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Chieko Kawabe - Be Your Girl

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Teara
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Teara
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, February 08, 2010 at 8:00:39 PM

Artist: Chieko Kawabe
Title: Be Your Girl
Source: Elfen Lied (Outro)
Tags: hawkzor
BPM: 160.2
Filesize: 2907kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.63 stars, 113 notes)
  2. Hard (4.08 stars, 167 notes)
  3. hawkzor's Insane (4.88 stars, 140 notes)
  4. Normal (3.4 stars, 143 notes)
Download: Chieko Kawabe - Be Your Girl
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Whatever

Thanks to x3ns0r for skin
and Zekira who went to the trouble to time this.

and to all who modded.
Last edited by Teara , edited 87 times in total.
0_o
2,155 posts
Joined December 2008
0_o
Normal
00:53:043 (3) - This note is pretty hidden

Hard
00:39:018 (5) - I would delete this and extend the slider to where this is now, it plays better imo
01:21:093 (1,1,1,1) - I would lighten up on these jumps, it's a pretty big difficulty spike and it'll make some people unhappy ;)

Insane
I don't really like this difficulty in general, the random notes on blue ticks/huge jumps don't really make sense and it just feels overmapped =/

EDIT: 200th KUDO YAY
Last edited by 0_o , edited 1 time in total.
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
General:

Needs audio lead in – maybe 2 seconds.

Add a source.

Normal:

This seems pretty much perfect to me, I didn’t nazi it but the only thing that stands out is that you use only whistle and normal sounds, I haven’t done a full hitsound mod but here’s a few examples:

00:13:068 (3) – Clap
00:15:018 (7) - ^
00:19:068 (1) - ^
00:21:018 (2) - ^
00:28:068 (4) - ^
00:31:068 (2) - ^

It’s pretty much the same throughout, put the audio on 50% and listen for background music claps :D

Hard:

Same thing with hitsounds here.

Maybe 2.0 slider velocity is a little fast, I preferred playing with 1.8 but its your choice :P

00:54:093 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – If im honest this pattern seems a little random.
01:24:056 (2) – Might look better if this was placed vertically above 1.


Insane:

Same thing with hitsounds here.

Suggestion for the intro (complete suggestion – and was before the update lol) add beats at these times and see if you like it:

SPOILER
00:00:093
00:01:021
00:01:031
00:01:068
00:02:006
00:02:043
00:02:071
00:02:081
00:03:009
00:03:018

If you like ^ you could probably use it later as well because the beat is pretty much constant.

I didn't really like the streams in this they seemed to be out of pace with the music, but apart from that it was OK.

This seems to be shaping up well :D I don't like starring WIPs because they change so often so tell me when it's pending and I'll star :D
DJPop
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Here since the beginning
DJPop
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
alright here are the images you asked for:
Download: Be Your Girl images.zip
Last edited by XepherX3 , edited 1 time in total.
kratoskitten
kratoskitten
Only 1 star so far? :o
+1 =l
Go Teara! GO!
hawkzor
123 posts
Joined September 2008
hawkzor
My difficulty -_-;

Download: Chieko Kawabe - Be Your Girl (Teara) [hawkzor's Sane].osu
DJPop
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3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
Back ;)


~Normal~
01:22:031 (1,1,1,1) - remove new combo
01:24:093 (1) - silence the end

~Hard~
00:23:018 (2) - move 1/3 right
00:23:056 (4) - ^
00:23:093 (6) - ^
00:24:437 - add note
00:29:006 (1) - silence the middle note
00:35:006 (5) - ^
00:41:006 (1) - ^
00:46:031 (3) - ^
01:24:093 (1) - silence the end

~Insane~
00:11:081 (4,1) - confused
00:23:018 (2) - move 1/3 right
00:23:056 (4) - ^
00:23:093 (6) - ^
00:24:437 - add note
00:29:006 (1) - silence the middle note
00:35:006 (5) - ^
00:40:018 (4) - delete
00:53:018 (2) - move 1/3 right
01:08:024 (5) - snap 1/3 (move right on the line)
01:24:093 (1) - silence the end


+Star
hawkzor
123 posts
Joined September 2008
hawkzor
Quick fix ;p

Download: Chieko Kawabe - Be Your Girl (Teara) [hawkzor's Sane].osu
DJPop
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Here since the beginning
DJPop
Mod again...

~Easy~
01:22:031 (1,1,1,1) - Remove new combo
01:24:093 (1) - silence the end

~hawkzor's Sane~
SliderTickRate: 1
00:30:043 (3) - end on white tick
00:33:043 (4) - ^
00:55:006 (2) - move 1/3 right
00:55:043 (4) - ^
00:55:081 (6) - ^
00:56:018 (8) - ^
hawkzor
123 posts
Joined September 2008
hawkzor
Added DJPop's fixes, thanks, really helped ^_^

Download: Chieko Kawabe - Be Your Girl (Teara) [hawkzor's Sane].osu
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
General:

Source on all difficulties, tags same as well.

Background color to black.

The snap divisor is 1/3 and 1/4 on some, seems to work so its not that big an issue I guess.

