BANPRESTO - Dark Prison · forum

smallboat

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-04-03T06:50:56+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年4月19日 at 下午 12:49:36

Artist: BANPRESTO
Title: Dark Prison
Source: Super Robot Wars OG
Tags: BGM granzon Neo Granzon shirakawa shu sjoy Kawaiwkyik
BPM: 132.9
Filesize: 3249kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:

Easy (2.17 stars, 89 notes)
Extra (5 stars, 409 notes)
Normal (4.13 stars, 140 notes)
sjoy's Insane (4.96 stars, 316 notes)
wkyik's Hard (4.88 stars, 225 notes)

Download: BANPRESTO - Dark Prison
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#4 Ranked Map. Osu need more Super Robot Wars map !

Easy : 100% by me

Normal : 100% by me

Hard : 100% by Kawaiwkyik

Insane : 100% by sjoy

Extra : 100% by me

Thanks Timing check

EmingK
LKs

Thanks Mod

Kamio Misuzu
bokito
Kytoxid
moonlightleaf
Mao
RandomEffect
Andrea (Bubbled)
Gabe (Ranked)

Nice picture

Last edited by smallboat 2014-04-25T11:12:21+00:00, edited 27 times in total.

Kamio Misuzu

580 posts

Joined November 2012

Kamio Misuzu 2014-04-08T11:39:32+00:00

[Extra]
00:10:098 (1,2) - 这里建议和后面的00:11:143 (1) - 统一一下，合并成一个slider

00:12:076 (2) - 删掉？

00:49:237 - 这里一个note应该就好了，这里起三连有点早了，还是继续1/2单点吧

中间overmap有点严重感觉。。

[sjoy's Insane]
00:22:829 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 这一部分好想有点小跳啊。。。试试这个？

神秘代码

52,63,22829,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,256,23009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,240,23189,2,0,P|32:196|40:148,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,116,23548,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,256,23728,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,220,23908,5,6,0:0:0:0:
256,328,24087,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,220,24267,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,308,24446,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,220,24626,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,84,24805,1,2,0:0:0:0:
492,216,24985,1,8,0:0:0:0:
497,120,25164,1,0,0:0:0:0:
421,278,25345,6,0,L|430:371,1,80,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:46:902 (1,2,3,4) - 挺奇怪的啊。。要不继续1/2？

[wkyik's Hard]
00:11:993 (3) - 删了

00:49:776 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 这段感觉更像insane，放在hard里杀伤力蛮大的

[Normal]
00:40:614 (3,4) - slider吧。dt起来一下断了就怒黑1分了233

[Easy]
00:57:500 (3) - 这个起始点很难抓，不如换1/4，后面白线00:57:679 - 起手

00:58:578 (4) - ^

01:01:990 (1) - 换1/4slider可能好一些，中间那个音太明显了

整体挺好的，good luck~

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-04-09T05:05:46+00:00

Kamio Misuzu wrote:
[Extra]
00:10:098 (1,2) - 这里建议和后面的00:11:143 (1) - 统一一下，合并成一个slider 感覺不錯很適合音樂，改了

00:12:076 (2) - 删掉？好可接受

00:49:237 - 这里一个note应该就好了，这里起三连有点早了，还是继续1/2单点吧 OK 先改了但有可能以後會改掉

中间overmap有点严重感觉。。是有一點，但給一些神觸試玩沒什麼問題。

[Normal]
00:40:614 (3,4) - slider吧。dt起来一下断了就怒黑1分了233 OK改了

[Easy]
00:57:500 (3) - 这个起始点很难抓，不如换1/4，后面白线00:57:679 - 起手感覺蠻難，而且這裡跟隨音樂玩起來沒什麼問題

00:58:578 (4) - ^ ^

01:01:990 (1) - 换1/4slider可能好一些，中间那个音太明显了好

整体挺好的，good luck~ 謝

謝謝 Kamio Misuzu ~ !

bokito wrote:
[General]
我觉得这张bg和白色的note有点不适合，玩的时候会有视觉障碍
我也覺得只是找不到BG 先用這代替

[Extra]
00:07:839 (4) - 既然前面那些silder和circle都间隔开了，那么这个也间隔开吧這個先考慮
00:23:908 (1,2,3) - 这三个和前面那些三连打一样摆放就好了，不用叠得这么密 OK照弧形
01:20:493 (4) - nc 好
因为后面01:20:673 (5,6) - 这两个note是白色，有点影响读图
[Normal]
00:39:716 (1,2,3) - 第一个红线结束，第二个在白线结束，第三个右再红线结束（不觉得第二个怪怪的？）還好
00:58:578 (2) - overmap 還好，沒怎樣
----------
EasyModder 1.4.2
Program By Weiren 好熟悉的程式不過不想用

Last edited by smallboat 2014-04-10T07:22:11+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

sjoy

1,025 posts

Joined April 2012

sjoy 2014-04-09T06:41:38+00:00

Kamio Misuzu wrote:
[Extra]

