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when i play this map i feel like i play DJPop'map but i like your map
moe moe
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moe moe
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Topic Starter
Heh, pending now.
too...tooo MOE !!!!!
Mod Infos:
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Start Suggestions:
All seems ok.
[Ysae]
01:23:081 (1) - I don't like this slider.
[Drah]
01:40:583 (x) - Add a break
01:53:465 (x) - ^
[Enasni]
00:32:011 (9) - New combo
00:32:081 (17) - ^
00:33:052 (25) - ^
00:34:027 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - lol are these spinners necessary?
01:29:099 (9) - New combo
01:32:028 (5) - ^
01:35:028 (7) - ^
01:40:494 (x) - Add a break
01:43:058 (5) - New combo
01:46:058 (7) - ^
[DJWho]
OH GOD I LOVE IT LOL
Some jumps are evil, but it's ok
Starred~
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Start Suggestions:
All seems ok.
[Ysae]
01:23:081 (1) - I don't like this slider.
[Drah]
01:40:583 (x) - Add a break
01:53:465 (x) - ^
[Enasni]
00:32:011 (9) - New combo
00:32:081 (17) - ^
00:33:052 (25) - ^
00:34:027 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - lol are these spinners necessary?
01:29:099 (9) - New combo
01:32:028 (5) - ^
01:35:028 (7) - ^
01:40:494 (x) - Add a break
01:43:058 (5) - New combo
01:46:058 (7) - ^
[DJWho]
OH GOD I LOVE IT LOL
Some jumps are evil, but it's ok
Starred~
Topic Starter
Ah w/e, stuff isn't working at the moment so going back to pending >_>
If you want to keep it going to rank, you MUST fix the advices written out below. There's full of hidden sliders, spacing issues and other stuff (mostly in "DJWho?"). I know - in DJPop's Marisa those things exists too, but it was mapped a long time ago, when mapping skills weren't as good as now. Now this stuff is unrankable, so follow the issues.
- Why the offset is different in [DJWho?] compared to another difficulties?
- The background isn't in good quality. Find another one if it's possible
- Why the offset is different in [DJWho?] compared to another difficulties?
- The background isn't in good quality. Find another one if it's possible
- [DJWho?]
00:07:076 (1,2) - Spacing.
00:09:017 (1,2) - ^
00:10:023 (1,2,3,5) - This part is also weird, but don't really know what to do with it.
00:20:047 (2) - This part is full of spacing issues and hidden sliders. Follow the screenshots.
1.2.3.4.00:25:006 (11,12,13) - 1/8 forward.
00:35:012 (4) - New combo.
00:56:012 (7) - Hidden slider.
00:56:012 (7,8) - Spacing.
00:59:065 (5) - New combo.
01:01:006 (9) - ^
01:03:070 (8,1) - Spacing.
01:08:012 (3,4) - ^
01:12:009 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing (what the heck is it?
).
01:13:076 (4,5) - Spacing.
01:16:076 (1,2) - ^
01:19:041 (4) - New combo.
01:19:041 (4,5) - Spacing.
01:31:059 (4,5) - ^
01:33:035 (3,1) - ^
01:33:088 (2,3) - ^
01:34:023 (3,4,5) - ^
01:42:070 (3,4,5) - ^
01:44:065 (3,1) - ^
01:45:053 (3,4,5) - ^
01:50:012 (5) - New combo.
01:51:044 (7) - ^
Sorry for destroying the "quintessence" of Marisa, but it's necessary. There might be more, but I've written out the worst of them.
- [Enasni]
This difficulty is 500% better than previous.
[00:02:465] [00:11:642] - What's the deal with these uninherited sections?
00:34:027 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - These spinners are unrankable. +2000 auto rule.
01:08:081 (4,5) - Spacing
01:17:064 (4,5) - ^
01:19:040 (4) - New combo.
01:20:011 (5,6) - Spacing.
01:25:058 (6,7) - ^
I LOVE the streams at this difficulty.
- [Ysae]
[00:22:936 - 00:30:700] - This part sounds really bad. Map it in 1/1.
01:23:081 (1) - Start this slider here 01:25:053, end here 01:28:936.
01:40:023 (4,1) - I think this jumps aren't needed in an Easy difficulty
- Ysae:
EDIT2: ooooh another thing. Remove letterboxes from breaks. Video is cut off and not cool D:
- .Opinions:
Nothing to say ^^
- .Opinions:
Same, this one is good too ^^
- .Opinions:
From 01:07:936 to 01:30:700 - did you really had to copy DJpop's? D:
.Suggestions:
00:31:040 (1) - This stack. See it in Test mode and you'll understand. I don't think you made it that way intentionally.
01:39:087 (7,8,9) - Very weird imho
- .Opinions:
OhMahGawd this difficulty is too hilarious xD
I can't mod this, that weird spacing has a great purpose xD
EDIT2: ooooh another thing. Remove letterboxes from breaks. Video is cut off and not cool D:
Topic Starter
Some mods applied. Also changed BG and vid.
Ysae
00:28:058 (1) - finish here
00:59:064 (1) - ^
01:02:011 (8) - clap here
01:32:046 (2,4) - switch whistles with claps
01:35:028 (2,4) - ^
01:43:075 (2,4) - ^
01:46:058 (2,4) - ^
Drah
00:13:075 (5) - end it with finish or whistle
00:16:058 (5) - ^
00:19:040 (5) - ^
00:50:011 (6,7) - start one of these sliders with clap
01:32:046 (2,4) - switch whistles with claps
01:35:028 (2,4) - ^
01:39:017 (5) - ...new combo?
