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yanaginagi - Tokohana [Taiko]

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qoot8123
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qoot8123
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015?10?30? at ?? 07:18:16

Artist: yanaginagi
Title: Tokohana
Source: ?????????
Tags: Black Bullet ending TV Size
BPM: 150
Filesize: 2573kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (1.84 stars, 118 notes)
  2. Kantan (1.01 stars, 66 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (2.62 stars, 246 notes)
  4. Oni (3.88 stars, 387 notes)
Download: yanaginagi - Tokohana
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Mp3 file is from xChippy's mapset
BG is from Julie's set
Last edited by qoot8123 , edited 31 times in total.
JUDYDANNY
1,519 posts
Joined October 2011
JUDYDANNY
Hello~ :3
Here's a Taiko Mod via My Taiko Moding Queue
My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D ,K is finisher .. .
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?
Big text is strong suggestion.

“ * ” is break point.
[/list][/notice]
[Kantan]
  1. SV 1.0 =>1.2 feels better.
  2. 00:48:679 (8,9,10) – make same => 00:37:318 (20,21,22,23) -.
  3. 00:56:845 (16) – move to 00:57:200 (16) -. Hard for beginners, I guess.
  4. 00:59:685 (18) – move to 01:00:040 (18) – or delete this.
  5. 01:16:726 (12) – finisher?
[Futsuu]
  1. 01:03:590 (1) – delete, unnecessary on this density.
  2. 01:16:194 (32) – add d? …. Uumn..
  3. 01:16:726 (33) - finisher ?
  4. 01:24:714 (55) – move to 01:24:892 (55) - ?
  5. …or 01:24:537 (55) – add d , & 01:24:714 (56) – change don? uum, anyhow I felt little vagueness ,.more Simple following is better as finished song. :3 try !
  6. generally , very good!
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:03:795 (12,13) – kd , 00:05:395 (18,19) – dk?
  2. 01:10:868 (31,32,33,34) – dkdd or dkkd or dk*d ? refer to Oni suggestion.
  3. 01:16:371 (56) – move to 1/2 left. 01:16:194 – vocal fits better :D
  4. 01:19:389 (69) – add d. vocal hits and good pattern for 01:20:809 (74) - ~~ ‘s phrase .
[Oni]
  1. 00:03:795 (14,15) – kd , 00:05:395 (20,21) - dk?
  2. 00:23:383 (22) - delete.
    00:20:099 (6,7) – put 1/2. 00:20:277 (7,8) – put 1/1.
  3. 00:37:318 (89) - d. vocal pitch same 00:31:638 (66,67) -.
  4. 01:10:868 (45,46) – swap emphasize to 01:12:288 (54) – kd~~ phrase.
  5. 01:17:259 (86) - … add d?
  6. sounds good~ :D
That’s all ! good luck >w<~/
qoot8123
1,500 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
qoot8123

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hello~ :3
Here's a Taiko Mod via My Taiko Moding Queue
My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D ,K is finisher .. .
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?
Big text is strong suggestion.

“ * ” is break point.
[/list][/notice]
[Kantan]
  1. SV 1.0 =>1.2 feels better.
  2. 00:48:679 (8,9,10) – make same => 00:37:318 (20,21,22,23) -.
  3. 00:56:845 (16) – move to 00:57:200 (16) -. Hard for beginners, I guess.
  4. 00:59:685 (18) – move to 01:00:040 (18) – or delete this.
  5. 01:16:726 (12) – finisher?
[Futsuu]
  1. 01:03:590 (1) – delete, unnecessary on this density.
  2. 01:16:194 (32) – add d? …. Uumn..
  3. 01:16:726 (33) - finisher ?
  4. 01:24:714 (55) – move to 01:24:892 (55) - ?
  5. …or 01:24:537 (55) – add d , & 01:24:714 (56) – change don? uum, anyhow I felt little vagueness ,.more Simple following is better as finished song. :3 try !
  6. generally , very good!
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:03:795 (12,13) – kd , 00:05:395 (18,19) – dk?
  2. 01:10:868 (31,32,33,34) – dkdd or dkkd or dk*d ? refer to Oni suggestion.
  3. 01:16:371 (56) – move to 1/2 left. 01:16:194 – vocal fits better :D
  4. 01:19:389 (69) – add d. vocal hits and good pattern for 01:20:809 (74) - ~~ ‘s phrase .
[Oni]
  1. 00:03:795 (14,15) – kd , 00:05:395 (20,21) - dk?
  2. 00:23:383 (22) - delete.
    00:20:099 (6,7) – put 1/2. 00:20:277 (7,8) – put 1/1.
  3. 00:37:318 (89) - d. vocal pitch same 00:31:638 (66,67) -.
  4. 01:10:868 (45,46) – swap emphasize to 01:12:288 (54) – kd~~ phrase.
  5. 01:17:259 (86) - … add d?
  6. sounds good~ :D
That’s all ! good luck >w<~/

