Wakeshima Kanon - killy killy JOKER (TV Size) · forum

smallboat

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-04-22T09:53:40+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年6月6日 at 上午 11:31:06

Artist: Wakeshima Kanon
Title: killy killy JOKER (TV Size)
Source: Selector Infected WIXOSS
Tags: Wish Across opening card game battle loli girl Project Selector J.C.STAFF ZZHBOY Rūko Kominato
BPM: 90
Filesize: 21861kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

Easy (2.85 stars, 104 notes)
Hard (4.73 stars, 237 notes)
Insane (4.89 stars, 365 notes)
Normal (4.2 stars, 160 notes)
ZZH's Insane (4.83 stars, 336 notes)

Download: Wakeshima Kanon - killy killy JOKER (TV Size)
Download: Wakeshima Kanon - killy killy JOKER (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#5 Ranked Map.

Easy by me

Normal

Hard

ZZH"s Insane : by ZZHBOY

Insane by me

Map log

2014/4/22 Video added(Thanks IamKwaN offer webiste download).(~~I remove this first,because the update system problem.~~)
2014/4/23 Hitsound added.
2014/4/25 ZZH"s Insane added.
2014/5/15 Background change,video added.

Thanks mod

Sweet Vanilla
liangv587
Hollow Wings
Sellenite

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

Jemmmmy
10crystalmask01
moonlightleaf
Piyoko_9796
Mao
Regraz
yf_bmp
xChippy
Kenezz (Bubbled)
BeatofIke (Rebubbled)
wcx19911123 (Rebubbled)
Frostmourne (timing)
RLC (timing)
captin1 (Ranked!)

Last edited by smallboat 2014-06-06T10:22:52+00:00, edited 36 times in total.

Selisi

721 posts

Joined October 2012

Selisi 2014-04-25T08:30:43+00:00

hi smallboat~ mutual in game ask~ 1st> <
[General]

add “ZZHBOY” in tags
combo color 红色有两个颜色很相近的删掉一个吧
widescreen support 建议统一

[Insane]

00:11:449 (6) - 这个circle后面接的是三连咱认为这里放跳不太好 00:11:283 (5) - 咱觉得可以通过这里放跳调整下
00:14:366 (8,1) - 这个为什么分开那么远呀 inconsistent
00:15:783 (1) - 乃这个梗应该00:15:616 (6,1) - spacing和00:14:783 (2,3) - 一样呀
00:23:283 (4) - 这个太远了试着移动到(60,52)
00:24:449 (1,2) - ctrl+G
00:35:783 - 从这里开始乃的跳咱不太理解 00:36:116 (2) - 这里乃没有放跳，但是00:36:783 - 放了，然后00:37:449 (2) - 又没有放 00:38:116 (5) - 然后又有跳...spacing感觉挺乱的玩起来很不舒服建议乃统一一下小间距的spacing 比如00:36:116 (2,3) - 和00:36:283 (3,4) - ，00:37:449 (2,3) - 和00:37:616 (3,4) -
00:43:283 (8,9,10,1) - 乃这个flow有问题呀...(咱建议乃00:43:449 (9,1) - ctrl+G then 00:43:783 (1) - 移动到(220,128)
00:47:631 (8,1) - 这里哪里可以这样跳呀跳的也有限度一点> < 00:47:131 (5,8) - ctrl+G
00:51:131 (3,4,5,6) - 这里的flow不太好看咱也不知道怎么办乃可以试着自己调整下
00:53:798 (3,4) - 这里怎么能这么跳呀要跳也应该是00:54:131 (5) - 跳呀...{建议00:53:798 (3) - move to(64,236);00:53:964 (4) - move to (220,316);00:54:131 (5) - move to (232,76); 00:54:298 (6) - move to (124,308)}
00:56:964 (10,11,1) - 位子不太对 move to （192,116）试试呢？
01:01:881 (3,4,1,2,3) - 黑1分
01:13:631 (3) - move to （160,332）
01:14:464 (1) - 这里建议不要折返加一个滑条也挺好的
01:28:048 (6,1) - spacing太大了> <
01:28:964 (3) - 这个折返去掉要好些

[ZZ's Insane]

00:36:783 - 这里的音不加circle咩？
00:40:783 - ^
00:44:949 - 00:45:033 -
00:49:798 (1) - 这个滑条有些意义不明呀....
01:01:798 - 从这里就开始连打了
01:22:464 (3,4) - 这个spacing为什么突然变大了呀咱以为是空了一个1/8拍呢

[Hard]

