know that I don't play 7K? :/
Topic Starter
Rumia-

ruminine wrote:

Hello brother xD from facebook message req

EZ
- 00:07:965 (7965|4) - make this is as a long note ending at 00:08:813

- 00:15:316 (15316|3) - move this to 3

- 00:15:599 - there is a beat here. A note at 5

- 00:17:578 - ^ A note at 3

- 00:18:709 (18709|4) - move to 7

- 00:18:992 (18992|2) - move to 5

- 00:19:275 (19275|4) - move to 4

- 00:19:699 - there is a beat here. A note at 6

- 00:22:102 - ^ A note at 5

- 00:22:668 (22668|2) - move to 2 because it stacks with 00:23:233 (23233|2,23516|2) these. I think EZ should include none or very few stacks
- 00:31:150 - there is a beat here, but since the vocal is keep going as "Mitsumeta~" so maybe 00:30:585 (30585|4) makes this one as a long note ending there (00:31:150)

- 00:32:847 - there is a beat here. Also it seems awkward that it doesn't have a note here

- 00:36:240 (36240|3) - weird that you only put a hitsound that sounds different than others. If you want to keep this hitsound, maybe you should put this hitsounds on the other notes that gives the same base of this note, or just delete the hitsound

- 00:37:088 - add a note at 4

- 00:46:136 (46136|1) - move to 3 because it feels more nature due to how melody sonds

- 00:47:267 (47267|1) - move to 3

- 00:50:095 to 00:52:357 - don't let it empty. At least put notes on each sound, or long notes that starts and ends with each white lines during your break

- 01:00:557 (60557|2) - move to 2 (or if you want to place every notes during this time in a white keys, that's fine)

- 01:05:646 - add a note at 5

- 01:12:432 - there is a little sound here. Add note at 5

- 01:12:998 - add a note at 4

- 01:13:846 (73846|1) - move to 01:14:129

- 01:14:694 (74694|1) - move to 3

I was going to point out having 2 notes for strong beats during kiai, but I decided not because this is EZ.

Also I think the difficulty gap between NM and HD are somewhat big, so either change NM a bitharder or HD a bit easier.

Nice song and map :D

And sorry for my low quality mod. Don't you know that I don't play 7K? i didnt know :| :/
fixed a little , i forgot which ones since im on a silence trip atm hhh thanks brother !
richardfeder
mod or slap? slap me plz

Kiai
End first kiai 01:07:908 -
Start second kiai 01:10:453 -
BG seems a little bit too vague
HD
So many green line x.x
00:00:331 (331|3,613|1,896|2) - all move one column right be gentle to left hand plz

00:02:875 (2875|3,3158|1,3441|3) - ^ don't need to strictly follow pitch 00:02:310 (2310|3) - I think just move right

00:04:006 (4006|4,4148|6) - move one column left

00:05:420 (5420|1) - move to 0|1|2|3|4|5|6

00:28:182 (28182|3) - add(for both vocal and "bibi" sound in the background)

00:31:150 - give up 1/4 here start from there? You also dismiss that kind of 1/4 sound 00:32:140 - here while chart them 00:33:412 (33412|6,33554|5,33695|4,33837|6,33978|3) - and somewhere else. suggest be consistence, take them all or dismiss them all

00:35:109 (35109|2) - move one column right

00:40:764 (40764|5) - delete

00:43:733 (43733|2) - delete unnecessary and break consistency I think ignore that little glide is fine

00:46:985 (46985|4) - delete (It's not that clear to deserve another LN) and move 00:47:267 (47267|2) - to 3

00:50:095 (50095|2,50095|6,50660|5,50660|1,51226|0,51226|4,51791|3) - I would delete them and leave here blank it's your choice don't slap me wwwwwww

01:00:698 - fark don't miss this beat xDD

01:06:777 - http://puu.sh/7JTrp.jpg

01:09:463 (69463|0) - should be double while 01:09:605 (69605|1,69605|3) - should be single. also missing a beat at 01:09:746 -

ET diff

NM
I think it's fine to chart all piano like 00:06:834 (6834|0,6975|3) - instead of 00:01:886 (1886|4) - . That's weird for me.

00:13:903 (13903|0) - add

00:20:689 (20689|2) - add

00:22:951 (22951|0) - add

00:23:799 (23799|4) - move one column right

00:36:523 (36523|5) - add

00:40:057 - add

00:44:723 (44723|4) - add

00:54:053 (54053|0,55184|2) - add

01:09:746 (69746|3) - add

01:12:150 (72150|5) - add

01:14:412 (74412|0) - delete

OK add everywhere >,>

EZ
00:32:281 (32281|2,32564|0,33130|0) - wat are they?