fixed some ~
thanks~ :)
Charlotte
1,905 posts
Joined December 2013
Charlotte
Hi from Charlotte's　Taiko Modding Queue

d
k
D(big d)
K(big k)

Kantan

It is a good feeling

Futsuu

01:15:471 - add k
00:49:744 (58,59) - ctrl+g

Muzukashii

It is a good feeling

Oni

00:26:936 - add d
00:42:910 (120) - delete

It is a great overall

Good luck :)
qoot8123
1,500 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
qoot8123
almost fixed~
Thanks! :)
Ayachi-
2,261 posts
Joined November 2013
Ayachi-
好神啊
蠻喜歡這首歌的
tasuke912
Former osu!taiko Champion: 2018
1,347 posts
Joined June 2013
tasuke912
Hi.
[ General]
  1. Try to set coordinate to see beautify bg. Roughly 80-90 is better imo.
  2. 00:17:795 - Delete this green line since there're no notes here.
  3. In lower diffs, HP should be 5.0 or highr.
[ Kantan]
  1. SV should be 1.2 or 1.4. https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Difficulty_appr ... _Game_Mode
  2. 01:09:271 (6,7,8) - ddd is better imo. since this diff doesn't have 1 color triplet 1/1 patterns. if no change here, i recommend to make it in other part.
  3. 01:23:472 (22,23,24) - ^
[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:49:744 (53,54) - ctrl+G, since (54) is higher tone vocal than (53).
  2. 01:15:661 (26,27,28) - i know you follow only the vocal here, but i recommend to follow other sonuds like 01:04:655 (2) -, 01:08:206 (9) -, and etc.
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:01:195 - put note here to follow the vocal? this doublet rhythm is bit weird imo.
  2. 00:07:595 ^
  3. 00:35:543 (48) - change to d since (48) is lower tone than (47)
  4. 01:23:827 (85) - change to d, or delete 01:23:294 (81) -. this pattern is too hard than other parts.
[ Oni]
  1. 00:52:407 (178,179,180) - kdd would more fit to the drums imo.
After you fix and find few mods, call me back.
Good luck. :D
qoot8123
1,500 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
qoot8123

tasuke912 wrote:

Hi.
[ General]
  1. Try to set coordinate to see beautify bg. Roughly 80-90 is better imo.fixed
  2. 00:17:795 - Delete this green line since there're no notes here. fixed
  3. In lower diffs, HP should be 5.0 or highr. fixed
[ Kantan]
  1. SV should be 1.2 or 1.4. https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Difficulty_appr ... _Game_Mode fixed
  2. 01:09:271 (6,7,8) - ddd is better imo. since this diff doesn't have 1 color triplet 1/1 patterns. if no change here, i recommend to make it in other part. Consider the vocal is higher in 01:09:626 - , i want to keep this one
  3. 01:23:472 (22,23,24) - ^fixed
[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:49:744 (53,54) - ctrl+G, since (54) is higher tone vocal than (53).
  2. 01:15:661 (26,27,28) - i know you follow only the vocal here, but i recommend to follow other sonuds like 01:04:655 (2) -, 01:08:206 (9) -, and etc.fixed
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:01:195 - put note here to follow the vocal? this doublet rhythm is bit weird imo. hmmm..there is no notes :?
  2. 00:07:595 ^ ^
  3. 00:35:543 (48) - change to d since (48) is lower tone than (47) exactly, but I feel kkdkd would be more comfortable to play imo, also there is cymbal sound, so it's not a big problem i think.
  4. 01:23:827 (85) - change to d, or delete 01:23:294 (81) -. this pattern is too hard than other parts. fixed
[ Oni]
  1. 00:52:407 (178,179,180) - kdd would more fit to the drums imo. fixed
After you fix and find few mods, call me back.
Good luck. :D
thanks! :)
-Sh1n1-
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Joined September 2012
-Sh1n1-

