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Modding queue <3
Overall
Pink hitcircle colors? Use white and red like the BG D:
Please don't use so much inconsistent spacing.
Soft
Slider velocity SO HIGH
00:20:075 (1) - This is Easy, right? So move it to the center, because it's really close to the end of spinner
00:56:043 (4,1) - REALLY HIGH JUMP ORZ
00:59:002 (4,1) - ^
01:30:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ...easy difficulty?
Medium
Blue hitcircles? WHY
00:46:005 (15,1) - spacing wtf
01:26:027 (2,3) - ^
01:33:024 (9,1) - ^
Tough
No comments @spacing...
Go, have a star(ite olololol) for start.
Overall
Pink hitcircle colors? Use white and red like the BG D:
Please don't use so much inconsistent spacing.
Soft
Slider velocity SO HIGH
00:20:075 (1) - This is Easy, right? So move it to the center, because it's really close to the end of spinner
00:56:043 (4,1) - REALLY HIGH JUMP ORZ
00:59:002 (4,1) - ^
01:30:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ...easy difficulty?
Medium
Blue hitcircles? WHY
00:46:005 (15,1) - spacing wtf
01:26:027 (2,3) - ^
01:33:024 (9,1) - ^
Tough
No comments @spacing...
Go, have a star(ite olololol) for start.
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Soft:
00:10:037 (1,1,1,1) - You definitely took the easy way out here.
Slider velocity is way too high.
DISTANCE SNAP THIS AT A CONSTANT! It is an easy map, we can't be confusing beginners now, can we?
01:28:021 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - An example of the inconsistent distancing.
01:33:040 (1,2) - Another example...
You get the point.
Medium:
00:10:005 (4) - Not snapped right.
00:15:056 (1,1) - What the is a jump like this doing in Medium?
00:56:075 (16,1) - Again, why?
Distancing :/
Compare:
00:25:094 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
To
00:51:089 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
Examples of variable distancing.
01:23:067 (1,2) -
01:25:062 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
01:28:021 (1,2,3,4) -
01:30:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
THESE ARE ALL DIFFERENT! WHY?
Tough:
Increase the circle size, :O
00:28:054 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Insane maps should have their "easy" points as well. Clearly, this is well beyond most people's abilities.
00:51:024 (15) - Not quite under 14.
01:05:051 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - What is this even doing in a map?
01:21:072 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Too hard, again.
01:28:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - This is a mess of unsnapped notes.
01:43:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - I don't even have to say what's wrong with this.
The distance snap is again not constant. Unless there are jumps, it should be constant.
This map is ok. Personally, I think you should fix everything I've said, and after, PM me and I'll star this map.
Oh also, I strongly suggest that you don't turn the stacks into snakes, as said above.
00:10:037 (1,1,1,1) - You definitely took the easy way out here.
Slider velocity is way too high.
DISTANCE SNAP THIS AT A CONSTANT! It is an easy map, we can't be confusing beginners now, can we?
01:28:021 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - An example of the inconsistent distancing.
01:33:040 (1,2) - Another example...
You get the point.
Medium:
00:10:005 (4) - Not snapped right.
00:15:056 (1,1) - What the is a jump like this doing in Medium?
00:56:075 (16,1) - Again, why?
Distancing :/
Compare:
00:25:094 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
To
00:51:089 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
Examples of variable distancing.
01:23:067 (1,2) -
01:25:062 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
01:28:021 (1,2,3,4) -
01:30:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
THESE ARE ALL DIFFERENT! WHY?
Tough:
Increase the circle size, :O
00:28:054 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Insane maps should have their "easy" points as well. Clearly, this is well beyond most people's abilities.
00:51:024 (15) - Not quite under 14.
01:05:051 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - What is this even doing in a map?
01:21:072 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Too hard, again.
01:28:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - This is a mess of unsnapped notes.
01:43:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - I don't even have to say what's wrong with this.
The distance snap is again not constant. Unless there are jumps, it should be constant.
This map is ok. Personally, I think you should fix everything I've said, and after, PM me and I'll star this map.
Oh also, I strongly suggest that you don't turn the stacks into snakes, as said above.
[Overall]
BPM: 185,00 - Offset: 10.370 (Remember to resnap all notes.)
[Soft]
Spacing is huge for an easy map. Reduce it.
00:05:019 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You have some notes before the first offset here.
00:22:070 (3) - Partially offscreen.
00:44:075 (6) - ^
01:15:089 (2) - ^
01:34:005 (2) - ^
[Medium]
Some combos are too long. Follow my suggestions for improve :3
00:05:019 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4) - You have some notes before the first offset here.
00:07:078 (9) - New combo.
