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Lucky Star - NA-RI-A-GA-RI (Short ver.)

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Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Vicho
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 09 de enero de 2010 at 22:34:18

Artist: Lucky Star Cast
Title: NA-RI-A-GA-RI (Short ver.)
Source: Lucky Star Net Idol Meister PSP Game
Tags: hirano aya katou emiri fukuhara kaori endou aya djpop
BPM: 170
Filesize: 8379kb
Play Time: 01:05
Difficulties Available:
  1. DJPop's Insane (5 stars, 287 notes)
  2. Easy (2,05 stars, 74 notes)
  3. Nerv's Hard (4,88 stars, 174 notes)
  4. Normal (3,98 stars, 119 notes)
Download: Lucky Star Cast - NA-RI-A-GA-RI (Short ver.)
Download: Lucky Star Cast - NA-RI-A-GA-RI (Short ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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1st Beatmap!!
Lucky Star: Net Idol Meister NA-RI-A-GA-RI!

14.11.2009 ~Added Nerv's Hard~
25.11.2009 ~Added DJPop's Insane~

With Skin!

Mod Request! Please!

1. Nerv_Mario
2. roxkyuubiforever
3. VanMoNky
4. xxheroxx
5. osuplayer111
6. Lokamp
7. bmin11
8. NoHItter
9. Tanmak
10. jericho2442
11. Kytoxid
12. Agent Spin Here
13. Zekira
14. Mafiamaster*
15. Pasonia*
16. DJPop
17. Leorda
18. Dusty
19. Larto*
18. WolfCoder
19. Lizbeth
20. Azure_Kyte
21. James2250
22. Gens
23. JarJarJacob
24. orioncomet
25. ztrot
Last edited by Vicho , edited 77 times in total.
Nerv_Mario
146 posts
Joined October 2008
Nerv_Mario
Muy buen map Vicho, me gusto :O
Aquí esta la Diff. que has pedido :3 (cualquier cambio que haya que hacerle me o dices para hacerlo)

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=BESOFCCU

Srry por subirlo a megaupload, es que no se subirlo al servidor de aquí xD

Star! :3
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
Sorry if I've taken too long :D

Download: Lucky Star - NA-RI-A-GA-RI (Short ver.) (Vicho-kun) [DJPop's Insane].osu

PreviewTime: 37112
Video,150,"Lucky Star - Net Idol Meister.wmv"
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Vicho
Thank you very much, DJPop ^^ :D
thanks!! :D ;)
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
//Easy//
  1. 00:06:054(5) - New Combo here, not on the next note.
  2. 00:28:642(5) - New Combo here?
  3. 00:30:230(1) - too far from the previous note. It's gonna be unatural to play =/ It would work on a Insane or maybe a Hard, but not on a Easy =/
  4. 00:46:995(6) - too close with previous note, please, distance a little >_>
  5. 00:51:230(5) - New Combo here.
  6. 00:51:759(1) - Too far from the previous note. And take off the New Combo here.
  7. 00:52:289(1) - Too far from teh previous note.
//Normal//
  • On your Easy, I didn't sayid anything about distance snap cuz it wasn't so confusing, but I would like to see you using it on this diff >_<
    Here, the gameplay is not so natural, it's a little confusing =/
    Could you please use the Distance Snap on this diff?
//Nerv's Hard// - Fun =]
  1. 00:20:789(3) - A little bit far from the previous note. Make it closer, please.
  2. 00:28:642(1~5) - Too close notes, looks like those "only keyboard playble notes", or tiny streams >_>
  3. 00:35:701(1~5) - Same here.
//DJPop's Insane// - Great like always >__>
  • Nothing here
The song is so cute! Star =]
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Vicho
Ok, almost everything is ready, just need Nerv's Hard, which will be ready.

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

//Easy//
  1. 00:06:054(5) - New Combo here, not on the next note. Done
  2. 00:28:642(5) - New Combo here? Done
  3. 00:30:230(1) - too far from the previous note. It's gonna be unatural to play =/ It would work on a Insane or maybe a Hard, but not on a Easy =/ Done
  4. 00:46:995(6) - too close with previous note, please, distance a little >_> Done
  5. 00:51:230(5) - New Combo here. Done
  6. 00:51:759(1) - Too far from the previous note. And take off the New Combo here. Done
  7. 00:52:289(1) - Too far from teh previous note.Done


//Normal//
  • On your Easy, I didn't sayid anything about distance snap cuz it wasn't so confusing, but I would like to see you using it on this diff >_<
    Here, the gameplay is not so natural, it's a little confusing =/
    Could you please use the Distance Snap on this diff? Done


//Nerv's Hard// - Fun =]
  1. 00:20:789(3) - A little bit far from the previous note. Make it closer, please.
  2. 00:28:642(1~5) - Too close notes, looks like those "only keyboard playble notes", or tiny streams >_>
  3. 00:35:701(1~5) - Same here.
//DJPop's Insane// - Great like always >__>
  • Nothing here
The song is so cute! Star =]
Thanks for the star!
Nerv_Mario
146 posts
Joined October 2008
Nerv_Mario

Vicho-kun wrote:

Ok, almost everything is ready, just need Nerv's Hard, which will be ready.