00:46:702 (46702|0,47267|1) - move two columns right

Good enough for me >,<
Good luck and be aware of silence hhhhh
Topic Starter
Rumia-

richardfeder wrote:

mod or slap? slap me plz SLAP YOU!!! hhhh
Kiai
End first kiai 01:07:908 -
Start second kiai 01:10:453 -
i don't like to cut kiai time. it doesnt really affect anything
BG seems a little bit too vague juz took out from compilation , well people doesnt really look at bg while playing , it is related to the song so nothing is wrong
HD
So many green line x.x it is for the hitsound lol
00:00:331 (331|3,613|1,896|2) - all move one column right be gentle to left hand plz ok

00:02:875 (2875|3,3158|1,3441|3) - ^ don't need to strictly follow pitch 00:02:310 (2310|3) - I think just move right i think its just fine

00:04:006 (4006|4,4148|6) - move one column left ok

00:05:420 (5420|1) - move to 0|1|2|3|4|5|6

00:28:182 (28182|3) - add(for both vocal and "bibi" sound in the background) re arrange a little

00:31:150 - give up 1/4 here start from there? You also dismiss that kind of 1/4 sound 00:32:140 - here while chart them 00:33:412 (33412|6,33554|5,33695|4,33837|6,33978|3) - and somewhere else. suggest be consistence, take them all or dismiss them all fixed a little on this

00:35:109 (35109|2) - move one column right ok

00:40:764 (40764|5) - delete no

00:43:733 (43733|2) - delete unnecessary and break consistency I think ignore that little glide is fine fixed

00:46:985 (46985|4) - delete (It's not that clear to deserve another LN)changed to and move 00:47:267 (47267|2) - to 3 fixed

00:50:095 (50095|2,50095|6,50660|5,50660|1,51226|0,51226|4,51791|3) - I would delete them and leave here blank it's your choice don't slap me wwwwwww no

01:00:698 - fark don't miss this beat xDD ok xD

01:06:777 - http://puu.sh/7JTrp.jpg

01:09:463 (69463|0) - should be double while 01:09:605 (69605|1,69605|3) - should be single. also missing a beat at 01:09:746 - re arranged a little

ET diff you see see you 233

NM
I think it's fine to chart all piano like 00:06:834 (6834|0,6975|3) - instead of 00:01:886 (1886|4) - . That's weird for me.

00:13:903 (13903|0) - add

00:20:689 (20689|2) - add

00:22:951 (22951|0) - add

00:23:799 (23799|4) - move one column right fixed

00:36:523 (36523|5) - add

00:40:057 - add fixed

00:44:723 (44723|4) - add

00:54:053 (54053|0,55184|2) - add

01:09:746 (69746|3) - add

01:12:150 (72150|5) - add

01:14:412 (74412|0) - delete fixed
i only emphasize snare with 2 notes . guitar chords doesnt count

OK add everywhere >,> you see see you 233 , no everywhere >.>
EZ
00:32:281 (32281|2,32564|0,33130|0) - wat are they? you can hear a clearly 1/4 sound but consider this is ez diff i map it in 1/2 and 1/1

00:46:702 (46702|0,47267|1) - move two columns right re arranged

Good en
[google:1337][/google:1337]ough for me >,<
thanks PC .
Poet Complainer
- Yuuto -
Hi Rumi..

[General]
BG : Ok
Timing set : Ok
Aimod : Ok

[EZ]
00:13:054 - add note to 2 or 4 and...
00:15:316 (15316|3) - remove this
00:19:840 - add note to 5 also
00:21:820 (21820|2) - remove this
00:17:578 - add note to 4
00:31:150 - add note to 6
00:33:130 (33130|0) - move to 00:32:847 to 5
01:07:626 - add note to 5 for strong sound
01:20:067 - add note to 4
01:20:349 (80349|6) - should be end at 01:21:480 and..
01:21:763 (81763|1) - remove this

[NM]
00:05:137 (5137|3,5420|1) - Ctrl + J
00:06:551 - add note to 7
00:46:136 - how about like this
01:05:929 (65929|2) - move to 2 and.
01:06:494 (66494|1) - move this to 3
01:21:198 (81198|3) - add hitsound soft-clap 4

[HD]
I cant find the mistake, its good diff.