00:00:484 - 加滑条
00:09:783 - add circle
01:21:798 - ^

Normal和easy就补不查了, Good luck~

liangv587

472 posts

Joined April 2013

liangv587 2014-04-25T14:07:16+00:00

船业！！

[ZZH's Insane]

主要说下节奏问题
00:08:283 (1) - 圈，00:08:449 (2) - 1/2滑条
00:09:116 (5) - 3/4滑条
00:12:783 (3) - 之后很诡异，这样改吧，前后综合一下改

点开

00:22:783 (2) - 之后很诡异，这样改吧，前后综合一下改

点开

00:25:783 (3) - 1/2滑条，不然节奏就断了
00:33:616 (2,3) - 这两个最好能重合
00:35:116 (1) - 向左，00:35:283 (2) - 向右，读图更容易
00:43:116 (5,6,7,8) - 合成两个滑条
00:44:949 - 很诡异，试试三连圈，00:45:283 - 1/2滑条
00:49:798 (1) - 非要减速的话0.75就够了，然后可以包住00:49:465 (2) - 的头，尾巴重合
00:55:131 (3) - 向左弯
排版方面，值得改进的地方太多，有条可以用的就是牵一发而动全身，免得有人说你乱摆的，也可以摆花样，不过这个更难，艺术细菌需求更高
音效也有点单调

[Insane]

这个难度感觉已经能rank辣
00:01:151 (1) - 这段可以在重拍上加clap（1，3白线）
00:24:116 (7) - 尾巴向右甩点，包住00:24:616 (2) - 同时尾巴被00:23:616 (6) - 包住
00:34:616 (2,3) - 换位
00:38:116 (5) - 1/2滑条
00:50:131 (5,1,2) - 这3个分别ctrl+G
00:54:298 (6) - 移到184,308
01:02:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nice

01:06:131 (5,1) - 模仿01:03:798 (1,2) -
01:21:798 (3,4) - 这2个分别ctrl+G

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2014-04-25T15:14:03+00:00

Sweet Vanilla wrote:
[ZZ's Insane]
00:36:783 - 这里的音不加circle咩？加了
00:40:783 - ^这里跟voval就美丽
00:44:949 - 00:45:033 - ?
00:49:798 (1) - 这个滑条有些意义不明呀....拆开了
01:01:798 - 从这里就开始连打了暂时保留
01:22:464 (3,4) - 这个spacing为什么突然变大了呀咱以为是空了一个1/8拍呢调均等前后间距了

587的mod有点主管 fixed some
美丽

SPOILER

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smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-04-26T01:46:11+00:00

Sweet Vanilla wrote:
hi smallboat~ mutual in game ask~ 1st> <
[General]
add “ZZHBOY” in tags 好
combo color 红色有两个颜色很相近的删掉一个吧阿我忘了設combo顏色，現在都換了。
widescreen support 建议统一好
[Insane]
00:11:449 (6) - 这个circle后面接的是三连咱认为这里放跳不太好 00:11:283 (5) - 咱觉得可以通过这里放跳调整下調了些
00:14:366 (8,1) - 这个为什么分开那么远呀 inconsistent 連上去了
00:15:783 (1) - 乃这个梗应该00:15:616 (6,1) - spacing和00:14:783 (2,3) - 一样呀調了些間距有盡量保持一致
00:23:283 (4) - 这个太远了试着移动到(60,52) 好
00:24:449 (1,2) - ctrl+G 好
00:35:783 - 从这里开始乃的跳咱不太理解 00:36:116 (2) - 这里乃没有放跳，但是00:36:783 - 放了，然后00:37:449 (2) - 又没有放 00:38:116 (5) - 然后又有跳...spacing感觉挺乱的玩起来很不舒服建议乃统一一下小间距的spacing 比如00:36:116 (2,3) - 和00:36:283 (3,4) - ，00:37:449 (2,3) - 和00:37:616 (3,4) - 好，都維持同距了
00:43:283 (8,9,10,1) - 乃这个flow有问题呀...(咱建议乃00:43:449 (9,1) - ctrl+G then 00:43:783 (1) - 移动到(220,128) Almost fixed,換成其他方法
00:47:631 (8,1) - 这里哪里可以这样跳呀跳的也有限度一点> < 00:47:131 (5,8) - ctrl+G 覺得沒什麼跳的突出的，而且有照flow放
00:51:131 (3,4,5,6) - 这里的flow不太好看咱也不知道怎么办乃可以试着自己调整下恩改了一些
00:53:798 (3,4) - 这里怎么能这么跳呀要跳也应该是00:54:131 (5) - 跳呀...{建议00:53:798 (3) - move to(64,236);00:53:964 (4) - move to (220,316);00:54:131 (5) - move to (232,76); 00:54:298 (6) - move to (124,308)} 改了
00:56:964 (10,11,1) - 位子不太对 move to （192,116）试试呢？這位子不接受，我調到其他地方了
01:01:881 (3,4,1,2,3) - 黑1分那就不對稱了這裡。
01:13:631 (3) - move to （160,332）好
01:14:464 (1) - 这里建议不要折返加一个滑条也挺好的好
01:28:048 (6,1) - spacing太大了> < 縮小了些
01:28:964 (3) - 这个折返去掉要好些現在還好那麼這個再考慮
[Hard]
00:00:484 - 加滑条想跟ins有個區別，不加了。
00:09:783 - add circle 好
01:21:798 - ^
^
Normal和easy就补不查了, Good luck~ 好

