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Diana Vickers - The Boy Who Murdered Love

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Chewin
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2010
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Chewin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on venerdì 9 maggio 2014 at 12:45:39

Artist: Diana Vickers
Title: The Boy Who Murdered Love
Tags: Hyouka ONEWAYS Songs from the Tainted Cherry Tree Indie Andrea osuplayer111 amv anime
BPM: 127
Filesize: 15680kb
Play Time: 02:22
Difficulties Available:
  1. Andrea's Normal (3,06 stars, 172 notes)
  2. Hard (4,76 stars, 289 notes)
  3. Insane (4,95 stars, 353 notes)
Download: Diana Vickers - The Boy Who Murdered Love
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Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Insane: 100%
Hard: 100%
Normal: 100%

Thank you Leader for the video :3
I mapped this song 2 months ago but updated just recently!
I hope you will enjoy it -w-
Last edited by Chewin , edited 14 times in total.
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
First o/

Normal difficulty is mine~
Chewin
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Chewin
aww yes Andrea :3 I will finish Hard in tomorrow
Chewin
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Chewin
Finished Hard and Insane. Waiting for Andrea ><
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Here it is, hope you like it. ^^

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: [AMV]ONEWAYS - The Boy Who Murdered Love.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 47802
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:The Boy Who Murdered Love
TitleUnicode:The Boy Who Murdered Love
Artist:Diana Vickers
ArtistUnicode:Diana Vickers
Creator:Chewin
Version:Andrea's Normal
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:3
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Chewin
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4,082 posts
Joined December 2010
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Chewin
That copy-paste <3 Updated, thank you Andrew ♥
Ready for mods now :3
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[General]
  1. Io toglierei Bakemonogatari dalle tags, ci sono molti altri anime usati nel video e aggiungerli tutti mi pare inutile. Limitati ad aggiungere amv, anime e ONEWAYS (autore dell'AMV)
  2. Video qui
[Andrea's Normal]
  1. 00:02:683 - - 00:10:243 Perchééé mi mappi l'inizio della stanza su una fine di uno slider ;_; In 00:04:101 (1) - la fine è più rilevante dell'inizio, perciò lo toglierei e aggiungerei un repeat su 00:03:628 (3) - più un circle
  2. 00:09:770 (1) - Finish alla fine dello slider? Credo che dovresti fare in modo che su questo punto ci stia un circle, oppure una testa di uno slider. Stesso motivo di prima e qui necessita veramente!
  3. 00:10:715 (2,3) - Oddio, a mio parere è inguardabile. Secondo me dovresti curvarlo così da essere più coerente con 00:09:770 (1) - e in modo da piazzare meglio il 3.
  4. 00:19:691 (1) - Qui potresti anche toglierla, non vedo il motivo di avere combo così corte
  5. 00:27:723 (3,4,1) - Trovo il passaggio da una forma lineare come (3) a una forma curva a dir poco orribile e in ogni caso quel flow è veramente troppo lineare, prova a creare un triangolo con la fine del 3, 4 e inizio dell'1
  6. 00:33:392 (2) - Secondo me dovrebbe essere diviso in due slider, spezza un po' il ritmo della canzone perché troppo lungo
  7. 00:40:006 (1) - Come ho già citato prima, cerca di enfatizzare il finish. Inoltre, non credo che un pattern dove la fine porta da tutt'altra direzione rispetto allo slider successivo sia corretto per una Normal, che in questo caso dovrebbe essere la diff più facile del mapset
  8. 00:40:951 (2,3,4) - Non trovo nessun motivo per avere un pattern simmetrico qui, i due slider seguono due parti totalmente diverse (a parte per la base di sottofondo, ma è uguale in tutta la canzone)
  9. 00:50:872 (1) - In teoria la new combo andrebbe tolta da qui e messa su 00:52:290 (2) -