[sjoy's Insane]
00:22:829 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 这一部分好想有点小跳啊。。。试试这个？
神秘代码
52,63,22829,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,256,23009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,240,23189,2,0,P|32:196|40:148,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,116,23548,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,256,23728,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,220,23908,5,6,0:0:0:0:
256,328,24087,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,220,24267,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,308,24446,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,220,24626,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,84,24805,1,2,0:0:0:0:
492,216,24985,1,8,0:0:0:0:
497,120,25164,1,0,0:0:0:0:
421,278,25345,6,0,L|430:371,1,80,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
好，正缺梗直接用了

00:46:902 (1,2,3,4) - 挺奇怪的啊。。要不继续1/2？感觉还行

整体挺好的，good luck~

代码

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Dark Prison OG ver..mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 52661
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.899999

[Metadata]
Title:Dark Prison
TitleUnicode:ダークプリズン
Artist:BANPRESTO
ArtistUnicode:BANPRESTO
Creator:smallboat
Version:sjoy's Insane
Source:Super Robot Wars OG
Tags:BGM granzon Neo Granzon shirakawa shu sjoy Kawaiwkyik
BeatmapID:398341
BeatmapSetID:162284

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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253,203,46902,6,0,L|296:178,2,40,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,114,47261,2,0,L|111:48,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,42,47620,2,0,L|319:55,2,40,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,95,47979,2,0,L|447:159,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
461,217,48339,5,2,0:0:0:0:
382,255,48518,1,2,0:0:0:0:
298,284,48698,1,8,0:0:0:0:
214,311,48878,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,363,49057,1,2,0:0:0:0:
298,284,49237,1,2,0:0:0:0:
269,200,49416,1,8,0:0:0:0:
242,117,49596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
111,169,49776,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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63,173,50045,1,0,0:0:0:0:
46,173,50135,1,4,0:2:0:0:
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252,30,50584,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,29,50673,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,28,50763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,28,50853,1,4,0:2:0:0:
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385,232,51572,2,0,L|413:283,3,40,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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475,296,52021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
462,316,52111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,331,52201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
421,341,52291,1,0,0:0:0:0:
397,346,52381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
373,348,52470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,347,52560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,349,52650,6,0,P|226:340|123:281,1,191.999994140625,4|2,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
51,207,53188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
91,88,53368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
215,100,53548,1,0,0:0:0:0:
51,207,53727,6,0,B|46:144|46:144|-5:92|50:11,1,191.999994140625,4|2,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,34,54266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,21,54446,1,0,0:0:0:0:
410,52,54626,1,0,0:0:0:0:
482,153,54805,1,4,0:2:0:0:
488,190,54895,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,228,54985,2,0,P|471:279|477:328,1,95.9999970703126,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,248,55344,1,4,0:3:0:0:
482,153,55524,1,4,0:3:0:0:
355,137,55703,1,4,0:3:0:0:
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165,139,56422,2,0,P|78:148|40:256,1,191.999994140625,4|2,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,341,56961,6,0,P|288:245|216:175,1,191.999994140625,4|2,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,291,57500,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,341,57679,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,268,57859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
271,145,58039,6,0,P|176:133|69:159,1,191.999994140625,4|2,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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190,241,58757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
271,145,58937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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316,293,59835,1,4,0:3:0:0:
209,340,60015,1,4,0:3:0:0:
290,189,60194,1,2,3:2:0:0:
308,182,60284,1,0,3:0:0:0:
326,176,60374,1,0,3:0:0:0:
345,175,60464,1,0,3:0:0:0:
364,177,60554,1,2,3:2:0:0:
382,181,60644,1,0,3:0:0:0:
401,181,60733,1,0,3:0:0:0:
420,180,60823,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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456,169,61003,1,0,3:0:0:0:
470,156,61093,1,0,3:0:0:0:
478,139,61182,1,0,3:0:0:0:
480,127,61272,6,0,P|446:81|377:67,1,120.000004577637,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,109,61990,2,0,P|176:117|107:108,1,120.000004577637,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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66,141,63068,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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365,244,66661,2,0,L|341:165,1,60.0000022888184,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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124,207,67559,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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bokito

76 posts

Joined July 2010

bokito 2014-04-09T13:09:08+00:00

[General]

我觉得这张bg和白色的note有点不适合，玩的时候会有视觉障碍

[Extra]

00:07:839 (4) - 既然前面那些silder和circle都间隔开了，那么这个也间隔开吧
00:23:908 (1,2,3) - 这三个和前面那些三连打一样摆放就好了，不用叠得这么密
01:20:493 (4) - nc
因为后面01:20:673 (5,6) - 这两个note是白色，有点影响读图

[sjoy's Insane]

00:49:057 (5) - nc
00:49:057 (1,2,3,4) - 这几个这样放如何http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1496061

[wkyik's Hard]

00:11:993 (3) - del
00:59:117 (1,2,3) - 这里的距离有点不明确，打得怪怪的

[Normal]

00:39:716 (1,2,3) - 第一个红线结束，第二个在白线结束，第三个右再红线结束（不觉得第二个怪怪的？）
00:58:578 (2) - overmap

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EasyModder 1.4.2
Program By Weiren

Kytoxid

osu! Alumni

1,369 posts

Joined April 2009

Kytoxid 2014-04-10T07:00:54+00:00

IRC on Hard Insane Extra.