Taiko mod

About


  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is finish don note
  4. K is finish kat note

Kantan


  1. 00:26:667 (8) - this note should be deleted, after finisher ( 00:18:857 (1) - ) you decrease the intensity of notes with 00:20:277 (2,3) -, after 00:24:537 (6) - should be the same imo, for consistency and structure.
  2. 00:33:058 (14) - this note feels better with k to follow guitar.
  3. 01:12:466 (10) - is not at all necessary to add more emphasis to 01:12:821 (11) -
  4. 01:16:726 (14) - this note works better at 01:17:081 - and without finish: k, I can't hear a cymbal sound, but if this cymbal sound exist is not necessary to follow cuz at kantan you should follow only general sounds.
  5. 01:22:052 (20) - totally unnecessary, after this finisher ( 01:21:342 (19) - ) a little break should be added.
  6. 01:23:472 (22,23,24,25,26,27) - wtf you wait all the song to make this part harder, when I saw this part I thought: "wtf I'm modding another map?", I recommend you to delete 01:25:247 (26) -, I know that you are following voice with this but if you want to add more emphasis to the last note ( 01:25:602 (27) - ) the previous one should be deleted

Futsuu


  1. 00:20:277 (3) - should be k and I'll mention two reasons:
    1- 00:20:277 (3) - have the same sound as 00:20:987 (4) -
    2- second reason comes with the first one because you made 00:25:957 (12,13) - d d with similar sounds, but you didn't keep the same pattern at 00:20:277 (3,4) -, in my personal opinion, both couples of notes should be k k but if you want to add variety and make more interesting this diff, 00:20:277 (3,4) - could be k k and 00:25:957 (12,13) - keep as d d, but players knows that this couples of notes means similar sounds.
  2. as you know from 00:41:578 - to 00:52:939 - is more "epic" than from 00:30:217 - to 00:38:738 - right? so... following your previous patterns like: 00:30:217 (20) - and 00:33:058 (23) - you made a rest after this notes, why you didn't keep consistency at 00:36:608 -? 00:36:608 (28) - should be deleted imo
  3. 01:07:141 (7) - What about delete this note? to emphatize the scream at 01:07:496 (8) -
  4. I don't feel that 01:17:436 (29,30,31,32,33,34,35) - is working nicely, keep in mind this pattern and if you don't like you can keep your current pattern: 01:17:791 (30) - works better at 01:18:857 - to follow voice, 01:19:567 (34) - you should delete, to avoid long combos in lower diff

Muzukashii


  1. 00:02:795 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - I don't feel that you are following voice nicely, for example: 00:02:795 (8,9,10) - should be dkd to contrast 00:01:995 (5,6,7) -, after that to add more playable patterns 00:03:595 (11,12,13) - should be changed into d d k, I feel that 00:02:395 (7) - and 00:03:995 (13) - have similar sounds, it's up to you
  2. 00:09:995 (30,31,32) - are you sure about that? into d d k it might sound nicer
  3. from 00:39:626 - to 00:50:099 - I feel that you need more breaks, 00:44:774 (76) - 00:47:614 (86) - Such notes should be deleted. The song is intense indeed, but you should have at least some more breaks at certain places.
  4. 00:54:359 - you miss a note here? are you following voice at this part from 00:52:939 - to 01:02:880 - right? but at 00:54:359 - there is an strong piano sound that you shouldn't ignore, keep in mind.
  5. 01:09:448 (20,21,22,23) - ughh, sorry but I don't like this pattern, I think that it can be improved, well this is more like my style but I feel that if you Ctrl+G'ed 01:09:448 (20,21,22,23) - it might follow voice nicer.

Oni


  1. 00:01:395 (5) - should be d cause voice increase at 00:01:595 -
  2. 00:02:795 (10,11,12,13,14,15) - as I said on Muzu~~, 00:02:795 (10,11,12) - should contrast 00:01:995 (7,8,9) - as dkd, and 00:03:595 (13,14,15) - should be d d k to add more playability
  3. 00:05:395 (20,21) - hold Ctrl+G to keep a general pattern with Muzu~~
  4. 00:54:359 - same as Muzu~~, you should add a note here to follow piano
  5. 01:14:419 (68,69,70) - such notes should be the same because they have similar sounds. in this case k k k might sound nicer

*-*/ nice map as always qoot sempai~~, you didn't ask for mod but I'm always available for you, hope to help you :3 furthermore I love this anime omg xD
Nofool
Elite Mapper
1,102 posts
Joined February 2011
Nofool
o/ sorry for being late x_x

good set overall i think,
good job on the volume changes, also for the 2 spinners at the beginning, i think using 4 spinners instead is better, players will finish the second spinner too early and dont get all the volume changes.