    Grazie per avermi risparmiato di moddare metà diff :^) (applica lo stesso nell'altra metà)
[Hard]
  1. 00:35:991 (5) - Io sostituirei questo slider con due circles siccome seguono meglio le vocal
  2. 00:43:786 (3) - Sposterei questo circle da sotto la testa dello slider precedente, secondo me si gioca meglio se prosegue il sentiero dello slider
  3. 00:46:384 (2,3) - Qui le vocal mi suggeriscono di più uno slider
  4. 00:52:762 (1,1) - Trovo le curve un pochino unfitting rispetto al resto del pattern ;_;
  5. 01:00:085 (3) - Secondo me si gioca meglio, oltre a seguire più accuratamente la canzone, se riduci lo slider di 1/2 e aggiungeresti una nota sul tick bianco
  6. 01:18:746 (1) - Qui preferirei di gran lunga due circles e li metterei stackati allo slider, ci stanno bene!
  7. 01:35:991 (2) - La curva è un po' moscia qui e lo stesso vale per 01:38:825 (1,3) - . Prova a farli senza il red point, escono meglio
  8. 01:52:762 (1,2,1,2) - Non sarebbe meglio se sostuissi 01:53:235 (2,1) - nella timeline? Secondo me si gioca molto meglio e non è troppo difficile per una Hard
  9. 02:17:329 (5,1,2,3) - Dov'è il mio quadrato perfetto ;_;
[Insane]
  1. 00:38:825 (2) - Sostituiscilo con due circles, please. Segue molto meglio le vocal!
  2. 00:54:180 (1) - Fossi in te lo sposterei sotto l'ultimo slider del pattern precedente, sta a te però
  3. 00:57:959 (1) - x:236 y:36 per un triangolo migliore con 2 e 3.
  4. 01:08:353 (4,5) - Non è che si giochino benissimo lì in fondo.. Io metterei x:256 y:44, per esempio
  5. 01:38:825 (3,1,2,3) - Prova a togliere il primo circle e a spostare indietro di 1/2 tutti gli altri objects nella timeline, esce un bel pattern a mio parere, soprattutto se trasformi 01:40:006 (3) - in un 1/2 slider
  6. 02:03:628 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Ricordati di provare a cambiare questo pattern come ti dissi l'altro giorno
gl~
Roxas
osu! Alumni
1,354 posts
Joined August 2011
Roxas
Stranamente moddo std

[General]
Se non mi sbaglio "softsliderwhistle3.wav" dovresti rinominarlo in "soft-sliderwhistle3.wav" per far sì che venga utilizzato da osu!

[Andrea's Normal]
00:03:628 (3) - Lo curverei un pochino così http://puu.sh/8tPu2.jpg (aggiunto un punto in 248|56)
00:40:951 (2) - Sposterei il punto che crea la curva un pochino più in alto a destra (son pignolo con gli slider perdonami) http://puu.sh/8tPV5.jpg (non mi picchiare ;_; comunque 292|60)
00:42:841 (4) - Copiaincolla da quello prima se lo fai
00:46:621 (4) - Lo farei "spezzato" così http://puu.sh/8tQwH.jpg
applica il resto all'altra metà se vuoi *runs

[Harrrrrd]
01:30:321 (2) - Muoverei in 48|130 per fare il triangolo 1 2 3, un po' come vedi qua 01:31:502 (1,2,3) - xD
01:58:432 (1,2,3,4) - Perché hanno 1x di distance snap? Distanziali a 1.3x come gli altri D:

[Insane]
00:48:392 - Negli end slider come questi (che finiscono sul tick blu) sarebbe più carino non sentire il suono dell'hitnormal. Ti consiglio di mettere il sampleset soft su ogni fine slider (spero tu abbia capito come intendo, a volte mi spiego male). Se lo fai, fallo anche nell'altro kiai. E tra l'altro con la nuova regola dell'overmapping non sono sicuro che sia rankabile, visto che su inizio e fine slider ci deve essere un suono D:
01:26:069 (1,2) - *nazi* sono unsnapped di 1 (sia x che y), non so se è voluto o no, just for notice

Edit:

Leader wrote:

02:17:329 (5,1,2,3) - Dov'è il mio quadrato perfetto ;_;
Io ci sono stato 10-15 minuti a provare a farlo ma non credo sia possibile con 1.2~1.3x di DS
holyKoT
15 posts
Joined April 2014
holyKoT
Hi! From my modding queue.