謝謝甜香草 ~ !

To 紙張 : ZZH阿你的難度重載一下，我只改標題 JOKER 和Combo色彩就這兩個。

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-04-26T02:05:50+00:00

liangv587 wrote:
船业！！ iliangv587 业！！

[Insane]

这个难度感觉已经能rank辣應該可以吧找幾個mod我再找BAT試試
00:01:151 (1) - 这段可以在重拍上加clap（1，3白线）OK 還行
00:24:116 (7) - 尾巴向右甩点，包住00:24:616 (2) - 同时尾巴被00:23:616 (6) - 包住這裡不改，因為要跟00:24:116 (7,1) - 做個弧度
00:34:616 (2,3) - 换位 OK 還行
00:38:116 (5) - 1/2滑条 OK 還行
00:50:131 (5,1,2) - 这3个分别ctrl+G 前面兩個用了後面沒用
00:54:298 (6) - 移到184,308 雖然是可以但不太好看再考慮
01:02:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nice : )
01:06:131 (5,1) - 模仿01:03:798 (1,2) - 恩也不錯等下再看看要怎調整周圍的位置
01:21:798 (3,4) - 这2个分别ctrl+G OK 還行

謝謝 liangv587 ~ !

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2014-04-26T11:21:33+00:00

m4m

General

01:05:131 (1) - 小船的diff里，像这种地方加了个音量15的绿线，我不太清楚现在rank规则是如何的，在我印象中绿线音量似乎15以下是不能设置在打击点上的？要么你去问问bat，如果不是当我没说；另外，如果只是为了单纯调整音效音量的话，还是建议和直接编辑音效文件，然后用sample系统就行了，既简单又保险
这种曲子你都用两个红线？不怕bat找茬么？而且感觉没必要啊233

Insane

00:59:131 (1,2,3) - 介于你全图的跳ds都大的可以，我建议你这个三分拍直接摆全屏跳，间距想怎么大都行
其他其实没啥好说的，我就说说自己对这图的看法吧。节奏方面其实说不出啥，非常正常向的下红白obj和stream，嗯。。。以后或许你可以考虑做点变化，加点3/4啊1/4什么的。排版方面给我一种依样画瓢般将梗套进图里的感觉，当然了我觉得这不失为一种使自己技术进步的手段，只是以后在作图的时候可以多想想怎样用梗可以用的更好，那样图给人的感觉会更加自然一些

ZZH's Insane

00:14:116 (6) - nc，不过这一块小提琴不跟不觉得可惜么
00:33:116 (1,2) - 后面00:33:949 (3,4,5) - 既然跟了小提琴，那么这里我建议干脆换成4个note，摆个ds渐小的梗，和00:33:949 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 整体呼应一下
01:05:131 (1,2,1) - 这几个排排好可以相互stack的
嗯。。。嘛，有的时候我觉得自己也不能多说什么，毕竟我自己mapping skill也只是渣渣。我自认为唯一还可以的就是靠感觉做图这一项了，这种感性的东西无法用梗啊flow啊这种词来描述，我就随便说点东西：
比如01:05:131 (1) - 一般来说长白线的obj是重音，视情况可以强调一下位置或者节奏，这里让我来摆我就会摆个跳。而vocal给我的感觉就是此处应该是顺flow而不是逆flow放滑条身子（试试看把这个滑条中间的control point移到361,265看看）
再看了一遍这个diff，其实我觉得你的mapping思路还是不错的，只是很多地方用的梗给我一种太过拘束的感觉，另外排版还可以再好点，嗯

