Yamazaki Maimi - Alive (TV size) · forum

KIA

Joined February 2009

Topic Starter

KIA 2009-12-26T08:55:45+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 5 февраля 2010 г. at 5:05:51

Artist: Yamazaki Maimi
Title: Alive (TV size)
Source: Ragnarok The Animation
Tags: RO
BPM: 99
Filesize: 15574kb
Play Time: 00:55
Difficulties Available:

Easy (3,85 stars, 85 notes)
Insane (4,99 stars, 200 notes)
Normal+ (4,32 stars, 130 notes)

Download: Yamazaki Maimi - Alive (TV size)
Download: Yamazaki Maimi - Alive (TV size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ragnarok the Animation. ED <3

Normal done
Easy done
Insane done

Last edited by KIA 2010-02-05T02:11:02+00:00, edited 28 times in total.

[DBF]

1,827 posts

Joined January 2009

[DBF] 2009-12-26T12:32:32+00:00

Burn KIA Burn KIA!! o/

aesopl19193

572 posts

Joined March 2009

aesopl19193 2009-12-29T12:06:30+00:00

here just my suggest since i am still a beginner of mapping and modding~

set hitsound volume to about 60~70%

Normal
00:07:087 (2,3) - cancel clap , (4) - finish
00:23:451 (2,3,6,7) - cancel w
00:26:784 (6) - cancel all sound
00:28:299 (2,3,6,7) - cancel w
00:30:420 (2,3,4,5) - cancel all sound
00:31:633 (5,6) change it to slider
00:34:511 (7) - cancel w
00:34:966 (1) - cancel w

imo , too much w and clap just make the map noise .=[

Thunderstorm

437 posts

Joined May 2009

Thunderstorm 2009-12-29T21:11:38+00:00

Тащи. Карта жжот, анимэ, кстати, тоже) Лови звезду

Lokamp

2,530 posts

Joined January 2009

Lokamp 2009-12-29T21:18:55+00:00

Easy
[General] ... 4 star of rating for an EASY mode? Looks like this mode needs to be easier for newbies... (the rest was fine!)

Normal
[General] Call this Normal+, it fits well with this mode's rating
00:07:394 (3,4) - link them with a slider
00:34:061 (5,1,2) - new combo on 5th and next 2nd; remove previous new combo

Hard
00:12:849 (7,1) - clap the 7th, finish on the other one

This short, good beatmap needs some fixes about spacing (Hard) and hitsound-placing (all modes), but this is already a good start.
Have your star ;3

KIA

1,754 posts

Joined February 2009

Topic Starter

KIA 2009-12-29T21:45:37+00:00

nvm...

SPOILER

Mystearica

Mystearica 2009-12-29T21:57:36+00:00

Thanks for mapping this, one of my favorite songs. Would you happen to have a full mp3 of this? Would love it. (Would appreciate the OP song too if you have that. We are the stars I think?)

Too heavy on the hitsounds in Easy, reduce the number of claps and finishes, set a stable pattern. Also remove the whistles.

If too many people complain about the difficulty on Easy, just rename it to Normal as that clearly fits as well. I myself am fine with that difficulty though.

Same with Normal. Seems like you should also silence your sliderticks/sliderslide sounds.

Try adding a 1 second to 1.5 seconds lead-in time.

Won't touch Hard for now~

KIA

1,754 posts

Joined February 2009

Topic Starter

KIA 2009-12-29T22:30:35+00:00

Yes, I have "We Are The Stars" in unsubmitted
And why everyone hates that whistles

Kamushi

41 posts

Joined August 2008

Kamushi 2009-12-30T14:56:43+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Yamazaki Maimi - Alive (TV size) (KIA) [Kamyk's Difficulty].osu

WyndII

777 posts

Joined October 2008

WyndII 2010-01-07T17:40:52+00:00

I don't like the song much (wth is wrong with me? o.o) but Hooray for the anime!!! lol

anonymous_old

0 posts

Here since the beginning

anonymous_old 2010-01-08T22:20:31+00:00

Easy

SPOILER

00:04:061 (1,2) : Too hard for an easy.
00:30:424 (2,3,4) : Delete 3 and 4, then make 2 end at where 4 was.

Normal+

SPOILER

No visible errors.