Easy:

00:55:068 (3) - Clap:
00:54:093 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too many whistles in general, give emphasis to certain words with whistle.
01:08:081 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:09:018 (2) - New combo.
01:14:006 (4) - Clap or finish the very end of this.
01:15:093 (1,2,3,4) - Clap the word not 4 :P

Normal:

00:05:031 (3,1,2) - Whistle abuse :P
00:54:093 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Worse than above

Hard:

00:29:006 (1) - Why a silent beat?
00:35:006 (5) - ^
00:41:006 (1) - ^ same for the others.
01:14:006 (4) - Random clap in the middle of this slider, remove or add claps before :P

Insane:

00:15:006 (2,3) - Sounds odd, just one beat on the white tick sounds better.

hawkzor's Sane:

00:12:093 (1) - Finish?

All nice nothing else to add but a ~~ Star :D
Symbolic
519 posts
Joined June 2008
Symbolic
[Easy]

00:41:006 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:48:937 (x) - Timing section here with Kiai Time? If you add it, let Kiai Time end after the chorus (in the break i guess).


[Normal]

00:48:937 (x) - Timing section here with Kiai Time? If you add it, let Kiai Time end after the double chorus.
01:09:093 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:20:006 (1) - ^
01:21:093 (1,2,3,4,5) - These notes sound off, put them all 1/6 earlier.


[Hard]

00:48:937 (x) - Timing section here with Kiai Time? If you add it, let Kiai Time end after the double chorus.
01:21:093 (1,1,1,1,1) - Put these all 1/6 earlier, remove the new combo's if you want to.


[Insane]

00:02:043 (6) - New combo.
00:48:937 (x) - Timing section here with Kiai Time? If you add it, let Kiai Time end after the double chorus.
01:21:093 (1,1,1,1,1) - Put these all 1/6 earlier, remove the new combo's if you want to.


[hawkzor's Sane]

01:21:093 (1,2,1,2,1) - Put these all 1/6 earlier.


Nice map and song,
Starred *
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
ouranhshc
Easy
01:14:062(4) - line up with 3
00:05:312(3) - move to red tick

Normal
00:56:437(5,6,7) - straight line?
00:05:312(3) - move right to red tick

Hard
00:05:312(3) - right on timeline to red tick
01:17:062(4) - center between 2 and 3

Insane
00:05:312(1) - move right to red tick


me likey
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Hikato
[Easy]
Fine. ^_^

[Normal]
01:21:093 (1,2,3,4,5) - white ticks like on easy.

[Hard]
01:21:093 (1,2,3,4,5) - white ticks~

[Insane]
01:21:093 (1,1,1,1,1) - white ticks~ :T

[hawkzor's Sane]
00:27:056 (4) - white tick to white tick :o
00:30:093 (1) - shorten slightly so it's on the 3 white ticks
then:
00:31:093 (#) - add a beat here :D
00:46:054 (7) - extend to end on the purple tick
01:21:087 (1,2,1,2,1) - white ticks :T

Nice map and song <3 I think it should be an Elfen Lied bg and theme but whichever you prefer :P Starr!
hawkzor
123 posts
Joined September 2008
hawkzor

Symbolic wrote:

[hawkzor's Sane]
01:21:093 (1,2,1,2,1) - Put these all 1/6 earlier.

Hikato wrote:

[hawkzor's Sane]
01:21:087 (1,2,1,2,1) - white ticks :T
HOW NOW BROWN COW?
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Hikato
Sounds better on white to me~ unless you wanna go into 1/8 and try it that way.
Crimmi
1,947 posts
Joined June 2009
Crimmi
Crimmii's Judgement <3

No Problems Here.

I Love This Map!

I Hope This Gets Ranked =]

Have A Star :) If You Be My Girl LOL. :lol: :oops:

I Take Mods Through PM Or Check Me In #mod. I'm Usually There. ( Don't Spam Me Please...)

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Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[General]

Kawaii? Nice tag. XD (not saying it's bad, just amusing)
The numbers in your skin are aliased; they have jagged edges. It's especially noticeable on widescreen, where part of it lies on a black background. Try fixing that. Nice skin overall though.

Although it doesn't show up in play because your song starts so early, you should probably disable the countdown option anyways, in case that bug is fixed.

[Easy]

Looks okay.

[Normal]

00:19:031 (2,1,2,3,1) - Adjust this parallelogram to be better?
00:37:031 (2) - This note, partially covered up by the slider, doesn't look too good.
00:40:031 (3) - ^

[Hard]

In general, don't silence the repeats.
Drain is a little high.

[Insane]

Don't silence repeats.
Drain is a little high.

00:35:006 (5) - Repeat is hidden by the comboburst.

[hawkzor's Sane]

Nice overall. Maybe a bit too easy. Timing's different too, any reason why for that section?

Have a star.
mosluv
748 posts
Joined December 2008
mosluv
Easy:
00:05:024 (3) - I think this should be a 1/2 slider.

Normal:
00:05:024 (3) - ^

Hard:
00:05:024 (3) - ^
00:25:056 (2) - Move over to 00:25:049? It sounds weird and really awkward when playing where it is now.

Insane:
01:17:043 (5) - Rearrange this so the end of this lands on the fading 2.

hawkzor's Sane:
00:12:018 (5,6)- Claps sound bad.
00:27:043 (4) - Should be on the white tick and end on 00:27:056.
00:37:096 (2,3) - Should be snapped on 1/4 not 1/6.
00:39:043 (2) - Should be on the white tick and end on 00:39:056.
00:56:034 (8,9) - Should be snapped on 1/4 not 1/6 and add whistle to 8 and 9's start.
01:14:068 (6) - Move over to the red tick.
01:20:062 (6) - ^

:) :D
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