Hard

00:29:116 (4) - 减掉个折返？后面那些折返还好，这里稍微跟一下vocal的感觉好了
01:21:964 (3,4) - 为何我感觉这里换一下更好点

Normal

00:59:131 (1,2,3) - 这个节奏在normal里太难了吧。。。
01:23:131 (1,2) - ar那么低别stack吧，或者干脆换成滑条

Easy

01:21:131 (1,1) - 转盘和note时间间隔感觉太小，考虑换个梗。而且建议低难度里转盘后面的obj放在中心附近

废话说的有点多仅供参考不要全信，原因你懂的

good luck

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2014-04-26T12:12:55+00:00

from ingame
音效方面可能还要注意一下

[E & N]
我不知道whistle+clap是什么时候才放的..有时候没放，和tick clap一起听的话会显得时高时低，whistle听起来很大声，普通时候放个whistle就足够大声了

[Hard]
00:11:783 (1) - 这个的尾巴我不要音效后是很低的声音的，不明白为什么要w+c
00:12:783 (4) - 头取消whistle
00:13:449 (5) - 只要加finish，加30%绿线
00:22:783 取消whistle
00:22:949 (2) - 头加clap
00:23:449 (3) - 尾巴finish，加30%绿线
00:24:449 (1) - 尾巴加clap
00:39:449 (3) - nazi，可以blanket放好点
01:00:464 (2,3) - 弯曲之后然后放开点比较好，有点老图即视感
01:05:131 (1) - nazi，可以blanket放好点

[Insane]
00:00:595 (1) - 别要这个了，放在1/6上，尾stack也不好听，直接00:01:151开始
00:06:450 (1,2) - 这两个..其实不推荐这么放，最好把他们放开，例如像这样类似的

SPOILER

00:12:783 (5,8) - 意见和hard相同
00:22:783 (2) - 取消whistle
00:24:616 (2) - 加clap
00:42:283 改为40%，这里是需要强调的
00:51:464 (5) - 取消whistle，加clap
00:51:798 (1) - 不必用绿线降音
00:54:464 (1) - ^
01:02:464 (1) - ^
01:05:131 (1) - 40%
01:07:798 (1) - 不必用绿线降音
01:11:798 (1) - 40%
01:16:131 (2,3,4) - 都取消clap
01:16:631 (5) - 尾whistle改为clap
01:17:798 (3) - 头加clap
01:24:131 (3) - 取消whistle
01:25:464 (2) - whistle改为clap
01:29:048 觉得加个5-10%的绿线消音比较好

[ZZ]
00:14:116 (6) - NC
00:19:783 (5) - NC
00:20:616 (1) - 取消NC
00:26:449 (5) - NC
00:32:116 (2) - 放到像1/2的距离觉得有点坑，不过没什么问题
00:37:783 (1) - 取消NC
01:16:964 (1) - 头加finish?
不错，挺爽的

hope it help you！
random rank~

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2014-04-26T15:43:41+00:00

all accept
hw偶像❤

code

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smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-04-27T06:57:38+00:00

Hollow Wings wrote:
m4m
General
01:05:131 (1) - 小船的diff里，像这种地方加了个音量15的绿线，我不太清楚现在rank规则是如何的，在我印象中绿线音量似乎15以下是不能设置在打击点上的？要么你去问问bat，如果不是当我没说；另外，如果只是为了单纯调整音效音量的话，还是建议和直接编辑音效文件，然后用sample系统就行了，既简单又保险 好像有規定又好像沒有，但音量調20%了，應該不會找碴了?sample系統不會用233，那我有空再研究看看。
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这种曲子你都用两个红线？不怕bat找茬么？而且感觉没必要啊233 233沒關係啦就是不怕發現這個跟colorful蠻類似的bpm所以就用上了這個變化
Insane

00:59:131 (1,2,3) - 介于你全图的跳ds都大的可以，我建议你这个三分拍直接摆全屏跳，间距想怎么大都行說的堆從1.8x變到2.8x應該夠遠了233?
其他其实没啥好说的，我就说说自己对这图的看法吧。节奏方面其实说不出啥，非常正常向的下红白obj和stream，嗯。。。以后或许你可以考虑做点变化，加点3/4啊1/4什么的。排版方面给我一种依样画瓢般将梗套进图里的感觉，当然了我觉得这不失为一种使自己技术进步的手段，只是以后在作图的时候可以多想想怎样用梗可以用的更好，那样图给人的感觉会更加自然一些
恩，擺的很像到處亂飛像蒼鷹一樣，也許這是我的style，梗的話真的是個問題，的確還須加強用量和表達。~~(可是看那麼多圖還沒有靈感 sad)~~