[Andrea's Normal]
In one beatmap i saw hitsounding slider ticks. I think it would work here too (use normal hitsound for that), so you don't miss many beats with 2/1 beat sliders like this 00:18:274 (2).(mapping for vocal, hitsounding for music)
  1. 00:10:715 (2) - uhmm... don't like mapping here with missed beat at 00:11:187. (other places: 00:12:605 (2). 00:14:495 (2). 00:16:384 (2).) 02:12:605 (1,2,3) - here you tried not to miss them, but i think mapping for vocal here is better idea (there are other places like that)
It's my main complain about this diff, can't spot anything else besides this.
[Hard]
Second not overmapped Hard on my queue \0/.
I like that 10 degree rotate on elements that seems to be straight, it's somehow fits song mood very good (sliders are like skyscrapers and they fall and broke like feelings do (i hope you understand what i mean)). Liked that a lot!
  1. 00:04:573 (1) - fix blanket:
    middle point -> x:174 y:80
  2. 00:08:353 (1) - fix blanket:
    middle point -> x:184 y:60
    arrow point -> x:256 y:116
  3. 00:20:636 - missed beat here (actually i found many places like that, i think you can increase slider tick rate and hitsound some of those slider ticks)
  4. 00:34:573 (1,2) - if you stacked these two notes for diff increase... okay, but i don't hear anything in music/vocal for them to be placed
  5. 00:36:463 (1,2) - ^
[Insane]
  1. 00:37:172 (5,6) - fix blanket
  2. 00:51:109 (4) - missed beat
  3. 01:00:085 (4) - ^ (no vocal here; i think, you can perfectly map this another way)
I found many places like these and i will remember hitsounding slider ticks again (some places you can remap because of no vocal in them).

Actually, i liked idea of hitsounding slider ticks a lot and your map can get a lot if you use that idea.

That's all. Good luck!
Samah
423 posts
Joined May 2010
Samah
From queue:

[General]
No source?

[Andrea's Normal]
Perfect, as usual. <3

[Hard]
01:01:975 (3,4) - You could blanket this a bit nicer.
01:09:770 (1,2,3) - Maybe move (3) left a bit so that all three notes are equal distance. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1566011
01:58:904 (3,4,1) - Move (4) to fix spacing.
02:02:448 (3,4) - Same as 01:01:975 (3,4).

[Insane]
Can't pick anything.

Lovely maps. Some very memorable moments in the choruses.
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Thanks everyone for modding, I have applied only 2 new combo fixes though, the rest was made on purpose and it's my usual style when I make Normal difficulties.

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rEdo
809 posts
Joined November 2008
rEdo
As promised!
[oSuPlaYeR mIX Keyboard-Breaking]
01:07:644 (1,2,3) - 1.24x distance snap? I doubt that's intentional.
01:20:163 (1) - Overused new combo.
02:09:061 (2,3) - Same as before. Nice copypaste, by the way =w=b

[Hard]
00:52:762 (1,1,1) - Either delete these new combos, or add them on Insane for consistency. Will be mentioned further on.
01:48:983 (1,1,1) - Them new combos feel way too artificial to be there. Delete them.

[Insane]
00:52:762 (4,5,6) - Either add new combos on each slider or delete them from Hard for consistency.
00:14:967 (4,5,6) - If you reverse (4) with (5), you can see by the distance snap that (6)'s quite closer to (5) than (4). Consider moving (6) a little bit to the left.
01:35:872 (4,5) - Once again, this is a real bitch to read in comparison with the rest of the beatmap. Shape it in a similar manner like 02:01:502 (1,2,3)­.
02:12:605 (1) - Ain't directed towards (2)'s beginning how it should.