[Kantan]
- 00:26:667 (8) - remove ? finisher at - 00:24:537 - kinda reset the beginning and getting a break here like before would be better imo.
- 00:49:389 (29) - d ? k doesn't particularly fit the vocal/drums, plays better as ddk imo.
- 01:24:714 (25) - remove and make - 01:24:182 (24) - a finisher ? getting a 1/2 for the vocal only here feels kinda weird (or else use it more ? this kantan could be a bit harder i guess).
Also i would've prefer a spinner somewhere at the end instead of that amount of note but that's your choice.

[Futsuu]
- 00:00:195 - 00:10:995 - i would've kept only the D or nothing here lol, i don't really think this part needs to be mapped, as you pref again.
- 00:23:827 (8) - d and - 00:26:667 (13,14,15) - k d instead of dkd ? for more consistency by reusing dd k d, plays better imo.
- what about removing - 00:36:608 (28) -, changing - 00:38:028 (30) - to d and also removing - 00:39:448 (33) - ? basically to get this part less dense to clearly show the difference with the one that starts at - 00:40:868 -.
- 01:21:164 (38) - remove this one maybe ? that rhythm is a bit hard to handle.
- 01:25:070 (48) - ^ ? just to reduce a bit the difficulty this time.

[Muzukashii]
same comment about the beginning, + not using triplets on the whole part feels a bit weird since the vocal always sound like it.
- 00:35:720 - i would add a d here i think.
- 00:45:306 - ^.
- remove - 01:22:052 (73) - and - 01:22:318 (75,76) -, add d at - 01:22:584 - and remove - 01:23:472 (32) - ? i don't like much this part but this way it plays better to me, more consistent by re-using the same structure.

[Oni]
- 01:07:141 - maybe try to get a break here ? (i think - 01:05:720 - is a pretty good spot to get a break if you add something at - 01:04:833 - but the way you mapped it atm doesn't allow it so idk, the second part of the kiai is less denser so you should think about it imo).
else pretty cool to play, idk about the difficulty jump from muzu tho.
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Good luck'
qoot8123
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Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
qoot8123
-Sh1n1-

  • kantan:
  1. 01:12:466 (10) - due to the notes density is higher on other diffs, so i don't want to make kantan too empty
  2. 01:16:726 - there is a snare sound actually, added a note on 01:18:146 - to reflect it
  3. 01:23:472 - because the other diffs are harder on this part, so i try to make a better spread/gap

    Futsuu:
  4. 01:07:141 (7) - i follow the vocal here, it also work well

    muzu:
  5. 00:09:995 (30,31,32) -i feel kkd would be more better connection with former pattern (dkd)
  6. 00:39:626 - ~ 00:50:099 - oni contain too much 1/4 here, and futsuu contains much 2/1 break and 1/1 pattern, so i think muzu's density is okay while containing a little 2/1 break and much 1/2 pattern
  7. 00:54:359 - i follow vocal

    oni:
  8. 00:00:195 - i hear that there is a explode sound , so i use finisher here , also the volume is low,big don is not too loud
  9. 00:02:795 (10,11,12) - this pattern's pitch is not same as 00:04:395 (16,17,18) - so i use different pattern here
  10. 00:54:359 - i follow vocal
  11. 01:14:419 (68,69,70) - 01:14:596 - is more powerful

nofool

  • futsuu:
  1. 00:23:827 (8) - i want make it a bit different with upcoming patterns,but i remapped a little on this part
  2. 01:25:070 - because the density on oni and muzu is higher so i also make this part a bit denser

    oni:
    i know the kiai part is a bit continuous, but i think it is okay due to i make the gap more larger among every diffs.