Hard
00:29:116 (4) - 减掉个折返？后面那些折返还好，这里稍微跟一下vocal的感觉好了好
01:21:964 (3,4) - 为何我感觉这里换一下更好点好
Normal
00:59:131 (1,2,3) - 这个节奏在normal里太难了吧。。。好，2改成note了
01:23:131 (1,2) - ar那么低别stack吧，或者干脆换成滑条好，改了，AR5還算低阿0.0?
Easy
01:21:131 (1,1) - 转盘和note时间间隔感觉太小，考虑换个梗。而且建议低难度里转盘后面的obj放在中心附近
废话说的有点多仅供参考不要全信，原因你懂的恩好，那我把後面的1先去掉好了

good luck

謝謝 Hollow Wings ~ !

Sellenite wrote:
from ingame
音效方面可能还要注意一下

[E & N]
我不知道whistle+clap是什么时候才放的..有时候没放，和tick clap一起听的话会显得时高时低，whistle听起来很大声，普通时候放个whistle就足够大声了這個再看看

[Hard]
00:11:783 (1) - 这个的尾巴我不要音效后是很低的声音的，不明白为什么要w+c 真的感覺有點吵那我就把whistle去了
00:12:783 (4) - 头取消whistle 好
00:13:449 (5) - 只要加finish，加30%绿线好,3個dif都加了
00:22:783 取消whistle 好

00:22:949 (2) - 头加clap 沒鼓聲不加
00:23:449 (3) - 尾巴finish，加30%绿线加了 30太大聲加了20
00:24:449 (1) - 尾巴加clap 好
00:39:449 (3) - nazi，可以blanket放好点好
01:00:464 (2,3) - 弯曲之后然后放开点比较好，有点老图即视感好
01:05:131 (1) - nazi，可以blanket放好点好

[Insane]
00:00:595 (1) - 别要这个了，放在1/6上，尾stack也不好听，直接00:01:151开始這個的話我先去掉好了
00:06:450 (1,2) - 这两个..其实不推荐这么放，最好把他们放开，例如像这样类似的好
SPOILER
00:12:783 (5,8) - 意见和hard相同好
00:22:783 (2) - 取消whistle 好
00:24:616 (2) - 加clap 好
00:42:283 改为40%，这里是需要强调的好
00:51:464 (5) - 取消whistle，加clap 好
00:51:798 (1) - 不必用绿线降音加到40
00:54:464 (1) - ^ ^
01:02:464 (1) - ^ ^
01:05:131 (1) - 40% ^
01:07:798 (1) - 不必用绿线降音加到55
01:11:798 (1) - 40% 好
01:16:131 (2,3,4) - 都取消clap 好
01:16:631 (5) - 尾whistle改为clap 好
01:17:798 (3) - 头加clap 好
01:24:131 (3) - 取消whistle 再考慮因為這鼓聲蠻重
01:25:464 (2) - whistle改为clap 好
01:29:048 觉得加个5-10%的绿线消音比较好好

hope it help you！恩，音效方面很有用，感激。
random rank~

謝謝Sellenite ~ !

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

4,298 posts

Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2014-04-27T13:16:52+00:00

送mod

Insane

00:14:199 (6,7,8) - 我觉得这个串这么放比较好 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1552158
00:20:283 (3,5) - blanket要往外面一点的
00:40:283 (3,4) - 这两个滑条尾的声音消掉一点比较好听我觉得ww
00:46:199 (4,6) - 最好在这里加个串 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1552171
01:15:798 (1,4,5,1) - 这几个滑条头加finish
最后一段感觉可以多加些finish, 可是加了又觉得不合适.-.

ZZH's Insane

00:14:116 (6,7,8) - zz
00:44:616 (9) - 把这个滑条的速度调成0.5x 下一个再调回去
00:49:131 (1) - 这个音别消啊听着不舒服了
01:15:798 (1,1,1) - 滑条头加finish
01:27:464 (3) - 这样摆 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1552195
转盘尾音消了吧

Hard

00:35:116 (3) - 去掉一个转向, 没必要加的 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1552199
01:07:464 (4) - missing whistle
01:15:798 (3,4,1) - 3的滑条头+4+1的滑条头加上finish
01:23:131 (1,2) - 这个滑条放成一个单点比较好.-.