00:09:008 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:43:078 (8) - New combo.
00:48:097 (8) - ^
00:54:016 (8) - ^
[Tough]
Some combos are too long. Follow my suggestions for improve :3
00:06:048 (9) - New combo.
00:07:078 (17) - ^
00:44:010 (9) - ^
00:49:029 (9) - ^
00:54:048 (9) - ^
00:59:067 (9) - ^
01:25:062 (6) - ^
01:30:081 (9) - ^
01:36:000 (9) - ^
01:41:019 (9) - ^
BPM: 185,00 - Offset: 10.370 (Remember to resnap all notes.)
[Soft]
Spacing is huge for an easy map. Reduce it.
00:05:019 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You have some notes before the first offset here.
00:22:070 (3) - Partially offscreen.
00:44:075 (6) - ^
01:15:089 (2) - ^
01:34:005 (2) - ^
[Medium]
Some combos are too long. Follow my suggestions for improve :3
00:05:019 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4) - You have some notes before the first offset here.
00:07:078 (9) - New combo.
00:09:008 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:43:078 (8) - New combo.
00:48:097 (8) - ^
00:54:016 (8) - ^
[Tough]
Some combos are too long. Follow my suggestions for improve :3
00:06:048 (9) - New combo.
00:07:078 (17) - ^
00:44:010 (9) - ^
00:49:029 (9) - ^
00:54:048 (9) - ^
00:59:067 (9) - ^
01:25:062 (6) - ^
01:30:081 (9) - ^
01:36:000 (9) - ^
01:41:019 (9) - ^
= =
It is a UNrankcerble map = =
I'm not thing to mod ...
Sorry !!
It is a UNrankcerble map = =
I'm not thing to mod ...
Sorry !!
Topic Starter
It's ok............
[Soft]
00:10:037 (1,1,1,1) - I find it kinda boring with four spinners in a row......
01:02:026 (1) - Offscreen Slider!
[Medium]
00:10:037 (1,1,1) - Also boring >.> Please meake somthing more intresting than long 1/4 repeating sliders....
01:02:026 (1,1,1) - Please add some circles between the sliders... (maybe every white tick
)
[Tough]
00:20:075 (1,1,1) - Same as soft! (BORING)
1:02:026 to 1:21:407 - This part is LAME... make this section so there is no breaks and is somewhat tough...
01:24:032 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - *Yawn...*
This map could be much better i like some parts so i star this.
I would recomend that you redo allot of parts and make them less repetitive....
*star*
00:10:037 (1,1,1,1) - I find it kinda boring with four spinners in a row......
01:02:026 (1) - Offscreen Slider!
[Medium]
00:10:037 (1,1,1) - Also boring >.> Please meake somthing more intresting than long 1/4 repeating sliders....
01:02:026 (1,1,1) - Please add some circles between the sliders... (maybe every white tick
)[Tough]
00:20:075 (1,1,1) - Same as soft! (BORING)
1:02:026 to 1:21:407 - This part is LAME... make this section so there is no breaks and is somewhat tough...
01:24:032 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - *Yawn...*
This map could be much better i like some parts so i star this.
I would recomend that you redo allot of parts and make them less repetitive....
*star*
Most of these things are going to be restatements of what everyone said before.
Soft:
00:10:370 (1,1,1,1) - 4 spinners in a row is boring and probably considered slider abuse, so this is probably unrankable. Please get rid of at least 2 spinners
00:21:397 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This part plays like a metronome with every beat 2 whole notes apart, please put something more original here
00:41:505 (1) to 01:01:613 (4) - ^ and make your combos follow a constant pattern. You started out with your combos being every 16 whole notes, but you switched to 8 whole notes per combo as the song went on. To solve this problem make each combo be equal in length
01:02:261 (1) - Since this slider is offscreen, it is unrankable. Please change the slider
01:43:775 (1) - add an inherited timing section and silence the end of the slider?
Since the other 2 diffs have large problems similar to Soft's issues, I am going to quickly cover the flaws of the other 2 diffs.
Medium:
A lot of the parts play like a metronomes, so please change it.
01:02:261 (1,1,1) - long sliders with large breaks between them is quite boring, please change this.
Tough:
A lot of the parts play like a metronomes, so please change it.
You don't have to use only straight sliders to make streams. Please use curved sliders too. It might be nice to have some of the streams to be purely beats too because having mostly sliders for 20s is also pretty boring.
Areas of few notes separated by breaks is very boring, so please remove some of the breaks and map them.
--
This map needs quite a bit of work, so please make the necessary corrections. Feel free to ask me to mod the map again once you fixed it.