SPOILER

02:08 smallboat: 哈囉小K 能不能test一下我的map?
02:09 Kytoxid: 先试完这个map之后帮你test
02:09 smallboat: 好
02:21 Kytoxid: kk, map link?
02:22 smallboat: 好
02:22 *smallboat is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/397816 BANPRESTO - Dark Prison]
02:22 smallboat: hard ins ex 3diff
02:22 Kytoxid: I'll start with Hard then?
02:22 smallboat: yes
02:24 Kytoxid: Pretty good.
02:24 smallboat: dt 厲害
02:24 smallboat: okay
02:24 Kytoxid: Was a lot faster than what I usually DT. XD
02:25 smallboat: I can"t play dt to pass
02:25 smallboat: XD
02:25 Kytoxid: 00:22:470 (1) - this part was pretty intense compared to the music, I would tone it down a bit maybe
02:25 Kytoxid: The zig-zag mouse movements are pretty tough.
02:26 smallboat: okay,this diff is GD I"ll tell him
02:26 Kytoxid: If you want to keep a 1/2 section, I would swap that section with 00:25:345 (1) - section, since there is an actual build-up in the music here.
02:26 Kytoxid: Sure.
02:27 smallboat: okay,then I see it too
02:27 smallboat: okay
02:27 Kytoxid: 00:50:494 (1) - This part too, 1/4 sliders are a bit tough for Hard.
02:27 Kytoxid: Both those and the 1/4 slider jumps later 00:51:213 (1) -
02:28 Kytoxid: 01:03:966 (3) - I'd remove this note, just because you had a 1/1 gap earlier in the combo./
02:28 smallboat: okay
02:29 Kytoxid: 01:08:457 (1,2) - I'd also consider combining this into one slider to match 01:07:020 (1) -
02:29 Kytoxid: Yep, it was good overall.
02:29 smallboat: understand
02:30 Kytoxid: Lemme know when I can start on Insane.
02:30 smallboat: okay 0.0//
02:30 Kytoxid: sec, tablet issues.
02:31 smallboat: nothing
02:32 smallboat: wow HR
02:33 Kytoxid: testing + practicing = great!

02:33 smallboat:

02:33 smallboat: thank
02:33 Kytoxid: 00:10:098 (1) - I don't think this is very good; it's really hard to time, at the very least.
02:34 Kytoxid: I'd recommend replacing these with sliders if you want notes here.
02:34 Kytoxid: Especially since I was playing on HR, it was really hard to get good acc on these.
02:34 smallboat: okay
02:34 smallboat: understand
02:35 Kytoxid: 00:23:908 (1) - I think this section makes more sense as 2 groups of 4 notes each, like before, instead of 1 group of 5 and 1 group of 3.
02:36 smallboat: okay
02:36 Kytoxid: 00:28:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Flip these horizontally and move them to the left a bit so that 00:28:219 (1) - flows naturally from 00:27:500 (1,2,3,4) -
02:37 smallboat: okay
02:38 Kytoxid: 01:14:026 (7,8) - I'd combine these into 1 slider with repeats; it's hard to notice they're 1/3 sliders and not 1/4 sliders.
02:38 Kytoxid: 01:23:906 (1,2,3,4) - And this is really messy, imo, most players would need to just spam them.
02:38 smallboat: sure
02:39 Kytoxid: That's all for Insane. Lemme know when to start Extra.
02:39 smallboat: sure
02:39 Kytoxid: BTW, I love high OD. xD
02:40 smallboat: but this diff can rank it , is big problem
02:40 Kytoxid: that messy group of sliders was o_o
02:41 smallboat: can rank or not
02:41 Kytoxid: Lemme figure out the rhythms...
02:42 Kytoxid: oh wow, they're 1/8ths.
02:42 smallboat: sure , sorry give you so hard diff
02:42 smallboat: play
02:44 Kytoxid: Umm, it's a bit overmapped, to say the least. xD
02:44 smallboat: perhaps.. I should reduce DS?
02:44 Kytoxid: I don't think that's really a problem here, it's most there's just too many notes.
02:45 Kytoxid: Especially the parts with the 1/8th sliders.
02:45 Kytoxid: Those are a bit crazy, since they have really tight timing windows.
02:45 smallboat: sure
02:45 Kytoxid: Unlike other notes, if the slider has ended, you lose 2-3 notes' worth of HP.
02:45 Kytoxid: So you can't even hit it late.
02:46 Kytoxid: Well, let's start from the beginning.
02:46 smallboat: perhaps the 1/8 is not fit?
02:46 smallboat: sure
02:46 Kytoxid: 00:01:065 (1,2,3,4) - I recommend you start with a slider, just so it's easier for the player to get into the rhythm right away.
02:46 Kytoxid: Since there's no music before the first note.
02:47 smallboat: okay,perhaps it is nice
02:47 Kytoxid: 00:12:076 (2) - I don't think this note makes sense, there's nothing in the music that needs a note here.
02:47 smallboat: I"ll consider it
02:47 smallboat: sure
02:47 Kytoxid: 00:12:409 (1) - This part was cool.
02:48 smallboat: thanks
02:48 Kytoxid: 00:29:297 (1,2,3,4) - I think 2 1/4 sliders would work better than 4 1/8th sliders here, for reasons I mentioned before.
02:48 Kytoxid: The hitsounds don't quite make sense with 1/8ths either, since the music doesn't go to 1/8ths.
02:49 smallboat: okay ,perhaps the 1/8 will change
02:49 smallboat: okay
02:49 Kytoxid: 00:30:195 (2) - I'd put this a bit farther from 00:29:656 (1) - since you're starting a jump section here.
02:49 smallboat: I"ll make the diff easy to play
02:49 smallboat: sure
02:50 Kytoxid: 00:45:464 (1) - I think a NC every 4 notes is enough here, or maybe even just 1 combo for the 8 notes./
02:50 Kytoxid: 00:49:776 (1,2,3,4) - These were cool too.
02:51 smallboat: indeed
02:51 smallboat: thanks
02:52 Kytoxid: 00:52:650 (1) - These streams feel overmapped, so I'm not too sure about them.
02:52 smallboat: lol
02:52 Kytoxid: If you do keep them, I would space it out a bit more at places like 00:53:548 (3,1) -
02:52 smallboat: sure
02:52 Kytoxid: So the player can have 4 somewhat consistent jumps across 00:53:188 (1,2,3,1) -
02:53 smallboat: sure
02:53 Kytoxid: 00:55:883 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Might be better to mix it up and do something a bit different here, since the music changes a bit.
02:54 smallboat: so reduce stream here?
02:54 Kytoxid: Maybe, just do something other than your stream . xD
02:55 Kytoxid: 01:01:182 (4,1) - spacing error compared to the rest of the stream.
02:55 smallboat: okay maybe change 1/4 slider here