Normal

图本身没啥问题不过我觉得前面一堆跟鼓二分拍到了kiai那段速唱反而都是单点没有突出重点
要是前面简单些 kiai那里用滑条之类的摆满二分拍我觉得会好一些
不过反正是normal 233

后来我想了一下 ~~那地方放四方跳多好真是可惜~~

Jemmmmy

526 posts

Joined September 2012

Jemmmmy 2014-04-27T22:00:57+00:00

[insane]
00:08:783 (1,2,3,4,5) - 不摆成弧线？
00:28:783 (4,5,6) - 等边三角形？
01:01:131 (1) -

01:18:131 (5,6,7,8,1) - 调整下，让滑条顺着连打的方向

01:23:631 (3,1) - 换一换nc
01:28:548 (6,1) - 间距跟01:28:048 (6,1) - 一样
[ZZH's in]
00:13:616 -

00:29:783 (1,2,3,4) - 和后面的滑条头摆成一条弧线
00:33:783 - note
00:44:866 -

[hard]
00:22:449 (1,2) - 包好
00:31:116 (2) - 换成两个滑条？
00:33:449 (2) - ^
01:01:798 (1,2,1) - 间距相同

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2014-04-28T00:00:00+00:00

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
ZZH's Insane

00:14:116 (6,7,8) - zz 改了下
00:44:616 (9) - 把这个滑条的速度调成0.5x 下一个再调回去好
00:49:131 (1) - 这个音别消啊听着不舒服了好
01:15:798 (1,1,1) - 滑条头加finish好
01:27:464 (3) - 这样摆 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1552195好
转盘尾音消了吧all fixed

Jemmmmy wrote:
[ZZH's in]
00:13:616 - ?o.o
00:29:783 (1,2,3,4) - 和后面的滑条头摆成一条弧线nope 摆不下...
00:33:783 - note好
00:44:866 - 这里改了下

code

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208,304,54464,6,0,B|152:268|140:224|140:224|102:215|84:172,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,120,54964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,288,55131,2,0,B|60:332|60:332|28:360,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,180,55464,2,0,L|216:204,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,248,55714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,248,55798,6,0,L|416:284,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,160,56298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,240,56464,2,0,P|492:300|476:344,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,160,56798,2,0,P|364:100|380:56,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,120,57048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,120,57131,6,0,L|256:120,1,180,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,48,57631,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,212,57964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,248,58130,1,10,0:0:0:0:
136,284,58297,2,0,L|40:312,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,296,58630,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,296,58797,1,10,0:0:0:0:
360,296,58964,2,0,L|408:296,1,45,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,304,59131,6,0,L|452:188,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,216,59381,2,0,L|396:100,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,44,59631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,44,59714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,44,59798,6,0,L|256:104,1,135,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,132,60131,2,0,P|232:152|184:160,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,132,60464,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,76,60631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,120,60798,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,76,60964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,76,61048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,76,61131,6,0,P|160:160|200:260,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,252,61631,2,0,P|324:220|268:224,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,320,61964,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,300,62048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,284,62131,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,268,62214,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,248,62298,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,232,62381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,216,62464,6,0,P|212:220|304:180,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,124,62798,2,0,P|344:172|352:228,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,328,63131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,232,63298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,40,63464,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,136,63631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,232,63798,6,0,P|328:252|368:228,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,96,64131,1,2,0:0:0:0:
308,172,64298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,292,64464,2,0,P|144:312|104:288,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,64797,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,232,64964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,316,65131,6,0,P|360:264|400:176,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
398,179,65631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,48,65798,2,0,L|264:96,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,172,66131,2,0,L|244:220,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,177,66464,6,0,L|264:104,1,135,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,60,66798,2,0,P|216:136|200:160,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,248,67131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,92,67298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,211,67464,1,2,0:0:0:0:
295,61,67631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,61,67714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,61,67798,6,0,L|386:140,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,92,68131,2,0,L|207:171,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,323,68464,2,0,L|126:244,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,292,68797,2,0,L|305:213,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,52,69131,6,0,P|176:120|148:160,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,264,69464,2,0,P|184:272|224:300,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,332,69798,2,0,P|336:264|364:224,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,120,70131,2,0,P|328:112|288:84,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,64,70464,6,0,B|184:52|184:52|240:88,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,236,70964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,140,71131,2,0,L|472:96,2,90,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,60,71631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,60,71714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,60,71798,6,0,B|184:32|184:32|80:48,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,208,72298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,346,72464,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,147,72631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
70,332,72798,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,233,72964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,233,73048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,232,73131,6,0,P|332:192|396:208,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,232,73464,2,0,L|440:132,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,20,73798,2,0,L|303:106,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,212,74131,2,0,L|212:104,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,48,74464,6,0,P|168:72|76:64,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,48,74798,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,164,74964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,268,75131,2,0,P|118:284|73:283,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,204,75464,2,0,P|277:187|322:188,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,336,75798,6,0,L|428:160,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,172,76131,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,4,76298,5,8,0:0:0:0:
436,140,76631,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,140,76798,1,2,0:0:0:0:
436,140,76964,6,0,B|368:200|368:200|304:128|216:148,1,225,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,168,77464,2,0,L|136:76,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,240,77798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,216,77964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,244,78048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,272,78131,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,136,78298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,112,78381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,88,78464,6,0,L|436:88,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,200,78798,2,0,L|368:200,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,144,79298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,152,79381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,160,79464,2,0,L|232:152,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,224,79798,2,0,L|280:232,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,324,80131,2,0,L|216:216,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,60,80464,6,0,L|300:208,1,135,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,248,80798,2,0,P|348:248|384:272,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,324,81131,2,0,P|168:324|132:300,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,104,81464,2,0,P|216:192|200:220,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,240,81798,6,0,B|128:240|128:240|196:268,1,135,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,296,82131,2,0,P|240:256|288:248,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,296,82464,2,0,B|404:244|404:244|385:194|384:144,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,108,82881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,64,82964,2,0,L|312:96,2,90,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,104,83798,6,0,L|293:127,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,264,84131,2,0,L|218:240,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,94,84464,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,148,84631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,201,84798,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,260,84964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,260,85131,2,0,L|480:140,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,201,85464,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,240,85631,2,0,B|200:248|200:248|260:232,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,208,85964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,64,86298,5,0,0:0:0:0:
404,76,86381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,88,86464,2,0,L|264:120,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,96,86798,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,152,86964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,208,87131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,292,87298,21,0,0:0:0:0:
219,310,87381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,325,87464,2,0,L|132:300,1,45
56,248,87631,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87714,12,0,89131,0:0:0:0:

