Kamishiro Ami - Cherry My Heart · forum

digiaria

Joined October 2008

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digiaria 2009-12-09T20:58:37+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年6月9日星期三 at 下午 8:38:29

Artist: Kamishiro Ami
Title: Cherry My Heart
Source: Lovedere-shon!
Tags: Game OP
BPM: 152
Filesize: 4426kb
Play Time: 02:28
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.32 stars, 128 notes)
Hard (4.93 stars, 466 notes)
Normal (3.47 stars, 249 notes)

Download: Kamishiro Ami - Cherry My Heart
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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PC GAME 『らぶでれーしょん！』主題歌(OP)

Last edited by digiaria 2010-06-11T14:13:32+00:00, edited 27 times in total.

ReploidArmada

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Joined August 2008

ReploidArmada 2009-12-09T22:22:17+00:00

First off, having the "normal" difficulty last for so little time compared to the harder difficulty just looks like you're being lazy, and it's rather anti-climactic. On a related note, there isn't much difference between Normal and Insane besides the length and note placement; Having a 3rd difficulty, easier than the other 2, and renaming Normal to Hard or the likes would be a good idea in my opinion.

Second, on both difficulties it seemed like you were just placing beats where ever you felt like on the screen, without trying to space them properly or arrange them neatly.

The timing seemed okay to me, but chances are that those two points I mentioned are going to be the first obstacles you'll need to fix.

-RA

ZHAO YU

36 posts

Joined July 2009

ZHAO YU 2009-12-10T05:00:19+00:00

板凳~期待~试玩中~

AngelHoney

2,155 posts

Joined May 2009

AngelHoney 2009-12-10T05:06:13+00:00

感覺只要把insane改成hard就行了..XD

nice map

star~

digiaria

257 posts

Joined October 2008

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digiaria 2009-12-10T17:57:05+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

tsuka

1,499 posts

Joined May 2009

tsuka 2009-12-19T08:15:13+00:00

别再沉了这歌很不错的图也很棒
01:36:055 (13,14) - 这两个跳跳的不是很明显所以很容易误判
以下建议：
00:57:047 (1,2) - 这里和后面的两拍的拍手声都是normal clap 我觉得soft clap更好听
当然我的建议是两拍soft clap 再两拍normal clap 你不喜欢也没关系:D
02:08:052 (1,2) - 这里和上面一样我觉得normal的clap不适合这首歌
01:54:051 (1) - 没有对齐其实关系也不大解决的方法是删除这个圈再放一个（系统会自动对齐到slider下:D)
02:05:017 (1,2,3) - 这里的音效我有两种建议第一种是用soft的三个finish音感觉还不错音量不需要动
另一个建议就是soft下 1不设置音效 2设置为whistle 3设置为finish
00:54:051 (1,2,3) - ^
~~02:44:064 (1) - 开始0.5x速~~02:52:073 (4) - new cobom
02:49:018 (3) - ^

改成hard
- =绿色的combo不贴这背景图啊换成天蓝色怎么样绿色太深了- -b

digiaria

257 posts

Joined October 2008

Topic Starter

digiaria 2009-12-19T14:51:55+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

hvick225

352 posts

Joined November 2008

hvick225 2009-12-20T08:23:19+00:00

star~

digiaria

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digiaria 2009-12-20T09:57:35+00:00

hvick225 wrote:
star~

Thanks

SamiPale

766 posts

Joined October 2009

SamiPale 2009-12-23T11:12:49+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

yaya

osu! Alumni

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Joined November 2008

yaya 2009-12-29T13:14:25+00:00

good job .
其实你可以完全不必要这么多绿线~你设一个custom hitsound，用normal的声音，设成clap啊或者其他，用normal的声音直接用音效就可以，会简单很多
还有，记得给你Mod的人kudosu,比如触卡。~
一定是mod意见对你有用的人才给，普通打星的人不要给。

keep on going

digiaria

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digiaria 2010-01-02T14:09:19+00:00

