UNDER17 - Love Slave · forum

Luneko

Joined June 2009

Topic Starter

Luneko 2009-12-12T18:42:02+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Freitag, 4. Juni 2010 at 07:28:58

Artist: UNDER17
Title: Love Slave
Tags: DearS Opening OP theme
BPM: 170,08
Filesize: 10524kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:

Easy (2,96 stars, 85 notes)
Hard (4,8 stars, 310 notes)

Download: UNDER17 - Love Slave
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Completed... Ready for modding!

EDIT1 - Fixed bpm (thx to x3ns0r)

EDIT2 - Fixed AngelHoney's mod

EDIT3 - Fixed AnGelL's mod

EDIT4 - Revived and fixed some small things

EDIT5 - Fixed deadbeat's mod

EDIT6 - Fixed [DBF]'s mod

EDIT7 - Removed Encrypto's normal

Last edited by Luneko 2010-06-04T05:29:17+00:00, edited 18 times in total.

Encrypto

128 posts

Joined March 2009

Encrypto 2009-12-13T11:15:42+00:00

My diff^^
Download: UNDER17 - Love Slave (KillerRind) [Encrypto´s Normal].osu
Tell me if there´s something to change(And i know,there is).^^

Luneko

842 posts

Joined June 2009

Topic Starter

Luneko 2009-12-13T12:34:37+00:00

Modded and added

Kinaya

45 posts

Joined July 2009

Kinaya 2009-12-13T13:41:44+00:00

Sternchen!^^

Encrypto

128 posts

Joined March 2009

Encrypto 2009-12-13T18:13:00+00:00

Kinaya wrote:
Sternchen!^^

Sorry,ich hab es mir angewöhnt,englisch in osu zu sprechen>.<^^

XepherX3

625 posts

Joined September 2008

XepherX3 2009-12-13T20:11:02+00:00

nice map

only one mod found

BPM = 170,080 (makes a difference cuz 170,00 sounds off at some points)

star

Luneko

842 posts

Joined June 2009

Topic Starter

Luneko 2009-12-13T20:14:08+00:00

fixed

AngelHoney

2,155 posts

Joined May 2009

AngelHoney 2009-12-13T21:26:05+00:00

hard

00:46:187 (5) - repeat to this slider ?
00:52:360 - slider ?
00:53:242 (1) - start at 00:53:330
01:51:185 to 02:55:214 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1/4 forward
lol....

nice map

star~

Forgive me,the basis of my English is not very steady o3o

Luneko

842 posts

Joined June 2009

Topic Starter

Luneko 2009-12-15T12:21:45+00:00

Fixed

An-Don

89 posts

Joined February 2009

An-Don 2009-12-16T13:31:48+00:00

[Hard]
00:53:033 (1) - This slider should start at [00:53:041 ~ White line] but still ends at [00:53:059 ~ Red line]
02:08:020 (3) - This slider should end at [02:08:047 ~ White line] but begin at the same place it is now.
Just small note timing problems ^^ no biggy.

[Encrypto's Normal]
wow that's real short

Nice ^^

[Easy]
No problems

So in the end O~O I saw hardly any problems :3
Good job ^^
+Star for uu

Luneko

842 posts

Joined June 2009

Topic Starter

Luneko 2009-12-16T14:40:50+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2010-01-19T09:28:34+00:00

Revived.

Luneko

842 posts

Joined June 2009

Topic Starter

Luneko 2010-01-19T09:31:31+00:00

thx

Larto

4,128 posts

Joined June 2008

Larto 2010-04-02T23:23:23+00:00

Revived

deadbeat

osu! Alumni

9,218 posts

Joined June 2009

deadbeat 2010-04-05T22:34:47+00:00

easy

go over the spinners in this map..some of them seem a bit to hard for newer player

encrypo's normal

first off...why is there a SB in there saying "beatmap by KillerRind"

00:17:788 (5) - line up with 4
00:24:138 (2) - back 1/2
add something between the 2 and 3
00:25:726 (4) - delete
00:38:425 (2) - end at 00:38:955 or where the 3 is
00:44:952 (4) - move forward 1/2
01:08:764 (7) - kill
01:08:941 (x) - hitcircle here with new combo
01:16:702 (1) - no...remove..do something else there

hard

01:53:038 (3) - single hit circle on the red tick
01:53:743 (5) - start 1/2 earlier
02:13:499 (5) - move forward 1/2
02:20:730 (1) - start 1/2 earlier
02:21:965 (1) - make a single hircircle on the red tick
02:25:317 (2) - forward 1/2

its looking could..keep it up

[DBF]

1,827 posts

Joined January 2009

[DBF] 2010-05-18T09:48:21+00:00

[Overall]
~~You must deleted some mp3 ending part, ahh.. forget..~~

Really big problem in that map - hitsounds, i dont understand rhythm in many moments.

[Easy]

very high slider velocity.. because that looking not good with slow map.

00:23:609 (1) - remove clap.
00:35:603 (1) - add finish.
00:38:425 (1) - ^
00:41:248 (1) - ^
00:43:364 (1,2) - that not looking like easy.. that looking like.. normal..
00:45:834 (6,1) - spacing.
01:01:003 (2) - add finish.
01:16:702 (1) - really short spinner for easy.
01:20:229 (6,1,2) - that too not looking like easy.

[Encrypto's Normal]

hitsounds really stranger..

00:35:780 (7) - add clap.
00:36:485 (8) - remove whistle and add clap.
00:37:191 ^
01:23:052 (5) - really not good use 2 hitsounds in one moment.

[Hard]

need more hitsounds in some moments, and please make hitsounds for music o/ i mean not random.

00:34:016 (4,1) - not looking like jump. Put closer (1) for slider.
00:53:242 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - wrong spacing.
00:54:653 (6,1) - not looking like jump, but.. ok.. that not danger.
02:01:681 (5,1) - little wrong spacing.
02:11:735 (4,1) - That good!
02:29:726 (3) - new combo.
02:30:255 (5) - ^

well.. first map? that not bad. My first maps really bad, because i just think you must need some practice in mapping, star~

Luneko

842 posts

Joined June 2009

Topic Starter

Luneko 2010-05-18T10:22:12+00:00

fixed, thank you

shagy

21 posts

Joined March 2010

shagy 2010-07-23T07:31:47+00:00

revived and star