Nice, smooth.
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Thank you rEdo, fixed everything. :)

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Tags:Tainted Cherry Tree Indie Andrea osuplayer111 amv anime
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Chewin
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Topic Starter
Chewin

Leader wrote:

[General]
  1. Io toglierei Bakemonogatari dalle tags, ci sono molti altri anime usati nel video e aggiungerli tutti mi pare inutile. Limitati ad aggiungere amv, anime e ONEWAYS (autore dell'AMV) k <3
  2. Video qui yay lub u

[Hard]
  1. 00:35:991 (5) - Io sostituirei questo slider con due circles siccome seguono meglio le vocal Non vedo tanta differenza sinceramente
  2. 00:43:786 (3) - Sposterei questo circle da sotto la testa dello slider precedente, secondo me si gioca meglio se prosegue il sentiero dello slider sto usando il distance snap everywhere D: e stackandolo con la testa di quello slider è l'unica soluzione per piazzarlo in maniera decente
  3. 00:46:384 (2,3) - Qui le vocal mi suggeriscono di più uno slider oki
  4. 00:52:762 (1,1) - Trovo le curve un pochino unfitting rispetto al resto del pattern ;_; aggiustate un po'
  5. 01:00:085 (3) - Secondo me si gioca meglio, oltre a seguire più accuratamente la canzone, se riduci lo slider di 1/2 e aggiungeresti una nota sul tick bianco yep. Fatto qui e per il kiai successivo
  6. 01:18:746 (1) - Qui preferirei di gran lunga due circles e li metterei stackati allo slider, ci stanno bene! non mi piace D:
  7. 01:35:991 (2) - La curva è un po' moscia qui e lo stesso vale per 01:38:825 (1,3) - . Prova a farli senza il red point, escono meglio Aggiustata un po'. Ma le curve sono "mosce" perchè la canzone è moscia o.o sono piu flowwose e si adattano meglio alla song
  8. 01:52:762 (1,2,1,2) - Non sarebbe meglio se sostuissi 01:53:235 (2,1) - nella timeline? Secondo me si gioca molto meglio e non è troppo difficile per una Hard eh vabbe volevo cambiare ad ogni kiai il pattern del vocal. Fixed
  9. 02:17:329 (5,1,2,3) - Dov'è il mio quadrato perfetto ;_; Non avevo nemmeno intenzione di fare un quadrato sinceramente
[Insane]
  1. 00:38:825 (2) - Sostituiscilo con due circles, please. Segue molto meglio le vocal! ho mappato di proposito così xD Il ritmo qui cambia un po' per quanto riguarda il vocal e quindi ho deciso di "stranirlo" un po' il ritmo, non so come spiegarlo o.o
  2. 00:54:180 (1) - Fossi in te lo sposterei sotto l'ultimo slider del pattern precedente, sta a te però ugu? segue la stessa logica di tutti gli slider di prima
  3. 00:57:959 (1) - x:236 y:36 per un triangolo migliore con 2 e 3. siete fissatih con la precisione <3 fixed
  4. 01:08:353 (4,5) - Non è che si giochino benissimo lì in fondo.. Io metterei x:256 y:44, per esempio seguono la stessa logica di piazzamento del 01:06:699 (1,2) - (sulla testa dello slider precedente da parte della curva), e si giocano bene xD
  5. 01:38:825 (3,1,2,3) - Prova a togliere il primo circle e a spostare indietro di 1/2 tutti gli altri objects nella timeline, esce un bel pattern a mio parere, soprattutto se trasformi 01:40:006 (3) - in un 1/2 slider Non proprio.. se ci fai caso ogni combo è lunga fino al 3. Quindi non solo è consistente ma ogni combo inizia su ogni downbeat, tranne il 01:40:243 (1) - che segue la new vocal. Sta molto meglio ora IMO
  6. 02:03:628 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Ricordati di provare a cambiare questo pattern come ti dissi l'altro giorno non lo so ç_ç per ora lascio, se mi viene un'idea migliore lo farò
gl~ tyty <3

Roxas wrote:

Stranamente moddo std

[General]
Se non mi sbaglio "softsliderwhistle3.wav" dovresti rinominarlo in "soft-sliderwhistle3.wav" per far sì che venga utilizzato da osu! o.o non sono nemmeno usati. Tolto questo e quello normal lol.