感谢各位的支持，送触卡就免了，还是送好人卡才是王道（一人一张 -_,-）

tsuka

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Joined May 2009

tsuka 2010-01-06T05:33:03+00:00

kudosu 是 mapper对有帮助的帖子的感谢方式
贴内人物头像下方有个连接是给KUDOSU的
3个kudosu可以换可粉色星星=两颗普通星星。。

另外送KUDOSU是完全免费的。。也就是说不会从你的kudosu里扣除只能对有帮助的贴发放。。

别沉了。。另外：http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewforum.php?f=60 在这里把你的贴的连接发上去叫那些有经验的人来给你mod/star

digiaria

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digiaria 2010-01-06T09:35:30+00:00

tsukamaete wrote:
kudosu 是 mapper对有帮助的帖子的感谢方式
贴内人物头像下方有个连接是给KUDOSU的
3个kudosu可以换可粉色星星=两颗普通星星。。

另外送KUDOSU是完全免费的。。也就是说不会从你的kudosu里扣除只能对有帮助的贴发放。。

别沉了。。另外：http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewforum.php?f=60 在这里把你的贴的连接发上去叫那些有经验的人来给你mod/star

感谢你的帮助，这里的专业术语还真是多，很多我都不明白囧

SamiPale

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SamiPale 2010-01-07T10:15:46+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

digiaria

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digiaria 2010-01-07T12:34:46+00:00

其实不给意见，支持我也会给kudosu的，不用不好意思

LKs

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Joined August 2009

LKs 2010-01-09T15:53:29+00:00

digiaria wrote:
其实不给意见，支持我也会给kudosu的，不用不好意思

传送而来帮着MOD 希望有用如果有用请给KUDOSU~
1.我建议你，你给KUDOSU如果管理员认为moder没有对你的map有帮助的的时候，会批评你的。。
2.好厉害的绿线群啊。。你一定花了很大功夫吧，佩服

开始MOD

NORMAL

[00:59:64] 你是想和上一个的slider对称放吗?可以使用CTRL+C来复制粘贴的，这样就不会出现不对称的情况了。在图里你可以把slider做一些旋转（如图）

SPOILER

其他跟这个一样的我就不说了

[01:36:95] 设成new combo

[01:56:29] 对齐（建议）

你的normal结束了之后的绿线可以删除

Hard
建议你美化一些slider。。例如

SPOILER

和背景有点不和谐。。我发现你的slider要有很多的点来确定，其实没有必要，用两三个点反而显得自然

hard的节奏很好，没有什么问题。
因为你用的是最密的网格，所以要特别注意一些间距
结尾的转盘可以直接无声（建议）

star 好歌好图!

digiaria

257 posts

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digiaria 2010-01-10T13:39:10+00:00

LKs wrote:
digiaria wrote:
其实不给意见，支持我也会给kudosu的，不用不好意思
传送而来帮着MOD 希望有用如果有用请给KUDOSU~
1.我建议你，你给KUDOSU如果管理员认为moder没有对你的map有帮助的的时候，会批评你的。。
2.好厉害的绿线群啊。。你一定花了很大功夫吧，佩服

开始MOD

NORMAL

[00:59:64] 你是想和上一个的slider对称放吗?可以使用CTRL+C来复制粘贴的，这样就不会出现不对称的情况了。在图里你可以把slider做一些旋转（如图）
SPOILER
[attachment=1:bfda3].JPG[/attachment:bfda3]
其他跟这个一样的我就不说了

[01:36:95] 设成new combo

[01:56:29] 对齐（建议）

你的normal结束了之后的绿线可以删除

Hard
建议你美化一些slider。。例如
SPOILER
[attachment=0:bfda3].JPG[/attachment:bfda3]
和背景有点不和谐。。我发现你的slider要有很多的点来确定，其实没有必要，用两三个点反而显得自然

hard的节奏很好，没有什么问题。
因为你用的是最密的网格，所以要特别注意一些间距
结尾的转盘可以直接无声（建议）

star 好歌好图!