02:55 smallboat: I didn"t notiice it
02:55 smallboat: okay will fix
02:56 Kytoxid: 01:22:828 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - This is a bit mean, that you have 2 note-slider followed by 4 note-slider.
02:57 Kytoxid: A bit hard to read on the first playthrough, but it's not too bad.
02:57 Kytoxid: 01:23:906 (1,2,3,4) - These 1/8ths are still really tough though.
02:57 smallboat: okay 1/8 I"ll cancel it
02:58 smallboat: perhaps not fit this song
02:58 Kytoxid: that's everything~ xD Was a challenging map.
02:58 smallboat: okay

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

moonlightleaf 2014-04-10T15:28:51+00:00

[Easy]

转盘后没空8拍有红线会要紧么？

00:56:422 (2,3,4,5) - 这个和前面00:52:650 (1,2,1) 一样的节奏但是不一样的打法我觉得还是服毒好

不会看easy 总觉得有点难，我上次给我寝室的玩最炫名族风E 貌似是1星半？他死了5次= = 我最后给他开了NF 才过了

[Normal]

OD+1?

00:40:075 (2) - 改短滑条+note？

00:58:578 (2,2) - 试试都改成俩红线各一个note

01:06:301 (2,3,1) - 类似这种2note+滑条好像特别多？

[吃柚子啦><]

00:06:710 (2,4) - ctrl+g

00:10:098 (1,2) - 1不用NC 2需要NC 因为减速（减速呆key啦哼

00:11:993 (3) - 虽然有个音但是总觉得连着不顺= =

00:16:722 (1,2,3,4) - flow很差额感觉的逆时针 14调换23调换这种

00:22:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 有点多考虑换俩个滑条？比如34合并

00:28:219 (1) - ctrl+g ?

00:38:997 (2,3,4,5) - 还是4边星好ww

00:47:620 (2,3) - 23全选 ctrl+g一次

01:00:194 (5) - 卧槽好多= =

01:24:086 (3,4,5) - 改成一个折返试试

[老司机]

00:10:098 (1,1,1,1) - 呆key啦(绝对一堆100和50 对我而言

00:16:722 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 我觉得你还有更好的梗没交出来

00:24:626 (5) - 放x|344y|168 左右

00:28:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 233333

00:34:327 (2,4) - 24都能ctrl+g

00:54:805 (5) - NC

01:00:194 (5) - ^

01:24:176 (4) - 最后一个居然是折返会不会骗到一些人断cb？

[击沉小船]

00:02:419 (4,1) - 会不会有点远了后面同理

00:12:590 (2,3,5) - 要藏的话也没藏好

00:16:003 (5,6) - ctrl+g

00:16:722 (1,2) - ^

好像重复的梗还是有点多 2note+滑条

00:28:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - 卧槽卧槽必须击沉人玩深圳即将被击沉

00:51:213 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2) - 这好好玩，如果全部旋转的话更好些

01:12:858 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - 这连打是有连打音吗我没听出

01:23:906 (1,2,3,4,1) - 会不会卡手？

渣mod, 睡觉惹明天还要挤公交上班

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2014-04-10T15:48:07+00:00

@moonlightleaf
00:10:098 (1,2) - 1不用NC 2需要NC 因为减速（减速呆key啦哼
00:22:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 有点多考虑换俩个滑条？比如34合并
00:47:620 (2,3) - 23全选 ctrl+g一次

fix了以上的
其他mod暫時no fixed
特別00:11:993 (2) -

Kytoxid: all fixed

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 52661
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