[Harrrrrd]
01:30:321 (2) - Muoverei in 48|130 per fare il triangolo 1 2 3, un po' come vedi qua 01:31:502 (1,2,3) - xD sicuro di avermi copiato bene le coordinate? xD
01:58:432 (1,2,3,4) - Perché hanno 1x di distance snap? Distanziali a 1.3x come gli altri D: perchè tu sei pro e io no D: fixed

[Insane]
00:48:392 - Negli end slider come questi (che finiscono sul tick blu) sarebbe più carino non sentire il suono dell'hitnormal. Ti consiglio di mettere il sampleset soft su ogni fine slider (spero tu abbia capito come intendo, a volte mi spiego male). Se lo fai, fallo anche nell'altro kiai. E tra l'altro con la nuova regola dell'overmapping non sono sicuro che sia rankabile, visto che su inizio e fine slider ci deve essere un suono D: fighi i soft *_* fixed! ps: non me ne importa della regola. Gli slider seguono il vocal in corso da quando inizia. Quindi per me è come se ci fosse il suono.
01:26:069 (1,2) - *nazi* sono unsnapped di 1 (sia x che y), non so se è voluto o no, just for notice Ma usate la lente di ingrandimento quando moddate? ahah ty fixed. ;P


h0lyK0T wrote:

Hi! From my modding queue.
[Hard]
Second not overmapped Hard on my queue \0/.
I like that 10 degree rotate on elements that seems to be straight, it's somehow fits song mood very good (sliders are like skyscrapers and they fall and broke like feelings do (i hope you understand what i mean)). Liked that a lot!
  1. 00:04:573 (1) - fix blanket:
    middle point -> x:174 y:80
  2. 00:08:353 (1) - fix blanket:
    middle point -> x:184 y:60
    arrow point -> x:256 y:116 fixed both by myself
  3. 00:20:636 - missed beat here (actually i found many places like that, i think you can increase slider tick rate and hitsound some of those slider ticks) it's intended. They are mapped following the vocal melody
  4. 00:34:573 (1,2) - if you stacked these two notes for diff increase... okay, but i don't hear anything in music/vocal for them to be placed
  5. 00:36:463 (1,2) - ^ they are both following the vocal sound. For example the first triple is mapped following the "AAA" and so on.
[Insane]
  1. 00:37:172 (5,6) - fix blanket k. It was not supposed to be a perfect blanket but fixed.
  2. 00:51:109 (4) - missed beat
  3. 01:00:085 (4) - ^ (no vocal here; i think, you can perfectly map this another way)
I found many places like these and i will remember hitsounding slider ticks again (some places you can remap because of no vocal in them).

Actually, i liked idea of hitsounding slider ticks a lot and your map can get a lot if you use that idea.

That's all. Good luck! Thanks!

Samah wrote:

[Hard]
01:01:975 (3,4) - You could blanket this a bit nicer. fixed
01:09:770 (1,2,3) - Maybe move (3) left a bit so that all three notes are equal distance. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1566011 i don't see any problem here
01:58:904 (3,4,1) - Move (4) to fix spacing. done
02:02:448 (3,4) - Same as 01:01:975 (3,4). k

Lovely maps. Some very memorable moments in the choruses. Thanks!

rEdo wrote:

As promised!

[Hard]
00:52:762 (1,1,1) - Either delete these new combos, or add them on Insane for consistency. Will be mentioned further on.
01:48:983 (1,1,1) - Them new combos feel way too artificial to be there. Delete them. sigh they are so cool ç_ç fixed both. D:

