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Avril Lavigne - Hello Kitty

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Irreversible
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Samstag, 24. Mai 2014 at 02:15:44

Artist: Avril Lavigne
Title: Hello Kitty
Tags: techno dubstep kyshiro gero cats collab collaboration kawaii
BPM: 128
Filesize: 18595kb
Play Time: 03:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. Geroversible's Insane (4.95 stars, 531 notes)
  2. Hard (4.8 stars, 431 notes)
  3. Kyshiro's Normal (3.06 stars, 194 notes)
Download: Avril Lavigne - Hello Kitty
Download: Avril Lavigne - Hello Kitty (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Normal - Kyshiro 100%
Hard - Irreversible 100%
Insane - Gero + Irreversible 100%
Thanks Gero for the hitsounds and the video.
Redownload as of 20.05.2014, added collab names and a new bg!
Mao
FIRST ASVDASFGADSTGAS

Wow, Avril Lavigne *-* Nehmen sie meinen funkelnden Stern!
Myxo
<33 I luv Avril Lavigne
Good job Guter Beruf Irre Knuffel :3
Topic Starter
Irreversible
<3
Avena
You even took my background
THIS IS WAR
ColdTooth
Not so fast, I declare war on Irre to map this by myself

jk
Myxo
Star'ed now
Gero

Priti wrote:

You even took my background
THIS IS WAR
Indeed this is SPARTA!! xD
Mao
Nach einem ausgiebigen Testspiel muss ich sagen, dass der Spielfluss der Schwierigkeit "Geroversible" sehr gelungen ist. Ein weiteres Element was mir sehr gefällt ist der Treffer-Klang! Wirklich eine außerordentlich gute Schwierigkeit, die ihre Kompetenzen im Bereich "Kartening" wiederspiegelt.
Kyouren

Priti wrote:

You even took my background
THIS IS WAR
PRITI VS. IRREVERSIBLE
WHO IS WIN?

LOL! :P
Mao

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Priti wrote:

You even took my background
THIS IS WAR
PRITI VS. IRREVERSIBLE
WHO IS WIN?

LOL! :P
Hail Irre
Pappy
2nd time you stolen me song to map ;____;

Kk i wanted to give you a star but i haven't got now ;_; Sorry ;c
Gero
Irre don't stop the party and rank this! :<
TicClick
hi hi Irre Irre
Secretpipe

Gero wrote:

Priti wrote:

You even took my background
THIS IS WAR
Indeed this is SPARTA!! xD

Let's see who will rank first ;)
Also I'll mod but it's actually a secret /slap
Kazuya
Üdvez \o

My english is very creepy. ;_;

[Normal]

00:56:873 (3) - Position & Slider shape: http://puu.sh/8Qjb8.jpg ?
01:15:154 (3,4) - delete, and put 1/2 repeat slider here 01:15:154 : timeline: http://puu.sh/8Qjnj.png ?
02:13:983 (1,2,3) - It's better: http://puu.sh/8QjBm.jpg (timeline). Two 1/2 repeat slider
02:16:561 (2) - delete and move 02:17:029 (3) - slider here: 02:16:561 -. Put circle here: 02:17:498 - ? timeline: http://puu.sh/8QjIU.png
02:39:998 (4) - delete and move 02:40:467 (5) - slider here: 02:39:998 - and put circle here: 02:40:936 - ? timeline: http://puu.sh/8QjSj.png
^^^^ or
02:40:936 - put 1/1 slider here, and circle here: 02:41:639 - ? timeline: http://puu.sh/8QjWA.jpg

[Hard]

00:04:373 - to 00:08:123 - Please, map the parts.
00:25:701 (2) - remove repeat slider, and put 1/2 slider here. timeline: http://puu.sh/8Qk9K.jpg

00:29:217 (2) - delete circle, and put 1/2 slider here: 00:28:983 - http://puu.sh/8QkeT.jpg
00:32:498 (1,2,3,4) - delete circles, and put 1/4 sliders here: 00:32:498 - & 00:32:733 - and circle here: 00:32:967 - ? http://puu.sh/8QklW.png
00:34:608 (1) - delete circle, and put 1/2 slider here: 00:34:373 - ? http://puu.sh/8Qkvv.png
or
put circle here: 00:34:373 - ? http://puu.sh/8Qku1.jpg
00:35:779 (4) - delete slider, put circles here: 00:35:779 - ? 00:36:014 - ?

