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[General]
Firstly, I feel that the guitar sounds at the vocals 00:22:721 - TO 00:38:374 - are too loud, I suggest to lower the keysound by around 20%
[7K MX]
MAY APPLY TO SOME DIFFICULTIES00:32:178 - I think this guitar keysound should follow the pitch of the vocals here, it sounds pretty weird with the music at 0% | I suggest to remove the keysound on 00:32:341 (32341|3) - , it doesn't seem to follow anything
00:37:721 (37721|5,38047|4) - Don't think any guitar is needed here, there's too much guitar, don't think filling up every single part of the chart with guitar will sound nice
00:10:004 (10004|4) - Change to an F# I think the repeating guitar is pretty nice, but I suggest to have some variation
00:15:221 (15221|5) - Same here
00:08:292 (8292|2,8374|4,8537|2) - Ctrl + H | This way, the drum will recieve a much greater impact 00:08:374 (8374|0,8537|0) -
00:09:515 (9515|1) - End the LN here 00:09:678 - | And rearrange the pattern | The LN is unnecessary during a section for drums here, it gives the player a better feeling for the drums
00:00:548 - Put the inheriting point directly on the uninherited point, it is rankable, it gives the player much more time to react to the slow down
00:16:200 - Make this more sight readable
00:37:721 (37721|2,37803|0,37884|6,37966|1,38047|2) - Use alternating hand pattern, it suits drums more
00:38:700 (38700|3) - | 00:40:493 - End the LN here those who use centre key with their left hand will have trouble knowing when to release the LN
00:41:145 (41145|4,41227|3,41308|6) - Put it in 7 5 6 respectively | This feels better for a drum imo
00:49:134 (49134|1) - Shorten by 1/2 | I don't get why you overlapped it ww
00:51:743 (51743|2) - Move to 6 | It gives the drum much more impact
01:10:819 (70819|1,70982|2,70982|0) - This is pretty weird to play, also, you are overlapping the guitar with the vocals, which confuses the player on what they are actaully playing
01:17:015 (77015|2,77015|6,77015|3,77178|5,77178|1,77178|4,77341|4,77341|3,77341|0) - Hammer at least 1 of the notes for each chord, it gives more impact
01:21:580 (81580|2,81743|2) - I don't get the hammer here?
01:24:841 (84841|0) - Move to 6, this note is a drum, I don't think you want a weak finger to play it
01:29:569 - Well, this audio ended rather abruptly, idk if there's a version of this which doesn't end this quickly
[7K HD]
00:40:982 (40982|3,41064|2,41145|4,41227|3,41308|4) - Don't focus all the notes on the centre here, it plays weird due to the trill with the index and thumb, I suggest to spread them out
01:06:417 - I think a duplicate 01:06:417 (66417|5,66743|6) - of this is needed due to the strong vocal here, lower the volume of course
01:17:178 (77178|4,77341|4) - Move to 7 | Don't hammer here, it feels inconsistent since you didn't hammer previously
01:22:721 (82721|3,82721|1,82884|2,83047|1,83047|3,83211|2,83374|3,83374|1,83537|2,83700|1) - The players which use left hand to press the centre key may find this pattern pretty difficult due to the brackets, I suggest to move the centre key somewhere else
[Arcwin's 4K MX]
Decided to test play this, found out something was really concerning
00:06:254 (6254|1,6295|2,6580|2,6621|1) - These 1/8 doublets makes it impossible to coordinate your hands to the point that you hit the 1/8s correctly, you will just end up hitting it like a chord, I suggest to make it so that the 1/8s only fall on one hand, so that the doublet is easier to execute
This also applies to the other 1/8 doublets
00:40:982 (40982|2) - Change this to a note, an LN here is uneccesary, it lessens the 00:40:982 (40982|3,41064|0,41145|3,41227|1,41308|3) - drum note's impact
00:51:254 (51254|1) - Suggest to shorten this by 1/1 | Same reasoning as above, it "dampens" the effect of the drums
01:06:743 (66743|1,66743|0,67069|2,67069|3) - Make a shield here, it gives more impact due to 01:07:069 (67069|3,67069|2) - being the start of the kiai time/chorus
[4K HD]
00:28:754 (28754|2,29732|1) - I don't get the LNs?
00:36:254 (36254|1,36254|3) - Woo, this drum is pretty loud, fix this
[7K NM]
00:06:906 (6906|5,7884|6) - Swap Columns | Makes it easier to read
00:36:254 (36254|6,36254|1) - Same as HD, this drum is somewhat too loud
01:18:808 (78808|5,78971|6,79624|6) - Swap Columns | Same as 1st mod
No problems for 4K NM
Good luck owo/