[Insane]
00:52:762 (4,5,6) - Either add new combos on each slider or delete them from Hard for consistency.
00:14:967 (4,5,6) - If you reverse (4) with (5), you can see by the distance snap that (6)'s quite closer to (5) than (4). Consider moving (6) a little bit to the left. I decided to rotate the slider here and keeping the same spacings
01:35:872 (4,5) - Once again, this is a real bitch to read in comparison with the rest of the beatmap. Shape it in a similar manner like 02:01:502 (1,2,3)­. you mean http://puu.sh/8yGJG.jpg ? if yes fixed
02:12:605 (1) - Ain't directed towards (2)'s beginning how it should. intentional
Nice, smooth.
Thank youu <3
Lally
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Lally
star >3<
Chewin
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Topic Starter
Chewin
thanku ><
Kodora
Kodora
as requested, sorry for being a bit late

[General]

  1. According to wiki album name is Songs from the Tainted Cherry Tree, so i guess you should fix it's name on tags
  2. AIBAT reports inconsistent tags, thought i see them perfectly consistent, probably copy them manually once again for safe
  3. Consider mute normal-sliderslide since you have few sliders with normal sampleset on a Hard diff and it sounds kinda weird
  4. 02:03:628 - Put a little kiai fountain at this part probably? Since you have kiai section at the 02:11:187 - 02:18:746 - it would fit as well
[Insane]

*HP Drain 7 would suit more for your choosed difficulty level, i guess you can raise it abit

  1. 00:31:030 (1,2,3) - This stacking really feels random here. You made only one such pattern on map, and it is kinda hard to read since 00:31:030 (1) - is long 1/1 repeat - that part would case lots of combobreaks. Try something more friendly at this part, for example you can stack 00:32:211 (2) - with head of 00:30:085 (2) -
  2. 00:39:298 (1) - I don't think that this NC is really needed here
  3. 00:46:148 (3) - Soft finish on head would be really nice here (Apply in Hard diff too if you will apply it here)
  4. 01:03:156 (1,1,1,1,1) - This section become repetitively boring after 3rd stacked slider. Try to make it a bit more interesting: for example, changing SV for each slider by + 0.05/0.10 (this would be more estetical change which won't affect playability much), or you can make accent on specified parts (for example made 01:04:809 (1) - and 01:06:699 (1) - faster than others). If you will apply it here you can make same at copied part.
  5. 01:08:825 (1,2) - This stacking doesn't feels natural while playing. Unstack it please - you make something like this:

    SPOILER
  6. 01:35:872 (4,5) - Hate to point out nazi things but please move it a bit left to not make people think that this is 1/2 while playing
  7. 01:46:621 (3) - Soft finish on head would be really nice here (Apply in Hard diff too if you will apply it here)
  8. 01:52:526 (1,2,3) - nice manual stack, but i'd make it stack with head of 01:51:581 (4) - to make it looks better
  9. 02:09:297 (1,2) - Same as 01:08:825 (1,2) -
  10. 02:12:605 (1) - This short 1/4 slider makes the next one kinda hard to catch, i guess replacing with two notes would be better here
  11. 02:18:865 (1) - I don't think that whistle is really needed here, especially considering that you lowered volume to 5%at the spinnerend (Same on Hard diff)
[Hard]

*If you will raise HP Drain on Insane consider up it here too - HP5 feels kinda really low here

  1. 00:08:353 (1) - Having 1/1 slider with two repeats is usually bad idea since it may cause confusion about second one - try to replace it with 1/1 repeat + note, something like this:

    SPOILER
  2. 01:17:329 - 01:17:565 - This sudden volume change feels really strange here, check volume at this part?
  3. 01:52:054 (4,1) - This overlapping feels kinda weird and doesn't fit your previous patterns. Try make clear blanket here instead, something like this:

    SPOILER
[Andrea's Normal]

*HP2 is really low, even considering that this is easiest diff in mapset. Up it a bit please

  1. 00:44:258 - 00:47:565 - A 1/2 drum rhythm doesn't works here - following lyrics usually works more intuitive for newcomers. Try something like this instead to make this part more intuitive:

    SPOILER
  2. 00:57:487 (4) - Replacing this slider with 2 notes would made incoming 1/2 notes easier to catch
  3. 01:44:730 - 01:48:038 - Same as at 00:44:258 - 00:47:565
  4. 01:57:959 (4) - Replacing this slider with 2 notes would made incoming 1/2 notes easier to catch
  5. 02:18:983 (1) - Same as in other diffs
Good & clean map, just a few suggestions :3
Best of luck with rank!
Kazuya
894 posts
Joined May 2013
Kazuya
Hello. Random boring/bad mod. My english = zero / creepy. ^-^;

It's only ideas!

