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Yamato Nadeshiko - Koi no tenshi mai orite

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Cyril Scarlet
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年12月26日 at 4:37:39

Artist: Yamato Nadeshiko
Title: Koi no tenshi mai orite
Source: Love Hina
Tags: Horie Yui Tamura yukari Love Hina
BPM: 127.15
Filesize: 8249kb
Play Time: 02:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.84 stars, 410 notes)
  2. Normal (3.67 stars, 224 notes)
  3. taka's Hard (4.89 stars, 435 notes)
Download: Yamato Nadeshiko - Koi no tenshi mai orite
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Dubber's Unit Yamato Nadeshiko
Horie Yui & Tamura Yukari

[ Koi no tenshi mai orite ]



MOD 1 : heartnetkung
MOD 2 : gdeath
MOD 3 : Card N'FoRcE
MOD 4 : osu_CN_yaya
MOD 5 : illuminist
MOD 6 : AngelHoney

2009/11/08 6:50 pm Edit note style
2009/11/08 8:50 pm Changed offset
2009/12/05 12:40 pm Changed Note Style, Changed Hit Sounds, Add SB, Add Costom Hitsound ( CREDIT: kioukiou )
2009/12/10 4:15 pm Edit Style in hard
Last edited by Cyril Scarlet , edited 32 times in total.
heartnetkung
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heartnetkung
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Cyril Scarlet
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Cyril Scarlet
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
taka1235
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taka1235
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Yamato Nadeshiko - Koi no tenshi mai orite (S i R i R u) [taka's Hard].osu
Furawa
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Furawa
>A< desu~
Cyril Scarlet
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Taka様 ： 入れましたよ =w=b

SOGAチュウ ： Thank you ~
Sun and Lunar
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Sun and Lunar
Love Hina <3

星。。。　　（＾ｗ＾）／＊~
Cyril Scarlet
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Oh, thank you for STAR =w=
gdeath
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gdeath
[Normal]
this is your easiest diff.HD diff & Overall diff are too high for now.decrease them.(suggestion)
01:34:014 (1,1) - i'd make them totally quiet.
02:55:030 (1) - ^
02:35:095 (4) - stack on the end of slider(3)

[Hard]
HD diff 8?Are you sure?
01:05:036 (1) - stack on the end of slider(4)
01:16:068 (5) - ^
01:34:014 (1) - i'd make them totally quiet.
01:38:039 (1) - ^
02:55:031 (1) - ^

[taka's Hard]
HD diff 8?Are you sure?
00:15:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - dont like to use finish here.sound not well...
my suggestion:00:15:081 (1,5,6,7) - whistle
00:21:095 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - finish ~volume:40%~(suggestion)
01:00:064 (1) - remove finish
01:00:017 (1,1,1,1) - whistle(suggestion)
01:07:072 (1,2,3,4) - finish ~volume:40%~ or whistle(suggestion)
01:17:016 (1,2,3,4) - whisle?
01:43:011 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - finish ~volume:40%~
02:21:033 (1,1,1,1) - whistle?
02:38:032 (1,2,3,4) - finish ~volume:40%~ or whistle(suggestion)

nice map and SB.
Cyril Scarlet
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gdeath wrote:

[Normal]
this is your easiest diff.HD diff & Overall diff are too high for now.decrease them.(suggestion)
01:34:014 (1,1) - i'd make them totally quiet. OK
02:55:030 (1) - ^ OK
02:35:095 (4) - stack on the end of slider(3) OK

[Hard]
HD diff 8?Are you sure?
01:05:036 (1) - stack on the end of slider(4) OK
01:16:068 (5) - ^ OK


01:34:014 (1) - i'd make them totally quiet.
01:38:039 (1) - ^
02:55:031 (1) - ^

This Diff maybe I'll remake all sounds =w=
Tanmak
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Tanmak
えーと、シリルさん、
三回ダウンロードしたが、ロードが全部失敗でした。T_T
たぶん、ファイルがおかしくなさそうです。
再アプロードしてもらえませんか。
それとも、どうすればいいですか。

I solved opening file problem~~ ;w;
I will modding later.
Cyril Scarlet
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Cyril Scarlet
ロードしてみましたけど大丈夫でしたよ >.<"

