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Aria - Vstan', Strah Preodoley

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Izual_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 24 ноября 2009 г. at 13:40:46

Artist: Aria
Title: Vstan', Strah Preodoley
Source: Who Are You With?
Tags: Heavy Metal Russian ZLOdeuka
BPM: 96
Filesize: 7045kb
Play Time: 02:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,89 stars, 361 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 489 notes)
  3. ZLOdeuka's Normal (3,65 stars, 195 notes)
Download: Aria - Vstan', Strah Preodoley
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Have just done a cool song by the Russian band Aria. Title of this song is something like "Stand Up, Vanquish Fear" in English. Hard and Insane are pretty difficult, so ZLOdeuka bitmapped Normal.
Any comments and mods would be appreciated.
Hope it'll get ranked someday ^^

Update 1. Added preview points and some bookmarks. Added/deleted finish/whistle sounds in some places. Some changes to Normal diff.
Update 2. HiToMi[P]'s mod.
Update 3. James2250's mod. (!) new .mp3
Update 4. Sample volume is slightly reduced. Some notes are replaced.
Update 5. xxheroxx's mod.
Update 6. osuplayer111's mod.
Update 7. Kytoxid's mod (part 1).
RainForce
Над нормалом еще колдовать и колдовать,напишу только по харду тк инсейны не мой уровень
Hard
00:23:418 Вот этот джамп и следующий лучше переделать.
00:57:168 После слайдера не успеваю нажимать.
01:54:043 я вот даже не знаю толи я кривой то ли еще чето но я постоянно не попадаю во 2 обратный слайдер или следующую ноту.
Еще очень часто даются сотки когда после слайдера идет по 3 ноты,таких моментов очень много,я думаю или поменять месторасположение или чуток подправить будет в самый раз.
Ты прости что так мало,на меня лень напала.
Прямо каламбур.
Topic Starter
Izual_old

HiToMi[P] wrote:

Над нормалом еще колдовать и колдовать,напишу только по харду тк инсейны не мой уровень I know x.x I'll do something with Normal soon..
Hard
00:23:418 Вот этот джамп и следующий лучше переделать. What's wrong? o_O I have no idea how to improve anything here :( left as is
00:57:168 После слайдера не успеваю нажимать. Well, I replaced sliders in some way, so the next combo is a bit closer. Try now ;) fixed
01:54:043 я вот даже не знаю толи я кривой то ли еще чето но я постоянно не попадаю во 2 обратный слайдер или следующую ноту. This is hard, not easy ^^ I think everything is good here. left as is
Еще очень часто даются сотки когда после слайдера идет по 3 ноты,таких моментов очень много,я думаю или поменять месторасположение или чуток подправить будет в самый раз. Fixed spacing at 01:07:950->01:22:793 and 01:55:450->02:10:293. Not sure whether it exactly what you meant or not, because you didn't give me a time, but anyway.. probably fixed?
Ты прости что так мало,на меня лень напала. Ok, something’s better than nothing ;)
Прямо каламбур.
Thank you, get a kudosu ;)
James2250
normal:
could use some more hitsounds..
00:32:095 (7) - new combo
01:01:038 (4) - shortern by 1/4
01:07:095 (6) - new combo
01:19:082 (1) - take off new combo to make like the rest or put new combo on the rest like this..
01:22:079 (1) - start at 01:22:095 and end at 01:23:057
01:32:095 (8) - new combo
01:58:026 (8) - decrease by 1 repeat
02:00:045 (1) - unrankable..
02:05:045 (1) - extend by 1/4
02:10:045 (9) - ^ and new combo
02:11:038 (1) - take off new combo

Hard:
nice hitsounds..
might want to decrease overall diff by 1..
00:32:032 (1) - decrease by 1/4?
01:04:020 (4) - new combo
01:51:070 (4) - ^
02:12:095 - might want to put note here to end map?

insane:
00:00:081 (1) - bats wont like this..
01:54:020 (10) - new combo
02:12:095 - put note here?