[Normal]
AR: +1

00:07:408 (3,4) - delete and put 1/2 slider here: 00:07:408 - ? timeline img: http://puu.sh/8AF9P.jpg

[hard]

00:08:353 (1) - remove repeat delete 00:10:006 (4) - circle and put circle here: 00:09:061 - and put 1/2 slider here: 00:09:298 - 00:09:770 - ? timeline: http://puu.sh/8AFw8.jpg

00:32:802 (2) - delete circle. Unnecessary .
00:34:691 (2) - ^
00:36:581 (2) - ^
00:51:699 (6) - ^
00:55:361 (4,5) - delete circles and move: 00:55:597 (4) - slider here: 00:55:361 - and change slider end here: 00:55:833 ? timeline: http://puu.sh/8AFQZ.jpg
01:33:274 (2) - Unnecessary.
01:37:054 (2) - ^
01:40:833 (2) - ^
01:42:369 (5) - delete and put circle here: 01:42:369 - and move 01:42:841 (1) - slider here: 01:42:605 - and put circle here: 01:43:313 - ? timeline: http://puu.sh/8AG6K.jpg
01:55:833 (5) - change lider end here (1/1 slider): 01:56:306 - It's better.

[Insane]

HP: +1

00:30:794 (3,1) - delete and put 1/2 sliders here: 00:30:794 - 00:31:266 - and put circle here: 00:31:739 - ? timeline: http://puu.sh/8AGEM.jpg
00:32:802 (2) - delete. unnecessary.
00:34:691 (2) - ^
00:36:581 (2) - ^
00:40:361 (2) - ^
00:46:030 (2) - ^
00:52:172 (2) - ^
00:55:479 (2) - ^
.....
Okay. All triplet: Unnecessary, ... overmap. :| (It's in my opinion ^-^;) *hides*

01:08:825 (1) - change slider end here: 01:09:180 - ?
01:10:243 (4) - slider end here: 01:10:597 and put circle here:01:10:715 - ?
01:35:872 (4,5) - it's weird. delete and put circle here: 01:35:991 - ?
02:09:297 (1) - slider end here: 02:09:652 - ?
02:11:187 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - ??? Idea: (timeline): http://puu.sh/8AHxi.jpg
02:16:857 (1) - slider end here: 02:17:211 - ?

Good Luck.
Chewin
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Topic Starter
Chewin
I didn't fix that much but thank you for the mods Kodora and Kazuya!
Waiting for Andrea -w-
Andrea
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Andrea
Thanks for checking Kodora and Kazuya-sama, applied everything from your mods. :3

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 47802
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
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Title:The Boy Who Murdered Love
TitleUnicode:The Boy Who Murdered Love
Artist:Diana Vickers
ArtistUnicode:Diana Vickers
Creator:Chewin
Version:Andrea's Normal
Source:
Tags:ONEWAYS Songs from the Tainted Cherry Tree Indie Andrea osuplayer111 amv anime
BeatmapID:414132
BeatmapSetID:170775