I have only one suggest.

01:26:004 (86004|2) - remove

Nice map, it's so peacefully... I want to star this . . but i have no stars for now :v

Semoga beruntung :D
Topic Starter
Rumia-

Yuutosan wrote:

Hi Rumi.. hi~

[General]
BG : Ok
Timing set : Ok
Aimod : Ok

[EZ]
00:13:054 - add note to 2 or 4 and... added at 3
00:15:316 (15316|3) - remove this no thanks i keep it
00:19:840 - add note to 5 also added
00:21:820 (21820|2) - remove this
00:17:578 - add note to 4
00:31:150 - add note to 6
00:33:130 (33130|0) - move to 00:32:847 to 5
01:07:626 - add note to 5 for strong sound added
01:20:067 - add note to 4 ^
01:20:349 (80349|6) - should be end at 01:21:480 and.. its ok for easy diff , its a hard to hit with that measure
01:21:763 (81763|1) - remove this keep

[NM]
00:05:137 (5137|3,5420|1) - Ctrl + J nice done
00:06:551 - add note to 7 added
00:46:136 - how about like this
01:05:929 (65929|2) - move to 2 and.
01:06:494 (66494|1) - move this to 3
01:21:198 (81198|3) - add hitsound soft-clap 4 added

[HD]
I cant find the mistake, its good diff.

I have only one suggest.

01:26:004 (86004|2) - remove

Nice map, it's so peacefully... I want to star this . . but i have no stars for now :v

Semoga beruntung :D
thanks yuutosan :D great help
Spy
For rank ?
Topic Starter
Rumia-

Spy wrote:

For rank ?
no for nuke. hhhh
REDYUMiKA
Hello guys, I came here to mod by request. (Column:1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
---> Type:GM, Language:


[General]
No problems.

[Patterns of EZ]
(00:01:744 - add a note to 1)
(00:02:451 - add a note to 6)
00:04:713 (4713|4) - move to 3, looks good to taking a space
00:26:909 - to 00:27:475 - I suggest you remap this section like (*1) pattern
01:08:191 (68191|3) - remove
01:13:846 (73846|1) - lift-up this note to 01:14:129 -

*Please consider the below mod as the set. --
01:03:667 (63667|4) - remove
01:04:798 - add a note to 2
01:05:363 (65363|2) - move to 1
01:05:646 - add a note to 4
01:05:929 (65929|5) - move to 7
--

[Patterns of NM]
00:06:268 - add a note to 2

*Please consider the below mod as the set. --
00:45:854 (45854|3) - remove
00:47:833 - add a note to 3
(00:48:964 - add a note to 4)
--

[Patterns of HD]
00:24:647 (24647|4) - remove
00:25:778 (25778|6) - extend this LN, start at 00:25:213 - then end at 00:27:475 -
00:36:664 (36664|1) - remove, this note isn't suitable for any sounds
00:40:481 (40481|0) - I recommend you remove this LN, that's really comfortable before go to 00:41:047 -
00:52:357 - to 01:29:115 - looks good :oops:

*Please consider the below mod as the set. --
00:00:330 - to 00:07:117 - I suggest you rearrange these 2 measures LNs to follow the pitch
*00:00:331 (331|0) - OK
*00:01:462 (1462|2) - OK
*00:02:593 (2593|0) - move to 5
*00:03:724 (3724|2) - move to 7
*00:04:855 (4855|0) - OK
*00:05:986 (5986|2) - OK (or, move to center column is really good)
--

[Comment]
That's really nice charts, there are no critical issues on your mapset.
Good Luck Eatmia :P
Topic Starter
Rumia-

REDYUMiKA wrote:

Hello guys, I came here to mod by request. (Column:1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
---> Type:GM, Language:ENG


General
No problems.