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Title:Dark Prison
TitleUnicode:ダークプリズン
Artist:BANPRESTO
ArtistUnicode:BANPRESTO
Creator:smallboat
Version:wkyik's Hard
Source:Super Robot Wars OG
Tags:BGM granzon Neo Granzon shirakawa shu sjoy Kawaiwkyik
BeatmapID:399544
BeatmapSetID:162284

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

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Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Mao 2014-04-10T18:45:15+00:00

Unrankbe Issue
Recommended to fix
Highly Suggested
Suggestion
Just my own opinion / Comment

General

Resize your Background. Recommended measures are 1024x768 :c
First Kiai is inconsistent with Hard diff. For more information check the Hard's Mod C:

Extra

00:07:839 (4) - I'd suggest you not to stack this instead do it as you did before for consistency.
00:12:076 (2) - This note doesn't really fit if you ask me since the sound here is really quiet and shouldn't be mapped with a circle. It feels as it shouldn't be there. Consider removing it.
00:17:800 (6) - CTRL+G could make the transition here better. It kinda breaks the flow for me a bit here since the other patterns all made me follow a kind of oval with my cursor but this one didn't.
00:29:297 (1,2,3,4) - This doesn't play well since these are played same as a normal stream. I'd suggest you to place their heads like a normal stream as seen in the screenshot below.
Screenshot
00:59:206 (2) - Move this down a bit for a better curve, flows way better imo :c
01:01:272 (1) - Why is this so low spaced? Makes no sense in terms of music if you ask me. Also the whole stream could be redone with Convert Slider to Stream for a better Circle-Form.
01:11:331 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe it's just me but I don't really think these sliders fit here pretty well. I mean sliders like this fit with guitars but the guitar isn't that strong here so it feels kinda wrong to me. Maybe sliders with 1 red anchor point could fit better here.
01:17:798 (3,4,5,6) - The angle here felt a bit too sharp here which broke the flow a bit. Maybe a curve could help out.
01:23:906 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same as I said for them before goes for these of aswell. They flow like it were gigant 1/4 jumps espacially between 01:23:906 (1,2) - . The transition feels a bit sloppy. Try to place them as in a stream (see Screenshot at the first one).
Nice diff! But I'd suggest you to watch your stacks :b

Insane

00:10:098 (1,1,1,1) - Why aren't these spaced the same?
00:56:961 (1) - I personally don't like how the ends are so close to each other. I'd suggest you doing it as shown in this screenshot below
Screenshot
01:00:015 (4) - Place at 217|351 for an equal triangle here? :c
01:01:272 (1) - The transition here didn't feel right to me due to the smaller spacing here.
01:04:864 (3) - Place it at 78|184 for a better transition. This "snake-flow" kinda breaks the overall flow for me here.
01:14:026 (7,8) - All your streams had lower spacing so why does this have such high spacing? Also the straight line they were placed in didn't feel right to me. Consider placing them in a curve similiar to what I show you in the screenshot below. (You don't have to do it like this since it's just a quick made example, but I'd recommend you placing them in a curve for way better flow here)
Screenshot
Awesome C:

Hard

Consider using Slider Tick Rate since the higher diffs did this aswell. Kinda lacks of consistency for me.
There's a short Kiai in all other diffs starting at 00:52:650 - . Why isn't it in yours aswell? :c
00:09:872 (3) - Even though it's just 0,02x Spacing it felt a bit weird to me ingame. The inconsistent spacing looks a bit sloppy to me :c
00:11:993 (3) - Consider removing this note. It kinda confused me while playing.
00:36:662 (3) - The higher spacing here doesn't really fit if you ask me since it's a slower section and you mostly used lower DS in the slower sections :c
01:02:529 (3) - I don't really hear something in the music that tells me that this is a 1/2 stack. I thought it was 3/4 while playing.
Amazing diff

Normal

00:01:065 (1) - Finish, your first section has no hitsounding. Add some hitsounds to it. There are some strong finishes like this one for example in this section. :c
00:29:656 (1) - This section could take some more claps. Place one at the 2nd white tick after the big one. For example at the tail of 00:29:656 (1) -
00:40:075 (2,3) - The overall rhythm didn't feel fitting to me here at all.
Screenshot
00:55:883 (1) - Place it a bit more to the lower right for better transition from the previous object.
You are missing some really strong finishes in the first half of your map :c Otherwise pretty nice!

Easy

00:15:285 (5) - Too high Spacing to the previous object. A variation from +-0,03 from your normal DS is okay but not 0,04 :c Also constant spacing would look better here.
00:27:500 (6) - Spacing to the next object is a bit low, don't you think so? For fixing this place 00:26:782 (5) - at 256|124
00:54:805 (1) - Let this follow the previous object's path for a better transition. So place at 402|55.
Same as I said for the hitsounding in Normal goes here too :c Otherwise pretty nice.

Please reply! I hope it was helpful and good luck! :3

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-04-11T01:56:41+00:00

Kytoxid

Kytoxid wrote:
IRC on Hard Insane Extra.