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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
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36,280,44731,2,0,B|156:280|156:280|260:344,1,240,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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372,328,50636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,328,50872,6,0,B|432:328|432:328|484:296,2,120,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,240,52290,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,80,54652,2,0,P|284:80|336:48,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,52,55597,5,0,0:0:0:0:
416,180,56069,2,0,L|360:292,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,188,57014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
149,287,57487,2,0,L|96:180,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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64,116,58432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,40,58904,6,0,P|256:40|300:68,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,192,59849,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,317,60321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,317,60558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,317,60794,2,0,P|247:346|188:344,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,344,61739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,220,62211,2,0,B|116:160|116:160|144:108,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,16,63156,5,4,0:0:0:0:
368,108,63628,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,108,63865,2,0,P|368:192|320:272,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,304,64809,2,0,B|172:304|172:352|84:352,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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320,28,67644,6,0,B|384:28|384:28|436:52|464:112,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,180,68589,1,0,0:0:0:0:
504,252,68825,2,0,P|444:252|396:284,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,324,69770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,284,70243,2,0,P|67:251|8:252,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,128,78274,5,4,0:0:0:0:
128,36,78746,2,0,B|200:36|200:36|280:72|280:72|360:72,1,240,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
440,192,80163,5,0,0:0:0:0:
360,312,80636,2,0,B|280:312|280:312|200:348|200:348|128:348,1,240,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
24,248,82053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,116,82526,6,0,P|204:116|300:48,1,240,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
444,48,83943,1,0,0:0:0:0:
492,184,84415,2,0,L|424:288,1,120,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,220,85360,2,0,L|228:324,1,120,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,348,86305,6,0,B|88:228|88:228|152:120,1,240,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,28,87722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
363,125,88195,2,0,B|424:228|424:228|424:348,1,240,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
280,352,89612,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,352,90085,6,0,P|57:281|136:204,1,240,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,91502,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,60,91974,2,0,P|444:60|492:92,1,120,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,236,92919,1,0,1:0:0:0:
372,324,93392,5,4,0:0:0:0:
260,236,93864,2,0,P|140:236|64:320,2,240,0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
372,324,96226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,236,96699,6,0,B|488:176|488:176|452:128,1,120,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,28,97644,2,0,P|228:28|144:108,1,240,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
60,220,99061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,332,99533,2,0,P|208:332|252:296,1,120,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,196,100478,6,0,P|402:159|461:160,1,120,0|4,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,56,101424,2,0,B|280:56|280:56|232:104|128:104,1,240,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
12,192,102841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,280,103313,2,0,B|232:280|280:328|280:328|356:328,1,240,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
476,248,104730,5,4,0:0:0:0:
476,104,105203,2,0,B|356:104|356:104|252:40,1,240,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
108,40,106620,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,156,107093,2,0,L|96:256,1,120,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,364,108037,1,0,1:0:0:0:
328,364,108510,6,0,P|384:364|436:328,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,192,109455,2,0,P|424:192|372:228,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,144,110400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,56,110872,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,56,111108,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,56,111345,6,0,B|80:56|80:56|28:88,2,120,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,144,112762,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,56,113235,2,0,B|432:56|432:56|484:88,2,120,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,200,114652,2,0,L|336:248,1,60,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,304,115124,2,0,P|228:304|176:336,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,332,116069,5,0,0:0:0:0:
96,204,116541,2,0,L|152:92,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,196,117486,1,0,0:0:0:0:
363,97,117959,2,0,L|416:204,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,268,118667,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,268,118904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,344,119376,6,0,P|256:344|212:316,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,192,120321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,67,120793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,67,121030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,67,121266,2,0,P|265:38|324:40,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,40,122211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,164,122683,2,0,B|396:224|396:224|368:276,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,368,123628,5,4,0:0:0:0:
144,276,124100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,276,124337,2,0,P|144:192|192:112,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,125282,2,0,B|340:80|340:32|428:32,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,76,126226,2,0,P|512:160|484:244,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,288,127171,2,0,B|344:288|344:288|256:332,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,356,128116,6,0,B|128:356|128:356|76:332|48:272,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,204,129061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,132,129297,2,0,P|68:132|116:100,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,60,130242,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,100,130715,6,0,P|445:133|504:132,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,268,131660,2,0,P|411:235|352:236,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,344,132605,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,344,132841,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,344,133077,2,0,P|196:345|147:312,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,192,134022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
147,71,134495,5,0,0:0:0:0:
147,71,134731,1,4,0:0:0:0:
147,71,134967,2,0,P|196:38|256:40,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,44,135912,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,168,136384,6,0,L|440:220,1,60,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,236,136857,2,0,L|308:344,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,364,137802,2,0,L|232:256,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,136,138746,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,138983,12,2,142526,0:0:0:0:
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