smallboat

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smallboat 2014-04-28T05:57:36+00:00

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
送mod

Insane

00:14:199 (6,7,8) - 我觉得这个串这么放比较好 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1552158 好，然後stream方向改了一下。
00:20:283 (3,5) - blanket要往外面一点的沒關係就這樣吧，反正這裡都對稱應該沒什麼美觀問題
00:40:283 (3,4) - 这两个滑条尾的声音消掉一点比较好听我觉得ww 好
00:46:199 (4,6) - 最好在这里加个串 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1552171 雖然不知為什麼但還是加了
01:15:798 (1,4,5,1) - 这几个滑条头加finish 勉強接受加了
最后一段感觉可以多加些finish, 可是加了又觉得不合适.-. 恩我再想看看應該已經沒什麼漏了
Hard

00:35:116 (3) - 去掉一个转向, 没必要加的 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1552199 改了，然後變成兩個1/2slider，我覺得後面那鼓聲需要壓到。
01:07:464 (4) - missing whistle 加了
01:15:798 (3,4,1) - 3的滑条头+4+1的滑条头加上finish 好
01:23:131 (1,2) - 这个滑条放成一个单点比较好.-. 好
Normal

图本身没啥问题不过我觉得前面一堆跟鼓二分拍到了kiai那段速唱反而都是单点没有突出重点好
要是前面简单些 kiai那里用滑条之类的摆满二分拍我觉得会好一些我會再試一下的
不过反正是normal 233 233..
后来我想了一下 ~~那地方放四方跳多好真是可惜~~ 哪裡?

謝謝Ar3 ~ !

lovekotori

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Joined August 2013

lovekotori 2014-04-28T06:11:43+00:00

加油ww
is good map w
i like ww

smallboat

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smallboat 2014-04-28T06:39:53+00:00

Jemmmmy wrote:
[insane]
00:08:783 (1,2,3,4,5) - 不摆成弧线？咦不是擺成弧了? 不過我稍微還是移動了一點。
00:28:783 (4,5,6) - 等边三角形？恩稍微把6往上了一點
01:01:131 (1) - 調整了一點
01:18:131 (5,6,7,8,1) - 调整下，让滑条顺着连打的方向好改變了弧度
01:23:631 (3,1) - 换一换nc ok 可以
01:28:548 (6,1) - 间距跟01:28:048 (6,1) - 一样原本想來個1/4note 跳那還是別跳好了 fixed

[hard]
00:22:449 (1,2) - 包好好
00:31:116 (2) - 换成两个滑条？如果拆開的話這邊就成好多1/2 感覺DT會被黑這兩個再考慮
00:33:449 (2) - ^ ^
01:01:798 (1,2,1) - 间距相同 OK用1.0x

謝謝 Jemmmmy ~ !