I would advise cutting the rest of the mp3 off as you arnt going to use it..
*star*
Topic Starter
Izual_old

James2250 wrote:

normal:
could use some more hitsounds.. redone
00:32:095 (7) - new combo
01:01:038 (4) - shortern by 1/4
01:07:095 (6) - new combo
01:19:082 (1) - take off new combo to make like the rest or put new combo on the rest like this..
01:22:079 (1) - start at 01:22:095 and end at 01:23:057
01:32:095 (8) - new combo
01:58:026 (8) - decrease by 1 repeat
02:00:045 (1) - unrankable..
02:05:045 (1) - extend by 1/4
02:10:045 (9) - ^ and new combo
02:11:038 (1) - take off new combo
fixed everything

Hard:
nice hitsounds..tnx ^^"
might want to decrease overall diff by 1.. well, it makes some sense :)
00:32:032 (1) - decrease by 1/4?
01:04:020 (4) - new combo
01:51:070 (4) - ^
02:12:095 - might want to put note here to end map? why not ^^
fixed everything

insane:
00:00:081 (1) - bats wont like this..
01:54:020 (10) - new combo
02:12:095 - put note here? sure
fixed everything

I would advise cutting the rest of the mp3 off as you arnt going to use it.. cutted all after the solo
*star*
Thank you! nice mod ^^
Diasios
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

Offset = 2980 (resnap all notes)

[Normal]

Use always "distance snap", spacing is partially wrong. Also, no jumps in a Normal. Add hitsounds!!!
00:20:792 - break
00:30:792 - ^
00:32:098 (1) - repeat this slider twice
00:40:636 - break
00:42:035 (2) - new combo
00:55:792 - break
01:05:792 - ^
01:07:098 (1) - end on white tick (1/4 ->)
01:12:098 (1) - ^
01:15:792 - break
01:17:098 (1) - end on white tick (1/4 ->)
01:22:098 (1) - ^
01:25:792 - break
01:30:480 - ^
01:32:098 (8) - new combo
01:43:136 - break
01:53:292 - ^
02:03:136 - ^

And...


[Hard]

It's ok

[Insane]

It's ok

Starred~
Topic Starter
Izual_old

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

Offset = 2980 (resnap all notes)

[Normal]

Use always "distance snap", spacing is partially wrong. Also, no jumps in a Normal. Add hitsounds!!!
00:20:792 - break
00:30:792 - ^
00:32:098 (1) - repeat this slider twice
00:40:636 - break
00:42:035 (2) - new combo
00:55:792 - break
01:05:792 - ^
01:07:098 (1) - end on white tick (1/4 ->)
01:12:098 (1) - ^
01:15:792 - break
01:17:098 (1) - end on white tick (1/4 ->)
01:22:098 (1) - ^
01:25:792 - break
01:30:480 - ^
01:32:098 (8) - new combo
01:43:136 - break
01:53:292 - ^
02:03:136 - ^

And...

[Hard]

It's ok

[Insane]

It's ok

Starred~
Thank you! Fixed everything.
Normal looks much better now ^^"
Andrea
New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Video: No.
Storyboard: No.
Custom Skin: No.
Background: Yes.
Source: No. (Add some source.)
Tags: Yes. (Capitalize all the tags.)
File Size: 7,22MB/24,00MB

[Overall]

Timing: BPM: 96,00 - Offset: 3.010 (Remember to resnap all notes.)

[Difficulties]

[ZLOdeuka's Normal]

Increase Overall difficulty by 1 tick for balance with HP Drain.

Slider velocity is too high for the most easier difficulty.

Use slidertick rate 2.


00:28:044 (2,3) - Spacing.
00:40:016 (11,1) - No jumps on the most easier map.
00:40:792 - Remove this break. Too hard for get a pause.
00:44:069 (1) - Spinner too hard for a normal.
00:45:079 (1) - A note after spinner is too hard for the most easier map.
02:12:035 (1) - Spinner too hard for a normal.


[Hard]

00:54:085 (3) - Partially offscreen.
01:10:079 (2) - Slider repeat is completely hidden.
01:58:029 (2) - ^

02:10:001 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Insane]

No major problems found.
Topic Starter
Izual_old

osuplayer111 wrote:

New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Video: No.
Storyboard: No.
Custom Skin: No.
Background: Yes.
Source: No. (Add some source.) done
Tags: Yes. (Capitalize all the tags.) done
File Size: 7,22MB/24,00MB

[Overall]

Timing: BPM: 96,00 - Offset: 3.010 (Remember to resnap all notes.) I think offset 2.980 works better

[Difficulties]

[ZLOdeuka's Normal]

Increase Overall difficulty by 1 tick for balance with HP Drain. done

Slider velocity is too high for the most easier difficulty. decreased and all notes are moved

Use slidertick rate 2. done

00:28:044 (2,3) - Spacing.
00:40:016 (11,1) - No jumps on the most easier map.
00:40:792 - Remove this break. Too hard for get a pause.
00:44:069 (1) - Spinner too hard for a normal.
00:45:079 (1) - A note after spinner is too hard for the most easier map.
02:12:035 (1) - Spinner too hard for a normal.

fixed everything

[Hard]

00:54:085 (3) - Partially offscreen.
01:10:079 (2) - Slider repeat is completely hidden.
01:58:029 (2) - ^

02:10:001 (1) - Remove new combo.
fixed everything

[Insane]

No major problems found.
Thanks for mod! ^^
Kytoxid
[General]

Consider changing the background colour to black.
ZLOdeuka's name should be added to all tags.
Make an easier difficulty, the current normal is too hard.