00:56:873 (1,2,1,2) - -___- (pattern)

Ehh... 01:12:108 (2) - move circle here: x: 108 y: 204 ?
02:05:662 (3) - delete circle ?
02:10:233 - put circle here.?

[Insane]

00:04:373 - to 00:08:123 - Please, map the parts.

00:25:467 (3) - delete slider and put circles here: 00:25:467 - 00:25:584 - and 1/2 slider here: 00:25:701 - ? timeline: http://puu.sh/8QldC.png
00:28:045 (2) - delete slider, and move 00:27:576 (1) - slider here: 00:27:811 - and add once repeat. put circle here: 00:27:576 - ? timeline: http://puu.sh/8Qlly.png
00:33:319 - Missing circle (?)
00:33:904 (2) - move slider here: 00:33:787 - and put circle here: 00:34:139 - ? timeline: http://puu.sh/8QlrN.jpg
01:01:561 (1,2) - Baah "Jump slider stream". 01:01:795 (2) - & 01:02:029 (3) - = Too far. >_>
01:58:748 (1,1,1,1) - >_> I hate! 02:00:154 (1) - CTRL+G! Pls ~

Good Luck.
Kyshiro
IM BEING FORCED TO MOD THIS OR ELSE I WILL BE EXECUTED please help me

General
  1. Check AImod and AIbat, there are unsnapped circles and there's inconsistency in the kiai times
Geroversible's Insane
  1. 00:10:467 (3,4,5,6) - looks a bit odd cause of the distance between objects, move 4,5,6 slightly more right and up (not too much, mind the autostack of 4,5)
  2. 00:26:170 (1) - This NC seems rather random to me
  3. 00:27:576 (1) - ^
  4. 00:30:154 (1) - ^ kshro the nc modder
  5. 00:30:389 (6) - Stack this on 00:29:686 (3) - maybe, also increase the spacing from that to the next slider if you do
  6. 00:32:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/8QjJD.jpg blanket pls
  7. 00:44:920 (1) - remove NC
  8. 00:54:412 (1) - ^ I really don't see the point lol
  9. 00:59:451 (2,3,4) - CTRL+G this, more comfortable and fun to play
  10. 01:06:248 (1,4) - blankettttttttttt
  11. 01:06:834 (2,3) - I'd like to see these unstacked from the slider end, just my opinion though, http://puu.sh/8Qk2g.jpg
  12. 01:11:873 (5) - NC
  13. 01:12:576 (7,8,9) - CTRL+G maybe? still a simple jump considering the low BPM
  14. 01:14:217 (1,1,1,1,1) - PILIPALA aAaAaAaAaAaAaaaaaA i don't even.
  15. 01:22:654 (4,5) - CTRL+G both at the same time actually plays rather awesome (fits the vocals better too if that's what you were trying to achieve here)
  16. 01:38:240 (1) - instead of this spinner i can imagine an awesome 3/4 slidersection here, first slowing then down gradually, then halfway in speeding them up again, since the vocals volume gets lower and higher here
  17. 01:51:717 (1,2,1) - Spacing should be equal here imo
  18. 01:51:717 (1,1,1) - Still don't get it
  19. 01:53:592 (1) - ^
  20. 01:57:811 (1,1,1) - I'll stop pointing these out now I get the feeling you will deny all of them anyway, I don't see how they fit however, if you decide to fix them I'm sure you can find the rest of them throughout the mapset too
  21. 02:09:998 (2) - Now this is something that actually does feel good to have an NC at cause of the sudden 1/3
  22. 02:27:811 (1) - Instead of a spinner I'd put a stream here, or continue with the 1/4 sliders
  23. 02:30:858 (1,2,3) - Kind of tricky, might be missread as continuous 1/4, I'd suggest you to use more spacing
Hard
  1. 00:11:873 (1,2,3,4) - Make better blankets pls :c
  2. 00:25:701 (2) - yay for overmapping in hard diffs, 1/2 pls
  3. 00:34:373 - It feels so wrong to skip this beat, would require some moving to get that to work though
  4. 00:38:123 (1,2,1) - Make the stacks better
  5. 01:06:248 (1) - WUB
  6. 01:09:998 (1,2,3) - Would be better to make this 1.4 spacing like the notes after this
  7. 01:23:123 (1,1) - PILIPALA doesn't fit here
  8. 01:24:295 (1) - I'd consider this unrankable for a hard diff because the slidertrack is almost invisible, move it slightly to the left or right to fix
  9. 01:27:811 (1,1) - This overlap pls
  10. 01:34:373 (5,6) - ARE YOU LOOKING FOR A FIGHT?!?!?!no srs l2 blanket :c
  11. 02:23:123 (1,1,1,1) - someone's been a lazy mapper
Kyshiro's Normal
  1. This is the worst shit i have ever seen, delete this crap ok thanks bye
star because y0l0sw3g rank pls
Kyshiro
DOUBLEPOST