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2014-04-29T01:39:36+00:00

Hey, M4M here

[Insane]
00:09:116 (5) - Should be NC instead of 00:08:783 (1) - , because clearly this note is the one starting on the main downbeat, which marks as the next rhythmic cycle.

00:20:116 (2,3) - Nazi suggestion )sorry!) please fix the blanket:

00:20:949 (5,6) - ^ Same suggestion as above.

00:24:449 (1,1) - Move more apart so they're not attached to each other.

01:23:797 (3) - Should be NC instead of 01:23:631 (1) - , because this is the first object to appear when Kai time officially ends.

01:28:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hmm interesting. Try changing & adding the hitsound drum clap onto these objects, to match those funny beats heard in the music.

[ZZH's Insane]
00:34:616 (2,3) - Try adding drum clap onto these objects, to match those funny beats heard in the music.

[Hard]

00:09:783 (2,3,4,5) - Consider remapping the rhythm here:

Mainly because of the long slider, which currently sounds very off atm. When moving it to play on 00:10:283 instead, it will match the violins long quarter-note.

00:10:949 (6,7) - Try swapping them, and adjust their timing positions to this:

The hit circle sounds better on 00:10:949, because on this part you hear the violin note come to an abrupt finish on the note. Then, with the sldier on 00:11:283 it will run smoothly with the violins long quarter-note.

00:46:465 (1) - Replace with a flipped version of 00:46:798 (2) - like this:

It creates a neater flow imo.

[Normal/Easy]
Ok

Good luck!

ZZHBOY

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ZZHBOY 2014-04-29T02:37:10+00:00

10crystalmask01 wrote:
Hey, M4M here

[ZZH's Insane]
00:34:616 (2,3) - Try adding drum clap onto these objects, to match those funny beats heard in the music. added

smallboat

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smallboat 2014-04-29T05:08:37+00:00

10crystalmask01 wrote:
Hey, M4M here
[Insane]
00:09:116 (5) - Should be NC instead of 00:08:783 (1) - , because clearly this note is the one starting on the main downbeat, which marks as the next rhythmic cycle. Sure, added.

00:20:116 (2,3) - Nazi suggestion )sorry!) please fix the blanket: No,I keep the symmetry.

00:20:949 (5,6) - ^ Same suggestion as above. ^

00:24:449 (1,1) - Move more apart so they're not attached to each other. Okay,stack the 00:24:616 (2) .

01:23:797 (3) - Should be NC instead of 01:23:631 (1) - , because this is the first object to appear when Kai time officially ends. Sure,NC set here.

01:28:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hmm interesting. Try changing & adding the hitsound drum clap onto these objects, to match those funny beats heard in the music. Okay,add drum clap from 01:28:214 (2) to (6).

[Hard]

00:09:783 (2,3,4,5) - Consider remapping the rhythm here:

Mainly because of the long slider, which currently sounds very off atm. When moving it to play on 00:10:283 instead, it will match the violins long quarter-note. Thia part I consider it,because I test many times,ther is no problems here.

00:10:949 (6,7) - Try swapping them, and adjust their timing positions to this:

The hit circle sounds better on 00:10:949, because on this part you hear the violin note come to an abrupt finish on the note. Then, with the sldier on 00:11:283 it will run smoothly with the violins long quarter-note. ^

00:46:465 (1) - Replace with a flipped version of 00:46:798 (2) - like this:

It creates a neater flow imo. Okay,fixed

[Normal/Easy]
Ok

Good luck!

Thank 10crystalmask01 ~ !

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

moonlightleaf 2014-04-29T11:51:46+00:00

[ZZH's Insane]

00:09:783 (2) - 改俩单点

00:12:783 (3,1) - ctrl+g那种节奏

00:14:283 (2) - 折返？

00:14:783 补note

00:20:449 (3,4) - 试试这种节奏

SPOILER

00:21:116 (5,6) - ctrl+g那种节奏

00:23:949 (6) - 俩连接滑条试试

00:31:783 (1) - 复制后面的2到这里blanket

00:33:616 (2,3,4,5,6) - 差flow

00:34:949 (4) - 删

00:39:616 (6) - ctrl+g

00:44:616 (1,1) - 怎么感觉特别坑

00:59:631 (3) - 单点？

01:05:131 (1,2,1) - 要叠就认真叠，感觉敷衍

01:08:131 (2,3) - 分别 ctrl+g

01:10:964 (2,6) - stack

01:15:798 (1) - 红线收

01:16:798 (3) - 删比较好

01:27:464 (3) - 滑条到红线

最后转盘结尾有点....

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