Hard

SPOILER

No visible errors.
[*] Consider changing the whistle hitsound to something that matches the song better.

gdeath

1,598 posts

Joined May 2009

gdeath 2010-01-12T15:27:50+00:00

Overall :
[Easy] lead-in 1s
[Normal]lead-in 1.5s
[Hard]lead-in 1.5s
Set them all the same
00:23:152 --->>00:41:637 ~volume~40% or 45%(all diffs)
Normal-whistle is not suitable for this song.
use clap and soft-whistle only as hitsound.(suggestion)

[Easy]
00:04:970 (2) - make it 1/4 later and shorten this slider 1/4
00:09:515 (2) - make it end on 00:09:818
00:22:243 (3) - remove it and change to two circle.one set on 00:22:243 and another one set on 00:22:546
00:44:667 (2) - ^
00:54:465 (3,4) - change to slider.its hard to read this 1/8 beat for new players

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
its insane imo.reduce HD Drain to 7 at least(suggestion)
00:41:940 (1,2,3,4,5) - ugly.you can leave this pattern,if you like.

star.

KIA

1,754 posts

Joined February 2009

Topic Starter

KIA 2010-01-12T18:42:16+00:00

gdeath wrote:
Overall :
[Easy] lead-in 1s
[Normal]lead-in 1.5s
[Hard]lead-in 1.5s k
Set them all the same
00:23:152 --->>00:41:637 ~volume~40% or 45%(all diffs) k
Normal-whistle is not suitable for this song.
use clap and soft-whistle only as hitsound.(suggestion) already using as custom hitsound..hmm

[Easy]
00:04:970 (2) - make it 1/4 later and shorten this slider 1/4 okay
00:09:515 (2) - make it end on 00:09:818 k
00:22:243 (3) - remove it and change to two circle.one set on 00:22:243 and another one set on 00:22:546 k
00:44:667 (2) - ^ k
00:54:465 (3,4) - change to slider.its hard to read this 1/8 beat for new players

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
its insane imo.reduce HD Drain to 7 at least(suggestion) no
00:41:940 (1,2,3,4,5) - ugly.you can leave this pattern,if you like. kay

star.

Cyril Scarlet

osu! Alumni

3,877 posts

Joined May 2009

Cyril Scarlet 2010-01-12T20:12:55+00:00

RO ~ ﾟ+.･ﾟ+｡(〃・ω・〃)｡+ﾟ･.+ﾟ

AngelHoney

2,155 posts

Joined May 2009

AngelHoney 2010-01-14T10:41:59+00:00

RO...^^

WyndII

777 posts

Joined October 2008

WyndII 2010-01-14T10:58:29+00:00

Osu!

[m{}d]

[Insane]
I can't find anything wrong here

But Here are some orzptionals:

SPOILER

00:08:606 (9) - finish?
00:11:030 (10) - soft finish hitsound?

00:11:940 (2) - ^
00:23:152 (1) - Kiai would be awesome here XD
00:30:121 (1) - whistle? XD
00:49:818 (1) - finish? and 00:50:121 (2) - and 00:50:424 (4) - get what I meant?

[Normal+]
oooh vewy simple and nice :3
but the Kiai issue?

[Easy]
decrease overall difficulty D:

STAAAR, oh wait, I starred already ._.

Noobita

597 posts

Joined June 2009

Noobita 2010-01-23T10:44:45+00:00

Star!! It's beautiful.

Teara

osu! Alumni

814 posts

Joined June 2009

Teara 2010-01-23T20:05:05+00:00

Basically, all of the following are just suggestions, and does not need to be done, please use at own regard

Good beatmap, and Star!

[Easy]
00:06:637 (1) - clap at start? ( not sure about this, doesn't really fit sounds better with clap still ) :3

[Normal+]
00:11:940 (2) - with distance snap on, just move it slightly to the right ( to align with (4) properly. )

and that's it, good job.

[Insane]

00:14:818 (5) - move up a few squares and align with (6), plays better IMO
00:43:455 (4) - new combo to match vocals~

and thats that, great diff

dkey

1,276 posts

Joined June 2009

dkey 2010-01-24T06:29:29+00:00

Star~

Yuji Tokaji

776 posts

Joined March 2009

Yuji Tokaji 2010-01-25T12:17:41+00:00

Star~