Kazuya-sama wrote:

Üdvez \o

My english is very creepy. ;_;

[Normal]

00:56:873 (3) - Position & Slider shape: http://puu.sh/8Qjb8.jpg ? I think it plays and looks better the way it is
01:15:154 (3,4) - delete, and put 1/2 repeat slider here 01:15:154 : timeline: http://puu.sh/8Qjnj.png ? There's no sound at the 1/2 here, makes no sense to map to it
02:13:983 (1,2,3) - It's better: http://puu.sh/8QjBm.jpg (timeline). Two 1/2 repeat slider I honestly think this is fine lol
02:16:561 (2) - delete and move 02:17:029 (3) - slider here: 02:16:561 -. Put circle here: 02:17:498 - ? timeline: http://puu.sh/8QjIU.png Yeah that's better
02:39:998 (4) - delete and move 02:40:467 (5) - slider here: 02:39:998 - and put circle here: 02:40:936 - ? timeline: http://puu.sh/8QjSj.png Fine the way it is
^^^^ or
02:40:936 - put 1/1 slider here, and circle here: 02:41:639 - ? timeline: http://puu.sh/8QjWA.jpg Also fine the way it is
Thanks

http://puu.sh/8QmWJ.txt
Topic Starter
Irreversible
Kazuya-Sama

Kazuya-sama wrote:

Üdvez \o

My english is very creepy. ;_;

[Hard]

00:04:373 - to 00:08:123 - Please, map the parts.
00:25:701 (2) - remove repeat slider, and put 1/2 slider here. timeline: http://puu.sh/8Qk9K.jpg Done.

00:29:217 (2) - delete circle, and put 1/2 slider here: 00:28:983 - http://puu.sh/8QkeT.jpg Not agreeing with this one, I like the effect created here.
00:32:498 (1,2,3,4) - delete circles, and put 1/4 sliders here: 00:32:498 - & 00:32:733 - and circle here: 00:32:967 - ? http://puu.sh/8QklW.png I think it's fine as it is..
00:34:608 (1) - delete circle, and put 1/2 slider here: 00:34:373 - ? http://puu.sh/8Qkvv.png fixed
or
put circle here: 00:34:373 - ? http://puu.sh/8Qku1.jpg
00:35:779 (4) - delete slider, put circles here: 00:35:779 - ? 00:36:014 - ?

