Wiklund - Makeshift Clone · forum

AdRon Zh3Ro

Joined August 2009

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AdRon Zh3Ro 2009-11-29T19:35:58+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on quarta-feira, 3 de fevereiro de 2010 at 15:29:41

Artist: Wiklund
Title: Makeshift Clone
Source: Game Boy
BPM: 90
Filesize: 4140kb
Play Time: 01:49
Difficulties Available:

HARDCORE (4,89 stars, 451 notes)
Softcore (4,28 stars, 95 notes)

Download: Wiklund - Makeshift Clone
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My second beatmap and my best so far. Enjoy...

Last edited by AdRon Zh3Ro 2010-02-03T17:29:56+00:00, edited 18 times in total.

Dusty

870 posts

Joined June 2009

Dusty 2009-12-19T16:25:07+00:00

[General]
Too much of the beatmap is in a straight line or a box pattern. Don't do that. Put some curved sliders and different shapes into the beatmap.

[Softcore]
00:23:018 (1) - Spinner is terrible. It appears at the same time as the following note.
00:39:085 (4) - Goes offscreen.
00:41:085 (3,4) - Sliders with overlapped starts and ends are not fun.
00:45:051 (5,6) - Sliders that completely overlap other sliders are terrible.
00:49:051 (5) - Did you have to put this note there?
00:55:051 (4,5) - Did you have to put these notes here?

[Hardcore]
What's going on here? The distance snap needs to be increased.

AdRon Zh3Ro

900 posts

Joined August 2009

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AdRon Zh3Ro 2010-01-05T20:55:45+00:00

I improved it, thanks the help

Tchumi

2 posts

Joined August 2009

Tchumi 2010-01-05T23:37:24+00:00

Nice

Last edited by Tchumi 2010-03-20T12:20:40+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

AdRon Zh3Ro

900 posts

Joined August 2009

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AdRon Zh3Ro 2010-01-05T23:41:44+00:00

Thanks

Niva

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Joined November 2009

Niva 2010-01-10T04:39:27+00:00

Here's my advice:

-SOFTCORE-
[00:32:184] - I think it would be better if this slider placed right at the top of the next slider. Move it a little bit upper.
[00:37:184] - Truly, this slider seems confusing to look... Move this slider to where the black circle no.4 originally was.
[00:50:518] - This circle no.7 is better if moved little bit to the right, above the slider's end.

-HARDCORE-
[00:39:851] - I think the clap is unnecessary.
[01:43:934] - Why'd this 6th circle is sparser than the others?
[01:47:768] - The gap between the 4th circle and the 5th circle is too long... It will be too hard to play. Checked this and it seems unnecessary. Truly, ignore this advice.

Well, since this beatmap is still in progress, I would like to say, keep up the good work!

dayuki

28 posts

Joined May 2009

dayuki 2010-02-04T19:38:28+00:00

very hard, but so nice!! star☆

Sonic Fumes

228 posts

Joined November 2009

Sonic Fumes 2010-07-13T06:33:23+00:00

nice map

Metroid

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