Patterns of EZ
(00:01:744 - add a note to 1)
(00:02:451 - add a note to 6)
00:04:713 (4713|4) - move to 3, looks good to taking a space
00:26:909 - to 00:27:475 - I suggest you remap this section like (*1) pattern - i dont like repeating. so every section goes

different
01:08:191 (68191|3) - remove - it is such strong beat
01:13:846 (73846|1) - lift-up this note to 01:14:129 - fixed thanks

*Please consider the below mod as the set. --
01:03:667 (63667|4) - remove ok
01:04:798 - add a note to 2 follows vocal
01:05:363 (65363|2) - move to 1 ok
01:05:646 - add a note to 4 added at 3 instead
01:05:929 (65929|5) - move to 7 i like it at 6 so no changes
--


Patterns of NM
00:06:268 - add a note to 2 - added

*Please consider the below mod as the set. --
00:45:854 (45854|3) - remove - removed
00:47:833 - add a note to 3) - added
(00:48:964 - add a note to 4) - i think single note gives a better feeling.
--


Patterns of HD
00:24:647 (24647|4) - remove - changed to normal note
00:25:778 (25778|6) - extend this LN, start at 00:25:213 - then end at 00:27:475 - re arranged a little .
00:36:664 (36664|1) - remove, this note isn't suitable for any sounds - keeping it . there is a sound presents there
00:40:481 (40481|0) - I recommend you remove this LN, that's really comfortable before go to 00:41:047 - removed .
00:52:357 - to 01:29:115 - looks good :oops:

*Please consider the below mod as the set. --
00:00:330 - to 00:07:117 - I suggest you rearrange these 2 measures LNs to follow the pitch breaking the hand balance. so

pitch is #2 here.
*00:00:331 (331|0) - OK
*00:01:462 (1462|2) - OK
*00:02:593 (2593|0) - move to 5 i think its better at 1 , since the pitch is lower , 00:03:158 (3158|1) - moved this to 6

according to pitch
*00:03:724 (3724|2) - move to 7 it is fine there ;_;
*00:04:855 (4855|0) - OK
*00:05:986 (5986|2) - OK (or, move to center column is really good) ok
--


Comment
That's really nice charts, there are no critical issues on your mapset.
Good Luck Eatmia :P thank you :D
thanks yumika >~< /me eats
Sorarei
here my mods as request

and sorry before, i'm not accepting mod via pm or in-game. yeah there's exception with m4m

[General]

nothing problem

[EZ]

- 00:18:992 (18992|2) - move to 7th column

- 00:25:495 (25495|3) - move to 5th column

- 01:24:873 (84873|6,85439|3,86004|0) - well i think the note was supposed like this http://puu.sh/7Qzes.jpg

[NM]

- 00:02:310 (2310|1) - move to 1st, it will be same like 00:06:834 (6834|0,6975|3) -

- 00:09:237 (9237|1,9308|3) - i may suggest you to change into hold note like this http://puu.sh/7Qzi6.jpg it doesn't fit if you put 1/8 but the real beat are 1/16

- 01:02:536 (62536|4) - move to 1st column

- 01:24:873 (84873|6,85439|3,86004|0) - well i think the note was supposed like this http://puu.sh/7Qzes.jpg

[HD]

- 00:50:660 (50660|1,50660|5,51226|4,51226|0) - this are should be deleted because the song doesn't have beat here. this looked you are following vocal

[Overall]

i don't have somethings to tell here, overall are fine. well good luck :)
Topic Starter
Rumia-

Reikosaka wrote:

here my mods as request

and sorry before, i'm not accepting mod via pm or in-game. yeah there's exception with m4m


General

nothing problem


EZ

- 00:18:992 (18992|2) - move to 7th column - ok

- 00:25:495 (25495|3) - move to 5th column - keeping it with the previous pattern

- 01:24:873 (84873|6,85439|3,86004|0) - well i think the note was supposed like this http://puu.sh/7Qzes.jpg thanks for suggestion but i think the current one suits the feel . so i stay them like this


NM

- 00:02:310 (2310|1) - move to 1st, it will be same like 00:06:834 (6834|0,6975|3) - i re arrange some notes of the next note and fixed 00:06:834 (6834|0,6975|3) - with the previous one

- 00:09:237 (9237|1,9308|3) - i may suggest you to change into hold note like this http://puu.sh/7Qzi6.jpg it doesn't fit if you put 1/8 but the real beat are 1/16 - 1/16 is hard but oh well i think its better in this case , fixed

- 01:02:536 (62536|4) - move to 1st column - ok fixed

- 01:24:873 (84873|6,85439|3,86004|0) - well i think the note was supposed like this http://puu.sh/7Qzes.jpg - same as easy's suggestion


HD

- 00:50:660 (50660|1,50660|5,51226|4,51226|0) - this are should be deleted because the song doesn't have beat here. this looked you are following vocal - well the vocal really hits the feel so i feel like catching it. thanks for suggesting.


Overall

i don't have somethings to tell here, overall are fine. well good luck :) - hehe
thanks reika , great help on EZ , and NM diff
sorry no color reply , i offline reply
Kodora
Hey Rumia, just random passing by.