If you plan to map only to the current points, please cut the MP3 down.

[ZLOdeuka's Normal]

I recommend increasing overall difficulty by 2-3 ticks.

01:14:085 (2,3,4) - Not a very good triangle.
01:23:076 (2,3,4,5) - To be accurate with the music, these all need to be moved back 1/8.
02:11:026 (2,3,4,5) - ^

[Hard]

A shift in spacing occurs near the start of the song; contrast 00:05:079 (2,3) with 00:13:029 (2,3), and then the map kinda wobbles between these, with a few intermediary spacings such as 00:22:019 (1,2). I'd recommend keeping them consistent; if the notes are to touch, make them touch the same amount.

00:39:023 (7,8) - Awkward placement.
00:54:085 (3) - Consider rearranging this so that the 3 forms the 4th corner of a square with (3,1,2) before it. You'd need to re-place the notes after though.
01:16:057 (3) - Could be more symmetric.
01:56:057 (3) - ^
01:59:007 (3) - ^
02:01:057 (3) - ^ (you get the trend)
02:12:098 (1) - Add a finish on this note?

[Insane]

I would recommend mapping this to the end; the guitar solo is too awesome to miss, but looks like score is getting a little high already. Dang.

00:19:069 (8) - I'd extend this slider to where the spinner starts, and move that back by 1/4 (shortening by 1/4 at the same time).
00:53:060 (2,3,4) - Farther than the others; intentional?
01:02:098 (1,1) - Antijump, but not that bad.
01:32:098 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Many minute changes in the way the note-slider is spaced.
01:51:041 (7,1,2) - Spacing inconsistency.

Looks pretty nice, star.
Topic Starter
Izual_old

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Consider changing the background colour to black. done
ZLOdeuka's name should be added to all tags. done
Make an easier difficulty, the current normal is too hard. in progress..

If you plan to map only to the current points, please cut the MP3 down.

[ZLOdeuka's Normal]

I recommend increasing overall difficulty by 2-3 ticks. increased by 2

01:14:085 (2,3,4) - Not a very good triangle. fixed
01:23:076 (2,3,4,5) - To be accurate with the music, these all need to be moved back 1/8. fixed
02:11:026 (2,3,4,5) - ^ fixed

[Hard]

A shift in spacing occurs near the start of the song; contrast 00:05:079 (2,3) with 00:13:029 (2,3), and then the map kinda wobbles between these, with a few intermediary spacings such as 00:22:019 (1,2). I'd recommend keeping them consistent; if the notes are to touch, make them touch the same amount. in progress..

00:39:023 (7,8) - Awkward placement. fixed
00:54:085 (3) - Consider rearranging this so that the 3 forms the 4th corner of a square with (3,1,2) before it. You'd need to re-place the notes after though. done
01:16:057 (3) - Could be more symmetric.
01:56:057 (3) - ^
01:59:007 (3) - ^
02:01:057 (3) - ^ (you get the trend) it's planned like this ^^ and is not a trend, just a copy-paste;)
02:12:098 (1) - Add a finish on this note? done

[Insane]

I would recommend mapping this to the end; the guitar solo is too awesome to miss, but looks like score is getting a little high already. Dang. in progress.. but >< score can rich ~15-18kk this way TT not good for the map trying to get ranked xD

00:19:069 (8) - I'd extend this slider to where the spinner starts, and move that back by 1/4 (shortening by 1/4 at the same time). done
00:53:060 (2,3,4) - Farther than the others; intentional? no.. fixed
01:02:098 (1,1) - Antijump, but not that bad. want to leave it like this ><
01:32:098 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Many minute changes in the way the note-slider is spaced. fixed
01:51:041 (7,1,2) - Spacing inconsistency. fixed

Looks pretty nice, star.
Wow, great o_O
Can't finish with your mod right now, must prepare for tomorrow's test ^^" but will done everything soon
Thanks a lot~
GoLiMaR_old
Держи звезду.
Shannaro
Хотю эту карту!
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