00:56:873 (1,2,1,2) - -___- (pattern)

Ehh... 01:12:108 (2) - move circle here: x: 108 y: 204 ? remade the part a bit
02:05:662 (3) - delete circle ? no, it fits since it's in the song.
02:10:233 - put circle here.? I'll fix this differently since the 1/3 feels shit ;w;

[Insane]

00:04:373 - to 00:08:123 - Please, map the parts.

00:25:467 (3) - delete slider and put circles here: 00:25:467 - 00:25:584 - and 1/2 slider here: 00:25:701 - ? timeline: http://puu.sh/8QldC.png Fixed
00:28:045 (2) - delete slider, and move 00:27:576 (1) - slider here: 00:27:811 - and add once repeat. put circle here: 00:27:576 - ? timeline: http://puu.sh/8Qlly.png I don't quite understand thsi one, but I follow the strong vocal here, so it should be fine.
00:33:319 - Missing circle (?) Don't think so.
00:33:904 (2) - move slider here: 00:33:787 - and put circle here: 00:34:139 - ? timeline: http://puu.sh/8QlrN.jpg Gero
01:01:561 (1,2) - Baah "Jump slider stream". 01:01:795 (2) - & 01:02:029 (3) - = Too far. >_> yeah, fixed
01:58:748 (1,1,1,1) - >_> I hate! 02:00:154 (1) - CTRL+G! Pls ~ Ok.

Good Luck.
Thanks a lot!

Kyshiro

Kyshiro wrote:

IM BEING FORCED TO MOD THIS OR ELSE I WILL BE EXECUTED please help me

General
  1. Check AImod and AIbat, there are unsnapped circles and there's inconsistency in the kiai times
Geroversible's Insane
  1. 00:10:467 (3,4,5,6) - looks a bit odd cause of the distance between objects, move 4,5,6 slightly more right and up (not too much, mind the autostack of 4,5) pls don't kill my mapper Spirit (fixed)
  2. 00:26:170 (1) - This NC seems rather random to me orz you're right
  3. 00:27:576 (1) - ^
  4. 00:30:154 (1) - ^ kshro the nc modder ok ok
  5. 00:30:389 (6) - Stack this on 00:29:686 (3) - maybe, also increase the spacing from that to the next slider if you do fixed differently
  6. 00:32:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/8QjJD.jpg blanket pls gero
  7. 00:44:920 (1) - remove NC ..kawaii? fixed
  8. 00:54:412 (1) - ^ I really don't see the point lol well, it has one, if you listen to the bg .. I think the beat is quite strong but lol. Removed [/b[
  9. 00:59:451 (2,3,4) - CTRL+G this, more comfortable and fun to play [b]interesting. Applied
  10. 01:06:248 (1,4) – blankettttttttttt gero
  11. 01:06:834 (2,3) - I'd like to see these unstacked from the slider end, just my opinion though, http://puu.sh/8Qk2g.jpg gero
  12. 01:11:873 (5) – NC XD, applied
  13. 01:12:576 (7,8,9) - CTRL+G maybe? still a simple jump considering the low BPM I’ll try it for now , might remove later
  14. 01:14:217 (1,1,1,1,1) - PILIPALA aAaAaAaAaAaAaaaaaA i don't even. Well I actually like that one >< it fits the mood very well.
  15. 01:22:654 (4,5) - CTRL+G both at the same time actually plays rather awesome (fits the vocals better too if that's what you were trying to achieve here) gero
  16. 01:38:240 (1) - instead of this spinner i can imagine an awesome 3/4 slidersection here, first slowing then down gradually, then halfway in speeding them up again, since the vocals volume gets lower and higher here gero
  17. 01:51:717 (1,2,1) - Spacing should be equal here imo
  18. 01:51:717 (1,1,1) - Still don't get it
  19. 01:53:592 (1) - ^
  20. 01:57:811 (1,1,1) - I'll stop pointing these out now I get the feeling you will deny all of them anyway, I don't see how they fit however, if you decide to fix them I'm sure you can find the rest of them throughout the mapset too
  21. 02:09:998 (2) - Now this is something that actually does feel good to have an NC at cause of the sudden 1/3 [b]that part plays awful anyway, I think I’ll replace it
  22. 02:27:811 (1) - Instead of a spinner I'd put a stream here, or continue with the 1/4 sliders // will think about it
  23. 02:30:858 (1,2,3) - Kind of tricky, might be missread as continuous 1/4, I'd suggest you to use more spacing gero
[/Quote]
replied to the rest irc, fixed everything except something, but I have Problems answering in the Forum since it's so laggy. -_-