Soft:
00:10:370 (1,1,1,1) - 4 spinners in a row is boring and probably considered slider abuse, so this is probably unrankable. Please get rid of at least 2 spinners
00:21:397 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This part plays like a metronome with every beat 2 whole notes apart, please put something more original here
00:41:505 (1) to 01:01:613 (4) - ^ and make your combos follow a constant pattern. You started out with your combos being every 16 whole notes, but you switched to 8 whole notes per combo as the song went on. To solve this problem make each combo be equal in length
01:02:261 (1) - Since this slider is offscreen, it is unrankable. Please change the slider
01:43:775 (1) - add an inherited timing section and silence the end of the slider?
Since the other 2 diffs have large problems similar to Soft's issues, I am going to quickly cover the flaws of the other 2 diffs.
Medium:
A lot of the parts play like a metronomes, so please change it.
01:02:261 (1,1,1) - long sliders with large breaks between them is quite boring, please change this.
Tough:
A lot of the parts play like a metronomes, so please change it.
You don't have to use only straight sliders to make streams. Please use curved sliders too. It might be nice to have some of the streams to be purely beats too because having mostly sliders for 20s is also pretty boring.
Areas of few notes separated by breaks is very boring, so please remove some of the breaks and map them.
--
This map needs quite a bit of work, so please make the necessary corrections. Feel free to ask me to mod the map again once you fixed it.
Tough:
00:29:839 (1-7): I'm not sure if you're trying to be aligned, but it isn't.
Medium:
00:24:315 (4-5): Spacing.
Soft:
01:05:505 (2-4): Spacing.
Suggestions, not orders xD
like the map. star~
00:29:839 (1-7): I'm not sure if you're trying to be aligned, but it isn't.
Medium:
00:24:315 (4-5): Spacing.
Soft:
01:05:505 (2-4): Spacing.
Suggestions, not orders xD
like the map. star~
add source and tags
offset 2583 sounds ok for me
the sound level is also too high. use 7 or so
also try to think of some patterns for tough difficulty not only circles on full beats and streams...
the first offset hast to be set before the notes!osuplayer111 wrote:
[Overall]
BPM: 185,00 - Offset: 10.370 (Remember to resnap all notes.)
offset 2583 sounds ok for me
the sound level is also too high. use 7 or so
also try to think of some patterns for tough difficulty not only circles on full beats and streams...
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
All DONE!!!!!Kytoxid wrote:
[General]
Tags?
[Soft]
01:02:025 (1,2) - Horrid jump.
01:27:055 (5,1) - Add a note between these.
[Medium]
As a whole, please make spacing more consistent.
00:10:004 (8,1) - Too close.
00:23:001 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Irregular spacing.
00:44:074 (4,8) - Stack these together, form a diamond with 5,6,7?
01:12:031 (8,1) - Much too close.
01:17:082 (1) - Long spinner; map it instead?
01:33:006 (8,9,1) - Stretch into a line?
[Tough]
Drain's too high, Auto loses half the bar when you're in a slow section.
00:43:012 (6,7,8) - Irregular pattern, occurs several times in these sliders.
01:24:031 (2) - Boring. Do something more interesting?
Hello~
[Soft]
00:15:555 (3) New combo?
00:21:393 - 01:01:610 Oh, There are boring. Because there are only 1/1 beat note. Add another note in some part which is 1/2 note or repeat slide note or whatever.
[Medium]
What is basis of spacing? Spacing is different. For example, in 00:28:204 (4,5,6,7,8); spacing is changed suddenly. This factor make to confuse this difficulty player.
Kytoxid said please make spacing more consistent. I didn't see this beatmap old ver, but you need to solve and consider more this spacing problem and spacing basis.
[Tough]
Hmm. No problem in this beatmap. However, note forms are boring. Beacause note forms are simple in Tough. Note form is squarely 1/2 and 1/4 or for example only simple slide notes are covered in 00:51:880 - 01:02:150. These consistently form are make boring. I suggest that you need to make more special form note.
Hmm.....I can't give you star..T.T
However, if you make beatmap more awesome, then I will give you star. Sorry.
[Soft]
00:15:555 (3) New combo?
00:21:393 - 01:01:610 Oh, There are boring. Because there are only 1/1 beat note. Add another note in some part which is 1/2 note or repeat slide note or whatever.
[Medium]
What is basis of spacing? Spacing is different. For example, in 00:28:204 (4,5,6,7,8); spacing is changed suddenly. This factor make to confuse this difficulty player.
Kytoxid said please make spacing more consistent. I didn't see this beatmap old ver, but you need to solve and consider more this spacing problem and spacing basis.
