1. Beginner (2.27 stars, 113 notes)
2. Breeze (4.82 stars, 434 notes)
3. v2b (5 stars, 633 notes)

BananasGoMoo wrote:

ok mod time

[Beginner]
00:50:171 (6) - move back two ticks and extend by two ticks
00:51:412 (7) - extend my two ticks or do a reverse Fixed


[Breeze]
01:47:481 (4) - i think this should be cut in half and place a hitcircle at 01:47:895 I think it's OK, thanks to your advice
+Star

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO! 你好~XD

[General]
Source? added

[Begginer]
00:33:206 (1) - Should end in previous red tick
00:36:516 (4) - ^ Just let they more easy to handle for beginner, I mean, same distance
01:04:240 (x) - Place note here
01:05:895 (x) - ^
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[Brezze]
00:16:654 (5) - New combo
00:19:550 (9) - ^ Both OK, but allow me to keep it for now, sorry
00:48:102 (4,5,6,7) - Allign with 3 (end of slider)
01:17:068 (10) - Move backward to red tick I used to apply what you said, it looks...you know, stange...
01:46:240 (1) - No new combo[/color] Both OK, but allow me to keep it for now, sorry


NICE MAP
STAR

alvisto wrote:

Offset : 13380 ms (+36ms to all timing sections and maybe SB too. ;_; )

Hopefully my triple-checked offset is correct ;_; 我先不变offset了,毕竟offset一变需要一起变的就很多了,看看其他的人mod后我再决定吧XD

BREEZE
Map is very good ! I finally see your transition of style ! Pretty~~
Hitsounds suggestions:

SPOILER

00:27:448 (5,6,7) - Remove clap at the start of each slider. Sound better imho. xD
00:30:723 (5,6,7) - ^
00:34:033 (2) - Remove clap.
My suggestion is that put claps at every 2 white tick (or even 4 tick if you like), which is the heavy "drum" part, for example, 00:32:828, 00:33:655 (since there are no note here, you can just ignore it), 00:34:483, 00:35:311, 00:36:138. It sounds very rhythmic and "oh yeah" in this way imho.
This apply to here too -> 00:40:276, 00:41:104, 00:41:931 (no note here, so can just ignore it, 00:42:759)
Try this pattern for the whole song? Find the heavy drum pattern and put drum onto it. xD Because this is usually how I hitsound. It seems easy and cheap but it is rhythmic and awesome. xD

确实...受教了m(_ _)m
Also, HP Drain is too average, overall difficulty ought to be raised 1/2 tick, cause at some part (example : 03:17:517 (2,3,4,5,6) - ) , low overall difficulty make playing them harder. xD 好的...其实当初是想这个是normal的...

NAZI spacing mod (use a higher level grid or turn off DS) :
03:10:069 (6) - xD
03:19:586 (5,7,9) - Move these a bit away from the centre. By the way, I LOVE this design.
03:22:897 (5,7,9) - ^ 好的

Other than that, no complain, very well done.

BEGINNER
01:18:309 (6) - - new combo ?
Pretty.

Star and kudosu star for ya. Nice SB too. ^.^

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

offset错太大
我测得13383
SB之类的我不太在意，不过offset差太大，必须要改。

abalee wrote:

offset已经修好了啊 @_@ o_Ooffset绝对要优先fix嘛

Beginner:
well...算了不挑SB音效了

Breeze:
01:24:141 (x) -这里什么东西也没有却有SB音效会比较不协调，建议去掉。
03:12:141 (1) - test play就知道了，这个会重叠到上一个Note那里。 建议在song setup 的 stacking里面设成rare stack。 all fixed

v2b:
I pass.他在挑战人类极限。 XD

blissfulyoshi wrote:

T_T Needed a translator to read the previous few mod post and replies Maybe you need a Chinese teacher XD

Beginner:
Combo mod:
00:49:796 (6) - new combo to be consistent with 01:03:038 (1) fixed

Timing section mod:
00:19:589 - add a timing section a quarter note before this note with the same hitsound settings but without kiai in case of early hit result in soft sound, right? ok, added

Breeze:
Timing section mod:
same as Beginner

v2b:
Add the source
Why is this the only diff with v2b as a tag? Since v2b is a difficulty name, you can remove his name from the tags, or add his name to all of the tags. all added

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Nice map and great SB. Star.

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request.

[General]
The mp3 you used is a lot longer than you mapped. Try to cut it down. I can help if you want to. Send me a PM.

[v2b]
No comment for the distance.

Seems no mistake for me. Nice SB! Star.

NoHItter wrote:

Remove Perfume Night Flight from your tags.

Tags are additional search terms, so you don't need to put those terms sine they are covered by the Artist and Title.

Other than that, good.