一応再ＵＰしてみました！
sm000001
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sm000001
love hina >_>
Card N'FoRcE
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Here since the beginning
Card N'FoRcE
- Normal:
  • .Opinions:
    The beginning seems kinda weird, but it feels playable, so i don't feel like arguing about that.
    .Suggestions:
    00:16:77 (1) - extend to 0:20:55?
    01:02:07 - add a beat here?
    01:36:75 (1) - extend to 1:41:71?
    02:42:058 (4) - move 3 squares right for simmetry?
    .Errors/Mistakes:
    02:37:39 - seriously, add a beat here, it feels just natural to have one
- Hard:
  • .Suggestions:
    00:16:77 (1) - extend to 0:20:55?
    01:38:41 (1) - extend to 1:41:71?
    02:49:66 (1) - this slider has whistle. is it intentional?
    02:59:33 (1) - This one is silenced in the Normal difficulty. Why not here too?
- Taka's Hard:
  • .Opinions:
    00:15:83 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - having them all with "Finish" hitsound is kinda stunning xD
    You did a good job by using Finish hitsound, because it fits well, but sometimes you should make it a bit more entertaining. Just adding it every two beats for 30 whole seconds feels boring when playing >.<
    .Suggestions:
    00:35:17 (12) - missing Finish hitsound?
    01:01:13 (1,1) - add finish to those two?
Great mapset and great storyboarding; i feel this map has something different from other maps.
Also, Love Hina <3
So, Star and Kudosu Star, keep the good job up ^^
yaya
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yaya
for hitsounds.
in fact , i think hitsounds mix isnt very good .simple hitsound on 1 note is really good .
for example
[Hard]
00:15:83 (1,3) - only finish.
00:37:53 (2) - ^
00:38:24 (5) - ^
00:50:04 (1) - the beginner of slider. only whistle .

01:25:67 - delete this section line.(4,6) use soft whistle . 01:26:61 change to normal hitsound.

others

[Hard]
01:57:522 - this part .. really wired . like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/597
02:01:297 - this part.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/598 . dont mind that slider..i make it random.
02:44:00 (4) - new combo?


the beginner of normal is a bit empty .maybe you wanna use 0.5x bpm??
overall -1 is better.
and why dont you change the slider velocity instead of use 0.5x bpm?
Cyril Scarlet
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thank you Card N'FoRcE and osu_CN_yaya for Star and kudosu Star

I'll come to edit after I'm finish work today ^^
orioncomet
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Thai Translation ~

For Takisannn >o</ (บอกทากะให้ตรงกับที่พลอยพิมพ์นะ!!)
"ถามลุงอามบ้าที่สุดในจักวาลเอานะงิ"

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- Normal:
  • .Opinions: ความเห็น (กร๊ากก แปลไมวะนิ)
    The beginning seems kinda weird, but it feels playable, so i don't feel like arguing about that. ตอนเล่นรู้สึกแปลกๆ (- - ?
    .Suggestions: คำแนะนำ~
    00:16:77 (1) - extend to 0:20:55? ยืดดด มันออกไปที่ 0:20:55 ? มั้ย มั้ย มั้ย XP
    01:02:07 - add a beat here? ประมาณว่า ใส่โน๊ตที่นี่มั้ย? (beat = จังหวะ, โน๊ต, เสียง)
    01:36:75 (1) - extend to 1:41:71? ยืดดด มันออกไปที่ 1:41:71 ?
    02:42:058 (4) - move 3 squares right for simmetry? นั่นแหล่ะ ซ้ายขวาเหมือนกัน 5555
    .Errors/Mistakes: เออเร่อ และความผิดพลาด
    02:37:39 - seriously, add a beat here, it feels just natural to have one จริงจังนะ O.O' addโน๊ตที่นี่ มันจะรู้สึกเข้ากันมากกว่า
- Hard:
  • .Suggestions:
    00:16:77 (1) - extend to 0:20:55? ยิดไปที่ ..
    01:38:41 (1) - extend to 1:41:71? ^
    02:49:66 (1) - this slider has whistle. is it intentional? ไสล์อันนี้มีเสียงนกหวีด.. ตั้งใจหรือเปล่า?
    02:59:33 (1) - This one is silenced in the Normal difficulty. Why not here too? โน๊ตนี้เงียบ ใส่นอมอลดีพ แต่ทำไมในนี้ไม่ทำเหมือนกัน >a<?
- Taka's Hard:
  • .Opinions:
    00:15:83 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - having them all with "Finish" hitsound is kinda stunning xD
    You did a good job by using Finish hitsound, because it fits well, but sometimes you should make it a bit more entertaining. Just adding it every two beats for 30 whole seconds feels boring when playing >.<
    โน๊ตทั้งหมดตรงนั้นมันเป็นเสียงจบหมดเลย รู้สึกมึนมาก XD
    คุณทำดีแล้วโดยการใช้เสียงจบ เพราะมันเข้ากันดีทั้งหมดนั่นแหล่ะ แต่บางทีคุณน่าจะทำให้มันสนุกขึ้นอีกนิด ให้ใส่อย่างอื่นขั้นแต่ละ 2โน๊ต ไรงี้หล่ะ ไม่งั้นมันจะรู้สึกเบื่อเวลาเล่น
    .Suggestions:
    00:35:17 (12) - missing Finish hitsound? ไม่มีเสียง จบเหรอ?
    01:01:13 (1,1) - add finish to those two? ใส่เสียงจบที่ โน๊ต2ตัวนั้นมั้ยยย >O<
Great mapset and great storyboarding; i feel this map has something different from other maps.
แมพแจ๋ว และSBเยี่ยม, ชั้นรู้สึกแมพนี้มีบางอย่างที่แตกต่างจากแมพอื่นๆนะ
Also, Love Hina <3
So, Star and Kudosu Star, keep the good job up ^^