02:46 Kytoxid: 00:01:065 (1,2,3,4) - I recommend you start with a slider, just so it's easier for the player to get into the rhythm right away. fixed
02:47 Kytoxid: 00:12:076 (2) - I don't think this note makes sense, there's nothing in the music that needs a note here. ok,I remove it.
02:48 Kytoxid: 00:29:297 (1,2,3,4) - I think 2 1/4 sliders would work better than 4 1/8th sliders here, for reasons I mentioned before.
02:48 Kytoxid: The hitsounds don't quite make sense with 1/8ths either, since the music doesn't go to 1/8ths. Okay,cancel 1/8 sliders.
02:49 Kytoxid: 00:30:195 (2) - I'd put this a bit farther from 00:29:656 (1) - since you're starting a jump section here. fixed
02:50 Kytoxid: 00:45:464 (1) - I think a NC every 4 notes is enough here, or maybe even just 1 combo for the 8 notes./ Added NC for every 4 notes
02:52 Kytoxid: 00:52:650 (1) - These streams feel overmapped, so I'm not too sure about them.
02:52 Kytoxid: If you do keep them, I would space it out a bit more at places like 00:53:548 (3,1) -
02:52 Kytoxid: So the player can have 4 somewhat consistent jumps across 00:53:188 (1,2,3,1) - I cosider it for a while,decide to keep it,but I have move a bit notes and sliders this here.

02:53 Kytoxid: 00:55:883 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Might be better to mix it up and do something a bit different here, since the music changes a bit. Consider it,perhaps I "ll change here.
02:55 Kytoxid: 01:01:182 (4,1) - spacing error compared to the rest of the stream. fixed
02:56 Kytoxid: 01:22:828 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - This is a bit mean, that you have 2 note-slider followed by 4 note-slider. fixed
02:57 Kytoxid: 01:23:906 (1,2,3,4) - These 1/8ths are still really tough though. Okay,cancel 1/8 sliders.
02:58 Kytoxid: that's everything~ xD Was a challenging map.
02:58 smallboat: okay

Thanks Kytoxid ~ !

moonlightleaf

moonlightleaf wrote:
[Easy]

转盘后没空8拍有红线会要紧么？不懂這意思

00:56:422 (2,3,4,5) - 这个和前面00:52:650 (1,2,1) 一样的节奏但是不一样的打法我觉得还是服毒好后面那一段鼓點在紅線白線沒在上面如果這樣放白線會很難玩

不会看easy 总觉得有点难，我上次给我寝室的玩最炫名族风E 貌似是1星半？他死了5次= = 我最后给他开了NF 才过了不會覺得還好

[Normal]

OD+1? 考慮

00:40:075 (2) - 改短滑条+note？想簡單一點，也不換這

00:58:578 (2,2) - 试试都改成俩红线各一个note 暫時不換，如過這樣換也難DT

01:06:301 (2,3,1) - 类似这种2note+滑条好像特别多？恩,我覺得這樣帶過就可以了,沒什麼問題

[击沉小船]

00:02:419 (4,1) - 会不会有点远了后面同理稍微移動了一點

00:12:590 (2,3,5) - 要藏的话也没藏好這邊覺得沒什麼問題

00:16:003 (5,6) - ctrl+g 故意交互flow

00:16:722 (1,2) - ^ 同上

好像重复的梗还是有点多 2note+滑条恩我也覺得有點多應該是會改這裡

00:28:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - 卧槽卧槽必须击沉人玩深圳即将被击沉這邊也變動了一下

00:51:213 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2) - 这好好玩，如果全部旋转的话更好些移動了一點位置，不過你說的全部旋轉是什麼意思就不太清楚了

01:12:858 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - 这连打是有连打音吗我没听出稍微有一點overmap,不過再有人講這裡有可能會改

01:23:906 (1,2,3,4,1) - 会不会卡手？也變動了一點這裡

渣mod, 睡觉惹明天还要挤公交上班

謝謝二妹mod 上班順風 ~ !

Mao wrote:
Unrankbe Issue
Recommended to fix
Highly Suggested
Suggestion
Just my own opinion / Comment

General
Resize your Background. Recommended measures are 1024x768 :c Sure,perhaps this BG I will change another one.
First Kiai is inconsistent with Hard diff. For more information check the Hard's Mod C: Okay,I"ll tell him

Extra
00:07:839 (4) - I'd suggest you not to stack this instead do it as you did before for consistency. I think it is fine.
00:12:076 (2) - This note doesn't really fit if you ask me since the sound here is really quiet and shouldn't be mapped with a circle. It feels as it shouldn't be there. Consider removing it.Okay,remove it.
00:17:800 (6) - CTRL+G could make the transition here better. It kinda breaks the flow for me a bit here since the other patterns all made me follow a kind of oval with my cursor but this one didn't. Okay,ctrl +g and remove a bit.
00:29:297 (1,2,3,4) - This doesn't play well since these are played same as a normal stream. I'd suggest you to place their heads like a normal stream as seen in the screenshot below. Cancel 1/8,and use another way,because I think use 1/8 not fit this music.
Screenshot
00:59:206 (2) - Move this down a bit for a better curve, flows way better imo :c fixed
01:01:272 (1) - Why is this so low spaced? Makes no sense in terms of music if you ask me. Also the whole stream could be redone with Convert Slider to Stream for a better Circle-Form. fixed,change a bit.
01:11:331 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe it's just me but I don't really think these sliders fit here pretty well. I mean sliders like this fit with guitars but the guitar isn't that strong here so it feels kinda wrong to me. Maybe sliders with 1 red anchor point could fit better here. fixed
01:17:798 (3,4,5,6) - The angle here felt a bit too sharp here which broke the flow a bit. Maybe a curve could help out. Change a bit
01:23:906 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same as I said for them before goes for these of aswell. They flow like it were gigant 1/4 jumps espacially between 01:23:906 (1,2) - . The transition feels a bit sloppy. Try to place them as in a stream (see Screenshot at the first one). Cancel 1/8,and use another way,because I think use 1/8 not fit this music.
Nice diff! But I'd suggest you to watch your stacks :b