01:43:075 (2,4) - again, claps instead of whistles
01:46:058 (2,4) - ^
01:50:046 (5) - new combo
Enasni
00:05:028 (1,1,1) - remove the claps on the 2nd repeat on each of those sliders
01:03:070 - new beat on the center of the screen
01:05:011 (2) - ^
01:06:052 (2) - ^
01:40:040 (9,1) - maybe add a break between these beat and slider...
DJWho? (wrong... correct is ?ohWJD x3)
01:12:017 (2) - move this beat 1-2 squares down and 1-2 squares left...
!Rats a rof emit s'ti
00:28:058 (1) - finish here
00:59:064 (1) - ^
01:02:011 (8) - clap here
01:32:046 (2,4) - switch whistles with claps
01:35:028 (2,4) - ^
01:43:075 (2,4) - ^
01:46:058 (2,4) - ^
Drah
00:13:075 (5) - end it with finish or whistle
00:16:058 (5) - ^
00:19:040 (5) - ^
00:50:011 (6,7) - start one of these sliders with clap
01:32:046 (2,4) - switch whistles with claps
01:35:028 (2,4) - ^
01:39:017 (5) - ...new combo?
01:43:075 (2,4) - again, claps instead of whistles
01:46:058 (2,4) - ^
01:50:046 (5) - new combo
Enasni
00:05:028 (1,1,1) - remove the claps on the 2nd repeat on each of those sliders
01:03:070 - new beat on the center of the screen
01:05:011 (2) - ^
01:06:052 (2) - ^
01:40:040 (9,1) - maybe add a break between these beat and slider...
DJWho? (wrong... correct is ?ohWJD x3)
01:12:017 (2) - move this beat 1-2 squares down and 1-2 squares left...
!Rats a rof emit s'ti
[General]
Consider using custom combo colours.
Remove lead-in time where it isn't necessary.
Rarely Stacked is unrankable, please fix.
Remove the first timing section on the diffs where it's not mapped.
[Ysae]
00:20:011 (1,1,2) - Sudden change in spacing.
[Drah]
It's okay, but I'm not sure if it'll be okay for players who haven't played the original Marisa yet, since I see a lot of patterns from there (that aren't so great now).
[Ensani]
00:34:027 (1) - I don't think spinner spam is rankable anymore.
01:08:011 (3,4,5) - If you don't know the song, this change in spacing is brutal.
01:18:070 (1,2,3,4) - This one spacing has so many timings, lol. Very dependant on knowledge of the song.
[DJWho]
I see what you're going for here, but tons of the stuff can't be ranked, imo. For an Insane, much of it can be read (the random jumps and whatnot), but lots of things were just...too over the top, lol. Also, the 1/8 sliders were irritating, lol.
00:20:011 (1,2,3,4,5) - Definitely not rankable.
01:12:008 (1,2,3,4,5) - Wut.
01:16:075 (1,2,3) - No clue on the timing.
01:23:028 (4,5) -
01:42:070 (3,4,5,1) -
I'll give it a star anyways, quite fun. XD
Consider using custom combo colours.
Remove lead-in time where it isn't necessary.
Rarely Stacked is unrankable, please fix.
Remove the first timing section on the diffs where it's not mapped.
[Ysae]
00:20:011 (1,1,2) - Sudden change in spacing.
[Drah]
It's okay, but I'm not sure if it'll be okay for players who haven't played the original Marisa yet, since I see a lot of patterns from there (that aren't so great now).
[Ensani]
00:34:027 (1) - I don't think spinner spam is rankable anymore.
01:08:011 (3,4,5) - If you don't know the song, this change in spacing is brutal.
01:18:070 (1,2,3,4) - This one spacing has so many timings, lol. Very dependant on knowledge of the song.
[DJWho]
I see what you're going for here, but tons of the stuff can't be ranked, imo. For an Insane, much of it can be read (the random jumps and whatnot), but lots of things were just...too over the top, lol. Also, the 1/8 sliders were irritating, lol.
00:20:011 (1,2,3,4,5) - Definitely not rankable.
01:12:008 (1,2,3,4,5) - Wut.
01:16:075 (1,2,3) - No clue on the timing.
01:23:028 (4,5) -
01:42:070 (3,4,5,1) -
I'll give it a star anyways, quite fun. XD
Topic Starter
Thanks to all who's helping ^^
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Hello...
Hmm.....Spacing is little chaos..but this is on purpose? @.@
[Enasni]
00:19:143 (3) Unsnapped.
[DJWho]
01:12:083 (1,2) Oh, Very long distance so Very hard hitting.
01:16:759 (1,2) spacing.
Starred~!
Hmm.....Spacing is little chaos..but this is on purpose? @.@
[Enasni]
00:19:143 (3) Unsnapped.
[DJWho]
01:12:083 (1,2) Oh, Very long distance so Very hard hitting.
01:16:759 (1,2) spacing.
Starred~!
Enasni
01:23:112 (4) - move to 01:23:289 ?
mmmmmmmmmmoooooooooeeeeeeeeeeeeeee >///<
01:23:112 (4) - move to 01:23:289 ?
mmmmmmmmmmoooooooooeeeeeeeeeeeeeee >///<
I like DJWho? also.mekadon95 wrote:
I LIKE DJWHO!!!!
XDXDXD
star,btw
LOL
Just come here to shoot a star XD
Just come here to shoot a star XD