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

for hitsounds.
in fact , i think hitsounds mix isnt very good .simple hitsound on 1 note is really good . ชั้นว่าเสียงโดยรวมไม่ค่อยดีเท่าไร อย่างเช่นเสียงบนโน๊ต1ตัวอันนั้นดีกว่ามากก @.@
for example เช่น~
[Hard]
00:15:83 (1,3) - only finish. เสียงจบเท่าน้าน~
00:37:53 (2) - ^ ^
00:38:24 (5) - ^ ^
00:50:04 (1) - the beginner of slider. only whistle . ตัวเริ่มของสไลด์ ใส่แต่เสียงนกหวีด

01:25:67 - delete this section line.(4,6) use soft whistle. ลบ section line (4,6)ใช้เสียง soft whistle
01:26:61 change to normal hitsound. เปลี่ยนไปเป็นเสียง Normal

others อย่างอื่นอีกกกก

[Hard]
01:57:522 - this part .. really wired . like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/597 ตรงนี้มันประหลาดไปอ้ะป่าว?... หรือแบบนี้?
02:01:297 - this part.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/598 . dont mind that slider..i make it random. สำหรับท่อนนี้... ทำแบบนี้มั้ย? ชั้นแต่ทำให้ดูเฉยๆนะ
02:44:00 (4) - new combo? ตามนั้น XD


the beginner of normal is a bit empty .maybe you wanna use 0.5x bpm?? ในตอนแรกของNormal มันแลโล่ง ว่างๆไป.. บางทีคุณต้องการจะใช้ 0.5x bpm มั้ย?
overall -1 is better.
and why dont you change the slider velocity instead of use 0.5x bpm? และ ทำำไม? คุณไม่เปลี่ยน ความเร็วของสไลด์ ใช้ 0.5x bpm แทนดูหล่ะ
อ้าค โอ้ค อ้อค.. orz
Cyril Scarlet
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Cyril Scarlet
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Cyril Scarlet
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Last edited by Cyril Scarlet , edited 1 time in total.
Cyril Scarlet
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Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- Normal:
  • .Opinions:
    The beginning seems kinda weird, but it feels playable, so i don't feel like arguing about that.
    .Suggestions:
    00:16:77 (1) - extend to 0:20:55?
    01:02:07 - add a beat here?
    01:36:75 (1) - extend to 1:41:71?
    02:42:058 (4) - move 3 squares right for simmetry?
    .Errors/Mistakes:
    02:37:39 - seriously, add a beat here, it feels just natural to have one
- Hard:
  • .Suggestions:
    00:16:77 (1) - extend to 0:20:55?
    01:38:41 (1) - extend to 1:41:71?
    02:49:66 (1) - this slider has whistle. is it intentional?
    02:59:33 (1) - This one is silenced in the Normal difficulty. Why not here too?
OK ! Changed


osu_CN_yaya wrote:

for hitsounds.
in fact , i think hitsounds mix isnt very good .simple hitsound on 1 note is really good .
for example
[Hard]
00:15:83 (1,3) - only finish.
00:37:53 (2) - ^
00:38:24 (5) - ^
00:50:04 (1) - the beginner of slider. only whistle .

01:25:67 - delete this section line.(4,6) use soft whistle . 01:26:61 change to normal hitsound.
OK !Changed and add 0.5 in speed. I'm fogot to add ^^



Thank you

Card N'FoRcE , osu_CN_yaya
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