Normal
00:01:065 (1) - Finish, your first section has no hitsounding. Add some hitsounds to it. There are some strong finishes like this one for example in this section. :c Added
00:29:656 (1) - This section could take some more claps. Place one at the 2nd white tick after the big one. For example at the tail of 00:29:656 (1) - fixed,add clap at every slider ends.
00:40:075 (2,3) - The overall rhythm didn't feel fitting to me here at all. Nice,fixed
Screenshot
00:55:883 (1) - Place it a bit more to the lower right for better transition from the previous object. Okay,fixed
You are missing some really strong finishes in the first half of your map :c Otherwise pretty nice! Indeed,I will add a bit 'finish' for this diff

Easy
00:15:285 (5) - Too high Spacing to the previous object. A variation from +-0,03 from your normal DS is okay but not 0,04 :c Also constant spacing would look better here. Okay,move a bit.
00:27:500 (6) - Spacing to the next object is a bit low, don't you think so? For fixing this place 00:26:782 (5) - at 256|124 Okay,move a bit.
00:54:805 (1) - Let this follow the previous object's path for a better transition. So place at 402|55. Okay,move a bit.
Same as I said for the hitsounding in Normal goes here too :c Sure,I"ll notice the hitsound
Otherwise pretty nice.
Thanks!

Please reply! I hope it was helpful and good luck! :3Almost done

Thanks Mao ~ !

To 柚子: 你那個音的位置我加標籤了，等Lks check.

Last edited by smallboat 2014-04-11T13:21:38+00:00, edited 6 times in total.

sjoy

1,025 posts

Joined April 2012

sjoy 2014-04-11T06:30:29+00:00

@二妹全部都修复了，梗太懒一时想不出

Mao wrote:
Unrankbe Issue
Recommended to fix
Highly Suggested
Suggestion
Just my own opinion / Comment

General
Resize your Background. Recommended measures are 1024x768 :c
First Kiai is inconsistent with Hard diff. For more information check the Hard's Mod C:

Insane
00:10:098 (1,1,1,1) - Why aren't these spaced the same?changed it to slider
00:56:961 (1) - I personally don't like how the ends are so close to each other. I'd suggest you doing it as shown in this screenshot below I think it's fine
Screenshot
01:00:015 (4) - Place at 217|351 for an equal triangle here? :cfixed
01:01:272 (1) - The transition here didn't feel right to me due to the smaller spacing here.I think it's fine
01:04:864 (3) - Place it at 78|184 for a better transition. This "snake-flow" kinda breaks the overall flow for me here.fixed
01:14:026 (7,8) - All your streams had lower spacing so why does this have such high spacing? Also the straight line they were placed in didn't feel right to me. Consider placing them in a curve similiar to what I show you in the screenshot below. (You don't have to do it like this since it's just a quick made example, but I'd recommend you placing them in a curve for way better flow here)changed it to repeat slide
Screenshot
Awesome C:
thanks for modding

Please reply! I hope it was helpful and good luck! :3

代码

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Artist:BANPRESTO
ArtistUnicode:BANPRESTO
Creator:smallboat
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RandF

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RandF 2014-04-12T09:57:54+00:00

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tags: there are 2 same words "granzon". is it correct?

[Easy]

00:14:207 (4) - symmetric slider as 00:15:644 (6) - is better
00:33:249 (4,5) - align them
SPOILER
00:52:650 (1) - end at 00:53:188
00:53:727 (2) - end at 00:54:266
01:17:080 (1,2) - align them
SPOILER

[Normal]

00:10:098 (1) - I recommend to increase hitsound's volume
00:46:902 (1,2) - how abont blanketting?
00:56:961 (2,3) - I prefer to combone into 1 slider

[Extra]

00:10:098 (1) - same as normal
00:59:566 (1,2,3,4,5) - I prefer the same rhythm as 00:58:578 (1,2,3) -

[wkyik's Hard]

00:23:189 (4,5) - avoid (a little) overlap
00:47:620 (2) - x:304 y:216 (stack correctly)
00:52:650 (1,4) - avoid overlap
00:53:727 (1,2,3,4) - flow is not good. for example, exchange the position of 00:54:446 (3,4) -

[sjoy's Insane]

add "kawaiwkyik" for tags
00:19:596 (1) - I prefer the symmetric curved slider with 00:20:315 (4) -
00:28:039 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - fine!
00:38:997 (3,4,5,6) - I prefer to conform DS
00:53:368 (3,1) - blanket correctly
00:54:985 (3) - leftward sldier is better (and how about blanketting?)