[Tough]
Hmm. No problem in this beatmap. However, note forms are boring. Beacause note forms are simple in Tough. Note form is squarely 1/2 and 1/4 or for example only simple slide notes are covered in 00:51:880 - 01:02:150. These consistently form are make boring. I suggest that you need to make more special form note.
Hmm.....I can't give you star..T.T
However, if you make beatmap more awesome, then I will give you star. Sorry.
SOFT mod is gogo
[soft]
needs hitsounding better, atm theres very little so it makes the map boreing
01:02:025 (1,2) - spacing too close, this must be fixed for a easy diff
01:15:055 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make more simple and fix spacing, its completely out and without this being fixed makes the diff horrid
[Medium]
01:11:033 (5,6) - horrid spacing, fix plz
your note patterns are very very repetative, please spice it up more
[Tough]
hmmm not very hard for its name
hitsound it better
00:44:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ugly pattern change in this, remap
00:56:009 (6) - horridly made slider, remake
00:59:033 (8) - ^
01:01:028 (6,7) - ^
01:23:066 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - toooooooooooooo much, remap and make fun
_________________________-
srry if what i say in my mod is offencive, it dont mean it to be i just mod hard
anyway you need to do alotta work on making these maps funner
[soft]
needs hitsounding better, atm theres very little so it makes the map boreing
01:02:025 (1,2) - spacing too close, this must be fixed for a easy diff
01:15:055 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make more simple and fix spacing, its completely out and without this being fixed makes the diff horrid
[Medium]
01:11:033 (5,6) - horrid spacing, fix plz
your note patterns are very very repetative, please spice it up more
[Tough]
hmmm not very hard for its name
hitsound it better
00:44:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ugly pattern change in this, remap
00:56:009 (6) - horridly made slider, remake
00:59:033 (8) - ^
01:01:028 (6,7) - ^
01:23:066 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - toooooooooooooo much, remap and make fun
_________________________-
srry if what i say in my mod is offencive, it dont mean it to be i just mod hard
anyway you need to do alotta work on making these maps funner
Finally You solved spacing problem...
Then..I remod from Your PM.
[Soft]
Fine.
[Medium]
00:31:123 (1) Remove clap, and add finish
[Tough]
First, You need to arrange grid level 3.
00:17:501 (13) 1 grid left.
00:31:123 (17) Finish.
01:46:447 (18) ^
01:46:691 Remove Break.
However, not enough rankable map because this note pattern still isn't interesting. So you need to make more special.
Starred.
Then..I remod from Your PM.
[Soft]
Fine.
[Medium]
00:31:123 (1) Remove clap, and add finish
[Tough]
First, You need to arrange grid level 3.
00:17:501 (13) 1 grid left.
00:31:123 (17) Finish.
01:46:447 (18) ^
01:46:691 Remove Break.
However, not enough rankable map because this note pattern still isn't interesting. So you need to make more special.
Starred.
Mod Info's:
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Starts Suggestions:
All seems ok.
[Soft]
It's ok
[Medium]
It's ok
[Tough]
01:36:055 (7,8,9) - 1/4 ->
Starred~
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Starts Suggestions:
All seems ok.
[Soft]
It's ok
[Medium]
It's ok
[Tough]
01:36:055 (7,8,9) - 1/4 ->
Starred~
[Soft]
00:22:069 (3,4,5,1) - Spacing between (5) and (1) is perfect, but may be a little confusing since this is an 'easy' difficulty - maybe change it a little?
00:25:028 (4,5,6,1) - ^ between (6) and (1)
00:41:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Overused claps?
00:46:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Overused whistles?
00:51:088-01:23:001 - Lack of hitsounds
[Medium]
01:05:082 (4) - Move back to 01:05:066
01:16:020 (4) - Move back to 01:16:004
Add some more hitsounds in places, mainly around the beginning - don't go crazy, but a few more would be nice
[Tough]
00:28:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Stack these to mimic the original map?
01:43:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - ^
Consider linking all your sliders too, one after another, to mimic the original
Hitsounds (see above)
Star~
00:22:069 (3,4,5,1) - Spacing between (5) and (1) is perfect, but may be a little confusing since this is an 'easy' difficulty - maybe change it a little?
00:25:028 (4,5,6,1) - ^ between (6) and (1)
00:41:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Overused claps?
00:46:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Overused whistles?
00:51:088-01:23:001 - Lack of hitsounds
[Medium]
01:05:082 (4) - Move back to 01:05:066
01:16:020 (4) - Move back to 01:16:004
Add some more hitsounds in places, mainly around the beginning - don't go crazy, but a few more would be nice
[Tough]
00:28:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Stack these to mimic the original map?
01:43:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - ^
Consider linking all your sliders too, one after another, to mimic the original
Hitsounds (see above)
Star~
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