1. Easy (2.98 stars, 95 notes)
2. Hard (4.76 stars, 177 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 252 notes)
4. Naruti Re-Styled (4.8 stars, 297 notes)

james039 wrote:

Sterrum's offset is sounding quite early here.

I recommend +22ms from that. (Played with auto)

I think the sample volume should be reduced.

Also on [Insane] it is quite unrhythmic to map the out-to-silence ending, I'd suggest taking that out (shouldn't map this part at all).

That is all I have for comment. Fix some problems and I can offer my star.

Fun map

P.S. [Hard] crashes on my machine. I dunno why

Nakata Yuji wrote:

I made most of the changes that you wanted me to.
However, I think Sterrum has the offset right on the money, when I used yours, I got around 24ms early for an average.

james039 wrote:

Nakata Yuji wrote:

I made most of the changes that you wanted me to.
However, I think Sterrum has the offset right on the money, when I used yours, I got around 24ms early for an average.

Meaning the collective difference between your universal offset, and mine, is about 20ms. Both of us could be actually off by 10ms, or maybe you are off by 15 and me 5. Anyway, try listening to several (at least 3 or 4) other recently ranked maps on Auto, (I think most of them are pretty well timed), and seeing if they sound early or late, and once you know by how much, adjust your own universal offset accordingly.

Both naruti and I agree on the offset, so both of us are in the same ballpark.

I would advise against leaving the current offset as-is, since it's really coming in quite early. Please at least consult with a BAT about timing, due to this discrepancy.

In the meantime, I give you a star.

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

There is... an easier diff in the making, right?

[Hard]
No problems found

[Naruti Re-Styled]
00:29:034 (3) - Probably remove this note; it doesn't really fit imo
No problems found

[Insane]
00:33:077 (1) - Unrankable slider. Position it somewhere other than under the slider, since it's impossible to see
No other problems found

A pretty good beatmap, you've done a good job. (Either I'm tired and my brain couldn't keep up, or this must have been hard to map) Have a star for your efforts

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Most definitely. The reason you know it is because you mapped it yourself. However, to other players, this would seem completely out of place. Either way, hiding sliders/notes under sliders is bad mapping practice and should be avoided in the vast majority of cases.

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

first .

you really need a easier diff for new players .

Hard:
i think you can add something at the second diff , will be much better.
slider/note under the slider before is ugly , you should replace them.
and don't put so much hitsound together , make hitsounds on white tick is better , for ex: 00:14:000 (3) - all finish , really noisy.
and this 00:31:033 (9) - clap + whistle doesn't fit this music .
01:18:066 (8) - ugly.

Hard and Insane . YOU SHOULD MAKE A AUDIO SAMPLE SET. NORMAL/SOFT . press f6 to do that.
i don't know why so many modders didnt point this mistake..
Insane:
00:26:000 (8,1,2) - distance
00:33:077 (1) - i cant see it as a slider
00:52:066 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - nonono. so much clap.
01:12:089 (1) - so far away from note3 before.make it at 01:13:077 (1) - here.

Naruti:
much better .xD