thanks for the mod, was useful! :)

Thanks a lot guys!
Myxo


Mod by Request :3

General
  1. 01:51:600 - Turning the kiai off here seems pretty unnecessary to me and it's not consistent throughout the diffs ;w; I'd just remove it.
  2. Widescreen Support is only needed for Storyboards.

Kyshiro's Normal
  1. 00:34:373 (5) - Add an NC here, since the combo is very long currently? It'd help the newbies to fill up their HP :)
  2. 01:29:686 (2,3) - Is that spacing intentional? If it's used to emphasize "Kitty Kitty" it doesn't really fit, because it is not used at other similar places in the music.
  3. 02:00:623 (6) - If you NC 03:00:623 (1), you can also NC this, it will help the newbies again :)
  4. 02:13:983 (1,2) - Very minor, but wouldn't the following rhythm make more sense according to the lyrics? ;w;
  5. 02:33:436 (5) - You could easily improve the transition to the next object by changing this slider, something like this:
  6. 02:51:248 (3) - In my opinion the flow could be improved here. The transition to the next object would be better if you either curve this slider the other way around (Example 1) or if you let it "point" more into the direction of the next object (Example 2).
  7. Awesome! ^^

Hard
  1. 01:35:779 (3) - You could make this slider point more upwards, like in my example, to improve the flow? ;w;
  2. 02:46:326 (2) - Very noticable spacing difference to the previous and following object. Maybe you could move it a bit?
  3. Perfect Hard :) If I'd list more, it would all be super-nazi o: Also, damn, this is more jumpy than most of my Insanes lol

Geroversible's Insane
  1. 00:15:154 (4,5,1) - This plays pretty weird. First of all, I'd recommend you to use equal spacing here, since it feels strange to slow down. And secondly, I think the flow doesn't fit to the shape of 00:15:623 (1) very well. So I suggest something like this:
  2. 00:15:623 (1,2,3) - I think the linear transition doesn't really play well. The sliders don't make this movement intuitive. I'd suggest something like this:
  3. 00:16:912 (4,5,1) - I don't like how this transition plays either. A linear speed-up isn't really intuitive in m opinion. I suggest to align these two 00:16:912 (4,5) so the movement gets better.
  4. 01:02:029 (3,4,1) - I see no reason why there shouldn't be equal spacing here. It would play better, since it wouldn't be needed to slow down.
  5. 01:07:186 (4) - After the straight slider, the movement to 01:07:654 (1) doesn't feel intuitive for me. Maybe you could turn it into a curved slider, blanketing 01:06:248 (1) ?
  6. 01:44:686 (2) - Turning this into a curved slider (like in my example) would improve the flow 01:44:217 (2,1,2) here imo. Also, it would improve the aesthetics of 01:44:686 (2,1) this ;w; Because, as I learned from you (Irre), two straight sliders places like this don't look good :bb
  7. Well, I like it very much! I think your styles don't really fit together, since Irre's parts are significantly harder in my opinion, which makes the diff kind of inconsistent. But oh well, it's a collab, so it's fine o:

Lovely mapset o: Very creative Insane ^-^ I should give you 1 more star!

Good luck :3
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