~Good Luck~

LKs

3,119 posts

Joined August 2009

LKs 2014-04-12T14:09:53+00:00

timing check daze

sjoy

1,025 posts

Joined April 2012

sjoy 2014-04-13T07:18:31+00:00

代码

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Dark Prison OG ver..mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 52650
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Dark Prison
TitleUnicode:ダークプリズン
Artist:BANPRESTO
ArtistUnicode:BANPRESTO
Creator:smallboat
Version:sjoy's Insane
Source:Super Robot Wars OG
Tags:BGM granzon Neo Granzon shirakawa shu sjoy Kawaiwkyik
BeatmapID:398341
BeatmapSetID:162284

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Granzon.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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fixed symmetric curved slider and the blanet thanks

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-04-13T18:27:56+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~

[General]
tags: there are 2 same words "granzon". is it correct?
Sure,but I think it is fine.
[Easy]
00:14:207 (4) - symmetric slider as 00:15:644 (6) - is better fixed
00:33:249 (4,5) - align them fixed
SPOILER
00:52:650 (1) - end at 00:53:188 I think it is fine,I "ll consider it.
00:53:727 (2) - end at 00:54:266 ^
01:17:080 (1,2) - align them fixed
SPOILER
[Normal]
00:10:098 (1) - I recommend to increase hitsound's volume Add 65%
00:46:902 (1,2) - how abont blanketting? Okay,blanket it.
00:56:961 (2,3) - I prefer to combone into 1 slider
fixed
[Extra]
00:10:098 (1) - same as normal Add 65%
00:59:566 (1,2,3,4,5) - I prefer the same rhythm as 00:58:578 (1,2,3) -
I think it is fine.

~Good Luck~

Thanks RandomEffect ~ !

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2014-04-17T08:23:10+00:00

~General~

This background has really weird dimensions, try to find a normal one if you can.
Disable the Widescreen Support on all of the difficulties since it's not needed.

~Normal~

Increase OD by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.

00:13:848 (4,5) - Small spacing inconsistency, make sure to fix it properly.
00:40:255 (3,1) - Wrong spacing, please don't use jumps on Normal difficulties.

~wkyik's Hard~

Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.

00:11:909 (2) - Remove this note from here, it doesn't follow anything.

~sjoy's Insane~

Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.

00:01:051 (1) - This slider is wrongly snapped due to the green line being placed wrongly.
01:23:906 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is kinda too much for an Insane difficulty, you didn't even use a similiar pattern on Extra so please change it.

~Extra~

00:01:051 (1) - Same green line issue like Insane difficulty.
01:13:307 (7) - Add a new combo here to split this stream in 2 parts.

Good luck~

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2014-04-17T14:46:07+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
[wkyik's Hard]
00:23:189 (4,5) - avoid (a little) overlap fixed
00:47:620 (2) - x:304 y:216 (stack correctly) ^
00:52:650 (1,4) - avoid overlap intentional
00:53:727 (1,2,3,4) - flow is not good. for example, exchange the position of 00:54:446 (3,4) - nope

Andrea wrote:
[*]00:40:255 (3,1) - Wrong spacing, please don't use jumps on Normal difficulties.[/list]

~wkyik's Hard~
Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.
00:11:909 (2) - Remove this note from here, it doesn't follow anything.

all fixed

looking good

osu file format v12

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AudioFilename: Dark Prison OG ver..mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 52650
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 81391
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

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Title:Dark Prison
TitleUnicode:ダークプリズン
Artist:BANPRESTO
ArtistUnicode:BANPRESTO
Creator:smallboat
Version:wkyik's Hard
Source:Super Robot Wars OG
Tags:BGM granzon Neo Granzon shirakawa shu sjoy Kawaiwkyik
BeatmapID:399544
BeatmapSetID:162284

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

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smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-04-17T20:46:52+00:00

Andrea wrote:
~General~
This background has really weird dimensions, try to find a normal one if you can.
Sure,I change a background (1024x768) here.
Disable the Widescreen Support on all of the difficulties since it's not needed. fixed
~Normal~
Increase OD by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings. fixed
00:13:848 (4,5) - Small spacing inconsistency, make sure to fix it properly. fixed
00:40:255 (3,1) - Wrong spacing, please don't use jumps on Normal difficulties.fixed
~Extra~
00:01:051 (1) - Same green line issue like Insane difficulty. fixed
01:13:307 (7) - Add a new combo here to split this stream in 2 parts. fixed
Good luck~

Thanks Andrea ~ !

To sjoy : 第一項offset幫你改好了，至於第二項的pattern你自己改吧，睡覺去。

sjoy

1,025 posts

Joined April 2012

sjoy 2014-04-18T04:15:51+00:00

Andrea wrote:
~General~
This background has really weird dimensions, try to find a normal one if you can.
Disable the Widescreen Support on all of the difficulties since it's not needed.

~sjoy's Insane~
Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.
ok
00:01:051 (1) - This slider is wrongly snapped due to the green line being placed wrongly. fixed
01:23:906 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is kinda too much for an Insane difficulty, you didn't even use a similiar pattern on Extra so please change it.
fixed

Good luck~

thanks

代码

osu file format v12

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TitleUnicode:ダークプリズン
Artist:BANPRESTO
ArtistUnicode:BANPRESTO
Creator:smallboat
Version:sjoy's Insane
Source:Super Robot Wars OG
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