thanks for mods!
tasuke912
Former osu!taiko Champion: 2018
1,347 posts
Joined June 2013
tasuke912
sound volume checking (no kds)
  1. 00:30:129 - i think 50% is bit too small. 60% is better.
  2. 00:52:851 - this green line should be moved to 00:53:028, because 70%>40% change may confuse players. also, 00:52:939 this sound is not so quieter than before.
  3. 01:01:283 - consider deleting this green line? 40% is enough quiet.
that's all! please call me back again after that.
qoot8123
1,500 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
qoot8123

tasuke912 wrote:

sound volume checking (no kds)
  1. 00:30:129 - i think 50% is bit too small. 60% is better.
  2. 00:52:851 - this green line should be moved to 00:53:028, because 70%>40% change may confuse players. also, 00:52:939 this sound is not so quieter than before.
  3. 01:01:283 - consider deleting this green line? 40% is enough quiet.
that's all! please call me back again after that.

fixed them, thanks ! :)
tasuke912
Former osu!taiko Champion: 2018
1,347 posts
Joined June 2013
tasuke912
Bubbled!
qoot8123
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Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
qoot8123
Thanks ^^
JUDYDANNY
1,519 posts
Joined October 2011
JUDYDANNY
Hi qoot ( ・∀・)ﾉ
Here's my 2nd Taiko mod (1st Posted: 2 years ago lol).
Symbol meaning
　
  1. >> Normal suggestion.
    Big text >> Strong suggestion.
    :?: >> Questionable IMO.
    :!: >>> Needs to improve some. (Rhythm is not good , plays or sounds weird)
    No comment >>simple (you can notice easily: just hits on drums or simple beats) , or already explained on the other place.

[Timing]
  • 　
    :?: from 00:52:939 – to 01:01:460 -, Muzukashii and Oni are disunified the volume comparing with Futsuu and Kantan.

    :!: Comparing with your Ranked Dadadadadada...., I guess some parts sounds still small to me.
  1. 00:18:857 - turn up 80~85%?
  2. 01:04:300 – turn up 90~98%? Recommend to 95%.
[Kantan]
  • Kiai has near pattern the my no brand girls Intro lol
  1. 01:07:851 – add k? For Avoid to far gap between to higher diff.
  2. 01:16:726 – move to 01:16:371 – and 01:17:081 – add d? the reason is same as above.

    :?: uumm……. 01:22:407 - add note…? I’m afraid of the gap between to Muzukashii dense (from 01:21:342 - ~ (15notes) , 01:24:182 –(9notes).
    1. 01:23:827 – change to k?
[Futsuu]
  • Kiai has near patt(ry it was nothing.
  1. 00:31:638 – change to d?
    *-1 vocal pitch sounds keep and low-tone bass sounds low.
    *-2 can make a gap between to 00:42:288 - , sounds up( snare and distortion guitar)
    Uum. from 00:30:217 - ~ to 00:38:738 -, I try to recommend once… that change to the colors on basis… from 00:30:217 - ddkk>dddk(2/1 rhythm).
    1. 00:37:318 – change to d ,
    2. 00:38:028 – change to k or 00:39:448 - ?
    :?: 01:22:407 – add note? same as Kantan.
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:30:928 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 3-3-1 change to 1-3-1? Rhythm is variatied on this timing only once.
[Oni]
  1. 0:23:028 remove, sounds nothing noise, 00:23:383 – move to 00:23:738 - instead? for empashized to the guitar.
  2. plays well, Nicely mapped :)
Some parts have a little large gap imo, between to Futsuu and Muzukashii , Muzukashii and Oni, but this not serious. I want to respect the each single well mapped. Spread seems OK to me.
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qoot8123
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Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
qoot8123
Kantan :
  1. 01:07:851 – yes, the gap is large, but other diffs also have same condition, in kiai, I mapped 2/1+ a little 1/1 pattern with 4/1 break, on the futsuu, there is 1/1+a little 1/2 pattern with 2/1 break, on muzu , there is 1/2+ a little 1/4 pattern with 3/2 break ,and on oni, i use 1/2+ much 1/4 patterns with 1/1 break. so I want keep this one.
  2. 01:16:726 –^
Oni :

  1. 00:23:383 – it actually has a cymbal sound here, and I feel current pattern flows better imo
thanks a lot! :)
JUDYDANNY
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Joined October 2011
JUDYDANNY
Set seems great, Omedetou qoot ヾ(๑>◡<)ﾉ"

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Nardoxyribonucleic
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Nardoxyribonucleic
Congrats~ :)
Raiden
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Raiden
Congratulations qoot senpai >w<
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