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

//Easy//
  1. 00:06:054(5) - New Combo here, not on the next note. Done
  2. 00:28:642(5) - New Combo here? Done
  3. 00:30:230(1) - too far from the previous note. It's gonna be unatural to play =/ It would work on a Insane or maybe a Hard, but not on a Easy =/ Done
  4. 00:46:995(6) - too close with previous note, please, distance a little >_> Done
  5. 00:51:230(5) - New Combo here. Done
  6. 00:51:759(1) - Too far from the previous note. And take off the New Combo here. Done
  7. 00:52:289(1) - Too far from teh previous note.Done


//Normal//
  • On your Easy, I didn't sayid anything about distance snap cuz it wasn't so confusing, but I would like to see you using it on this diff >_<
    Here, the gameplay is not so natural, it's a little confusing =/
    Could you please use the Distance Snap on this diff? Done


//Nerv's Hard// - Fun =]
  1. 00:20:789(3) - A little bit far from the previous note. Make it closer, please.~fix
  2. 00:28:642(1~5) - Too close notes, looks like those "only keyboard playble notes", or tiny streams >_>~fix
  3. 00:35:701(1~5) - Same here.~fix
//DJPop's Insane// - Great like always >__>
  • Nothing here
The song is so cute! Star =]
Thanks for the star!
Nerv_Mario
146 posts
Joined October 2008
Nerv_Mario
Ya te la he enviado por msn ;D

(sorry doble post :3)
Revengexsoyah
652 posts
Joined June 2009
Revengexsoyah
buen mapa Vicho me gusto , y las diffies de nerv y djpop estan muy buenas
bueno solo eso te doy la estrella espero qe tengas suerte con tu mapa adios :D
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
As your request.

[Easy]
Don't allow any jump in this map since this is an easy map.

00:08:087 (1) - Fix the distance.
00:10:099 (3) - ^
00:13:011 (1) - ^
00:30:023 (1) - ^
00:46:099 (6) - ^
00:48:040 (1) - ^
00:54:005 (1) - ^
00:59:070 (1) - ^

[Normal]
Fix all the notes' distance.

They're the only mistakes I found. Star for an awesome map.
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Easy]

Add kiai

[Normal]

Add kiai
00:06:005 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing D:

[Nerv's Hard]

01:01:011 (5) - New combo

[DJPop's Insane]

It's ok

Starred~
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Background: Yes.
Source: Yes.
Tags: Yes.
File Size: 12,7MB/,24,00MB (Why have you added Luck star skin on the folder? Go on Song Setup -> Storyboarding and on Skinning select the "Lucky Star" skin on all difficulties. Now you can remove the skin on your folder!)

[Overall]

Timing looks fine.

[Difficulties]

[Easy]

Hitsounds are too loud. Lower the volume.

No major problems found.

[Normal]

Hitsounds are too loud. Lower the volume.

00:16:099 (5,1) - No jumps on normal maps.
00:34:099 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:35:070 (1) - ^
00:40:064 (2,1) - Spacing.
00:42:005 (4,1) - ^
00:46:099 (1) - Spinner too hard for a normal difficulty.
00:53:017 (1,2) - Spacing.

[Nerv's Hard]

No major problems found.

[DJPop's Insane]

01:01:011 (1,2,3,4) - Wrong spacing.
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Vicho
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Vicho

Lokamp wrote:

Easy
00:06:005 (5,1) - new combo on 5th, remove new combo from 1st ~fix
00:45:058 (4,5) - spacing... try distance snap on these beats or move some squared down the 5th beat (grid level 2 or 3) ~fix

Normal
00:15:040 (4) - remove clap ~fix
00:16:081 (4) - ^ ~fix
00:30:023 (5) - new combo ~fix
00:52:064 (3,1,2) - move these beats a square left (grid level 1 or maybe 2) ~fix
01:05:017 (1) - let it start on 01:05:034 (same end) ~fix

Nerv's Hard
00:31:046 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ... maybe hitsounds's volume in this time section is too loud... ^^"

DJPop's Insane
00:25:055 (5) - ... remove this clap, please. ~fix
00:30:023 (3) - new combo ~fix

...Another good collaboration beatmap that merits a star ;3
Thanks for the star!
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
[General]
Spinner needs a center mark

[Normal]
00:09:023 (2,3,4,1) - Spacing. Atlease show them it is a faster notes
00:41:017 (1) - Spacing
00:45:058 (1) - Not a big spacing but could give some fail info

[Hard]
I see some small squere off spacings but it is too small to be a problem (I think)

[DJPop]
Flawless

Starred
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Lucky Star - NA-RI-A-GA-RI (Short ver.) (Vicho-kun) [DJPop's Insane].osu
Nerv_Mario
146 posts
Joined October 2008
Nerv_Mario
ya te envie mis cambios por msn ^^
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
NoHitter
Overall
Remove .osb file and re-upload

Easy
00:29:701 (3) - Would really sound better if ended at 00:29:936, but I'm not sure if it's allowed since this is Easy
00:35:701 (X) - I really think that a spinner here up to 00:36:759 would be better than a break

Normal
Why are the timing sections (red) here different from the other diffs?
Resnap the notes
00:46:991 (x) - Map this part. Unusual time for a break. It;s in kiai time after all.

Other maps look good
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Tanmak
Hello~~

[Normal]
All note unsnapped. Resnap Please.

00:20:521 Why redline in timingline is there? Remove it.

[DJPop]
Preview time is different from others difficulty.

Great skin~ and I can't find problem in beatmap.
Starred~
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