Please don't use this mp3 (i know that it is from ranked map) - this is low-quality youtube rip and it have issues with timing.

If you want, feel free to took better quality mp3 from my standard mapset with already checked timing.

Good luck with your map!

(no kudosu please)
Roxas
wumia

[General]
Put preview point in 00:50:095 -

[EZ]
01:19:077 (79077|2,79218|1) - There's no drum sound here, why you put notes + claps? Remove 01:19:077 (79077|2) - this and 01:19:218 (79218|1) - remove clap here

Patterns are okay. I'm going to say something about hitsounds.

00:13:337 (13337|6) - Add soft-hitclap3.wav here (or in both notes)
00:31:433 (31433|0) - ^
00:52:922 (52922|4) - Add clap here
00:57:446 (57446|5) - ^
01:03:384 (63384|3) - You don't have normal-hitclap7.wav in your folder orz, remove that hs
01:21:198 (81198|0) - Add clap here
01:21:480 (81480|4) - Put soft-hitfinish6.wav with 20~25% volume
(after fixing/denying these things, copy hitsounds in other diffs)

[NM]
00:09:237 (9237|1,9273|2,9308|3,9343|4,9379|5) - 1/8 in NM...?
00:27:192 (27192|4) - I would move this in 3
01:18:936 (78936|3,79077|2) - Do something like this (moved those notes 1/4 before - change hitsounds) http://puu.sh/7R5rK.jpg

[HD]
Add Widescreen Support as in other diffs

Nothing other to say about this diff, nice patterns!
Topic Starter
Rumia-

Roxas wrote:

wumia

[General]
Put preview point in 00:50:095 - i like the current preview ;w;

[EZ]
01:19:077 (79077|2,79218|1) - There's no drum sound here, why you put notes + claps? Remove 01:19:077 (79077|2) - this and 01:19:218 (79218|1) - remove clap here lol ok , though the hitsound works so well ;w;

Patterns are okay. I'm going to say something about hitsounds.

00:13:337 (13337|6) - Add soft-hitclap3.wav here (or in both notes) added softclap6 i think they are the same anyway xD
00:31:433 (31433|0) - ^
00:52:922 (52922|4) - Add clap here
00:57:446 (57446|5) - ^
01:03:384 (63384|3) - You don't have normal-hitclap7.wav in your folder orz, remove that hs ok sorry lolol
01:21:198 (81198|0) - Add clap here
01:21:480 (81480|4) - Put soft-hitfinish6.wav with 20~25% volume
(after fixing/denying these things, copy hitsounds in other diffs)
fixed alll hitsounds thanks a lot
[NM]
00:09:237 (9237|1,9273|2,9308|3,9343|4,9379|5) - 1/8 in NM...? assuming the bpm is low i think it is not really that hard , it fits the music too i cannot find alternative to give a better feeling ;w;
00:27:192 (27192|4) - I would move this in 3 fixed
01:18:936 (78936|3,79077|2) - Do something like this (moved those notes 1/4 before - change hitsounds) http://puu.sh/7R5rK.jpg fixed

[HD]
Add Widescreen Support as in other diffs added

Nothing other to say about this diff, nice patterns!
thanks roxas ! great help in hitsound sorry formaking bad hitsounds /.\
bss died rip.
Taiwan-NAK
RIP IRC mod


NM
Start with you last fix in IRC

01:18:653 - http://puu.sh/7RG2e.jpg or Remove 01:19:077 - and Add 01:18:794 - For sounds

HD
Oh my fuking god easy diff so hard for mod

00:50:095 (50095|6,50095|2,50660|1,50660|5,51226|4,51226|0,51791|3) - Maybe remove cus follow this vocal is strange a bit


Sohai NM mod again :cry:
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Taiwan-NAK wrote:

RIP IRC mod


NM
Start with you last fix in IRC

01:18:653 - http://puu.sh/7RG2e.jpg or Remove 01:19:077 - and Add 01:18:794 - For sounds
fixed

HD
Oh my fuking god easy diff so hard for mod

00:50:095 (50095|6,50095|2,50660|1,50660|5,51226|4,51226|0,51791|3) - Maybe remove cus follow this vocal is strange a bit
i like it to stay

Sohai NM mod again :cry:
thanks . RIP BSS
Spy
5 stars for Nagi.
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Spy wrote:

5 stars for Nagi.
thanks spy <3333333333
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